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Penname: luvsamanddean [Contact]
Real name: Diane
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Member Since: 23/11/08
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Broken Images by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

 Broken Images new

Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?

People's Choice Winner

Awards 2008 Best Future fic

2008 UnGen Awards Best Sam


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830
[Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

First of all, thanks for telling me to read this one before I read Fractured. I'm sorry you had so much trouble getting back to me. This was so intense. I don't normally like the first person viewpoint but it really worked here. I thought you did a great job with each personality and the mannerisms of each Winchester. Loved the little touches that still kept us guessing, like Sam touching his wrist. Could have gone either way. Also loved the bearded "reporter" reaching for an absent ball cap. I couldn't shake the idea that the patient was Sam. And I only caught one clue - the shape of the face. I'm going to have to be more careful when I read your work. I loved this and thought you did an awesome job. :D

Author's Response:

Aha! You're Diane. Hello again. I'm glad that you got my message. I asked Tree to forward it to you, as I didn't want you to think I was ignoring you. But every time I tried to email you back, it just kept rejecting it.

Lol - yes, I like to play with peoples' minds - I love to throw in a twist or two just to make things interesting. Thank you so much for reading, and for taking the time to contact me. I'm really pleased that you liked this story. And given the whole plot twist, I think that any other way than the story being told from the doctor's point of view wouldn't have worked. And good for you getting one of my little clues. Thanks again, and welcome to the site....Jules

 
Blood Trail by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Blood Trail

SN.tv Creature Challenge entry


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6123
[Report This] Published: 03/04/08 Updated: 03/04/08


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really good! Totally surprised me. I really thought it was Kate. Loved the moments between the brothers. You did a great job with the brothers 'voices'. Love the 'Daphne'd' line! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for that, Diane. That Daphne reference actually came from my good friend and fellow author Catchme21. She's a good mate - she lets me use it quite frequently. Actually, I had originally intended for it to be Kate, till I read a multi-chapter story involving Kate coming after the boys, so in good conscience I went back and changed my protagonist to Jenny, the girl they couldn't save. It seemed to work in well with my love of plot twists - lol!....Jules

 
Summary:

 Concussed banner

Concussion can be fun....

Awards 2008 Best Humour

2008 UnGen Awards Best Humour


Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4755
[Report This] Published: 20/06/08 Updated: 20/06/08


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Jules! This was great! Loved how Dean was trying to tell his reflection what had happened (that handsome devil!) and kept getting lost. The part about Sam's dying made me cry. Then I was laughing again. Wonderful job but so sorry you had to be in pain to get it. Must be an easier way. :D

Author's Response:

Hi, Diane.

I had fun writing this....well, I did once the painkillers kicked in - LOL. I just thought - how crazy can I get inside Dean's scrambled head, and ran with it. So chuffed that you enjoyed it. I like the humour stuff - it tends to lift the spirits....Jules

 
Summary:  

Some things can always be counted on

A Comforting Sense Of Home


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3332
[Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 06/07/08


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really good. I liked how you kept the identity of the wounded brother obscured in the beginning. I had to force myself not to peek ahead and see which one it was. I also loved how you described them. And I was so focused on the 'vampire' that the shapeshifter totally came out of left field. Great job. Thanks for sharing this. :D

Author's Response: Twisty little me strikes again - lol. Thanks, Diane. I sort of told it a little from the point of view of the muddled brother, so it had his vague thoughts and feelings, and sense of confusion. The shapeshifter actually cme out of left field for me, too. In the first draft he wasn't there, but I felt it needed something, and my mind just wandered off one day, came back and whispered, what if.... So the story evolved. It's a bit of an organic process sometimes. Glad you liked it....Jules

 
Hunter by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

 Their first mistake was picking on a Winchester...it was also their last...

Hunter

Set in Season Three, between the episodes Bad Day At Black Rock and Fresh Blood


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 20194
[Report This] Published: 03/10/08 Updated: 17/10/08


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/11/08 Title: Chapter 3: Epilogue

Hi. I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. I especially loved how you showed Dean and Sam as awesome hunters. Just loved Sam kickin' butt even while wounded. Not really enough stories out there that show him as an equal to Dean and John as a hunter, so thanks for that. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Author's Response: Hi - and thank you so much. Yes, I think people tend to underestimate Sam sometimes, because he's very reluctant to hunt. Not that he can't do it - just that he hates doing it. Both boys have their strengths, and they make one hell of a team. I'm glad I could showcase that aspect, and rather chuffed that you loved it so much....Jules

 
S.A.M. by Smudge93 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

A short little piece on the life and thoughts of Dean. Why is it called Sam...read on!

