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Penname: Star [Contact]
Real name: Mandie
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Member Since: 08/11/08
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A star is wistful, beautiful. There are the things of which dreams are made of gems that we associate with a fantasy we love.

So when I wanted to give myself a name. The first thing that came to mind was star. It is the border between fantasy ands reality, made with just enough of the real to fascinate or tease out the bliss we all long for.

That bliss is what stories are made of. It’s the opportunity to set aside life and its hardships and remind ourselves that sometimes, just sometimes, dreams do come true

I originally hated Fanfiction (I know, I know...) until I discovered Supernaturalville Virtual Seasons and its ungen link with its talented writers. YOU GUYS ALL changed my mind! Now I'm hooked and occasionally post my own stories. Unfortunately with my hectic schedule I don't get to post often. But I love the vibe on this site, would recommend it to anyone!

So that's the point at which I'll say bye! Trust me, i can't get enough of this site!


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Reviews by Star
 
Summary: Drabble challenge on FF.net - WOW Soft. Castiel gets to go home.

Categories: Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100
[Report This] Published: 22/02/10 Updated: 23/02/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 27/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this! A longer story about Cas' struggle to get home would be greatly appreciated.;)wink!

Author's Response:

hahahahaha

I'll see what I can do :D

Thanks

 
Summary:

Spoilers up to episode 5.14.  Sam's POV after MBV.

"He didn't need to see the blood smeared across his mouth to know he looked like a monster.  The horror on his brother’s face had told him all he needed to know."

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Thanks to Chasidern for another awesome banner!


Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1923
[Report This] Published: 10/03/10 Updated: 10/03/10


Reviewer: Star Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed Sam's POV here in this story. The self-loathing, disappointment and range of emotions exploreD were great. I love that he thought not of himself but Dean and still you kept truE to the brothers despite everything they were going through. Dean's support of Sam no matter what. Their love for each other. loved it!

I really love these lines,

"Hell, Cas, downed half a cow before it was over."

Castiel shifted in his position by the door but remained silent.

"You said no when it counted, Sammy. You've said no every time it's counted and that's what we'll keep on doing because….well…. because it's all we can do."

I think these lines show the real Sam and Dean.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for such an awesome review!  I really try hard to stay true to the boys and their love and support of each other.  I'm so happy you enjoyed the story!

 
Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 30/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Great story! Rereading this has truly been a pleasure. I hated Sam's demon-blood addiction but it really showed how only human the boys were and how they fought, 'Team Free-will'.

And I agree with you, Dean isn't empty, there is no way he could be! So take that Famine!



Author's Response: Oh, hey!  Thanks for reviewing again.  :)  Glad you liked it the second time around.

 
Summary:

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Banner by RoweenaC

After 5.14 Dean faces a secret he's been keeping. Sometimes being dead inside would be so much easier. Spoilers for 5.14


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2786
[Report This] Published: 21/03/10 Updated: 21/03/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 21/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting. Loved the build up! And was pleasantly surprised at the end.

Not sure I want to touch this one with a ten-foot pole (lol!) but indeed the 'fifth horseman' does exist but is he really a horseman or the leader of the armies of God on a horse?

But I love the twist with Dean being the 5th horseman and connecting the ring he wears on the show was very clever!

I would love this to continue to see where you take this universe. So please consider it and my wholehearted enthusiasm.

Great read! I'm glad Sam knows and is with his brother! Thanks for this!

 
Summary:

Kerrie Ann Reagan never imagined she'd find the demon that killed her mother twenty-three years ago. Her father had devoted his life to finding the creature and sending his evil butt back to hell. Now that he's dead, someone has to pick up where he left off. With the help of two hunters ( gee, who could they be?) she finally finds the demon and sends him back to where he came from.

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!
 

 

(The similarity between Dean, Sam and Kerrie is intentional, but I own nothing-it all belongs to the genius behind the Supernatural series that we love so much.)


Categories: Romance, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Kerrie Ann Reagan Series
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 6605
[Report This] Published: 29/03/10 Updated: 02/04/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 28/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Amazing

I haven't actually read the story yet but the banner caught my attention! It's beautiful. So i just needed to say that! I'm off to read the story so i can actually review for real, lol!

Author's Response: Thanks! I didn't know if it would turn out like I wanted it to, but apparently it did! :)

 
Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 28/06/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Your Star

Interesting, though i am wondering how she knew his name was Samuel?

