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Penname: NongPradu [Contact]
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Real name: Melanie Status: Member Member Since: 05/10/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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Reviews by NongPradu Summary: Spoilers for Season 4. Dean finds his saving grace only to lose her.
Jewels Downey is an OFC from 'Daddy's Gone a Hunting' Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 34525 [Report This] Published: 24/11/08 Updated: 27/02/09
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Date: 26/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Oh no you DI-IN'T!!!! I seriously almost freakin' teared up at that little bomb-shell of a revelation! Jewel's Grace?!!! Please hurry on up and write more. I am instantly addicted to this one -- and let me say you're already reeling me into this "dreaded romance." lol. AWESOME post! Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I can do Grace justice.
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Date: 21/12/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Ok, Grace gets serious points for using the word "boobage." That just spells cool. :)
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Date: 12/01/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Oh. My. God. That was so cute I'm grinning from ear to ear. Absolutely adorable. Dean likes her. He so has a crush on her. Calling her on the phone and leaving her messages like a school boy. And Sam's reaction to it is just priceless! MORE!!!! Must have more! Author's Response: Thanks so much and more is on the way. I have just begun letting Sam torment Dean.
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Date: 14/01/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Ok, that last line was just positively adorable. lol.
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Date: 24/01/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Oh amazing! And that creepy little upset at the very end -- you're such a hideous tease!!!! This is when I bang my knife and fork on the table and demand "more, more, more!" like a petulent child. Please? Author's Response: I always write out of sequence so there are many chapters ahead already done. Another is on the way. Hope you enjoy
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Date: 26/01/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Oh my holy sweet freaking GAWD! I am laughing so hard I'm crying -- literally! There are tears sneaking out the corner of my eyes as I type. Grace is freaking HILARIOUS! Funniest Dean OFC I have ever read! I am in love with her in ways I cannot describe. Her sweetness, her sex appeal, and her shameless sense of humour, are so perfect for Dean. Give him a run for his money, that's for sure. Man alive -- my cheeks hurt from grinning after reading this. I swear, that was the funniest chapter in fan fiction that I have ever read. Brava!! Author's Response: Please, you're making me blush. So glad you liked it.
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Date: 29/01/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 I hate you. I've just decided. HOW CAN YOU MAKE GRACE SO SWEET AND COOL AND AWESOME AND THEN KILL HER???? You're all kinds of evil. " I'm permanent." Shame on you. I love this story, but you're tearing my heart into tiny bits. You should be hanging your head in shame. You sadist! lol. (You realize everything I've said is teasing, except the "I love this story" part, right?) Author's Response: I realize you're teasing and I'm loving it!
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Date: 29/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Ok, all's forgiven for now. That chapter was positively delightful. I'm grinning so broadly I might just cry. Married in Vegas -- that's just perfect for Dean! lol. And that intrigue at the very end -- my curiosity's beyond piqued now. MORE! MORE! MORE! Author's Response: What can I say. Ruby's a bitch.
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Date: 06/02/09 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 GAHHHHH!!!!! That's about all I can say right now. SUPER EVIL CLIFFIE!!!! LOVED IT! Absofreakinglutely LOVED IT! Ruby is for to be dying painfully and slowly now? I really do not like her, and I'm so glad you've shown her for the snake I believe her to be. MORE PLEASE! PRETTY PLEASE! Author's Response: Thank you. A demon with a heart of gold? I think not. Lilith is Demon!Barbie and Ruby is most assuredly Demon!Skipper
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Date: 10/02/09 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Oh wow, that was an action-packed chapter! I'm so curious about this spawn thing -- is it Grace the don't want procreating, or is it Dean? Or is it the both of them together creating something the demons want dead? And if it gives anything away, ou don't have to answer. ;) Awesomeness. Can't wait for the next installment! Author's Response: Do you believe in coincidence...or fate?
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Date: 12/02/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Awwww. Now that was just a tease, wasn't it? A teensy weensy tiny taste? More please! Author's Response: Just counting down the months.
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Date: 12/02/09 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Awwww.... Damn these little snippets are sweet. Though I think Grace should be getting a Babylonian Queen. lol. It's only fair. Author's Response: Oh, I agree completely.
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Date: 14/02/09 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 GAH!!!! What?!!?! This chapter was angst-licious, but so painful at the same time! Dean's nightmare was horrifying -- and I so KNEW it was Grace he was about to dissect. And him being violent in his sleep is just horrible! Please kiss the boo boo soon and make it better! lol. I love Grace and Dean (even though I know Grace dies, as per the first chapter). Author's Response: This is supernatural. Who ever stays dead.
