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Penname: moira4eku [Contact]
Real name: Moira
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Member Since: 14/11/08
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I'm a recent fan of Supernatural. Love the show due to mainly the brother interaction. I'm hoping to soon see the first 2 seasons!
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Reviews by moira4eku
 
Summary:

Dean Winchester gets a little more than he bargained for during a trip to the hospital, and Sam's NOT a happy camper. Part of my "Hospital Horrors" series.

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Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: HOSPITAL HORRORS
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 21255
[Report This] Published: 16/05/08 Updated: 24/02/09


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/02/09 Title: Chapter 8: It's Hungry

Ok, that nurse is some kind of supernatural entity, I just know it! I hope Sam finds Dean soon!  Seems like he has hurt himself even more so! I wonder what the gray mass is?  

 
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Date: 20/02/09 Title: Chapter 9: Gone Astray

Yikes! I hope they put Dean in another ward, I don't think he should go back to room 4-22! Get him away from Nurse Perdue!

 
Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 20/02/09 Title: Chapter 10: Extrinsic Motivation

Holy crap! Are they all possessed? Poor Dean, doesn't sound good. Hurry back, Sam!!!!

 
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Date: 20/02/09 Title: Chapter 11: Stealth

YIKES!!! This does not sound good. How is Sam going to help Dean? Can't wait to find out!

 
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Date: 20/02/09 Title: Chapter 12: Predator After Prey

I had a feeling Nurse Perdue wasn't the one! She seemed to obvious, she' just a cold hearted bitch naturally! Figured it was the younger nurse. I hope Sam can stop her!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Moira, for all of your lovely reviews.  I'm really happy to hear you've enjoyed the story so far.

 
Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/02/09 Title: Chapter 13: Battle Cry

I absolutely loved your story! I was so releaved that Sam actually had  help from Nurse Purdeu! I can just see Sam trying out that science experiment with Dean laughing his head off!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm thrilled to know that you enjoyed this story!

 
Genius by adder574 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Summary: Why does Dean hide his intelligence
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 37829
[Report This] Published: 11/06/08 Updated: 03/02/09


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 06/02/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I really enjoyed your story! So wonderful that the principal wanted Dean to stay full time. I was sad to see the story come to an end!

 
Summary:

short collection of drabbles.

 

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Categories: Drabbles, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 1173
[Report This] Published: 14/06/08 Updated: 26/03/09


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/03/09 Title: Chapter 9: I miss you

I really enjoyed reading each little drabble of yours. You really got into the heads of each Winchester through some of their most important parts of their lives. I hope you continue!

 
Summary:

fox carries hare

I wrote this story under the penname Guiltypleasure--so that it would be separate from the thread that starts with What Goes Around,  Comes Around. 

--This story takes place somewhere after the St. Louis incident--the brothers have been running from the law for some time.  Dean is stalked and caught by a woman with a grudge,  but her need for revenge is a tool that a demon finds useful.


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 32202
[Report This] Published: 14/06/08 Updated: 16/07/08


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm glad I've discovered this story. I was reading "Addiction" and decided to check out your other stories and recognized several excellent ones that I have read before. There are several that I have not, and this is one of them. I really am enjoying it. This first chapter definitely is a nail biter. I hope the Doc believes Sammy about Dean's innocence, and doesn't turn them in. I find it interesting that the female trooper recognized Dean (he is one gorgeous man and she may have remembered his beautiful face from a list of criminals). Looking forward to reading the rest of this story!

