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Penname: NongPradu [Contact]
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Real name: Melanie Status: Member Member Since: 05/10/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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Reviews by NongPradu Summary: What happens when you can't remember who you are or what you've done? Just maybe, its better that way!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25295 [Report This] Published: 24/12/06 Updated: 24/12/06
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Date: 12/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Poor puppies!!! I am really enjoying this story (slaughtered dogs notwitstanding).
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Date: 12/12/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Holy crap! I actually did expect her to live. At least, if she'd been Dean's love interest she probably would have lived. Sam's tend to have worse odds of making it out alive. You've got a dark streak...
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Date: 12/12/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Ok, seriously awesome. Dean giving Sam the Wheaties at the end was just priceless. And I've got to say, I'm so relieved that Jim made it out of there alive. Your track record of killing everyone off didn't inspire me with much confidence that he'd make it -- which would have been a shame, since he was such an awesome character. Great story. :) Author's Response: Wow- you really chewed through this one... Glad you liked it... And you're right- my track record for killing off characters is pretty high... sorry... but I liked Jim too- might have to bring him back at some point... But this was like the first longer chapter fic I'd ever written and had the nerve to post- in retrospect- there's lots of things I might have written differently. Thanks for taking the time to check it out. T Summary: A shortcut through the woods leaves the boys lost, seperated and hunted.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadow Stalker Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 46418 [Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07
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Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 WFT??? Joshua just left John alone on the haunted highway?????? What a freakin' jerk!
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Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Oh ho ho! Clever, clever! That evil thing is somehow lurking in Sam, eh?
Whenever stories end with a cruel little twist like this, I always want to see it continued later. lol. Summary: What happens when the boys are stranded and one of them becomes violently ill?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 53258 [Report This] Published: 02/03/07 Updated: 08/03/07
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Date: 30/12/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I'm positively terrified of Dr. Sam and for Dr. Sam!!!
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Date: 30/12/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Wow. Just... Wow. This was brilliant. I actually teared up and did the girly "awwwww" at Dr. Bates's pep talk speech with Sam. This is seriously awesome. (Isn't it fun to get reviews on something you wrote ages ago?) Summary:
Dean and Sam learn to accept help and at the same time save the lives of a special family. Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 36478 [Report This] Published: 27/03/07 Updated: 03/04/07
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Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I positively melt every single time you describe Dean with Jessie. *fans self* I am absolutely hooked on these characters, this family. I positively love Sara and the kids, and I love that Dean and Sam are already attached to them! AWESOME! Author's Response: LOL, wow, you're really going back in time. Sara and her little family was on of the first stories I'd ever and we're talking EVER written. Glad your diggin' it. - Kel ;)
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Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 You let the evil monsters attack the dog???! GAH!!! Jack is now officially my favourite character EVER! Author's Response: LMAO, trust me, Jack in real life isn't as impressive as Jack in the Winchester world (well except for they're both equally hairy and drooly)....glad you liked !! - Kel ;) Summary:
Spoiler..."They want Dean dead...and they want Sam to do it and will go to unimaginable lengths to make it happen...but is it all a part of a bigger plan to kill two birds with one stone?" *Takes place in Season two after the epi Tall Tales** Warning **there is some swearing, mainly just the "B" word and S&%t *** Categories: AU, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 35543 [Report This] Published: 01/05/07 Updated: 26/01/09
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Date: 26/01/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Gah! Doesn't Sam know that bringing Jess back would be swerving into zombie territory? He's a freakin' hunter -- he should know better! I'm forcibly reminded of poor Dawn trying to resurrect her mom on Buffy. Love can make people do very stupid things. Am very much enjoying this one. :)
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Date: 26/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 The Muahahahaha at the end is classic! lol. What kind of baddie doesn't do the diabolical laugh when he's secretly gloating about his foe's immanent demise?
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Date: 26/01/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I knew that Jack was up to no good, the dirty rat!!! Summary:
Why did Bobby pull the shotgun on John? Spoilers for everything. Framed by a tag for AHBL2. Categories: Wee!chester, Missing Scenes, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22621 [Report This] Published: 03/07/07 Updated: 07/02/08
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Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: Family First Why haven't you finished this?!? If I beg would it induce you to get back on the horse? lol. Please!! Summary: Pre-Series. Young Wichester. In war, there are bound to be casualties, wounds to be had, but Dean Wincehster finds the battle lines blurred when he's caught in unexpected crossfire.