Author's Response: You'll just have to keep up the reading to find out. (The answer to that question is in the second story of the series though, that much I will tell you.) I'm so glad that you're enjoying the story! :)   (And sorry for the late response, I went camping with friends and didn't want to tak emy computer with me.)

 
Fireworks by ophium Rated: K+ [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Dean's side of events. Set right after the end of 'Dark side of the Moon'.
Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3754
[Report This] Published: 04/04/10 Updated: 04/04/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 05/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this story!

It explores Dean's fears and his perceived inadequacies as well as tying in God that has been so elusive on supernatural.

I love that Sam was able to express his feelings to Dean because he hasn't done that a lot this season, really ever since Dean died.

I also am in love with the fact that you used something as simple as fireworks to bring Dean back to himself and give him comfort.

All in all a great read! Thanks!



Author's Response:

*blush*

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

 
Baby Surprise by Vampress Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Sam is 17, a little over a year ago, he fell in love for the first time. Nine months after he left, he recives a phone call that will change his life.
Categories: One Shots, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 3663
[Report This] Published: 09/04/10 Updated: 18/06/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 29/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Excited to see where you take this story! Though I have to say that I don't fully agree with your characterization of Dean. He practically raised Sam so he might be a little more sympathetic to Sam being a daddy even chip in a little. Just my thoughts. Update soon!

 
Summary: The Winchester brothers had a moment to themselves. Events are right after S4E5 Monster Movie.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1389
[Report This] Published: 20/04/10 Updated: 20/04/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 21/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love this short sweet story. It shows the brother dynamic I love supernatural for. Happy 100th!

Author's Response:

Happy 100th to us both! \o/

Yeah, the brother dynamic is awesome, although it has been missing quite a bit lately. Glad you enjoy our story!

 
Summary:

 

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Retribution, payment, a life for a life. You took my pet so I take your brother. Unless you'd like to play a game...”

 

 


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2502
[Report This] Published: 24/04/10 Updated: 24/04/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 01/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It speaks to everything that is Dean. His endurance, his strength, his love for Sam and his determination to do anything it takes to save him. This ia what i missed on Suoernatural the entire season with Sam and Dean(until 100th episode). The push and drive that makes the Winchesters, that says no matter the hurt to themselves they will succeed because someone else is depending on them. Thanks for this!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I really missed this side of the boys this season too, although I think the way it's gone so far has been little short of awesome - they've changed so much (*sigh*) that they couldn't really behave that way again - until placed in the most extreme of situations, even by Winchester standards!

Ta!

Cal

 
Summary:

John is dead. Dean is relentless and throwing caution to the wind. A botched hunt, and one older pissed off brother, didn't change the fact that Sammy was hurt.

  

 

 


Categories: General, AU, Action, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 10339
[Report This] Published: 24/04/10 Updated: 24/04/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 25/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this stoory! Have to say though I hate that damn little evil SOB who did so much damage to our Sammy. It is just like Dean to put aside everything (even his baby!) when Sam is hurt.



Author's Response:

Thanks Star, glad you liked it.  I am such a limp Sam, big brother Dean freak...what can I say.

Denise

 
While you slept by ophium Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Coda to 'Point of no return'. Snippets from Sam's point of view throughout the episode. 
Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3604
[Report This] Published: 29/04/10 Updated: 29/04/10


Reviewer: Star Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The idea of Dean as an angel appeals to me more than it should! It just makes ense! Dean is the caring, strong, sweet hard-case we imagined angels would be. His selflessness is amazing. It would be interesting if the show takes this direction!

Author's Response:

That wwould be very awesome, yes :O)

Though... I fear the show will never go there...

 
Summary: Sam didn't really have a father for father's day. 
Categories: Wee!chester, General, Misc, One Shots, Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 230
[Report This] Published: 30/04/10 Updated: 01/05/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 01/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Brother's Day

Really appreciated this cute little story of brotherly sweetness! Made my day!

Author's Response: Well, I had lots of fun writing it :) Thank you so much for your response, it made my day too <3

 
Faces by Katie Coleman Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

He loved Dean, but some days, he lost his faith in the older boy. 


Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Wee!chester, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 264
[Report This] Published: 03/05/10 Updated: 03/05/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 05/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Faces

I definitely don't like this Dean that would hurt Sam but somewhere along the line he could have made this mistake. But a hurt Sam breaks Dean in pieces so I agree with the ending. Thanks for this!

Author's Response:

No I don't like this Dean either! But I guess, he was a lot younger... and I think he would definitely be broken hearted over it at the end. I can't help but thinking that John was a tad bit nasty right before this happened, like he was subconsciously acting out or something... if that makes sense?