 
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Date: 30/12/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Even when Dean is at Death's door with an injury, the ladies want him (sigh...) and the said same ladies just want to mother Sam. Seem realistic to me! I'm glad that she helped them, but she is right about distancing herself from them. Loved the lie about the decaying calf in the van! Tee, hee. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

 
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Date: 30/12/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Gulp, Laura  sounds like she will never accept the idea that Dean is innocent of his crime. She is never going to give up her quest to get Dean and now it seems like she is confusing Dean for the vicious young drifter who killed her family. I'm relieved that Bobby is on  his way to help the boys but I'm crossing my fingers that Dean doesn't have to lose the impala for good. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 
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Date: 30/12/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Either Laura Brennan is crazy or her spirit of her Dad is visiting her and making her nuts. I did not see this happening. Yikes! Poor Dean! Seems like she isn't taking him in but going to do her own kind of justice on Dean's ass. Sam and Bobby are going to freak when they get back and Dean is gone! Looking forward to the next chapter.

 
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Date: 30/12/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hmmmm.....I'm wondering now if Laura Brennan's dad more of a Zombie and not a spirit since it seems corporeal. She has definitely lost what common sense she had. I hope somehow Bobby and Sam can find Dean soon. I was trying to figure out which season this took place in and since their father is still alive, it is season 1. I just love season 1 fics! I'm going to have to finish reading this story tomorrow since it is now 2:00AM. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

 
Tired Tears by writer2b Rated: K+ starstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Weechester One-shot. A tired little boy struggles with the hand he has been dealt. Dean is nine and Sammy is five. John is...well, John.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 666
[Report This] Published: 02/07/08 Updated: 02/07/08


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, John really is a jerk here. Poor Dean. I wanted to cry for him. Great insight to their past.


Author's Response: Moira4eku:Hi! thank you for your response. I'm hoping to get the "second" one-shot up soon (maybe Christmas Vacation??) It will be from John's POV and I'd love to hear what you think after reading that!!Take care!Writer2b

 
Back To Me by mummyluvr Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: One month after Sam leaves for Stanford, Dean almost dies alone. Good thing his little brother has weird dreams, huh? One-shot.
Categories: General, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1594
[Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 07/07/08


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Back To Me

Very interesting story! So Sam came to Dean in his time of need but doesn't remember doing it, just a dream to him. Poor Dean, I just want to smack John upside his head sometimes. Dean takes on too much sometimes. Really loved your story.

 
Summary: "We're stronger as a family"...right? Written for the Get Well, Angela Challenge. Tag to Shadow (S1)
Categories: Missing Scenes, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1797
[Report This] Published: 07/07/08 Updated: 07/07/08


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, I'm glad that Sammy sees them as family. Poor Dean, his whole life has been protect his family, and his own personal desires take the back seat. You did an excellent job with their thoughts and actions.

Author's Response:

Thanks Moira! The stars look beautiful!

~A

 
Summary:

Sometimes, arguments have to be made right, no matter what the cost.

Written for the 'Get Well Angela' challenge.


Categories: General, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2558
[Report This] Published: 12/07/08 Updated: 12/07/08


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story. Sammy taking care of Dean instead of the other way around.

 
Normal by RoweenaC Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

For the "Get well soon, Angela" Challenge. A bit of happiness in an otherwise very sad childhood...

My first attempt at a Wee!chester thing. And yeah, I know Dean embraced the life as a hunter with 16.

Dedicated to Angela and her family and the UnGen-family. Also, I'd like to thank my beta-birds once more for their encouragement and patience.

 

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Banner by the unbeatable bulletbabe who seems to be able to pluck the images right out of my mind. Kinda scary... Thanks, Louy.

I don't own anything seen on the show. Sadly, Kripke owns the boys. My ideas are mine.

 


Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
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Series: Glimpses
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2555
[Report This] Published: 13/07/08 Updated: 13/07/08


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Family

I really enjoyed your birthday story. I was afraid for a nano second that his family forgot his 13th birthday! Great story!

Author's Response:

Hi Moira. Geez, I feel awful. Your review totally slipped under my radar. I don't check my older stories that frequently. SORRY and a huge THANK YOU!

Well, we couldn't have that! His family forgettin' his 13th birthday, I mean! That would be the worst thing you could do to a teenager, wouldn't it?

