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Penname: kiara_ratterjmouse [Contact]
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Real name: Kiara Hartley Status: Member Member Since: 12/02/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by kiara_ratterjmouse Summary:
Thinking back later, Dean wasn’t sure what response he had expected. Whatever response he might have imagined, nothing could have prepared him for what happened next. Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1288 [Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07
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Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 WOW! i loved that! it's very clever. I have a younger sister at home but she never inspires anything like that! That was fantastic! Summary:
He was surely dying. You could not be feeling this and not be dying. He had to be dying. Please, let me be dying! This was too much to live with, Sam wanted it to end, needed it to end. Oh god it hurt so much, so bad, oh god make it stop, make it stop, make it STOP! He couldn’t speak, couldn’t do anything but scream in total anguish, not knowing where his body began or ended, feeling, hearing, seeing nothing but the pain being afflicted on his being. It was pain beyond pain, and he welcomed unconsciousness as his body reached its limit. NOW COMPLETED!!! Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 16344 [Report This] Published: 26/03/07 Updated: 26/11/07
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Date: 19/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 That was really great! I started reading it last night and I read the last 4 chapters on my phone this morning after dreaming it all night! That's amazing! Now can you finish seemingly impossible 2? Please? :) kiara Summary: It´s my poem for the 6º fanfic challenge at Supernatural.tv. It´s a Dr Ellicott´s Asylunm ghost patient pov!!!!
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 114 [Report This] Published: 31/03/07 Updated: 01/04/07
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Date: 05/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That's very good. I liked it. :-) Author's Response: Thanks sweety!!!! Summary: He laughed the day that he placed the pistol in his mouth and pulled the trigger. He laughed because he wouldn't be going down without a fight - he'd go down as a suicidal coward.
Categories: Drabbles, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 522 [Report This] Published: 26/04/07 Updated: 27/04/07
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Date: 04/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: He and His Brother That's very trippy, and different. Summary: After a near fatal accident at the end of a hunt, Sam loses his memory of their recent hunt. Dean has to put the pieces back together for his half conscious brohter while still trying to figure it out himself.
Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Never a Winchester Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 9336 [Report This] Published: 21/05/07 Updated: 05/09/07
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Date: 28/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Aftermath Wow, i didn't think my work would look this good once it was posted. i hope ya'll enjoy!
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Date: 28/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Aftermath Wow! i'm even more amazed at the response since i've posted it. I can't give it away you guys so just hold tight. i can't post for another week because i have an onslaught of assessment at the moment but i'll do my best. thanks to all my fans! ~kiara Summary:
This is a collection of one-shots about the many times bad things happen because of good food. Dean believes that whenever he craves mexican cuisine, it's a bad omen. And he's right. Categories: General, One Shots, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6177 [Report This] Published: 02/07/07 Updated: 03/07/08
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Date: 19/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Blame The Burrito loved the last one!!!!!!!! Summary:
“HELP! Someone call an ambulance!...It’s okay Sam, I’ve gotcha…SOMEBODY HELP ME, PLEASE!” he pulled his cell roughly from his pocket, dialing while Sam’s pain-induced tears mixed with the copious amounts of blood snaking down his chin and neck, “You’re alright, Sammy, I’m right here...Hello?! I’m at the Sunset Inn on Downy – something, something’s wrong with my brother...Stay with me Sam, c’mon!...I don’t know, there’s blood coming from his mouth…Hold on, Sammy, please…I-I don’t think he can breathe!...SAM!” Dropping the phone Dean grasped his brother tighter, pulling him up and close. He could still feel him trembling and hear him choking on blood. Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13634 [Report This] Published: 02/08/07 Updated: 04/03/09
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Date: 22/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 does sam have some kind of laughing disease. argh my typig ability is being stemmed by my sisters puppy on the keyboard hgl. that twas the pup ha just there he was again. ive added u as a fave author tbtw
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Date: 22/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 its getting better as i read it. and btw u wont like history so much when u go to university. i know first hand as ive just finished one semester of anthropology
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Date: 26/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 it needs an ending. i'm a glutton for hurt!sam and maybe a joke or something between the brothers to finish with but this ending doesn't really sate me. and after the heartattack or whatever it is that sam had how does SAm come out of it? totally up to you but i would give an ending to this kiara Summary: Unsure what to do when Sam gets hurt at school, Jess decides to make a call....
