Penname: Nikocal [Contact][Report This]
Real name: Danielle Catuccio
Member Since: 11/12/08
Reviews by Nikocal
halloween story - dark and scary (I hope!)
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2668
[Report This] Published: 31/10/08 Updated: 31/10/08
Reviewer: Nikocal Signed
Date: 13/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
AH. scary. seriously, this is like lovecraft or something. This is so awesome.... I honestly didn't expect to be scared at all (written stuff hardly ever frightens me) but congrats, you managed it, heh. Captured the whole waking in the middle of the night thing and wondering what that strange noise was, something that happens to me a lot. I know exactly how Dean feels.
Love, love that you used the rats. You've reinvented the rat for me. It's now a swarm.
It started out rather well, I was giggly at Dean cowering, and then... the giggling stopped. It reminded me alot of Hellsing (I don't know if you know it, anime, but it's a good reminder, because Hellsing is fantastic).
The imagery is so intense, I can just see everything. ...cries out as his hands sink into a yielding mass... I love that bit. The chitinous horde is so vivid throughout... just everywhere...
...barely remembering to turn the knife in his hand away in time to avoid cutting his own throat... God, that's horrible, that really captures the panic of it, I think that's the moment that first scared me, made it real, imagine being so scared you might do that...
And you had Dean wake up, without making it just another deus ex, creating an incredibly creepy ending. I hope Dean can handle it, 'cause if I had a dream like this I'd need lots of padding and pills, I think.
have to say, its one of the only things that really, really terrifies me - insects on me, inthe dark... so i thought i'd make him suffer it! glad you found it a little funny to start with - wanted to have that progression, horror always seems scarier when it's a little unexpected.
and the ending was where it all started. cause i had this image of him waking up as sammy came in and then sitting there, terrified, when he sees 'whatever' (at that point) from the dream.
thanks for reviewing!
Summary: Expanded again to 5x10. MAJOR SPOILERS!
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3942
[Report This] Published: 26/04/09 Updated: 18/02/10
Reviewer: Nikocal Signed
Date: 06/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This is fantastic. The ending is perfect- it just blew me away. I love Bobby's POV, as much as I love his character I have a hard time writing him myself, and this is really wonderful. Can you do one for when he hears about Sam's addiction? I'd love to see the conversation between him and Dean...
Oh, now there's an idea...
I'd only vaguely thought about continuing these scenes, but I'm finding Bobby quite fun to write. He's a blast to have in your head!
Glad you liked it, and thanks!
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