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Date: 16/02/09 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Awwww.... You're breakin' my heart, woman! Bring our Gracie and Dean back together right now! Now, I say! lol. It would so KILL Dean to have to leave his wife and unborn child, even if it was for their own protection. He's not much into the emo, but when he loves he loves with all his heart and soul, and he'd die for the ones he loves (as we've already seen). So I can only imagine what it would take for him to leave a woman he actually gave his heart to and MARRIED, particularly when that woman was carrying his unborn child. Reunite them, pretty please!? Author's Response: All you need do is threaten. See next chapter.
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Date: 19/02/09 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Awwww... Yay! You finally reunited them. Only, we already know it's temporary (not Permanent). You're so cruel. So very, very cruel...
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Date: 22/02/09 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 No no no no no no!! It's happening too soon! I don't want Grace to be gone yet! :(
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Date: 24/02/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Oh no! No no no no no! Sam's not supposed to go to the dark place NOW! And holy Jesus, woman! Am trying so hard not to BAWL now! Author's Response: I even got a little misty...and I killed her.
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Date: 25/02/09 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Ouch! So Dean's learning his lesson the hard way, of the major "be careful what you wish for" variety. Bet he doesn't want to forget the pain of Grace's loss anymore, huh? I hope Castiel can bring Dean back to the crappy present a la "It's A Wonderful Life." And I hope Dean names the freakin' baby! MORE PLEASE!!!
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Date: 27/02/09 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 OH yes, yes please! Continue this one with the adventures of Papa Dean! This was truly spectacular! I loved every inch of it, though it made me cry.
Summary: Post 4X10 Heaven and Hell, Sam can only deal with the next few hours and that will have to do.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 976 [Report This] Published: 24/11/08 Updated: 24/11/08
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Date: 24/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh wow. As always, spot-on and gut-wrenching and brilliant. You need to write more and post more!!! Summary:
Special Agent Victor Henricksen's thoughts on the Winchesters.
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 831 [Report This] Published: 24/11/08 Updated: 25/11/08
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Date: 25/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is realy good -- except I think you've got your cities mixed up. The shapeshifter thing in "Skin" happened in St. Louis (where Dean was "caught" torturing little Becky). The slit throats in "The Usual Suspects" were in Baltimore. And the bank robbery in "Nightshifter," was in Milwaukee. Mostly pretty sure. Anyway, I have always found Henrickson to be such an intriguing and interesting character. I wish they hadn't killed him off. :( Author's Response: Oops! Thanks so much for catching those errors. I just fixed them. I guess that's what happens when one decides to watch all the episodes with Henricksen at once to make sure they're writing his character well. : ) I'm glad you enjoyed it despite the mistakes and would like to thank you again for bringing my attention to the errors contained within. It's much appreciated! : ) Oh and the victims with slit throats? I was referring to the two killed in the bank robbery, um the girl and the man. I assume that if Henricksen had found those bodies those would be the ones pinned on Dean, didn't think about those in "Usual Suspects". Anyways thank you again for you help! Take care! Summary:
Sam finds a piece of Dean. During the months that Dean is in Hell. One-shot. AU. ***SPOILERS SEASON FOUR!!**** Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 433 [Report This] Published: 24/11/08 Updated: 25/11/08
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Date: 25/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Dean's Necklace Gah, this gave me a twinge! I allowed myself to be comforted in thinking, "See Sam? A part of Dean will always be with you" and then I remembered that that wasn't true because Dean was in Hell. Any comfort Sam could have given himself during those 4 months would have been a lie. Memories of good times, and living so that Dean's sacrifice wasn't for nothing -- that's all Sam had. Author's Response: Thank you! :D You just made my day... Summary:
Dean is rescued from Hell. One-shot. **SPOILER ALERT SEASON FOUR*** Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 307 [Report This] Published: 25/11/08 Updated: 25/11/08
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Date: 25/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Escape From Hell Nice one! I have tried imagining what the moment of "escape" would have been like for Dean -- what he would have felt when it happened. Just imagine the uproar when Hell discovered that he'd been snatched, huh? I love it! Author's Response: Thank you, so very much for your review!! :). ;). This is exactly how I imagined that moment going. ;). Summary:
When danger once more threatens the Powers family, Sam and Dean go on the hunt to protect the ones they love.
Categories: General, Romance, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 58593 [Report This] Published: 28/11/08 Updated: 13/01/10
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Date: 05/02/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Awesome chapter -- though you definitely owe us some Dean time now! lol.
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Date: 06/01/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Yay!!! So now Sara has confirmation that Dean and Sam are nearby! I am seriously starting to get freaked out about whatever this week's nasty is. You had me picturing some kind of cave creature squeezing her in the dark. *shudders* |
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