Categories: General, One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5186 [Report This] Published: 13/07/07 Updated: 13/07/07
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Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Just discovering this now. Absolutely wonderful. I am really loving the Brotherhood stuff. Only problem is it's very hard to find the beginning. Would you mind drawing me a map or something? I have a lot of catching up to do! Summary: This was my first Supernatural fanfic! The boys wanted one day, one day, of relaxation. Something out there has other, more sinister, plans.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 10391 [Report This] Published: 07/08/07 Updated: 11/08/07
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Date: 15/12/08 Title: Chapter 7: Those Are Just Scratches Let me guess -- the twin Lil's name is Lilitu or Lilith? I'm exploring similar mythology for one of my fics. :) (Though you obviously got to it long before me) Your stories are awesome, by the way! Author's Response: If I remember correctly from back when I was writing this, I think it was short for Lilin, which is the same as you listed above. hehe Thank you for that lovely compliment at the end of your review. I can't begin to tell you how much that means to me. Summary:
'It was in that moment that Dean understood just what it meant to be a hunter.' Dean works to prove a girl's innocence and learns something life altering about himself.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Brothers Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 56413 [Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 12/02/08
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Date: 17/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I read this line and had to stifle the howl of laughter that struggled to burst forth, I swear!: "Just remember it may be fun to plow the field, but I will personally kill you, if you plant any corn." Seriously -- I won't be sparing in my compliments! Your stuff is just AWESOME! Author's Response: LOL, Ah....John's birds and the bees huh, you can't imagine the images I tossed around looking for just the right one ;) Kel
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Date: 18/11/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Awesome. Absolutely amazing. I loved every inch of this story. And I'm so glad I discovered it after it was done so I didn't have to WAIT for any installments. :P Author's Response: Thanks so much, it is always nice to read a complete. Glad you dug this one. - Kel ;) Summary: Set during Season 2, in the present Dean's point of view of a hunt in Pittsburgh about missing objects from a church. In the past, from teen Sam's point of view of a much earlier hunt in the Pittsburgh area and what happened afterwards.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 17442 [Report This] Published: 06/09/07 Updated: 30/09/07
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Date: 03/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Just noticing this one now. Very interesting and intriguing so far. That "kill the boy" thing was creepy as hell. FYI - Dean and Sam would have been 12-13 and 17 in April of 1996. (Being born January '79 and May '83). Summary:
The Winchester brothers fight to keep safe the only family they've ever known. - This story is a sequal to Thank You, featuring Sara Powers. Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 40890 [Report This] Published: 17/10/07 Updated: 14/12/07
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Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh no!!!! Where's Jack? If Gordon killed or hurt the dog I'm going to require you to write an ending for him that's even worse than being garroted by Sam Winchester.
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Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I'm still waiting to find out that poor Jack isn't actually dead... :(
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Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 YAY!!!! I knew you couldn't have killed Jack! I flippin' love that dog!
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Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Holy tear-jerker! This was just so beautiful! That Gordon Walker is one cold SOB, and I was so glad that it was Sara that took him out. And Dean sobbing silently in the kitchen at having to let the family go.... GAH!!!! Just wonderful. I'm so glad to see that there's another Sara Powers story for me to read. :) Author's Response: LOL, I actually feel a bit guilty at monopolizing your time today....lol. Glad you like and hopefully you'll also enjoy Enrapture. As for more, well don't count the Powers family out yet I have every intention of revisiting them all, sooner rather than later - Kel ;) Summary: 3.02 TKAA tag. Brothers need to talk about the important events in their lives... like when Dean thinks he might be a dad with an eight-year old son, maybe Sam would like to know about it.
The pain in his gut deepened as Sam faced more of Dean's sacrifice and self-denial. Once again Dean wanted for Sam what he refused to acknowledge he deserved for himself. Sam didn't know what to say to ease Dean's pain so he offered his brother the only truth he knew.
