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Penname: moira4eku [Contact]
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Real name: Moira Status: Member Member Since: 14/11/08 Website: Beta-reader: I'm a recent fan of Supernatural. Love the show due to mainly the brother interaction. I'm hoping to soon see the first 2 seasons! Reviews by moira4eku
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Reviews by moira4eku Summary: When their Dad doesn't return from a hunt, twelve year old Dean and eight year old Sam have to deal with an unexpected relative and a sinister plot that could leave one of them dead and the other lost forever...
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 50267 [Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06
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 Date: 28/11/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 Great story! You can really see how their personalities were formed from this tale. Made me sad at times when Dean's self worth was at a all time low. He can be like that as an adult too. Good thing Sammy was able to see what he really wanted in his heart. Those boys will be the saving grace of one another, I'm convinced of it! Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review! And to read this thing - I know it's huuuuuge!! Summary:
Something Wicked. John grabbed his young sons, threw their stuff in the trunk of the Impala and booked. He had felt anger toward Dean for not listening, for not following orders, but he mainly had felt terror. He looked at his son differently now. Spoilers for 1.18 Something Wicked
Banner by nig.honey - Thanks! Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., John W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1059 [Report This] Published: 23/01/07 Updated: 23/01/07
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Date: 28/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 How very sad. Dean had to grow up really fast. No wonder he hates "chick flick" moments. Great story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I especially love getting reviews on older stories. Dean did have to grow up so fast and John may not have liked it, but in his eyes it was necessary. Something Wicked showed us how tragic it turned out for Dean. Take care, B.J. Summary: Basically, alot of Dean as a teenager issues/angst/dealing with it/getting beat up like he always does----------mild swearing(not in the first chapter)---------standard disclaimers apply---------and go easy on me reviewers, its my first attempt! :)
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 2001 [Report This] Published: 05/02/07 Updated: 07/02/07
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Date: 08/03/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I just discovered this story, and I noticed you seem to have abandoned it. I hope the muse will come back to you and finish it. I love TeenChester stories, and here we have Dean broken at the prologue, wondering what happened? Summary:
NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.
 Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09
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Date: 21/05/09 Title: Chapter 42: Funeral Song Well, I just finished reading your fic (I started the story 3 days ago) and I must admit I really enjoyed it. Dean will keep his "gift" to himself for now. I'm glad they were able to kill the demon but sad that Becky had to be sacrificed for it to happen. It made me tear up when she told Dean that she never really left him. I look forward to your next story. Summary: Dean is diagnosed with an illness that requires long term care. This leads to the Winchesters becoming a family and getting a taste of normal or as normal as things can get for the Winchesters.
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 217402 [Report This] Published: 18/08/07 Updated: 25/06/08
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Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Holy Moly! Good thing Joshua came when he did. I have a suspicion as to what is ailing Dean, and it aint good! Great start to your story, you have me hooked.
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Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Showeee, I'm trying to catch up on all the chapters. Dean just can't catch a break. Holy Moly! I hope somehow he gets to a hospital fast! Very gripping story.
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Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 I think John is not thinking what is best for his sons. Very disappointed in him. I'm glad that John and Bobby made up at the end. I guess Sam will be fuming for years and Dean will just accept his lot in life. You wrote quite a wonderful AU that eventually went back to canon. Thanks for the story! Summary:
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Dark Horse Series Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13027 [Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 26/11/07
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Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Fall from Grace Well, now John knows a little more about which demon killed Mary. Sam is still not ready to forgive his father for what happened with Dean. Poor Dean is stuck in the middle. I really enjoyed reading your story! Summary:
While investigating a violent haunting of a small town in Massachusetts, the Winchester boys suddenly become tangled in a horrific tale centuries old. Both men must try to unravel the mystery surrounding a witch that lived in the year 1689, a time in American history that was full of overwhelming chaos and terrible deceit. However, while Sam uses the stories and legends of the witch in the present to determine what really occurred all those years ago, Dean finds himself smack in the middle of the story. Dragged into a past festering with deception, lies, and twisted stories, he struggles to survive as he must escape a fate he could never have imagined.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 5545 [Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 27/02/09
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Date: 28/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Well, I figured it with Dean by the way he was talking! Great set up, can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Date: 28/02/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One Love the naked Dean! I wonder how Fay will respond to having a naked man appear at her cottage. Looking forward to the next installment! Summary:
Summary: Secrets have a way of not staying hidden. Now, with one of his sons fighting for his life, John has realized that family secrets must come to light, secrets that will change the Winchester family forever. Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 124512 [Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 03/08/10
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Date: 20/04/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Ahhhhh....Sammy is awake and seems to be doing well. I loved the flashbacks of theirs.
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Date: 20/05/09 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 I really enjoyed reading about Dean's time in school. Seems like his PE teacher just didn't like him. I'm worried about the ending of this chapter though, so please hurry back!
Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 18/08/09 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Wow! What a great chapter. I loved how conflicted Bobby was and how Sam's story from Dean's high school days helped him with his decisions (too bad Jed was able to play again, I so so hate the Cowboys, being a Redskins fan and all~LOL). So, I guess Bobby is going to let the doctors out a ventilator in Dean. He really needs it if he is going to get better. Thanks again for the great update! I know nothing about football. I only picked the Cowboys because someone told me they were Jensen's team. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Date: 24/04/10 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Yeah! Another chapter! I'm glad that Dean made the right decision. It's a good thing John was able to to talk to Dean about his mistakes of the past, and that Dean wasn't to blame for what happened to Sam when they were younger. Looking forward to more!