Thanks for takin' the time, Ilka

 
Camp Sunshine by adder574 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
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Summary: Sam convinces Dean to take a job at Camp Sunshine, a summer camp for kids with diabetes. While trying to take care of a spirit that is causing accidents and hurting campers, Dean must deal with a familiar problem and runs into an old friend.

 


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 51103
[Report This] Published: 14/07/08 Updated: 18/04/10


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/04/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Holy crap! Please don't leave us here for long! I gotta know what Sam said to Dean when he was at Stanford! Doesn't sound good. I just want to smack John. How could he treat our boy that way, the jerk. I love these flashbacks into the Winchesters lives. How like Dean to give away his amulet even though it means a life time of health problems. Please, please, hurry back!

 
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Date: 24/04/10 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Gulp, I completely forgot that there are goons looking for the  amulet! I hope the boys can get rid of the ghosts before they have to worry about crazy people. Dean, Dean, Dean, you need to take better care of your self. I guess it's really hard for him to revert back to being sick. Looking forward to the next part.  I just love your stories!

 
Summary:

A Wee!Chester tale.

John discovers that Dean has met his first love, now all he has to do is stop it tearing his family apart. 

A little story of a father and his two sons.

Spoilers: None 

Disclaimer: I don't own them.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, AU, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 18772
[Report This] Published: 10/09/08 Updated: 18/03/09


Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 08/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: A tale of two sons

Well, somehow I missed this story. I'm really enjoying it. That woman should be careful, Dean could be considered jailbait at sixteen. I can imagine how embarrassed Dean must have felt talking to his dad about his sex life. Sam had  better watch out ! Looking forward to the rest of the story.

Author's Response:

HI there

This story has been lurking in my WIP, frantically waving at me to love it again and finish it.

It was originally a one shot but I felt there was more to it, just didn't realise that it would take me so long to find it!

Poor Dean, awkward conversation with dad or what! You can get married at 16 in Scotland, even though you can't legally drink or vote! Go figure! I forget that it's not like that everywhere, but Dean is a lot older than his years thanks to the responsibilty heaped on him by John. That's the Dean Mary sees.

Thanks for the review, Mary x

 
Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 08/03/09 Title: Chapter 3: Bearer of bad news

I'm feeling really badly for Dean now. He is about to lose his first love. No wonder he can't commit to long relationships as he gets older. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Wonder if Mary knows that Dean is only 16?


Author's Response:

HI there

Poor Dean, I'm not hurting him in this one and yet I still am.

Mary knows his age, she just forgets sometimes, he is a lot older than his years, thanks to his hard life.

Thanks, Mary x

 
Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 08/03/09 Title: Chapter 4: Dinner

Wow, this is a twist. John is actually giving Dean permission to stay. Sam overhearing this is breaking his heart. I wonder how he felt when his father refused to let him go off to Stanford years later and older than Dean is now. Still wondering if Mary knows that Dean is only 16. I think she would freak! I can't wait to see what happens next. 

Author's Response:

HI there

Looks like John is going to do the right thing and let Dean chose doesn't it?? But Sam hearing is about to change things.

Thanks, hope you enjoy the rest. Mary x

 
Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 12/03/09 Title: Chapter 5: Sometimes a choice.... isn't a choice at all

Uh, John? Dean is a minor, too, don't forget! I sometimes think John forgets Dean is not of age either. Has he dropped out of school? He is only 16 for crying out loud? John could really be a bastard and use the age card if he really wanted to. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

HI there

John forgets that Dean is still young although no longer a little boy. Your review is scarily close to where this story may be going, do you know that? Little Sammy ESP there?

Thanks, Mary x

 
Reviewer: moira4eku Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/03/09 Title: Chapter 6: Two sides to the circle

Poor Dean! He has a  real hard decision to make, and I have a feeling family ties will almost be impossible for him to break (knowing our boy). I'm looking forward to the next part of your story.

Author's Response:

HI there

Yep, Dean's between a rock and a hard place, his family means everything to him but he still wants to be with Mary.

Thanks for the review, Mary x