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Penname: NongPradu [Contact]
Real name: Melanie
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Member Since: 05/10/08
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I have returned after a brief hiatus from fan fiction.  I thought the time off would do me good, but it seems my healthy distraction in fandom was good for me and kept my mind off other things.

So I'm back, trying to keep my troubled mind occupied by being creative and reading good stories.  I am especially a fan of hurt or sick!Dean stories, so if you have any recommendations, fire 'em my way!

And if you take the time to read anything I've posted here, I am heartily grateful.  Constructive criticism, or even just a note to say you're enjoying it, are always welcome.

All my stories are also posted on my LJ - http://nong-pradu.livejournal.com/


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Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658
[Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 03/01/09 Title: Chapter 13: Ties That Bind

Ah, this was just lovely.  Did you know that it still says that this one isn't complete?

 
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Date: 03/01/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Murphey's Law

As soon as Emma announced she couldn't go in the attic i KNEW there was going to be a body in there!  lol.  AWESOME!!!

 
Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 03/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: The Price

Holy freakamole!  What the heck is going on with Emma?!  I have a feeling that wasn't her memory at all, and that she was actually channelling Sam and Dean's memory of that night...  Is she even alive?  Huh???

I know, you can't answer that.  Awesome story.  I wasn't going to start reading it yet because it's not finished, but my curiosity got the better of me.  Loving it!!

 
Summary: An upper crust witch wants revenge on a certain hunter, or perhaps his boys....
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 28623
[Report This] Published: 04/11/07 Updated: 16/01/08


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 29/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

Oh man!  This was written long enough ago that I hoped maybe there'd be the sequal already started here.

No such luck...  *grumble grumble*

Seriously awesome story.  If you're still lurking around here, I sincerely hope you've got plans to continue this.  I'm thinking Abigail's not going to be particularly happy about being all burned up and uglified.

Gimmie more!

 
Summary: Pre-series. A cursed mirror traps Dean’s soul behind its glass, while his body is hijacked by a spirit. There’s a limited amount of time to save him before the doppelganger is all that’s left but will John and Sam even notice Dean’s missing?
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9159
[Report This] Published: 06/11/07 Updated: 24/11/07


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 11/12/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This story is great!  Poor Dean, always having the baddies steal his face to murder people.

I hope you'll have an update soon!

 
The Devil In You by calUK Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary:

Okay - old summary sucked, so trying again.

Sam and Dean find that a 'simple' hunt is far more than it seems, and the repurcussions could cost them everything.

spoliers for seasons 1 + 2

Formatting and screw-ups now fixed! (I think...)


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 79023
[Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 26/03/08


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 18/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Rats, Crawling Inside

So wait -- did he leg Meg in?  Is he possessed by her?  Is  she hiding out in his body???  Because if so, wouldn't the holy water have burned???

Oh gosh, poor freakin' Dean!  As if the Hell countdown weren't enough, now he's got a demon riding shotgun inside him?  I'm so glad I get to read this all at once in its completed form.  :)

 
Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 18/01/09 Title: Chapter 15: Out of Time

What the hell?!?  Why didn't Dean tell them he was possessed by Meg?  They could exorcise her if he willingly stepped into a Devil's Trap!  Or is part of the deal he made with her keeping her locked inside or something?

I want that bitch OUT of him!  lol.  And I know that my pleas and screams are absolutely pointless because this entire thing is already written.  Upwards and onwards, then!



Author's Response:

ah, there's plenty of angst coming up to answer those questions - though to be honest, I've forgotten half the answers myself! It's great to see people reading this one again - it was the first big multi-chap I did - so I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks,

cal

 
Summary:

An once-imprisoned evil now threatens to push the Winchesters over the edge...

Livin On the Edge

Sensue award  Winner -Round 17 SNFA - Thanks Everyone!


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58105
[Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 18/01/09


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 4: I Don't Know What It Is...

Oh holy crapamole!  Things are looking BLEAK!

Love the tension in this!  My gut's wound up tighter than... something really tight (can't think up an appropriate metaphor).

 
Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 5: And God Knows It Ain't His...

Oh holy crap!!!!  Sam should have told Dean that the darned thing can become invisible!  I hope Dean doesn't become possessed by this freaky thing!

 
Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: Again & again & again & again...

Easy schmeazy!  He was still 4 hours away!!!

Oh hell, I can't believe you guys did that.  this definitely has earned you a "Oh no you di'in't!"

 

 

 
Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 11: Something's Right With the World Today..

Ah, magnifique!  Just awesome!

 
Summary:

Dean has a near death experience, but he doesn't come back from it entirely alone.

Once again, many thanks to Vanessa for the great banner...you took the pics from my fave epi!  Awesome job, I love it!

i see dead people


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 113257
[Report This] Published: 17/11/07 Updated: 04/10/08


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Ok, seriously, seriously evil cliffie!!!  When are you going to finish this thing?!?

I need to see Waterson die painfully and slowly.  I want Dean to electroshock his ass to death!  Yeah yeah!!

 
Summary:

Summary: Secrets have a way of not staying hidden. Now, with one of his sons fighting for his life, John has realized that family secrets must come to light, secrets that will change the Winchester family forever.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 124512
[Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 03/08/10


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I was wondering if you were going to keep up with this one!  For a while there I was afraid you'd abandoned it!!

So is Dean ever going to find out that Bobby's his real dad and that he's adopted?

I know, I know...  you can't exactly tell me.



Author's Response: Sorry, its taken me so long to update. I have to much on my plate right now.  No matter how long it takes me to update, I promise I will finish this story. 

Author's Response: If you want some spoilers you can email me if you wish.

 
Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 16/04/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

So I'm just wondering, is Dean ever going to find out that he's adopted?

