Hey, wow...this fic made me cry--but not in the oh my gosh it's horrible way. It's so poignant. Your words plucked sharply on some heartstrings there...That was just wow... I'm still tearing up. You sketch John and Dean's characters so brilliantly. You show that vulnerable side of Dean we so rarely see in the shows--and you don't muddle it in impenetrable angst. Great job.

I'd give you an 11/10. You're such an amazing author. I wish I could write better, like you!! ^_^ Guh...this fic really makes me think about what could have been, and maybe what should have been.