 Thanks for commenting! 

 
Summary: Lucifer has a little birthday treat for his vessel to be - Happy Birthday Sam Winchester!

D.O.B: May 2nd 1983. Sorry it's a day late or so late. No spoilers set now-ish! (S5 - Episode 19 sort of)

 


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1106
[Report This] Published: 03/05/10 Updated: 03/05/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 05/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol! No disrespect! This story was interesting to say the least. Liked Sam and his fears and the irony that the present Dean got him for his birthday was lucifer's gift. Wow! Thanks for this!

Author's Response:

Well I hope no-one who works at the Chateaux Lacroix vinyards ever comes on here to read this one!! lol I am sure it is a very good red wine! Lucifer just warps thing somewhat!

Interesting is good, I must admit to posting speedily, after I wrote this as Sam's birthday was slipping away, so any lapses in grammer and so forth are due to haste.

Thank you for the review :)

Jacq

 

 
Daschund by Katie Coleman Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Sammy and Castiel acquire a temporary, apparently hexed pet. 

 



Categories: General, One Shots, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 480
[Report This] Published: 03/05/10 Updated: 04/05/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 05/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Daschund

This is hilarious! Doggy Dean pisses off (pun intended) Sam and ends up in the bathroom. Wonder how Castiel will solve this one? Love Cas, my favourite character (EVER!) after the boys and Bobby!

Author's Response:

Nice pun ;) 

I think Cas has a  bit of a job on his hands. I wonder if they'll buy Dean a leash, myself, if it takes too long to turn him back. LOL.

 Thanks for the comment!

 
Summary:

Part One: Dean has the hiccups. Sam tries to help. 

 Part Two: Castiel's host body needs replacing - or so he thinks.  


Categories: One Shots, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 623
[Report This] Published: 05/05/10 Updated: 05/05/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 09/05/10 Title: Chapter 2: Part Two

this is hilarious! Cas's panic at hiccups and Dean's threatening answer. W-O-W! I am still on the ground as i review. give Sammy hiccups next. Please!!

Author's Response: I might actually have to start a Sam one! Thanks for this wonderful comment :D

 
Devil's Claw by penmin Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: The tall dark haired man holds the boy in his arms and rocks him gently back and forth.  As the boy's life blood seeps from the deadly bullet wound, the hunter's silent tears mingle with the rain on the boy's face...

"Wake up Chuck; you're muttering in your sleep again, was it another vision?  Who was in trouble this time?"  Becky bombards him with multiple questions.

Set Season 5 just after The Real Ghostbusters - episode 9, spoilers up to that point.  

note: Written before the S5 finale

Many thanks to Midge for beta-ing this for me and making it logical.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 14878
[Report This] Published: 08/05/10 Updated: 13/05/10


Reviewer: Star Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am really enjoying this story from chuck's view and of course fangirl Becky always makes me laugh. Somehow, she seems more mature in your story...idk.

Thanks for this! Please update soon



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a comment,and stars, thats really great, somehow I always see Becky as quite a pushy madam, but sweet at the same time.

Jacq

 
Summary: Often mistaken for a mere catalyst of God, a man with no heart and a pre-programmed mind like a message machine, Castiel sometimes let his thoughts tread on his faith.  Spoilerish for Season Five. 
Categories: One Shots, Misc, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 351
[Report This] Published: 10/05/10 Updated: 10/05/10


Reviewer: Star Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Hallelujah

Great! I love Cas' heartfelt confusion, and wavering faith. I can imagine the Cas who first came to Dean feeling like this when he found that not only wasn't he getting God's orders but his fellow angels were taking matters into their own hands. Cas is and will always be my favourite character after the boys and Bobby. I am extra attached to him and hope he still pops in when this season is over.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :) I wanted to differ from all of the fics that play Cas as kind of... maybe not emotionless, but something like that, you know? Or the ones that have him feeling emotions but not knowing what they are, if that makes sense. I actually think Cas is equal to Dean and Sam favouritism-wise to me, which is a really hard thing to do for a TV character. 

 

Anyway, thank you for your lovely comment :)  

 
The Road by soncnica Rated: K+ [Reviews - 3]
Summary: …you know? The one that Sam hates, because of what happened to him there. Twice. Wee!Chesters, Sam is 9, Dean is 13. Sick!Sam.
Categories: Wee!chester, General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3230
[Report This] Published: 31/05/10 Updated: 01/06/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 27/09/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Road

I really enjoyed this story (despite the vomit! lol!) it was very sweet and fulfilling. Dean held Sammy then and he still holds Sam now.

