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Penname: kiara_ratterjmouse [Contact]
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Real name: Kiara Hartley Status: Member Member Since: 12/02/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by kiara_ratterjmouse Summary:
Sticks and stones may break my bones , but names - well, that's a whole other story... Set some time late in Season 3
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8092 [Report This] Published: 11/11/08 Updated: 11/11/08
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Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OOOOH ULTIMATE LIMPAGE!!!! WELL DONE JULES!!!! hope you're fingers get better soon!!!!! Kiara :) Author's Response: Thanks for that, Kiara. I haven't spent much time on here lately because of work and the pain in my hands. Glad you liked the story. And there was a fair whack of whumpage wasn't there? Poor Sammy.....Jules
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Date: 12/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I would also like to know how Dean knows that song.... if he is a rock head (no pun intended) then how does he know that? unless he watched Ice Age 2 .... much love Kiara Author's Response: The song was originally from the Michael Jordan movie Space Jam, actually. But then again, I'm quite a bit older than you, so my memory goes back a bit further. And you never know - recovering from a hunt, stuck in a crappy motel room, Sam away at college and John heaven knows where....even a kid's movie has got to be better than talking to the walls!....Jules Summary:
Dean hated Poughkeepsie, but at least he wasn't starting high school there.
Categories: Romance, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: Transcendental Numbers Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 15015 [Report This] Published: 18/11/08 Updated: 18/11/08
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Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Base eight is just like base ten if you're missing two fingers ouch i gotta say that last bit was hard to read. i know breaking up with the first is hard - especially near a special or important time in someones life. (mine happened the day after i started uni EVER) and reading this brought back memories. it was good i enjoyed it. kiara Author's Response: That last bit was hard as heck to write, and there were a couple of days where I didn't think I was going to manage it. I'm sorry if it brought up bad memories, though. Thank you so much for your kinds words. I must sincerely apologize, however, for not responding sooner. Summary:
It doesn't matter what just happened, it doesn't matter what I just did, nothing matters at all but that my baby brother is alive.
I don't know why I'm still crying. That's a lie. Of course I know why.
I doubt anybody has had a New Year's Eve worse than this one. Categories: Misc, Wee!chester, One Shots, General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Worse Than This One Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3229 [Report This] Published: 01/12/08 Updated: 01/12/08
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Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: New Fear's Eve FIANLLY I get to read the final story in that trio! and it's been sitting in your computer all year? my god that was a good wait then. great story. kept the ball rolling the whole time. kiara Summary:
"I'll always have your back, brother." Set in Season 2, after the episode Houses Of The Holy Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3352 [Report This] Published: 08/12/08 Updated: 08/12/08
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Date: 09/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 damn you jules. you're too bloody good! i had no idea whether it was sam or dean hurt and it drove me nuts trying to find out without losing the gist! i seriously though it was sam that you'd well placed some false hints.( i don't think that makes sense.) i'm a sucker for limp!sam so that probably jaded my view but something told me it was probably dean. grrr you're too good ( I think i said that) keep up the good work as always kiara Author's Response: LOL! Thanks hon. I did place some hints, but they were very, very subtle. One clue was the watcher rubbing his right wrist when he was thinking about Gordon and his subsequent arrest - Sam's wrist was still in plaster at the time they went up against him. The other clue was that after his shower, he dressed in sweatpants and a tee shirt - Sam's usual night attire. As I said, they were pretty subtle. I'm stoked that I could keep you guessing. Thanks for reading - I really don't know why I was nervous with this one. Can't really explain it....Jules Summary:
Even downtime has its dangers... Set in Season 3, some time after the episode Dream A Little Dream Of Me.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 20149 [Report This] Published: 12/12/08 Updated: 02/01/09
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Date: 03/01/09 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue OMG when dean started explaining how to make a "cappacino" i had to glide past it and not read it i was laughing so much. girl you are good
kiara Author's Response: Thanks, Kiara. I was a bit naughty there. But I just couldn't resist. And I could just imagine Sam's face getting redder by the second. Thanks hon......Jules
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Date: 12/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 oh gee its not you is it jules? may i out line some favourite lines of mine so far? i had to laugh when i saw them because i'm officialluy convinved your obsessed with Dean Arse.
he scrubbed his palms over his butt a line of bubbles slid down his back and tickled his butt a sweet smelling trail of bubbles over his pecs and abs and if Dean has a shower scene surely Sammy gets one later on in another story right? btw love the clowns kiara
Author's Response: Oh, stone the crows, it is me! And yes, you could say I am obsessed with Dean's arse....and his legs....and his arms....and his chest...and his face...and his back (especially after eppy 4:10)....and that other bit...ahem - where was I? As for a Sammy shower scene - I've done a few of them already. Time I treated myself to a Deany-babe one. LOL...Jules
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Date: 19/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 hey jules can myxmas pressie be a compilation of said shower andother intimate sam scenes' you've written. or hey even direction themwould be great (you don't have to do the compilation i just wanna know which ones are sammy centresd if you know what i mean... ;-) merry xmas and happy new year! Kiara Author's Response: Hi, Kiara, Hope you liked the little Christmas prezzie. Thanks for that - hope your Christmas Day was a good one, and not too hot. Brisbane was a bit cooler than they predicted, thankfully. .....Jules Summary:
Is the ground beneath us as firm as we think? When a peaceful summer turns deadly for the brothers the foundations on which they built their lives are shaken.... and nothing will ever be the same. weechesters, something lost series.
