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Real name: Lori Status: Member Member Since: 22/12/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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This is how Sam's story ends. - S6 Drabbles on the Mystery of Younger Bro. Episodes 6.05 - 6.11 Some theories into what might be going on with Sam. Stream of consciousness wonderings & musings. Different perspectives, different explanations. So, what is the truth?
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Categories: Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 2123 [Report This] Published: 26/10/10 Updated: 25/01/11
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Date: 09/01/11 Title: Chapter 13: Cost/Benefit Analysis Thanks for reminding me that I could find your next update over here. I can understand why Sam has decided not to try and get his soul back, but this current roboSam can't continue with his current actions. You did a great job of capturing Sam's thoughts. Thanks again for sharing your stories with us. Take care. Author's Response: Hey! FF is still a bit wonky. On one of my forays there Ch. 12 was gone, just like you said. Makes me afraid to post another story or chapter. I love that this site allows banners. DALDOS makes me such pretties for my stories! I do think it is perfectly understandable why Sam doesn't want to risk putting that damaged soul back into his body. He's perfectly fine the way he is...or so he thinks. I love that Dean is so certain and we know how much Dean loves Sam, but to see him like this, to know what he is capable of...Well, I have an upcoming chapter from Dean's POV that is really heartbreaking. Sam needs his soul and without it, bad things will happen. Thanks for taking the time to track down this chapter. Later, B.J.
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Words and fists can both draw blood and the damage this time might be irrepairable... but this is Sam and Dean - their bond has withstood the strongest adversary. What happens though when the adversary is the guy sitting next to you in the Impala? *Spoilers for 6.06* Categories: Missing Scenes, One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4972 [Report This] Published: 31/10/10 Updated: 31/10/10
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Date: 01/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: DAMAGES What a wonderful surprise. Thanks for sharing your story with us. I think you did a great job capturing the emotions and thoughts of Dean. I love both the brothers, that is why I watch the show, but when Dean started to hit Sam, I know I was angry at Sam for keeping another secret from Dean, so was glad that Dean hit him, though surprised how many times. There were many great parts in your story, but this section was similar to some of my thoughts during that final scene. 'And yeah, I get it… he sacrificed himself to save the world, but fuck… I sold my friggin’ soul and got torn to goddamn ribbons by hellhounds to bring his ass back from the dead. Don’t get me wrong, I’d do it all again… in a heartbeat. He’s my brother and I love him. But that’s what hurts the most. That’s the wound that just won’t seem to heal… the idea that maybe Sam… my Sammy… just wouldn’t do the same for me.' It is hard to know what is going on in Sam's head at the moment, but I like how you reminded us of when Sam asked Dean to come with him in the first episode. I enjoyed reading your story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Summary:
Dean wakes up alone in a forest badly injured, freezing and trapped. He needs help but his family left him and help isn't coming. Set early season one. Mostly a shamless excuse for Dean whump and the sweet caring Sam that I've come to miss as of late. Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3179 [Report This] Published: 09/11/10 Updated: 09/11/10
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Date: 21/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Helpless I always enjoy reading stories about the brothers set in the first and second season, reminds me why I fell in love with the show. Thanks for sharing your story with us and for the smile. Summary: Sam never ceases to surprise Dean
Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 405 [Report This] Published: 12/11/10 Updated: 13/11/10
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Date: 21/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Amulet - A short Supernatural fan fiction I would love to see the amulet return, though I doubt we will ever see it again. I like that Dean went from calling his brother Sam during the story to Sammy at the end. :) I enjoyed reading your story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Summary:
John, Sam, a vision. Episode: Salvation, so "spoilers" for everything up to that one.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1868 [Report This] Published: 14/11/10 Updated: 16/11/10
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Date: 21/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 It is always nice to see John being written as a father who does love his sons. I like how John tried to comfort Sam and help him, yet did call Dean for advice. I could just imagine how worried Dean would have been and how fast he will arrive back at the motel. I think this scene would have fit in well with the "Salvation" episode. Thanks for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed reading it. Author's Response: Wow, how did I miss this review? Oo I wasn't sure at first if I wanted John to phone Dean, you know? I'm not a fan of stories where John has no idea how to care for his sons since he is said to have been such a bad father. But still, with the visions, that would indeed have been something he wouldn't have any experience with so it was okay. And yeah, I think I would have loved to see that on screen too, JDM cradling JP to his chest.... :D Anyway, thanks a LOT for your lovely words! :) Summary:
Takes off where 6.11 Ends,AIS. Sammy returns, should be smooth sailing, right? Not likely... this is the Winchester world! Spoilers for 6.11. See how Sammy and Dean handle the aftermath of soul-less Sam... my version of Sammy's return. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 47729 [Report This] Published: 15/02/11 Updated: 14/03/11
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Date: 28/02/11 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 What a nice surprise. I didn't know you were posting your story on this site. Thanks again for sharing it with us. I enjoyed reading it. Author's Response: Yes, I am but I got sidetracked with the the next story "I am Sam" and kinda forgot to post the rest of the story! I am so sorry. I am adding more chaps today! Thank you so much for reviewing! Glad you liked it! ~Crissi Summary:
6.11 Appointment in Samarra tag - Dean and Death talk further. It was unsettling being in the presence of Death, so close to a Being who could end him with a touch. Dean was simply a toy to him, an insect, and yet there was something in Death's eyes when he looked at him, something within his tone that spoke of more.