SPOILERS-Up to the end of S2


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 282
[Report This] Published: 20/10/08 Updated: 20/10/08


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: S.A.M.

Wow. Short but what a punch! This made me cry. You did a wonderful job! Thank you.

Author's Response:

HI

Thank you. Was just trying something that my friend suggested, glad you liked!

Mary x

 
Summary:

When Tomorrow Comes

"I'll always have your back, brother."

Set in Season 2, after the episode Houses Of The Holy


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3352
[Report This] Published: 08/12/08 Updated: 08/12/08


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am so glad that you decided to post this. It's wonderfully written. You do a great job with their voices and I loved how you kept us guessing which brother was injured. I kept switching back and forth between the two. I'm actually pleased when someone writes about Sam taking care of Dean. Not enough equality out there so thanks for this. Loved this! :D

Author's Response:

Thank you for that. Anyone who knows me knows that I've been a fan of Agatha Christie since I was barely into my teens, so I like to give her a nod and throw a bit of a twist into my stories when I can.

But as I said to Kiara, there were little hints - Sam rubbing at his right wrist when he was thinking about the crazed hunter Gordon being in jail (his wrist was still broken in Hunted) and getting into sweatpants and tee shirt after his shower (Sam's usual night attire). As for the equality thing, I suppose it's because we see so much - especially in the first two seasons, of Dean always being Sam's protector, and not really letting Sam get in too much harm's way if he can help it. And with poor Sam being the target for every supernatural thing going, Dean didn't have an easy job. But they were raised as hunters, trained together, so I'm of the firm opinion that even though he's the little brother, Sam is just as capable of taking care of Dean when it comes to crunch time. I like to bring out that side of Sam when I can.....Jules

 
Summary:

Even downtime has its dangers...

Set in Season 3, some time after the episode Dream A Little Dream Of Me.

One Day In Your Life


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 20149
[Report This] Published: 12/12/08 Updated: 02/01/09


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed
Date: 13/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is great! Had me laughing almost from the first word. I don't know who I feel sorrier for. Scratch that. I think Sam. I'm in total agreement with him about the clowns. Why did it have to be clowns! Btw, one's staring at me from the corner of your banner. Ack!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for that Diane. Oh, LOL - poor Sam! And yes, there's a clown and a goat in the story banner - creepy, eh? As for why did it have to be clowns - well, poor Sammy's going to be asking himself that question in the next chapter - and so is Dean - lol. Thanks for reading....Jules

 
Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hey Jules. Hope it's okay to call you that. Another great chapter. Aw. Dean chose to not leave Sam alone. What an awesome big brother. :D Poor Sam. I'd have had a heart attack if I'd seen a horde of clowns in the parking lot and spilling out of everywhere. I loved how Dean handled the clown who squirted him. And I love how Sam is both oblivious and uncomfortable under Amber's attention. Hope Dean's plan works! I hope you had a great Christmas. :D

Author's Response:

Hi, Diane - hell, yes, call me Jules. Everyone does, including the people I work for.

Yep, those clowns running around the carpark would have been frightening - poor Sam, I do love to torture him....does that make me a sadist? *scratches head worriedly*...  Oh, you liked Dean's little dummy spit? I had fun writing that one, and picturing the look on his face when the clown squirted water at him. And thank you, I did have a good Christmas - hope you did, too...Jules 

 
Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Dimple Boy! I love it!! Who wouldn't fall for those killer dimples? Another great chapter, Jules!! Perfect job with "the talk". Wonderful balance without turning into a chick-flick moment. Can't wait for the epilogue, but there's gonna be fallout? I'm glad you had a nice Xmas and sorry that it was without your grandpa. The first anything without a loved one is always hard. My wishes to you that as time goes on things get easier for you.

Author's Response:

Hi, Diane. Yes, the first anything is a bit rocky, but we got through it. Thank you so much for your best wishes. I count myself very blessed that I had my grandfather for 44 years of my life - some people never even get to meet their grandparents.

Glad you liked the big brother pep talk, and the dimples. And you're right - who can resist them? As for fallout, well.....there might be a wee bit....*grins evilly*....Jules

 
Help Me Forgive by Micaiah Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Dean wants to forgive his brother.  He just doesn't know how.