Categories: General, Wee!chester, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Something Lost Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 55970 [Report This] Published: 16/12/08 Updated: 06/08/09
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Date: 17/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 not sure if you know (you probably do) but the title for your story is a Pink Floyd song and a good one at that! Summary:
Shepherds come in all shapes and sizes... Contains some spoilers for Season 4 Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9800 [Report This] Published: 26/12/08 Updated: 26/12/08
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Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That's perfectly fine Jules, there is no pressure intended. i post before i get people to read through it anyway...
i liked this one...
anyway... how did you know i would read it :-)?
are you psychic or something?
merry christmas and HNY girlie kiara Author's Response: Thanks, Kiara, and yes, I am psychic....or is that psychotic? Can never remember how that goes.....*be afraid*.... Hope you had a great Christmas and New Year. Jules Summary:
Banner by the amazing windscryer, who also inspired this story. Everybody has that one place where they feel safe, no matter the circumstances. Even Samuel Winchester. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1248 [Report This] Published: 01/01/09 Updated: 01/01/09
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Date: 02/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 i loved it. i think you should do an angle of this from dean, noting how he used his dad as his safe place and Sammy uses Dean as a crutch. maybe tapping into the emotions dean felt when sam got hurt on the current hunt. i don't trawl the forums - not really my thing - but this is an excellent by product from it.
kiara Author's Response: Lol, I already read your review on Safe Places, so I'll be quiet now ;-) Yeah, forums aren't everybody's place, but our small forum (which isn't even a Supernatural forum in the first place, lol) has spawned many a great story idea so far. It's more the aspect of discussing the show with friends that's the source of it. Thanks so much for the great reviews. Summary:
Safe places don't exist. Nowhere, not in the entire world. Nobody knows that better than Dean Winchester. But at times, it really doesn't matter. Companion piece to "Safe Place". Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2933 [Report This] Published: 01/01/09 Updated: 01/01/09
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Date: 02/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 i so should havew checked before adding my comment withyour other one eh? still fantastic, mirrored exactly what i said too.
kiara Author's Response: Lol, that's all right. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked this one, too.
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Date: 02/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 oooh i shouldlook further next time before commenting eh?
Summary: Dean doesn't know what he gets into, when he tries to get Sam to lighten up.
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5976 [Report This] Published: 07/01/09 Updated: 07/01/09
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Date: 08/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 the story was great there was just some typos. quick question... is english you're first language? i'd be happy to go through and fix them for you, if you want me to that is the minute sam started hugging people i couldn't read so i semi-skipped it and got the the other good bits.
Great story! Kiara Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'm actually German but have lived here for a long time. If you want to go through it and fix my typos that would be great. sometimes spell checks seems to let me down. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
The brothers remember what is most important. Tag to Sex and Violence. Hurt!Sam and Angsty Boys! Categories: Missing Scenes, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4830 [Report This] Published: 07/02/09 Updated: 07/02/09
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Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 it was the best pace for me actually. great read even tho i broke my "no s4X9+" fic rule as they season has only made it to ep 8 over here in aus. Aww I'm flattered that you broke your rule - sorry if I spoiled anything for you ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing! Summary:
Slight spoilers up to 4x13. Written for The Vaults ‘Ruby is a bitch’ drabble challenge. Couldn’t get it down to a drabble (yeah right, me do just 100 words? Are you off your nut?). Rated M for people (almost) doing the McNasty. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1617 [Report This] Published: 10/02/09 Updated: 10/02/09
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Date: 12/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Epitaph wow i would never get that descriptive with my stories. gotta say im not even sure we're allowed to... hmm i will try it next time i need a sex/semi-sex scene. excellent story as well. always wanted that ruby bitch dead. kiara Author's Response: To be honest, I've never written sex scenes before, and it was all a bit difficult. Imagine, eh? It's all very well knowing it goes on behind (Dean's) closed doors, but actually having to sit down and write it out is really hard. I guess this one has set a precedent - the first time I wrote a sex scene. :) Thanks for reading and leaving a review - much appreciated! Summary: Sam and Dean have an argument that leads to trouble. Dean is 11, Sam is 7.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6143 [Report This] Published: 17/02/09 Updated: 17/02/09
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Date: 18/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 that's in clear contrast to me and my little sister. I'm almost 19 and she is 8 but she is lethal. and she is very hyperactive. i tend to blame her and she chucks a sook at me... i still end up in trouble though for apparently being old enough to know better. my dad doesn't get the idea that we are siblings - both female mind you and terrible twos and troublesome threes are just as bad as adolesence and all that stuff. this one sure made me laugh!