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 17920 [Report This] Published: 11/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07
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Date: 18/06/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Epilogue I read the whole thing in 4 hours and i got to say this is a magnificent piece of work.i will be putting my jess story up but it will in no way imaginable beat this artwork. You've nailed it on the head in one go. By the way, are you a medico of sorts? :-) Summary:
Trapped in total darkness, both hurt, one seriously - but which one.... Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3874 [Report This] Published: 27/10/07 Updated: 27/10/07
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Date: 17/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I'd rather have a Windsor 208 or Cleaveland 352 block on my motorised wheelchair. 427 would suck too much petrol. unless you ran it on chilli juice like my dad intends to
kiara Author's Response: Chilli juice? That's a new one. I heard of a diesel petrol being made out of vegetable oil, but chilli juice? Hmm.... Windsor 208 sounds good to me. Hook a Holley 4-barrel off it, and we're right to go. Mag wheels, set of extractors....*glances at pic of XY Falcon GTHO on office wall and drools*... Anyway - thank you for that Kiara. Hope you enjoyed the story - lol....Jules Summary:
The first Christmas gift he ever gave to his big brother. In honor of the season, this is my Holiday one-shot. Merry Christmas everybody! Part of the "A First Time For Everything" Series. Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: A First Time For Everything Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 873 [Report This] Published: 04/12/07 Updated: 05/12/07
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Date: 22/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: The First Gift hey thats the EMF isn't it? Summary:
Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08
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Date: 17/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 are you autralian by any chance? I also hope you don't think i'm stelaing ur mojo either as I'm ressurecting a character thats an Australian doctor, but she is a medical doc not a psych ward doc. Kiara Author's Response: I am indeed an Aussie...*waves boxing kangaroo flag*... And no, I won't think you're stealing my mojo at all - ROFL. Go for it! Thanks so much for reading, Kiara. I hope you enjoyed it....Jules Summary:
http://sensue.net/snfa/voting/index.php For the first time, I wonder what'll happen if they don't find me. My mind starts to stumble over itself as I allow the possibility of dying alone in this place to register, and I suddenly feel like all of my insides are constricting, because this can't be happening, I can't be dying, I'm only nine years old, my family needs me... I doubt anyone else has ever spent a New Year's Eve that was worse than this one. Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Worse Than This One Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1585 [Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 15/12/07
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Date: 22/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: New Year's Evil hey is there a sequel to this one? Summary:
Dialogue of something that may have happened during one of John's hunts when the boys were younger. Categories: Wee!chester, Scripts, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 517 [Report This] Published: 17/12/07 Updated: 18/12/07
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Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: It Starts With A Headache ha that was something different. especially in script form (yes it is I the first person to write a script for here) I thought it would have to do wiht sam's visions but it was good it was different. i like it. good work Summary:
Dean sat on his own bed and stared at the wall for hours, then put his face in his hands and sat like that for the rest of the night. Sam thought he heard him crying for a long time. Sam hated that he couldn't get over his fear. He hated that he had nightmares. He hated that he was scaring Dean. Sam hated himself for his weakness. Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 14340 [Report This] Published: 03/01/08 Updated: 06/10/08
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Date: 25/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 hey this chapter is a little hard to read coz the font is small. could you possibly change it? its great so far btw
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Jess see a side of Sam she shouldn't have. Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Boys will be boys Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 631 [Report This] Published: 22/03/08 Updated: 22/03/08
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Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: In Pieces WOW that was a lot of responses considering i only poseted it nearly 20hrs ago!!!! Summary:
A minor car wreck leads to major repercussions in Sam's world. His ever protective big brother, and his harsh father attempt to help him recover his life. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 30818 [Report This] Published: 18/04/08 Updated: 04/06/08
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Date: 20/08/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 wow, has anyone noticed that in fights between the bro's even on TV that sam stutters? this could be a good explanation for that! i liked it! very good.
mouse Summary: Happy Birthday, Sam Winchester. A little oneshot in celebration of our favorite little brother's birthday. Two hot guys and a Lemon Almond Cake with Champagne Mousse filling. What more can anyone ask for?
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2173 [Report This] Published: 02/05/08 Updated: 02/05/08
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Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Balloons and Crepe-Paper Streamers Loved it. twas UNO WICKEDO (im not spanish oritalia but im in a mood)
Author's Response: Thank you, kiara. I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed it. :-) Summary:
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3022 [Report This] Published: 25/05/08 Updated: 25/05/08
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Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot I had a fish named fred! That was great! Kiara Author's Response: lol did you? I've only just remembered - and I can't believe that I'd not remembered before - but when I was little my Grandma bought me a budgie who I named Sammy! Awesome! Thanks for reading hun, Liz x Summary:
short collection of drabbles.
Categories: Drabbles, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 1173 [Report This] Published: 14/06/08 Updated: 26/03/09
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Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Why'd you have to go The title of the mini series caught my eye because it is also a title for a song by the Ting Ting's maybe you should listen to it, it might give you some more inspiration kiara Author's Response: Thank you so much for you review kiara. actually the idea was given to me by Tori ( gypsywoman1 ) but thank you for reading!! I will definately check out the song!! thanaks alot for your request Jessica! Summary:
Alone and broken, when a hunt goes wrong, what will he risk to save his brother again?
Story's better than the summary, I promise!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 7685 [Report This] Published: 01/07/08 Updated: 29/07/08
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Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 huh? that was confusing. K Author's Response: oh no! confusing how? Summary:
What happened in between All Hell Breaks Loose part one and All Hell Breaks Loose part two?? Dean is devastated, and Bobby doesn't know what to do. In between episodes fic Spoilers for season 2 finale. Rated K+
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2071 [Report This] Published: 02/07/08 Updated: 02/07/08
Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Nobody said it was easy,no one ever said it would be so hard that was really good. i got into it. I liked the little flash back. Maybe you should have added some more of these? Not bad for a first try! Kiara Author's Response: Hi Kiara! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Hmm yeah maybe more flashbacks would have added to the story, I'll keep this in mind for future stories! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sarah :) Summary:
Five shorts based on the Winchester brothers over the years. Teenchesters to Weechesters - some limp/angst,
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2878 [Report This] Published: 13/07/08 Updated: 13/07/08
Reviewer: kiara_ratterjmouse Signed
Date: 21/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot I whole heartedly agree with that. i think it is really good. Mouse Author's Response: Thanks hun. Liz x Author's Response: Thanks hun. Liz x |
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