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Penname: Jenn [Contact]
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Real name: Jennifer Status: Member Member Since: 16/09/08 Website: http://www.deandamage.com/viewuser.php?uid=7 Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Jenn Summary:
Father's day challenge :D
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 16/06/09 Updated: 16/06/09
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
 Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - I'll pretend The last line is especially heartbreaking. "But today he'd smile, for them." This is such a great drabble. It's sad, but it's also uplifting, especially to see John like this. He would put on a happy face for the boys, because he was just that kind of dad. He may not have been the sweetest or the most thoughtful, but he loved them so much. And this is a perfect example of that. As always, you inspire me <3 Author's Response: Thanks a lot hon, you've made my day. I <333 U!!! Summary: Home is such a relative concept. It can be a voice, a smell, a touch, a sight…or a person. Or maybe Sam just hit one wall too many.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2008 [Report This] Published: 10/07/09 Updated: 10/07/09
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
Date: 10/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: One Step Closer This is one of the most truthful insights into Sam. Dean really is Sam's home. I liked this, very much. I like second person, but it has to be done just so. You pulled it off brilliantly. I would take out bits that stood out to me, but to be completely honest, the whole thing was lovely and I would quote the whole thing back to you! Thanks for sharing this, it was a great read. Warmed my heart, definitely. <3 Jenn Author's Response: Hi!! Thank you so very much!!! Yeah, I really think that Sam will always be Dean's home and vice versa and that they will always struggle to find a way to come home one way or another....they are all they have! Just one another and yeah...it's nice to be home! To be honest...I didn't know that this was second person...because I'm not a native English speaker...oops...I hope second person is allowed! idk :) oops...so thank you for saying that I pulled it off! awwww, 's okay....I'm just so happy that you liked it, and that I could make you get yourself lost in Sam for the minutes it took you to read this! hugs, S.
Summary:
Sam's 15 and sick of being called Sammy, sick of being told what to do and sick of being punished for not wanting the life forced on him. After disobeying again and being punished again, Sam defies John's final word and instead rushes into the woods only to find trouble.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Bruised. Not Broken Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 13536 [Report This] Published: 13/07/09 Updated: 17/09/09
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
Date: 19/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Consequence LKFJOAIWJREF GOOD GRACIOUS GIRL, WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU WERE WHUMPING SAM?! You know how I feel about a nice, juicy Winchester whump story :P I'm totally hooked! I love when you're spontaneous! <3 Author's Response: SDFJNSFDF JENN?! Nice to see you here, reading my stuff, lol, I'm sorry I didn't tell you, everything was so unplanned. I know, I know, you and your whump! *Beams* I'm glad you're hooked, now all I've gotta do is keep you there. LOL Thanks hun, I guess I should be spontaneous more often? <3 Summary: Addiction withdrawal is a terrible thing to endure, and right now Sam knew that this was going to hurt...