Pure brotherly schmoop written for my friend Alli after episode 5.01 aired last year.


Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 484
[Report This] Published: 09/07/10 Updated: 09/07/10


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed
Date: 29/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well heck. This one made me cry! Love it anyway. Thanks so much for posting!

Author's Response: I love it when I make someone cry!  Sorry, I'm mean that way. :)  Thanks so much for taking time to read and review!  I appreciate it very much!

 
Dig by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:  

Engaged in a frantic race against time, only one thought uppermost in his head....dig, damn you - dig!

Dig

Awesome story banner by Chasidern

Best John


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2895
[Report This] Published: 30/07/10 Updated: 30/07/10


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed
Date: 30/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome back! Thanks for another great story!! You made the desperation John felt so real. I am a fan of John (though didn't always agree with how he treated our boys) so it's great to read a story with him. To be honest I cycled through all three of them as the digger. Really nice surprise that Sam had been buried as well. I like the way you keep us on our toes. Can't wait for the next story!

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you, Diane, it's good to be back. Real life's been a bit crazy lately, but hopefully it will settle down into a steady routine soon. 

Oh, I'm really pleased that John's desperation and near-panic came through. This is the first time I've actually tackled John in a fic - I'm not a fan of his, sad to say, even though I think JDM's super hot and a great actor, and a perfect choice for daddy Winchester. But within my inner circle are two staunch John fans, Ziggy and Cookie6, and I rely heavily on them to help me dig into John's psyche to see what motivated the man. 

Having said that, the idea to write it from John's point of view was purely a spur of the moment - "let's see if I can actually pull this off" sort of thing. Petra almost couldn't believe it when she got to the reveal and found I'd written a John story - LOL. 

Ah, my evil little plan caught you, too, eh? I'm very happy about that. And happy that you enjoyed it and was kept guessing until the moment when the boys were uncovered. 

As for the next story, well, fingers crossed - it's almost ready for posting. Might not be next week, but it will be soon. Thanks, hun.

Jules

 
Summary:

"As if staying in the same room with him before didn't make his skin crawl, the thought of Robo-Sam was just as unsettling, maybe even more so."

Tag to Family Matters, episode 6.07.

Dean has some issues to sort through.

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Thanks to Chasidern for the awesome banner!


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1571
[Report This] Published: 09/11/10 Updated: 09/11/10


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed
Date: 29/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a great tag! I loved everything about it. I'm looking forward to getting our Sam back but in the meantime I'm enjoying the Sam we have. I'm also looking forward to reading more of your work. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I also am enjoying the Sam we have.  So much material to work with there but I will be glad to see him get his soul back.  Thanks again!!

 
Summary: A hunt goes wrong and John meets a pair of hunters who help him out.
Categories: AU, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7501
[Report This] Published: 20/11/10 Updated: 21/11/10


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed
Date: 21/11/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great job so far! Looking forward to reading the next chapter and finding out what happens next!

 
Summary:

Since being bitten by a skinwalker, Sam's senses have become super-powered which, as Dean points out, is kind of cool. But now, with vengeful hunters after them and Lucifer making a push to get a Yes out of Sam, life is getting pretty freaking complicated.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Changing
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 21375
[Report This] Published: 22/03/11 Updated: 08/05/11


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed
Date: 24/03/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is very intriguing. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Chapter 4 will be up by the weekend! I love my boys!

 
Summary:

Crossover with Hawaii Five-0 (2010).  After some mysterious deaths, Steve McGarrett finds himself having to ask for, and accept, help from a very different source.

**Written for our weekly E/O Drabble challenge at fanfiction.net.  Fanfic.net hates Supernatural right now so the challenge was to do a crossover or feature the word of the week in another fandom.


Categories: Crossovers, Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 4088
[Report This] Published: 28/03/11 Updated: 19/08/11


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed
Date: 29/07/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Glad you're back! I'm totally enjoying this story. Thanks!

 
Summary: FeatureSomething evil has crawled from deep in the bowels of the Earth, an evil so terrible it has been banished for centuries. Now, Mother has decided her fearsome child may walk the surface again. Angst, pain and brother bonding.. Set just after S6 : 14
Categories: General Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 23821
[Report This] Published: 21/09/11 Updated: 15/10/11


Reviewer: luvsamanddean Signed
Date: 22/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice creepy beginning! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!  It so warms my heart.... I appreciate you taking the time...