Yet another great update.  :) 



Author's Response: Hi, thank you for reviewing.  Yes, Dean is going to find out he's adopted.

 
Summary:

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Banner by Vanessa

  A series of bizarre and brutal murders lure the Winchester brothers into their next hunt.  Only this time, in the thick of the hunt, they find themselves stalked and terrorized by something out of one of Sam’s worst nightmares.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 32499
[Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 04/05/08


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 16/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up

Oh holy crap!  That was really terrifying!  I find clowns pretty freaky (Tim Curry as Pennywise I think scarred me for life!), but this was just... Ugh!

Awesome first chapter to this one!

 
Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 16/12/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Severance Pay

Awesome chapter!  The evil clown doll is both freaky and hilarious -- mostly because of his foul mouth and his sick sense of fun.

I'm really worried about his plans on finding a better body than the doll one, though....

Hurry up and update!  lol.

 
To The Rescue by lostatc Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
Summary: Past Featured StoryDean and Sam get a desperate phone call from Ben Braeden in the middle of a hunt.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Ben Braeden Winchester
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 65236
[Report This] Published: 09/12/07 Updated: 13/12/07


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 10/11/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Holy sweet Jesus, woman!  What are you trying to do to me with the horror and the suspense?!

Read this whole thing in one go.  Never let anyone steal Ben again.  It's evil!   :P



Author's Response:

Sorry about that.  I didn't mean to but it is very fun.  I hope you enjoyed it.  And in one go?  Wow, you are impressive.

Thanks for reading and the fatastic review.

Kim

 
Summary:

Collection of Wee!chester drabbles in Dean's POV.

 http://sensue.net/snfa/


Categories: Drabbles, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 3435
[Report This] Published: 12/12/07 Updated: 31/12/07


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 30/12/08 Title: Chapter 7: Dragons, Dracula and Carrie

Oh wow, these were bloody brilliant!  I could read these all day; wish they went on forever, and were endless!

What else you got?



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much. What an amazing compliment.

What else have I got? Guess we'll have to wait and see... lol

Thanks for takin' the time to review. Not many people bother when the fic is already "old" as it were. So thanks again. :)

Merrie

 
Summary:

(spoilers for AHBL 1)

Aeternus Eternus: eternal, never ending.

Bobby stopped as his brain tried to comprehend what his heart already knew. "Jesus." It wasn't a prayer. Prayers held hope, however slim. The scene before him held none.

 


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4186
[Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 19/12/07


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Without

Oh my GOD!  I'm not sure I've ever read anything so bittersweet as that hearts-beating-the-same scene.  That could be in a movie, it's such a tear-jerker.  Beautiful!

 
Summary: Dean is taken by an old enemy and will never be the same again.  Spoilers for Season 3 and mature content.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 35457
[Report This] Published: 21/12/07 Updated: 14/01/08


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 03/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome!  You know, I always wondered if they ever would write an episode where Kate came gunning for a new mate in Dean.  She seemed to have the hots for him when Luthor was still in the picture!

I was reading this with my nails digging into my palms in anxious anticipation!  lol.

You're like the queen of suspense.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much.  I wish they would do a story with Kate coming back also but it won't happen.  They've moved too far from season one for that to happen.  The joys of fanfiction, we get to write the story we want as well as watch the show they want to give us.

I am really glad you liked this story.  I really enjoyed writing it.  And I finally have a crown...queen of anything is wonderful!

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

An appealing Hunt turns up right under the brothers' noses and it's smiles all round for Sam. But in this game, nothing is what it seems.

Mid-season 2, no spoilers.

Rated T for innuendo and mild language.


Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 12749
[Report This] Published: 23/12/07 Updated: 26/12/07


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 23/11/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This story was absolutely brilliant.  It was funny, intriguing, and then at the end very touching.

I could read your stuff forever.  :)



Author's Response: Wow, thanks very much! I'm surprised to get a review for something I had almost forgotten I'd written, LOL. Thanks for your very kind words! They have done a lot for my crisis of faith right now!

 
Problem Child by staffy08 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Yet another wee!chester "drabbly" one shot in Dean's POV
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 915
[Report This] Published: 02/02/08 Updated: 02/02/08


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 30/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I could not stop laughing at this.  Too freaking hilarious.  How old is Dean supposed to be in this one, anyway?

 



Author's Response:

Hello, hello,

How old is he? Well, I'm thinking he's somewhere between 13 and 16 but I usually leave the age out of fics so that the readers can put them in the time line that they see fit. If that makes sense... lol

Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

 
Summary: The promo for Mystery spot got me thinking about the number of times Dean has crossed paths with a reaper. This is my cracked view of those affairs.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1832
[Report This] Published: 13/02/08 Updated: 13/02/08


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 13/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just discovering this now.  Holy crap it's funny!  And interesting to boot.

Nice job!

 
Enrapture by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 215]
Summary:

en·rap·ture (ĕn-răp'chər)


SYNONYMS  enrapture, entrance, ravish, thrill,. These verbs mean to have a powerful, agreeable, and often overwhelming emotional effect on someone.

This is the next installment in the Sara Powers storyline, for all of you that have begged and pleaded to hear more about Sara and her family I hope you enjoy.

Happy Valentines Day to you all. 


Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Sara's Stories
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 80815
[Report This] Published: 14/02/08 Updated: 01/06/08


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

That very last paragraph had me snorting with laughter!  Awesome!

 
Damned by staffy08 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

After John leaves teenage Sam and Dean in a motel to go on a hunt by himself, the brothers get into a spot of trouble….


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 9565
[Report This] Published: 04/03/08 Updated: 11/01/09


Reviewer: NongPradu Signed
Date: 11/01/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aha!  Very, very cute ending.