Spoiler for: When the Levee Breaks. Set as Dean closes the door on Sam trapping him in Bobby's panic room. A missing scene/story. Rated T:
Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 834 [Report This] Published: 18/07/09 Updated: 18/07/09
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
Date: 14/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This episode is one of those episodes that tears at the heartstrings. The tag you have here is nice because we're getting to see Sam's initial reaction to being put away in the panic room. We get to see a little of what Sam is thinking throughout the scenes being played out, but you dig a little deeper here and give the reader something more with your very expressive sentences. I love Sam's initial confusion, how he thought Dean was playing some kind of sick joke on him and then his fear when he realizes it's real. I could imagine, with the state Sam was in, that this was one of many things going on in his head at the time. There are a few grammar mistakes and run-on sentences, but they can be overlooked by the vivid, intense descriptiveness in the scene you've created here. I adored this: "...as the craving beast dug its claws back into his starving flesh." Beautiful. Thanks for a lovely read. <3 Jenn Author's Response: Thank you for finding this story buried way back when...lol I guess it was a difficult time right then (still is!) for Sam and his addiction, I am glad you enjoyed the read. Plus I always appreciate readers being brave enough to add constructive criticism over grammar etc and am always open to making things right. So I now may look over this one to see what you mean. (it wasn't beta-ed) unless you want to point out which bits you mean? Thank you again and for the stars Jacq x Summary:
It was followed almost immediately by a second sound, the one Sam knew would get him help faster than any other word in the English language that actually meant 'help'. “Dean.” Cage!fic and limp!Sam with a smattering of big!brother!Dean. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4707 [Report This] Published: 19/07/09 Updated: 22/07/09
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ugh I don't have the energy to go total batshit fangirl over this, even though I am on the inside. Lord, Maja, why do you always write such awesome stories? This was freaking amazing and I hate you. *glomples* Author's Response: :D ILU2, honey. ILU2. *glomples back* (And I could hear the squeeing. No worries. I got an inkling of an idea how you felt about it.) Thanks for the AWESOME review! :D M
Summary:
Entry for the Fire Challenge 2009. And then the world stops.
Thanks again for all the kind words about my artworks. I really, really appreciate them! I am proud to be a part of this great community! And thanks, Tree, for offering us such a great challenge! *smishes ya* I am such a crappy friend. I forgot the most important bit here. Cal, please accept my eternal thanks. I could have never done any of these things without your constant support. You challenge me to give my best, you help me up when I stumble. Thanks for that. I am so glad to have met you. You are a true friend and an awesome beta! Miss ya! This one is for you Cal-Kiddo! Can't wait to give you an overdue hug. You deserve it and will have to endure it! No matter what. Hey, I don't do chick-flick either, so what?! Categories: General, UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 852 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: It Roweena, you are seriously creative and talented and I'm just never sure what to say about you and your writing to justify how amazing it really is. I'm a HUGE FAN of awesome formatting, and this is AWESOME FORMATTING. You chose three of the most obvious POVs, BUT! You chose to write them in a way that is incredibly unique. The writing is poetic and powerful and the imagery it produces is something to rave about. You know what happens here, you've seen it in the Pilot and in so many of the episodes. This part of the Supernatural story is rehashed over and over again, but this is like seeing it for the first time. And I just have to say, this was awesome: An unholy prayer carries over the howling flames.
Author's Response: Hey Jenn, wow, thx for the stars! And the review! Amazing? Heh. yeah well, I can't really believe it myself. I only started writing (in English) a year ago and banner'ing is pretty new to me as well. Guess it's the show that unearthed some creativity I never suspected I had. I chose the obvious POVs on purpose and I am glad my plan worked seeing as you said it felt like watching it for the first time. Guess that's due to the style and formatting (love me some different formatting, heh). The concept to this story was to do an equivalent to the 'previouslies' on TV but sorta like an inner monologue. A recap from 3 different POVs. Thx for reading and dropping me these wonderful lines, Ilka Summary:
Ungen summer fire challenge entry Memories of fire will remain scorched in three specific minds for all their lives even if they start to fade over time... Season 4 spoilers Categories: UnGen Challenges, General, Missing Scenes, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 2200 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Lucifer Rae. Just. ANGST. Oh, the angst! Even the SPIDER was angsty! LOL I was dying, and I was trying not to, but I felt so BAD for the poor little thing! These are really well written. I never would have thought of a Lucifer POV, that was very interesting. And poor John. Ugh, poor poor John. This man and the crap he had to go through. You write him very well. Congrats dear, you've written some powerful (and hilarious) POVs! Author's Response: *flails and hugs you tightly* Thank you!! You know I so totally love my angst :D And strangely, I've developed a small soft spot for spiders since writing this, lol. And Lucy, I'm strangely fascinated by the guy as if you couldn't guess, lol. So it's always fun to write him when I get the chance. Big cuddles for John. It breaks my heart seeing what he went through. I love him as a character and think he's really misunderstood - poor guy. Thank you again so much for reading and for the awesome review! Summary:
For the UnGen Summer Fire Challenge 2009. A demon, a child and a psychic. And one night that changed the lives of the Winchester family forever. “What do you remember of that night?” “I remember the fire... the heat.”Disclaimer: It all started from here, and it still belongs to Mr K.
