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Penname: ashon13 [Contact]
Real name: Ashley
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Member Since: 07/11/08
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I am 18 years old, I am a huge Supernatural obsessed fan, and I've grown to love the Hurt!Sam and Protective!Dean stories. The reason I'm here is that I often think they don't take advantage of the boys acting on the show, but here, people usually write what I want to see happen. :)


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Reviews by ashon13
 
Summary: When their Dad doesn't return from a hunt, twelve year old Dean and eight year old Sam have to deal with an unexpected relative and a sinister plot that could leave one of them dead and the other lost forever...
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 50267
[Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06


Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 07/02/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Oh my...*shivers*..that gave me chills! *runs off to the next part*.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for taking the time to drop me a line!

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 07/02/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Go Dean! ;D

Author's Response:

I think this is how I always imagined Kiddie!Dean - with a little bit more spunk and fire in him!

I'm glad you're still enjoying it!

 
Summary: Nightmares, bishops, eggs and rain...lots of rain... Can Sam and Dean save a small town from a flood of Biblical proportions? A blatant but completely unintentional attempt to claim the Winchesters for England...
Categories: Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 23974
[Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 29/12/06


Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh no!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh yes!  Heh, that was a great review!  Really made me chuckle!

 
Summary:

banner created by Kira Reed

When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711
[Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06


Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 27/01/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is unbelievably sad! :')..But veeeeeerrrry good! I love this story sooooo much so far, I'm gonna fav it like a million times!...Okay, I know I can't do that, but in my imagination I will! ;D

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 27/01/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oooooh, I love that song, "Outside"..I listen to it all the time, in fact, I love Staind, so nice choice of music, I really love the "Ramble" song too. ;P

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 27/01/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yay! Alice in Chains! Man, I love the music! I can almost hear it! o.O..Well, I can..:P

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 27/01/09 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Awwww, amazing story! So amazing! Everything about it! Loved "Dream on" too, and very nice way of ending it, I've always loved John, and no matter what he says, I think him and the boys make..um..made, one hell of a team, nothing could stop all three of them, it was a death wish to even try, where one fell, another succeeded, and vise versa..Awesome, fantastically awesome story!..Now I'm off to read the rest of your stories..;P

Author's Response:

Hi Ashon!

I am responding to all of your reviews in one fell swoop -- but don't take that as me not appreciating each and every one. I clapped with glee seeing each of them!

First, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the music. I love love love music. I love that the show uses music. I love listening to music -- all kinds -- and if I can put it in a story, you bet your bippy it's going in. :)

I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this story. It was the first time I truly felt in the groove of being a story teller. And I totally agree with your comments above about the three of them being a team, Even though now the team is broken and trembling, it doesn't make it any less true.

Finally, I wanted to thank you for taking time to read and offer me the gift of your review. I don't post on this sight any longer for random personal reasons, but I have continued to write and post on ff.net and my LiveJournal site.

Should you ever be curious to read stories other than these, I would welcome your comments.

 My best,

Gaelic 

 

 
Summary: A shortcut through the woods leaves the boys lost, seperated and hunted. 
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Shadow Stalker
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 46418
[Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07


Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"What if a bear eats us?!" Ahahahaha, that was great! :D

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oooooh, this is kinda creepy..:P

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow, I have to say, John must have been horrified, walking down an eerie dark road looking for his two missing boys, then hearing one screaming in pain, only to find him a little while later trying to jump off a cliff...Jeez, talk about going out of your mind with worry. ;P

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I got a bad bad feeling..Winchesters splitting up never ends good. :P

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Uh oh...*wags finger at Joshua*...That wasn't a very smart thing to do...

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oooooooooooooooooooooh..*takes breath*...ooooooooooh, wow, I LOVE the ending! Awesome story! Very well written! :D :D :D

Author's Response: thank you so much for all the great reviews. i'm glad you enjoyed the story. :)

 
Summary: Everything is not as it seems. with urban legends out of control and a powerful demon on the loose, the boys find themselves up against more then just the supernatural.

Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Shadow Stalker
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45624
[Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 23/01/07


Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Haha! "I see a light over there." "Don't follow it!" Hehe, that was funny. :P

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh wow, I didnt actually think it was the hellhounds...guess you proved me wrong. :P

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

......uh oh.....hehe :P

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh wow...you have quite an imagination! I love the whole idea here! :D

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh my gosh! I love this part!..

"Oh god, I have a headache."

"Is it a vision?"

"No, it's a brother."

Hehe. :D

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 20/01/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Bravo! *applauds*...Awesome story! So much like the real thing, it was  creepy, I especially love how you kept the amazing chemistry with the boys, in my opinion, probably the most important part of Supernatural, and, and..amazing. ;)

Author's Response: :D  thank you so much for the awesome reviews. I love writing the brothers, they are such amazing characters. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.  

 
The Feather by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

All his life Sam hears things he shouldn't and keeps finding feathers.  Some S1 & S2 spoilers, more like references.

Runner up Whatever Man category (round 8) Supernatural Fan Fiction Awards


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2972
[Report This] Published: 08/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 18/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*sighs happily*

Author's Response: Hahaha...thanks!

 
The Coming Storm by bayre Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

  

banner by Neolani618 

Discovering the purpose of Sam's visions, the science of demons and hunting on horseback isn't so easy....

Winner of the Supernatural FanFiction Awards Whatever Man Category.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Elements
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 56937
[Report This] Published: 11/01/07 Updated: 08/02/07


Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 19/12/08 Title: Chapter 11: Into the Storm....

Oh my gosh! I LOVE this story sooooooo much! I really really love the ending, and I really love your imagination...I have so much love for you right now! Okay, that's weird..:D..Anyways, very nice job, and oh hell yeah! Absolutely should make a series from this! Go series, go series *chants and does a dance* :P :P :P

Author's Response:

Heshhee...wow thanks!  What a nice thing to wake up to this morning. This has become a series, Gale Warnings and Storm Surge are next in line.

Thanks for reading and commenting, and I'm so glad you loved it.

Laura

 
Where to go? by Ace33 Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 85]
Summary: Sam and Dean are stranded with a hostile killer on the loose.
Categories: AU, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 20266
[Report This] Published: 14/01/07 Updated: 09/07/07


Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

What?! NO! You're killing me here woman! I know he doesnt die, but still! That is a horrible way to end a chapter! I mean, what if I didnt know that Sam would live, and what if I had to go to bed, and couldnt finish this story until tomorrow? Then I'd be worrying all day! No, just kidding, that was an awesome ending! *bows to the cliff-hanger queen*. :P

Author's Response:

Hahaha! Oh ashon, you have no idea how much you made my day better by these reviews! Sorry about the cliff-hangers....I just can't resist!

~Kayla

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ahahahah! Love the ending to this one too! Hmmm *rubs chin* Wouldnt mind seeing down Sams gown myself. Lol

Author's Response:

Wouldn't we all love to see down Sam's gown? All I can say is yummy :D Thanks agian for the review!

~Kayla

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Another great ending! Oh my god! *bows* Sorry Winchester boys, sorry Mr. Kripke, sorry Supernatural, and sorry hunky J2 guys, my loyalties now lie with this woman here, I am now your fan forever! :D

Author's Response:

WOW! That was the sweetest thing anyone has ever said about my writing! I think that was the ultimate compliment. I mean seriously, you can't get much better than that. I guess I will just have to keep writing stories for you! You are my favorite reviewer ashon. You make my heart smile!

~Kayla

 

 
Reviewer: ashon13 Signed
Date: 07/12/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I just gotta say real quick before I continue, that I love your Dean in this story, I love his comebacks and thoughts, it sounds so much like the real Dean, I almost forget that this isnt real. :P

Author's Response:

It's funny you say that, because I am never sure when I'm writing for Dean if it comes across too cheesy and above and beyond what Dean would actually say. But now I won't question it ever again :D You make me so happy with your reviews. :D

~Kayla