kiara Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know. It's good to hear it made you laugh. I know it is hard to be the older one, always supposed to know better, when the little one is just so annoying. They can really test your patient. Hope, when she gets older it will get better and she will come to you for advise and to talk about things she can't talk about with mom. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
Chain reaction = a series of rapidly occurring events, each of which precipitates the next (Collins English Dictionary) Set in Season 1, between the episodes Dead In The Water and Phantom Traveller Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 14406 [Report This] Published: 26/02/09 Updated: 06/03/09
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Date: 28/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 oh you like to play alright jules..... this is good,... and whens the ozcon again? i will have 2 send the piccie soon kiara Author's Response: April 18th and 19th. It's coming fast. And yes, I do love to play. Thanks for that, Kiara - hope you like the second half. Not many twists in this one - well, only a little one.... Jules Summary:
Sam's blood was everywhere. Categories: General, One Shots, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1974 [Report This] Published: 01/03/09 Updated: 27/02/11
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Date: 01/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Shrapnel small come back my rear, this is so worthy of more than a one shot... maybe a longer long shot even but it could have so much more to it... this is fantastic... Kiara Author's Response: *grinning like mad* thank you! I'm so stoked you enjoyed! everyone is responding so well, I'm really very pleased! Summary:
A tragic car wreck has left a seventeen-year-old Sam struggling to regain control of his life. An overprotective Dean wants to keep his kid brother safe, while an overzealous John pushes him back into the hunt. This is a continuation of the story - ‘Adrift'.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 23722 [Report This] Published: 08/06/09 Updated: 08/12/09
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Date: 05/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 i read the prequel to this millions of times but i wanna know how the story ends... when will you update again!!!!!!!! kiara
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Date: 23/10/09 Title: Drifting are you sure you didn't miss a chapteror two supernaturaldh? cozchapter 5 is chap 7 and it doesn't link up with chap 4... all in all a good chap anyway Summary: A simple hunt at a fair has some unexpected consequences for Sam and Dean. Or does it?
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1326 [Report This] Published: 09/06/09 Updated: 09/06/09
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Date: 10/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 can you add a sequel to this? maybe sammy suffereing the pox or a cold? he could snuggleup to his pet toyelephant. meh these are just ideas i like. this is the first review i've made in awhile this story is good,! Hey there! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my new story, I am really touched that you liked it so much. The idea of Sammy snuggling up to the elephant Dean got him is a cute one, LOL. I'll definitely keep it in mind. I hadn't planned a follow-up to this, but a couple of people have asked for it, so I'll definitely give it some thought. Thanks for wanting more of the story. In the meantime, if you're looking for more "Sammy in distress, big brother Dean comforting and taking care of him" fic, check out my story "Big Brother to the Rescue." If you do, I'd love to hear what you think! :) Thanks again for the review! Author's Response: Just wanted to let you know that I did add a sequel to this, showing them back in the motel room, Sam still feeling sick. It's called "The Power of Duct Tape." If you check it out, let me know what you think! :) Summary:
Sam's 15 and sick of being called Sammy, sick of being told what to do and sick of being punished for not wanting the life forced on him. After disobeying again and being punished again, Sam defies John's final word and instead rushes into the woods only to find trouble.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Bruised. Not Broken Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 13536 [Report This] Published: 13/07/09 Updated: 17/09/09
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Date: 14/08/09 Title: Chapter 6: Fear i am loving this story so far i wish you could hurry and update it! I'm a sammy luvr so any pain and angst is good for me.
kiara Author's Response: Hey, thanks for popping in to let me know you're enjoying my story. Sorry for the late updates, I don't know where the week goes, LOL updates should be back to norm. hehe I'm glad you're enjoying the angsty Sam. <3 Summary: “I gotcha, Bobby’s gotcha, we gotcha. I gotcha, ‘s okay.”…words like balsam dripping into Dean’s mind.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4089 [Report This] Published: 15/07/09 Updated: 15/07/09
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Date: 16/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Bullet And A Fire i actually liked this and your limp-sam one very much! i especially love drowning or struggling to breathe scenes and these were awesome. do you like harry potter coz i just put up a crossover between this and hp that is as nearly sadistic (in a good way) as this.
kiara Author's Response: hey!!! thank you! yeah I love those struggling to breathe stories too....it's a kink, what can I say!? LOL a HP crossover!? hmmm, I've only read like 4 HP books, but hell, why not!? I love some sadistic stuff so...I'll give it a read... :))) thank you so much for reading and reviewing! hugs, S.
Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse Signed
Date: 16/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Bullet And A Fire i actually liked this and your limp-sam one very much! i especially love drowning or struggling to breathe scenes and these were awesome. do you like harry potter coz i just put up a crossover between this and hp that is as nearly sadistic (in a good way) as this.
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