Categories: General, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 2896 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
 Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Missouri Moseley, Kansas, November 1983 I really loved this. The POVs were great, they just seemed to go together. And your writing is very powerful, smudge. Especially YED. I think he was my favorite of yours. Referencing to In The Beginning was an awesome idea. There are a TON of lines I want to take out and show to you, but it would be like making you read your story all over again LOL! I will give you this one though: They can’t have him. I won’t let them take him from me. Oh man, that is the most Dean-ish thought ever! Fantastic job, smudge, I'm so happy to have read this! Author's Response: Hi Jenn Thanks. I loved the YED the best too, it just seemed to flow as I wrote it. The referencing to ITB was just begging to be put into that night, I don't think he could have resisted a look see at the boy that was to grow up and kill him. Yeah and Dean was giving his brother to take care of that night so I could see him, even then, not letting anyone take him from him. Thanks again, Mary x Summary:
Submission for UnGen Summer Challenge: It all started with a fire. Spoilers through season 4 Categories: General, UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2097 [Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 21/07/09
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 You know how I feel about this story. This was the most awesome idea ever, and I love it every time I read it. How amazing to use Chuck as a point of view as well as having him *write* the other points of view? IT'S GENIUS! And it was all you, Sammy. This is *your* story, no matter how many times you try and give me credit. I'll take credit for the cheerleading, but you have to remember that you wrote this thing. And it was 10 times better than I ever imagined. And of course, you know what my favorite line is. *chuckles and pastes it* “Jeremy wrote a book about homicidal unicorns ending the world with their powers of naptime.” *ded* Author's Response: Dean, I'm pretty sure, that you talked me into doing all three points of view via Chuck...I was just going to do Chuck writing one. Sooo, I'm going to blame you and give you the credit for that. Cause it WAS you. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Seriously, I was snorting like crazy at work over this one. The clown, god, I was dying! I really like Dean's "But God forbid we take a plane" hahahaha. Poor Dean. This was fantastic and hysterical and awesome, all wrapped into one! I loved it! Summary:
***Spoilers for 5.14***
Really dark ficlet. Bring tissues! Thx to calUK for the beta. Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 610 [Report This] Published: 16/02/10 Updated: 16/02/10
Reviewer: Jenn Signed
Date: 11/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Dead Inside I love how you format things, Roweena. You always seem to try something new, even if it's just a small something. The "There are times..." is so awesome, and I feel like a big dork because I can't think of another way to state that. I so love formatting. Also love the way you string words together. They sort of tear at you here, because you use such vivid language. It's not just written, but painted. You paint a picture with words, and it's beautiful. This here was my favorite: There are times when you are helplessly looking on as your inner emptiness claws its way out, gnashing, tearing and ripping at your heart until it's nothing but a crimson mess of lost memories and feelings. Great job. <3 Jenn (sorry if there is giant font here, I couldn't fix the review) Author's Response: Jesus, jenn. Do you know you just made me cry??? I needed a cheer up, very bad. I go on UnGen and I find this? maaaan.... I am being serious here, CRYING. I dunno what to say other than your words are very very very much appreciated. The line you quoted is my fav too. I must have rewritten it like a million times... Glad it worked for you too! I paint with my words? Dude, I swear that's the lovliest thing anyone ever said to me... And to get these words of praise when I mostly sweat over my dictionary to find the right expression... well that just makes it more than worth the while. Formatting, yeah I do try something new every now and then, heh. Again, glad you like that. In closing, thanks so much babe. I can now go to bed with a much lighter heart! Hugs, Ilka
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