Author's Response:

hey!

thank you!

hahah, oh man, sowwy, but vomiting, ecpecially Sam is a kink of mine! don't ask! LOL

yeah Dean will always hold Sam... no matter the age! 

thank you so much for reading this :)

hugs, 

S.

 
Summary: T.S. Eliot once said that a life burns in every moment. The Winchesters are about to discover how true that is as they face losing not only the battle between good an evil, but risk the one thing that means the most to them-Brotherhood.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 37733
[Report This] Published: 07/06/10 Updated: 12/07/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 06/07/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I was ecstatic with the way this ended. Caleb knowing a bit of the truth, Sam realizing how important family is and that DAMN book being destroyed before the future generation payed the ultimate price. This is the first story I've read with the brotherhood. It is so amazing I am now actively searching for any others. Thanks for this!

 
Summary:

S3- A hunter learns Sam maybe a threat, so he kidnaps Sam and disables him, so that he's not useful to the demon side. Sam may be able to use the disability to save Dean from his deal. Limp Sam, Protective Dean.

Sounds of Silence

Awesome banner by Chasidern! A big thanks to her!

I also wanted to thank my wonderful beta - sendintheclowns- she is the best!


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 33613
[Report This] Published: 10/06/10 Updated: 25/07/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 20/07/10 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Interesting little deception. Can't see where you're going with it but i'm excited...

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the little deception... Ralph is feeling guilty, Dean has a need to fix Sam so ... yeah it is a tangled web.

Thanks so much for taking time to comment! :)

 
Summary:

Recap:  ...and the black car looked like it was the source of the sparks, which could mean only one thing.   I let out a muffled yell as more sparks flew, as the grinding cutting tool bit deeply into the shiny black metal of the bodywork!  "Stop!"  Dean cried out, but I feared it was too late.

For new readers these are Jay's E-mails to Eva, Jay tells the true tale about how she came across the Winchester brothers in a series of emails to her friend Eva.

Jay says please read in this order through the series link:

1. The Shower Room.

2. Ice Cold in Alex.

3. Storm Chaser.

4. Flaming Shadow. 

5. Sparks and Car Parts.

6. Falling for the Boys.

And Jay says sorry this isn't a chapter story (it was supposed to be) but she kept getting interrupted telling her tale so she had to break it up.  Jay also says Eva and the girls in the office think the boys are hot and Russell has a thing for the Chevy! 


Categories: Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: E-mails 2 Eva
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2088
[Report This] Published: 11/06/10 Updated: 11/06/10


Reviewer: Star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: E-mails to Eva - Falling for the Boys.

E-mails 2 Eva is definitaly my favourite series though for some reason i can't add it to my favourites. Is it really over? I hope not!

Thanks for this!



Author's Response:

I know I hid this away in Misc, thank you so much for finding it.

Your review has come at time that I really needed something positive, and your fave serise!! Wow ;).  There may be one more part that is almost a re-write of the very first part but  different, I will see. But it will be a while coming because of RL things hitting very hard right now with a close family bereavement.

Thank you again, and for the stars, Star...lol I love those sparkley things...

Jacq xx

 
Summary:

The children of hunters are being kidnapped, held hostage by demons in an attempt to stop the hunters hunting them.

Sam is kidnapped, taken violently in the night. The promise of his death hanging over John's head.

How will he, and the other children escape, when the hunters are to afraid to hunt?

Sam: 16.

Dean:20.


Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 2392
[Report This] Published: 27/06/10 Updated: 22/02/11


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 01/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue.

I like the feel of the chapter. Short phrases quickening the suspense. Few words conveying a lot. Just what does this demon want with Sam?

 

 
Summary:

Sam and Dean investigate the deaths of 3 students at the Ohio University Campus, in Athens. Is the vengeful spirit of a former patient from the abandoned mental asylum responsible or is this something the brothers have never encountered before?


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 35286
[Report This] Published: 30/06/10 Updated: 20/12/10


Reviewer: Star Signed
Date: 10/07/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The glazed look has me terrified! But I am glad Sam has a connection to Dean even though Dean doesn't feel it on his side! Please update!

Author's Response:

Hi Star

Thanks for reviewing. I believe the brothers have a special connection and this is my way of utilizing that connection.

Chapter 4 will be up in a couple of days.

I hope you will continue to read and review. 

Thanks again.