Thanks to highvoltagerock for another perfect banner! Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 10392 [Report This] Published: 26/02/11 Updated: 06/05/11
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Date: 28/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Conversation Just stopped by to say hi and read your story again. I'm looking foreward to the next chapter. I love the banner. Until next time, take care. Author's Response: Hey, Lori! Always good to hear from you. Yes, doesn't Dream make the most gorgeous banners? This one in particular just perfectly captures everything I wanted to best display the story. I particularly love the blue weaved though out. Take care, we'll talk soon! - B.J. Summary:
Sometimes silence speaks louder than words. A series of brotherly moments, wee!Chester through early Season 4. Previously published in the Blood Brothers 3 fanzine.Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5616 [Report This] Published: 31/08/11 Updated: 31/08/11
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 13/12/11 Title: Chapter 1: More than Words I enjoyed reading your story again as much as when I read it the first time. I always love how you write Dean and Sam. Thanks for the smile! Summary:
Sometimes its more than just angry spirits that need salt and burned in order for people to move on...
Categories: One Shots Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4200 [Report This] Published: 13/11/11 Updated: 13/11/11
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Date: 28/12/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What a wonderful story. I enjoyed the conversation between Dean and Bobby, but also loved the ending as Sam came to stand next to his brother and say goodbye to Castiel. Thanks for sharing your story with us. Summary:
There's a saying: When you've reached the end of your rope... "tie a knot and hang on"... But what if the rope has other ideas? Pre-series.
Categories: General, AU Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 23180 [Report This] Published: 20/11/11 Updated: 27/12/11
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 13/12/11 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I realize I'm late reviewing on your story, but I just wanted to say thanks for sharing it with us. I'll admit I do have trouble sometimes reading about Sam leaving for college, but I like how you wrote Dean as he discussed it with his little brother and offering to help. You have filled your story with some wonderful tense moments. I felt sorry for Dean as Sam will be leaving in the spring and in his concussed state he thinks his little brother has already left. You did a great job of describing Dean's injuries. Plus if Dean didn't hate rats before, he should now as they tried to eat him after falling through the floor. I'm glad that Sam found a way to get to Dean, but curious how Sam will get his brother out of the hole. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter and some other stories on this site. I'm sorry it has been awhile since I visited. Until next time, take care. Author's Response: Lori Thank YOU for taking the time to read and review! I'm glad you like and are enjoying the story. I really love pre-series time frame- and delving into Dean's POV when Sam left is one of my favorite. The injuries plus Dean's concussed brain mixing up reality from delusion when it comes to his brother leaving - was a scenario just too good to pass up. As for the rats- well, I'm just sick that way! LOL As for how they will get out... you've a couple more chapters to wait... Thanks again- great to see you! Tree
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Date: 28/12/11 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I found time to finish reading your story. I kept wondering how Sam was going to get Dean out of the hole or even just leave him long enough to find help. You had some tense moments as Dean's condition got worse. I'm glad that John arrived in time to help his boys. It was nice that you had Dean see Sam off at the bus station, no angry words, just a goodbye. We all know the brothers reunite a in few years, but it is rough knowing that Sam cuts off his family for a while. You did a great job with the emotional aspects of conversatons between the brothers, though now I'm as depressed as Dean. Thanks for sharing a story with us. Until next time, take care. Author's Response: Hey Lori Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think losing Sam was far more painful than any injury for Dean. He's definately worse for the wear with his family torn apart. In a way, you've paid me a very large compliment- if a story can effect emotion - such as making you feel a bit depressed- then I kinda feel like it/I did my job. So thanks so much! I hope you have a wonderful New Year and I hope to see you again soon! Tree Summary:
In the darkest of nights, miracles, however tiny, can still happen... Set in Season 7, after episode 7.10 Death’s Door, and contains spoilers for the season up to that point.
