Wow, you're now one of my favourite authors, I feel you kept the boys voices authentic, strong and consistent throughout. To me it's the most important ingredient, after all you are writing a supernatural story about Sam and Dean.

Some very sweet moments such as Sam being Dean's pillow really added to the overall angst of the story. I was shouting at the screen for Dean to put and end to Gordon!!! - it was a plus cause I had to keep reading it...

Overall a great story, with a positive ending.

He's a Winchester after all.

Thanks for sharing x

Wow I'm blown away in so few words! 'The cause that is Sammy.'  everything written here is so true.

You do really impressive drabbles, I hope to see more from you. I really like this whole idea of Dean's last mother's day with Mary and keeping the Angel theme.

Author's Response: Impressive? Thanks, that means a lot. I'm happy you liked the idea of Dean with Mary and the Angel theme.

I'm just getting warmed and ready for another chapter, very good detail and scene building. I like that this story and your imagination is rebellious as far as our standard supernatural goes. It's nice to see something more than just the standard hunt, with hurt Dean and rescue Sam, everyones doing it which makes it boring very quickly. Thanks for sharing something different.

Kelis

This is so sad, but I like it. Still can't help missing John.

Okay I'm in love with the addition of flashbacks, you've given us a chance to know where Dean and Kanis' developed the friendship that became so hard to end. I liked Bobby torturing Roth until he screamed, that was a nice touch. Very considerate of you to give us a glimpse into Kanis' personal life..This was the part I really liked  =

"You answering my question with a question just told me all about her." Kanis smiled. "The one. It was deep, was it not? The kinda love that you knew would screw you up but you were so caught up in it you didn't care." Kanis gazed as though remembering her.

And then with Dean, my favourite part though small was important to the whole history of their friendship. =

"You got a smart mouth...you remind me of my sister Fawn." Kanis said, a faraway look in his eyes.

"Ah, that's funny... ‘cause you remind me of me."  -- I could hear Dean, I'm starting to really like where this story is going, so keeping posting.

Thus far, Fantasy, this is my favourite chapter, the detail is fantastic whereas the previous chap was spread a little thin. I was impressed with the way you had Dean handle Fawn, it was understandable after what he went through with Kanis, for him feel so guilty around Fawn that he loses a bit of his control. Then to satisfy my macabre personality, you added some blood and gore...As always thanks for sharing x

Author's Response:

:D *Is beaming* Wow, thank you so much for your stars and comments. It means a lot to know you liked the detail as that is my weakness, I feel bad that you noticed that weakness in the previous chapter but I am working on it.

Back on a good note, to impress a reader is always a great boost to a writer. So thank you very much.

lol glad I was able to satisfy your macabre personality with the gore.

Schelz x

Well Fantasy, you very cleverly climbed out of what I thought was a deep hole by making Marla the dog. But, you bridged the mystery and cleared my confusion. I didn't see this chapter coming and I like that element of surprise.

Now for those two characters, I'm very interested to see who they are, especially this Camyll. I don't know anything about her but Dean's reaction to Missouri's revelation made me hold my breath. There's a continuation to this?

Good story.

Whoa! lol, I like this. I envy any kind of poetry.

Author's Response: Thanks Saddle!! Glad you liked it. I'm a big fan of poetry, love writing and reading though I really should start reading more of it. lol.

That is a great trick Penmin, I read it twice and then saw it. I liked it!

Author's Response: Thank you, it does look like I messed up or just rushed it! lol but then it needs closer scrutiny...and all will be revealed. Your review is appreciated...Jacq

An amazing tag, I love this addition because he really did need to know. I love that you've laid bare, Dean's vulnerability, the way the series was going I feared Dean wouldn't be able to stop Sammy. I hope S5 brings them back together. As always thanks for sharing, I adore your muse.

Author's Response:

Many thanks for the review, it is much appreciated and the stars

Jacq

ooo great drabble, thanks for sharing x

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)

Wow, so few words yet you hit my core. I definitely enjoyed the truth in your words. As always thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

Thank you, it was fun to write and thank you for the stars

Jacq