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Real name: maria noel Status: Member Member Since: 01/01/07 Website: Beta-reader:
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Reviews by maria noel Summary: What happens when you can't remember who you are or what you've done? Just maybe, its better that way!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25295 [Report This] Published: 24/12/06 Updated: 24/12/06
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Date: 16/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Good first chapter!!! Did you write as if everythign from season1/season 2 has happened but Dad is still alive???? keep reading i want to know what´s going on!! Summary: Past and present collide as an incident from Sam and Dean's childhood may have some bearing on their current predicament.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10457 [Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06
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Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 WOW!!! great oneshot hun....you are extremely talented!!! love it from begining to end...and what a cliffie at the end!!!! LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Author's Response: I still get a real kick out of people reading this story as it was my first attempt at fan fic! If you want to see how the story continues (which it kind of does!) and you liked the Wee!chester bits, it sort of continues in What If You Don't - but that's a very long chapter fic, so you'd have to have a lot of time on your hands! Summary: Post Devil's Trap. Dean's thoughts as he lies bleeding in the wreck of the Impala.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1356 [Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06
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Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 aww heartbreaking darling........amazing and sad.....well done! Summary: Preseries. What happened in the days before Sam left for Stanford. It's affect on everyone as the situation spirals out of control. Complete!
Categories: Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 22141 [Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 29/12/06
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Date: 25/03/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 And the Rain Came Down Hi sweety!!!. Yours was the first fic i have ever read and i have to say that i still looking for a fic as great as yours. It was heart braking, i trully felt all the pain, every single cough as mine!!!! I want to punch Daddy winchester and little Sammy because they were so focused in fighting that forgot the most important thing in the world: family , even with the worst crappy family ever you need them for breathing ( my family is worst than crapp but we need each other for living) I cried like a crazy with this story. it should have been a real epi of the real Supernatural!!!!!!! I don´t know enough english to let you know what this fic means for me!!!! You are a genious!!!!! Author's Response: Your english is more than good enough and I want you to know I treasure every word. One of the side benefits of writing this stuff is getting to meet the really nice people who are out there and you are definitely one of the nicest. We need more like you! Summary:
Following John's coordinates, the boys prepare to battle a witch. When they discover a greater evil is at work, can Sam save Dean's life or will his brother's pain become his own? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 53269 [Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 22/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Coordinates OK, here we go again! As usual i love all your stuff. This is awesome . I was sad because i finished the other fic but a bit relieve because i could stop thinking about Dean and Sam and Abe and the wendingos and work and study again...but i was curious about thisfic with all this stars and...i fell in the tramp!!! I´m again obsess with a fic writen by you!!! see ya tomorrow in the next chapter Author's Response: Maria -- SO great to see you hear! I am so glad to see you reading another one of my stories. :) I hope you enjoy the rest of this one -- it's a bit different from Ramble On as it introduces a druid witch named Brenna that I have included in two other stories (one a WIP). OFC's aren't always popular in our fandom, and I respect that. I simply wanted a way to delve a bit deeper into Dean's character and psychy without his actually having to SAY anything ('cause, well, it's Dean), and thus, Brenna appeared. Anyway, I hope you enjoy and I look forward to seeing what you think. GS Author's Response: Um. I mean see you here. Not hear. I assume you hear. And I'm not sure that I could see that anyway... sigh. It's been a long day. GS. Again.