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Date: 03/08/10 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 I love how you added the gardens to your story. It makes perfectly good sense that these gardens would show up in their view of heaven when they were there. It really brought tears to my eyes. I hope now Sammy will be more positive when visiting with Dean, and he truly listened to his father. Small steps can be gigantic leaps when one is really ill and recovering. I'm so glad to see another chapter in this fabulous story! I can't wait to read the next one. Summary: Trouble with the Impala on the way to a job is more than it seems. My entry for Supernatural.tv's last challenge for '07 (oneshot).
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2750 [Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 15/12/07
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Date: 18/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ha, ha, ha! The Impala saved the day. It knew what it was doing. You had the "voices" of the boys down pat! Great little story. Summary:
Sam refuses to spend one normal christmas with Dean Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1079 [Report This] Published: 19/12/07 Updated: 19/12/07
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 Date: 18/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I really enjoyed your story. I can see why Sam didn't want to celebrate Christmas with Dean, but in the end he did. My only complaint would be watch out for capitalization when needed. There were a whole lot of I's, Christmas, Dean, etc...that need to be capitalized. I found it distracting. Looking forwad to your next story! Summary:
The brothers find suffering and friendship through Gordon.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 63124 [Report This] Published: 18/01/08 Updated: 16/03/08
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Date: 15/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I'm glad you mentioned this story in one of my reviews for Addicted. This is fabulous! How did I miss these stories. I see I'll have plenty to read to get caught up in all the stories that I missed. Poor Dean! He is really in a bad way here. When he was shot with the bow in the chest, it was quite jarring! I didn't see that coming.And poor Sam, frantically searching for his hurt brother. Looking forward to reading this story and more. Summary:
It was just another crappy motel in another crappy little town, right? Wrong. Thank you Vanessa for the beautiful banner, god he is a sexy beast, isn't he?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 49189 [Report This] Published: 04/03/08 Updated: 03/03/09
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Date: 03/03/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Yeah! I'm glad that you decided to update! I discovered this story not long ago and was thrilled to see a new chapter up. I hope they can find the bones of the ghost and burn it to ash. I don't think Dean can take much more! Summary:
Whilst visiting Pastor Jim in Boxborough Massachusetts, Dean is hit by an uncomfortable sense of Deja-vu, whilst Sam has the uncomfortable feeling that the Pastor may be hiding something. What is it about this picturesque New England town, that could be so terrible that Dean has blocked it out and Jim is happy to keep it that way? Many Thanks to the Brilliant BulletBabe and her awesome Banner making skills - I LOVE it Louey!
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 40565 [Report This] Published: 04/04/08 Updated: 16/04/09
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Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I'm definitely hooked by your first chapter. I'm very curious as to what happened earlier in their lives, especially Dean. Uh-oh Missed one !!!!! I have really enjoyed your reaction to each of the chapters - it was really very satisfying to see that you found this suspenseful and kept on reading - truly appreciate all the time you must have taken reading and reviewing this story and its a huge encouragement to keep going.Like I said I will not just leave this and am working on the ending now - some parts are proving tricky!!!! But thank you for sticking with me!!!! :->
Abi.
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Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Dean is reliving some terrible moments from his childhood in his dreams. I'll need to read the next chapter to find out what happened! Great story! Moria, I am so sorry to have taken sooo long to respond to your great review (s!!!!) I am happy this seems to be working for you - I was trying my hand at suspense - for myself as well as this story is mostly off the cuff. It means that updates are irregular, but I will not leave this as I have started it and really want to see how it pans out myself!!!! LOL!
Thanks again for taking the time to read and review! Abi.
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Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Oh no! Seems like Dean is so screwed here. I guess the little girl's ghost wants some revenge for what happened to her. Poor Dean! Yeah - things are taking a fairly steep downhill turn for our boy!!!! ;-) Vengeful little girl ghosts are just the scariest things for me!!!! The idea of anything freaky with children just has me reaching for the pillow!!!!! (Apart from Supernatural - I tend to be a huge scaredy cat !!!)
Abi
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Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Hmmm....seems that Ruth didn't know who Dean was until the end of the chapter. Wonder what she will do? Hope Dean comes out of this ok! Thanks for the stars!!!!! Ruth has figured out who Dean is now - so yes that spells major trouble for him, poor guy! Well Dean has Sam to help him out and I am resurrecting one or two of the fallen hunters from series one - Jim and Caleb - to lend a hand also. I am going along with some of the "rules" laid down by the show; i.e. the idea that ghosts can become confused and have the ability to see what they want to see - this involves a lot of grey areas. Going onward to keep up with you!!!! ;-> Abi.
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Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I'm just dying to know what exactly happened and why Ruth wants revenge on Dean! The suspense is killing me! Oh wow - killing you? Are we talking slow death here?!!!! LOL! I don't mean to be ... well mean,but you just made my day!!!! To know that this is working is a real boost - to aim at suspense and not come off vague... what a relief!!!! So Glad you are enjoying!!!! Abi
Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 14/11/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Well, I can't wait to find out. I don't think Dean can take much more! Dean is pretty beat to his boots. I know he's fictional, but don't you find the way he's written a little inspiring? When he keeps insisting he's "awesome" in those comedy moments the show just excels in part of me ALWAYS has to agree with him!!!! By the way hope this section is not too drawn out here - but the chapter would have been way too long and I hadn't finished playing yet!!! Abi.
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