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Penname: bernie [Contact]
Real name: Sarah Bernard
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Summary:

The Winchester brothers fight to keep safe the only family they've ever known. - This story is a sequal to Thank You, featuring Sara Powers.


Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Sara's Stories
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 40890
[Report This] Published: 17/10/07 Updated: 14/12/07


Reviewer: bernie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love your Sara and her family. This is such a great series. But it's so sad - Dean is always the tragic character - he ends up giving up everything that he might want - hopefully this isn't the plan for this story. Looking forward to the next xhapter!!!

Author's Response:

So sorry for the slow response, somehow I missed your review.  I'm glad you're digging sara and her family.. these have been great stories to write and it's even more fun knowing how well people respond.  As for how the story will end, i'm not telling ;)  All I can do is warn you that it's not the last in the series.. thanks  - K

 
Reviewer: bernie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/12/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

You leave us hanging so very nicely!  Hopefully it was Sara that pulled the trigger.  Justice for the lady!  Then Dean can get his act together (we hope!).  Looking forward to Friday!  Have a great one!

Author's Response: Friday it is.. so glad youre enjoying and I hope you enjoy the ending - Kel

 
Summary:

Originally written for Brotherhood 2 zine. Dean and Sam are pitted against a powerful evil as they fight a battle in a timeless town. Dean's inner demons threaten to defeat him as the brothers struggle to survive.

banner by November's Guest


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 35704
[Report This] Published: 07/12/07 Updated: 10/12/07


Reviewer: bernie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great story and I haven't finished it yet!  I'm really behind in my reviews - we are in the midst of a major kitchen renovation so that is eating up my time.  I should be painting as we speak!  SOL.  Hope your cold is better.  This is too busy of a time to be sick.  This is a great early Christmas present!  Always looking towards your next.  I am waiting to read Sunday Bloody Sunday when it is all finished.  Also, what other zines have you published in?  Have a great one!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!! 

You're so right -- it IS too busy of a time to be sick. I keep trying to ignore it. My baby laughs at my croaky voice, though. :) Hee.

I hope the kitchen renovation goes well! Kudos to you for that. It's nice to hear that you can come back to fanfiction to give yourself breaks.

SBS is practically finished now -- the epilogue will post after Christmas as a "wrap up." I look forward to your comments!

As for zines, aside from this story in Brotherhood 2, I will have a story called "Fix You" in the upcoming Brotherhood 4, both published by Yum@. I also have a story called "Rain Check" in Rooftop Confessions 2 and will soon have one called "Stay" in Rooftop Confessions 3, both published by Griffinsong Press. I have a story called "Breath" that will be in the upcoming Roadtrip with my Brother published by agentswithstyle, and my next story, "In the Light" will actually be published in a zine as well, after it's posted (kinda going against the usual zine rules), also by agenstwithstyle.

If you're interested, agentswithstyle also prints all of the Virtual Season stories in zines as well. Each of these zines have a fantastic collection of stories and writers, and I'm just fortunate to be included among them.

Aaannnddd... that was probably more than you ever wanted to know about zines. Shutting up now.

Gaelic

 
Enrapture by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 215]
Summary:

en·rap·ture (ĕn-răp'chər)


SYNONYMS  enrapture, entrance, ravish, thrill,. These verbs mean to have a powerful, agreeable, and often overwhelming emotional effect on someone.

This is the next installment in the Sara Powers storyline, for all of you that have begged and pleaded to hear more about Sara and her family I hope you enjoy.

Happy Valentines Day to you all. 


Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Sara's Stories
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 80815
[Report This] Published: 14/02/08 Updated: 01/06/08


Reviewer: bernie Signed
Date: 17/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is going to be interesting to see how you develop the plot.  I have always liked the fact that Dean can find some "normal" in his life.  And your family is perfect for him and Sam.  Hopefully you give them a chance at this again.  I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: It is interesting to see how I'll develop the plot..lol. Especially given how I'm kind flying by the seat of my pants here..So glad you liked and thanks for reading - Kel

 
Reviewer: bernie Signed
Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Okay - great chapter!  You are setting things up nicely although Sam is done for if Dean finds out he damaged the car!  Keep it coming - looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Glad you're still digging it, I'll update just as quick as I can - Kel

 
Summary:

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An easy hunt in Arkansas goes bad. With Sam injured and totally dependent on him, Dean fights not only to help his brother, but to overcome his own personal demons as well.


Categories: General, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 189161
[Report This] Published: 03/03/08 Updated: 11/08/08


Reviewer: bernie Signed
Date: 28/07/08 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

This is a great story!  I just found it recently and have really enjoyed it!  Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you've enjoyed this story so far, it's been a lot of fun and I've enjoyed working on it. Thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

The brothers must solve a serious threat in the Vermont woods.   A random GuiltyPleasure tale--not connected with What Goes Around etc.


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 52612
[Report This] Published: 18/07/08 Updated: 19/08/08


Reviewer: bernie Signed
Date: 28/07/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great story!  Looking forward to the next chapter!

 
Summary:

When danger once more threatens the Powers family, Sam and Dean go on the hunt to protect the ones they love. 

  


Categories: General, Romance, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Sara's Stories
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 58593
[Report This] Published: 28/11/08 Updated: 13/01/10


Reviewer: bernie Signed
Date: 08/05/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Welcome back!  Looking forward to the next bit!

Author's Response: Aww...thanks Bernie.  I'm writing as we speak, should have an update by Wednesday ;) Kel

 
Summary:

 

The Winchester brothers drive through the Adirondacks en route to a meeting with Bobby. Ahead of schedule, they stop in a tiny Pennsylvania mountain crossroads, lured by the intrigue of a hunt. Better they should have kept driving.....

Set just post Dean's Deal. No spoilers for Season 4.


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 54192
[Report This] Published: 12/12/08 Updated: 18/02/09


Reviewer: bernie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

great story!  I've really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thanks Bernie!

 
Summary:

Spoilers up to and including 4/14

After the emotional upheaval of the siren incident, the brothers visit an old friend recently relocated to Georgia, in the hopes of gaining some perspective. They gain far more than they bargained for....


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 97798
[Report This] Published: 01/03/09 Updated: 03/10/09


Reviewer: bernie Signed
Date: 04/03/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really enjoy your stories.  Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying so---ml

 
Route50 by calUK Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Dean's sick and on the road alone. That's it, really... Set pre-series.

For the commodore. Happy birthday hun!


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2894
[Report This] Published: 25/05/09 Updated: 25/05/09


Reviewer: bernie Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Strung Out

Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Summary: The brothers,  separated for the holidays,  experience christmas in different ways.  As always...Dean-centric.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45842
[Report This] Published: 23/12/09 Updated: 21/03/10


Reviewer: bernie Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/01/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great story as always!  I enjoy your stories immensely!

Author's Response: Well Thanks,  Bernie!  Hope you continue to enjoy...mal

 
Reviewer: bernie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/03/10 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great story!  I always enjoy your writing!

Author's Response: Thanks for that!  Glad to entertain,---mal