Credit to Chasidern for another very beautiful story banner. Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9669 [Report This] Published: 02/01/12 Updated: 02/01/12
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 09/01/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I don't visit here as often as I should, so just found your current story. I want to thank you for sharing it with us. It's perfect and I loved reading it. One of my favorite "SN" Christmas stories is "While Shepherd's Watch". I read it again over the holiday break. Thanks for the smile. Author's Response: I am glad I could oblige. And welcome back! I haven't been here as often as I'd like, either, this past year. I've missed it. Oh, you re-read Shepherds? Thank you! I was surprised at how that one came together, actually. I don't usually write in first person, but the idea of an outside observer POV was just too good to pass up. And of course, Grace's issues with her big brother was a nice way to bring in Dean's issues with his little brother, and have the boys not-talk about it - lol. Thank you so much for letting me know your thoughts both on Shepherds and on this one. And again, I'm glad I could give you a smile. Take care, and I hope your New Year brings peace, joy and blessings in abundance. Jules Summary:
When Bobby disappears from the hospital after an encounter with the Leviathan Sam and Dean think they know what’s behind it. But the truth is beyond any of their wildest dreams and will change the way they see the older hunter forever. Spoilers all episodes up to 7.10 "Death's Door" Crossover with Highlander and Deadwood Categories: General, Crossovers, AU Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 29376 [Report This] Published: 02/01/12 Updated: 15/01/13
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Date: 03/02/12 Title: Chapter 3: On the Road Again I enjoyed reading this chapter and I'm looking forward to Dean and Sam meeting Duncan. Thanks for the wonderful update. Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm looking forward to the Highlander characters coming into the story as well. It's going to be quite an interesting mix. Dina
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 31/01/12 Title: Chapter 2: It's a Kind of Magic I just wanted to say a quick thank you for sharing your story with us. I thought you did a great job with Dean, Sam and Bobby's voices. I could just imagine Dean and Sam's expressions when facing Bobby who was suppose to be dead. I love your idea of a "SN"/"Highlander" crossover. So I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks again for sharing your story with us. Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I am so glad others are enjoying reading this as much as I'm enjoying writing it. I just sent chapter three off to my beta and am working on chapter four as we speak. You may be pleased to know that I just mapped out the whole story arc and it'll be about sixteen chapters long with a possible sequel. Turns out once Bobby starts talking to you the guy won't shut up. *grin* Dina Summary:
When an ancient evil stalks an old friend, Bobby Singer races to Paris. Can he help Duncan MacLeod before tragedy strikes? Crossover with Highlander, set pre-series for Supernatural. Prequel to "Die Another Day." Categories: General, Crossovers, AU Characters: Bobby Singer Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 16640 [Report This] Published: 17/02/12 Updated: 11/09/12
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Date: 25/02/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I just found your story to read, so sorry for the late review.. I don't get over to this site as often as I would like too. I enjoyed the conversation between Duncan and Bobby. Always nice to have Richie involved too. I am trying to refresh my memory about this episode. I remember it, but not all the details. I'm looking forward to reading more of your story and how you incorporate Bobby into the world of Duncan MacLeod. Thanks for sharing another story with us. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. :) As I've been rewatching HL I've noticed that in several episodes Richie was very accepting of the supernatural, and in this arc Duncan displays some very hunter-like behaviors. So having them bring Bobby in just seemed like an obvious choice. The episode was called "Archangel" and you can watch it for free on Youtube or Hulu. The more I write in this 'verse, the more ideas spring up in my mind. For exaple, I just realized that Jim Byrnes (Joe Dawson in HL) made a guest appearance in the Season 1 episode of SPN, "Bugs." Oh yeah, that's gonna be incorporated into a story at some point. *grin* |
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