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Penname: NongPradu [Contact]
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Real name: Melanie Status: Member Member Since: 05/10/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by NongPradu
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Reviews by NongPradu Summary:
I hear my name but can’t react, so I just watch as the beast raises his deadly paw, prepared to finish the job he’s started. The emotional break down of a hunt. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2266 [Report This] Published: 16/09/08 Updated: 20/11/08
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Date: 17/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes I can't make it alone Wow. Just... wow. You've got Dean's pathological drive to protect and save Sammy summed up artfully, beautifully. Very, very well done. Author's Response: Gosh, I've just had a horrible day and I come home to see this beautiful review. Thank you so much for those kind words, and I'm thrilled you enjoyed this. <3 Summary: "Sam knows that even if it tastes like pondspawn they have to get it down. If they don't get it down, Dean will die."
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2144 [Report This] Published: 17/09/08 Updated: 17/09/08
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Date: 01/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: N/a This was really touching. I can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews than this. Please keep these things coming. I'm in love with your style of story-telling. :) Summary: Incessantly ringing payphones can be painful in more ways than one. Dean gets a phone call with unexpected consequences. Rated T for Language.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 29750 [Report This] Published: 18/09/08 Updated: 11/10/08
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Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: An Old Fashioned Cowbell Phone Ring This story was a stroke of genius. That creepy, incessantly ringing phone... Gah! I was actually reading while sitting at the edge of my seat. Gripping, emotional, occasionally funny... Just flippin' awesome. Summary:
She asked for it, she got it! Birdie's birthday fic at last - Ghosts, goats and yodelling...
Categories: Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15311 [Report This] Published: 18/09/08 Updated: 15/10/08
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Date: 17/01/09 Title: Chapter 5: Life Without Adrenaline Ahahahahaha! This was so touching, at times hilarious, kind of freaky and eerie and just plain awesomeness! I don't know how I didn't see this thing before. I loved every inch of it! :) Author's Response: Well, with a request for goat's, yodelling and plenty of whump, it was always gonna be a little odd... glad you found it and liked it, sorry it took so long to reply! Summary: When a hunt goes completely wrong, a distraught John has to come to the rescue of his boys.
Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 36769 [Report This] Published: 19/09/08 Updated: 03/12/08
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Date: 27/10/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Oh dear lord please tell me you're going to have the next installment ready for us soon!! This entire series is absolutely beautiful. I have been choking back tears throughout the entire thing. Stirring, engaging, gripping, and heart-wrenching. BRILLIANT! Author's Response: ROFL ;) - thanks hun, next chapter is 99.9% ready, just in for a final beta, so hopefull it will uploaded soon :) - thanks for the awesome reivew and comments ;) Hugs and luv
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Date: 28/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh my god, ok seriously -- please! When are you going to have the next installment?! This is what you get for writing something this good -- you get pestered by people who are hanging on the cliff you created!! Gah! Dean just opened his eyes, you monster! I need to know how he's feeling!!! lol Author's Response: Mwa ha ha ha :) - ROFL, thanks hun, more very shortly ... just waiting for a final check from my amazing beta's ... glad I have you on the edge (excuse the pun) of your seat LOL :) - and yup, I am pretty evil, but everyone seems to forgive me LOL :) Thanks for the wonderful review, made me chuckle! Hugs and luv Mish :)
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Date: 30/10/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 GAH!!!!! So whatever kind of a life you have that doesn't revolve around this stops until you're finished writing this, yes? Excellent... (a la Mr. Burns) Author's Response: LOL thanks hun, yup, I'm sure my boss won't mind if I take an extended weekend to write for ya all ROFL :) - thanks for the lovely review, it made me chuckle! Hugs and luv Mish :)
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Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 When do we get more? You are too cruel to us!!! Cruel, cruel monster of a woman, you! Author's Response: ROFL :) - I know ... I AM ... I AM ... sorry, I really am, more very very soon promise ... *adds Sammy eyes here* Hugs Mish :)
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Date: 13/11/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Gasp! This chapter had me holding my breath the entire way through. So gripping!!!! I can't wait to see what Sam thinks of all this. Awesome update! It was worth the wait (though this doesn't give you leave to prolong our agony waiting for the next and final installment!). lol Author's Response: ROFL :) - thanks hun. I hope the final chapter works out the way I want it to! Thanks you for the awesome review, and I promise the next update will be much sooner :) Hugs and luv Mish :)
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Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Oh holy sweet Jesus!! My throat is so tight from trying not to cry! What a bitter-sweet ending to this heart-wrenching story. Now I have to go back and reread the whole thing. I sincerely hope you've got some more stories cooking up. :) Author's Response: ROFL :) - sorry hun, all this crying, but I'm glad you enjoyed it so much LOL :) - Your awsome review and comments made me chuckle! Small oneshot to possibly follow? (leaves it on a cliffhanger LOL) Hugs and luv Summary: John's on a hunt and calls on twenty-year old Dean, and sixteen-year old Sam for help. When things don't go as planned, Sam finds himself having to come to the rescue.
Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Brothers Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 58168 [Report This] Published: 30/09/08 Updated: 16/01/09
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Date: 09/01/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Oh yay!!!! Smith's dead AND we get more?! I feel like it's Christmas again! WOO HOO! I hope they get to run into the girls again for a more heartfelt goodbye. Christine is a force to be reckoned with!
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 Date: 02/01/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Oh yay with a cherry on top!!!!! I loved every inch of this chapter! The tension was so tight you could have cut it with a knife! I was actually holding my breath while I read it! And poor Christine and Sam both terrified, with Dean trying to assure them... John's gonna kick some serious ass, I'm thinking! Author's Response: Hehehe, sorry about the delay in posting, hopefully the chapter made up for it. Glad you dug it and I'll see you next week ;) - kel
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Date: 08/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Next Wednesday, as in today? (Sorry, I can't tell when this was posted).
This story is really engaging! Need more, please!!! Author's Response: LOL, as in October 15... Glad you're diggin it. ;) Kel
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Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 And I also meant to add an emphatic "Yay! Papa Winchester's on the case!" Now Smith is gonna get his ass handed to him by a posse of Winchesters! BRING IT! Author's Response: LOL, 'Bring it", it's gonna get brought alright, ;)
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Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Hot damn!!!! This chapter was freakin' awesome! But WAY too short! (I've been popping by off and on all day to see if the update was posted yet!). Now I have to wait until next Wednesday? You're cruel, Kel. Cruel. :P
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Date: 15/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Nu-uh! Next week is completely unacceptable! More now, please! Author's Response: Demanding, Demanding.....lol. I would get these updates quicker if it wasn't for that pesky thing called life...Thanks for reading and reviewing. - Kel ;)
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Date: 22/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Gah!!! You are too cruel!!!
It's rare that fan fictions make me laugh out loud, but this one surely did. Dean's wax seal was absolutely priceless! lol. AWESOME! Author's Response: LOL, always glad to hear I made people laugh. Glad you enjoyed the directions and the chapter. Thanks for the R&R, Kel ;)
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Date: 06/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Oh man, this is getting so good! It's not fair that we have to wait a whole week between installments. I think you owe us extra for taking last week off. :P Author's Response: Man you are one tough cookie NongPradu....lol. Don't know what kind of payback you expect but maybe I'll be able to double up sometime soon and make up for that missed update. Glad you're enjoying and thanks for the R&R - kel ;)
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Date: 06/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I blame my persistent nagging entirely on you. If you didn't write such a good, gripping story, I wouldn't feel that I needed it, would I? The blame lies entirely at your feet. (That's my story and I'm sticking to it!) Well, nag away....it honestly makes the writing all the more fun when you know someone's waiting....So thanks ;) Kel
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Date: 12/11/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Seriously, seriously awesome! You're killin' me with not being able to just transcribe this story from your brain straight to the net. Can't we just hook you up to your comp and you can think-write it out instantaneously? That would totally work for me. :D Now you've got me all worried about poor 16 year-old Sam wandering those dangerous woods with psycho-Smith on the loose!!! Author's Response: Guh, tell you what that whole think-write instantaneous thing would so work for me.....lol Imagine the hours I'd save typing this crap out. ;) Glad you dug it - kel ;)
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Date: 17/11/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I just need to add again how awesome this story is. I seriously wish I could come up with something this engaging, and scary, and write it as well as you do. Seriously, seriously well done. Author's Response: LOL, come on, Chick, admit it, you're just trying to squeeze another chapter out of me. Seriously though, thanks for the awesome comment, it always makes my week to know that someone's diggin' something I'm writing. - Kel ;)
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Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Oh this chapter was just so deliciously suspenseful!!! I love Dean's bravado! And sweet adorable Sam with his twinge of jealousy over Dean talking to the girl he's crushing on. Too cute! I'm gonna be biting my nails waiting for next week!!! Author's Response: LOL, don't we all love Dean's bravado, though I'm thinking next chappy is the youngest WInchester's chance to play hero. Thanks for reading and all the lovely reviews - Kel ;)
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Date: 21/11/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I'll be away at a conference next week and won't be able to read your next installment until the weekend -- just so you won't be thinking my lack of a review meant I didn't like it. This story is just so freakin' gripping I had to read it again! Author's Response: LOL, thanks sweetie, I appreciate the heads up ;) - kel ;)
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Date: 29/11/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Ah, sure brilliance! LOVED IT! It was suspenseful, at times funny, freaky, and intense. Plus, nearly-naked Dean tied up -- just like I like him. I am so stoked for next week's installment!! Author's Response: hehehe, seriously a nearly naked Dean, who wouldn't love. Hope your trip went well - Kel ;)
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Date: 10/12/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 GAH!!!!! Hideous, cruel cliffie! Wonderful! This chapter was seriously awesome! Even when tied to a bed, Dean kicks demon ass and manages to save the girl. *swoons* Can't wait for next week! (And for Friday's installment of Sara Powers) :) Author's Response: Glad it was worth the wait, Melanie, as for Sara no worries, she's actually ready to go ;) Kel |
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