Banner by the awesome dreamalittledreamofsam Thank you again! Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: Ben Braeden, Dean W., Lisa Braeden, Sam W. Challenges: Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7868 [Report This] Published: 17/10/07 Updated: 17/10/07
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Date: 22/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 *sigh* Wouldn't Dean be the sexiest, awesomest dad ever? Sadly, I don't think Kripke and company will ever give us a Dean-as-Dad happy ending. I want Winchester babies, damnit!! Author's Response: It would be one lucky gal to have Dean father her child! He and Lisa made a great couple, and Ben was adorable, it broke your heart to see how much Dean wanted him to be his. Maybe once they fulfill their destinies to save the world... but yeah, not on the show, Kripke wouldn't allow babies, but that's why we have fanfics! Enjoy the holidays, B.J. Summary:
TM7 tag. Envy was taunting Sam. I know things. Sam looked up and saw fear in Dean’s eyes. Not from the danger of facing the seven deadly sins personified. No.., Dean feared something else, something more. Sam shook at the realization. Dean feared the truth.
He felt like he was betraying Dean by allowing this monster to defile his good name and all the great accomplishments of his life, and a part of him wanted to bust the demon’s jaw himself for daring to speak Dean’s name. But a part of him needed to know and Dean wasn’t talking. It was sordid and unsavory and so very wrong on so many levels… but God help him, he needed to know.
Categories: Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 49079 [Report This] Published: 20/10/07 Updated: 12/06/08
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Date: 23/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Lust Oh my gosh this was so dark and despairing, but somehow rang kind of true. I don't honestly think the show would ever go in this direction (mostly because it's a TV show, and the kind of emotional blackness these themes take us to is just too much for SN) -- but it's easy enough for the imagination to fill in the blanks of what a frightened young Dean Winchester would have done and sacrificed for his little brother. What's frightening is that it seems so damned likely. You think of two kids cooped up alone for days at a time in seedy motels and wonder how it's possible neither of them ever did become victims to sexual predators. I confess I cried at this. It made a little bit too much sense, and rang true even though, as I said, I don't think the show would ever go in this direction. Still... Dean is so desperate for his dad's approval, has an almost pathological sexual drive, and has no sense of self-worth whatsoever (as is obviously evidenced by his crossroads deal). I have always honestly thought that, if he were a woman, he'd have an eating disorder to go with his raging self-loathing. You've just captured his pain so well, and twisted it by having it revealed through the evil of that demon. It's like you can feel the darkness nipping at him -- you're almost part of it while you read this. I can only now beg you to finish this and give me some closure!!! Author's Response: I agree the show would never take this direction, but I have a psychologist pal who has been telling me since the start that the patterns of Dean's life would strongly suggest a trauma like this in his past. She has been the encouraging me to not take the easy way out and to show how circumstance doesn't define you, how strong men rise up and face their issues and grow even stronger because of it. Darkness is a fact with the Winchesters' lives and this is the darkest story I have ever attempted which is why it is so difficult for me to write. I will finish it, but I actually think the long lull here will enable me to finish it out with a more sensitive touch. I may not be able to get another chapter up before Christmas because I don't want to be working on it around the holidays for obvious reasons, but it will be my first priority after the holidays. I again apologize for my inability to follow thru on this in a timely manner. I've never before taken so long to update a story. I only hope the wait is ultimately worth it. Take care, B.J.
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Date: 29/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Lust Well I'll only add one request then: if you can't get us an update soon (which is understandable), can you write a long and graphic scene where John murders the perv who hurt Dean? lol. I'd like to see Papa Winchester take sweet revenge on the monster who hurt his boy. It probably wouldn't fit with the story, since you've had Sam's flashbacks and Envy's taunting... Maybe Bobby can remember how John murdered the guy? I'm not picky -- I just want to see him die. lol. I hope I didn't give the impression that I thought you were off base with this, though. I think what you've suggested here actually really fits (which is sad, but true, IMO). Something like that existing in Dean's past seems so likely, given his adult pathologies, and given the rough circumstances of their childhood. Author's Response: No, you certainly didn't give me the impression that you thought I was off base with this story. I think we agree that this is a very real possibility exactly for the reasons you stated, given Dean's actions and how he reacts to things and also their messed up childhoods where they were left to face things on their own at too young an age. As far as John taking revenge, I have some thoughts but they are not fully developed. Sam still has some things to learn, as does Dean before this story is finished. My problem, I fear, is I have too many ideas and it is hard getting them all coherently put into the story. This is an instance where I really could use an editor to help me sort thru and make it readable, but don't worry, I'll manage somehow. Take care, B.J. |
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