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Date: 25/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Coordinates Sweety please don´t feel bad!!! I take some time out this fic because i was having trouble reding it because the other fic was still screaming out loud in my head and i couldn´t really focus in this one. I´m sorry hunni but i think that maybe this week i would be able to read it. You know i love your writing so you only have to wait that i have enough time to read it and that Ramble on stop dancing in my mind. see ya in no time. Author's Response: Well, I have to say that I'm thrilled Ramble On had such an impact on you - I've read stories (published and otherwise) that have crawled into my head and refused to budge for weeks. It's exciting to me that one of my stories might have that same impact on someone. No worries on how long it takes you to read this one. It's not going anywhere. :) I look forward to seeing what you have to say whenever you can get to it. Best -- GS
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Date: 01/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Banshee First of all : wow a banshee!!how could is that. Second: porno???jaja it´s me or the computer room is suddenly very hot!!!! I need a cold shower jaja I´m a bit clueless about the end....is Brenna de banshee or she call the banshee or was Dean so focus in doing ...well you know...that he didn´t realize that she was behind him...and what about Brenna. didn´t she feel, see or whatever the banshee??? So many questions and nothing more than a deep kiss in my mind jaja see ya in the next chapter Author's Response: Hi! So glad to see you here again! I've always been interested in Celtic lore, so for my first time out, a banshee seemed to fit. Although, you'll probably see as you go that I've twisted the lore to suit my purposes a bit... :) Porno! LOL... you had me on the floor with that. Took me a second actually to remember what you were referring to. :) If you're going to read through the rest of the stories with Brenna in them, well, the kiss at the end of this chapter is just a teaser. Ahem. ;) As for the end of the chapter -- Brenna's not the banshee. She's got a whole different issue that you'll discover in the coming chapters. She didn't exactly "call" the banshee either... but, well, as you read you'll discover why the banshee grabbed Dean at that moment. It wasn't exactly Dean she was after... And you're right in your thinking. Dean was so angry at John, so sure that John was wrong about Brenna, and so focused on how Brenna made him feel that he never heard the banshee's approach. His hunter instincts were off at just the wrong moment... Hope the questions just keep you reading... :) Until the next chapter -- GS
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Date: 02/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Holding On Wow girl..this chapter is so amazing that i can´t figured out what to say. The love each one of them have for each other is overwhelming but dean´s love is heartbreaking, make me shudder. The box thing is just.... i have tears in my eyes. Dean, your Dean and the real Dean make me cry everytime i see or read something about him. Jensen is a terrific actor and with a single gesture moves my world and i can see him in my mind doing all this box stuff as if i were watching a epi of Supernatural. Ok , yea i know i´m a weird girl jaja but i think it´s because it´s 3 am here. ok hunni see ya tomorrow in the new chapter. Author's Response: I know what you mean about how Jensen embodies the character of Dean Winchester. It's hard to look away when he's on the screen because his acting is very subtle and the smallest flick of an eye can tell an entire story. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. This chapter and the next were both a bit like an emotional rollercoaster to write. I look forward to seeing what you think of the rest. GS
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Date: 02/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: Letting Go Wow.....i....i..... love this......i...i... can´t talk..i can barely breathe..... I cry all over the chapter and i almost gasp when Dean tols Sammy....there were angel because......
if in a near future i can remember how to write i would write more....just...... Author's Response: Aw. Thanks. Your reviews make me smile and tear up at the same time. I'm so glad the story has such an affect on you. It is a wonderful reward for the scary thing that is posting. :) I look forward to any thoughts you have on the remaining chapters. GS
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Date: 03/04/07 Title: Chapter 5: Truth? I know i should be crying for this amazing chapter but i´m laughing like a maniac ...Dean in a tractor!!!!!!! Ok, ok ..the review....ummm..maybe....GREAT!!!! wonderful!! i love this fic, i love Brenna and i hate Daddy Winchester ( if you read my fic The worst hunt you gonna figured it out jaja) 3am again!!!! time speeds when i´m reading this!!!! see ya in the next chapter sweety!! PS: i love too much your heartbreaking moments ..maybe i should ask you for some advices for my fic. Author's Response: I know -- "Dean" and "tractor" are not two words you probably expect to see in the same sentence... but when it comes to his brother, that boy is determined. I figured he'd get there any way he could. :) I'm gonna look up your fic today -- I hadn't realized you had anything posted here (silly Gaelic). I'm so glad you are enjoying this story, and that you find moments of the story to be heartbreaking. They're written to be so; I'm glad it worked! Looking forward to your next review. GS
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Date: 03/04/07 Title: Chapter 6: The Fight Ok review time!!! This review is gonna be a bit different from the rest because i´m in the hospital right now and i don´t have much time to write. I fall from the stairs, flew over my head and smack a wall!!! How funny is that??!! I knock my head very hard and her i am at the hospital with people don´t allowing me to sleep. don´t worry i´m fine...and as i´m a totally gealicspirit´s fics junky i asked my father to bring me my lapto jajaa. I love this chapter , i love the interaction between Dean and Sam, they know each other so deeply that they don´t need to speak or even be there to know what is going on with the other, that he needs .... totally love this....if i could i´ll try to read more see ya at the next chapter ( if i stop viewing double evrything) Author's Response: OMG! You poor thing. And yet... here you are. I am... speachless. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was my favorite to write -- I wanted Dean to be able to kick some ass even in the state he was in... and I wanted Sam to be able, um, step up so to speak. And he did. Love that boy when he's protective of his big brother. I hope you get out of the hospital soon! I can't believe you're even able to look at a computer... Ah -- I see there's more from you... GS
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Date: 04/04/07 Title: Chapter 7: Brothers OK i 100% hate declan!!!! and daddy winchester! Excelent chapter, love the brothership as you wrote it. Brenna is a great character and i´m looking forward for her new adventures jaja
see ya in the next chapter!! Author's Response: So glad you liked the brothers as I wrote them -- and Declan, ah, he's a sad story. He's one of those people who thinks they're doing the right thing, but can't step back far enough to see the big picture. Glad that you like Brenna, too, as she is in two other of my fics... which I'm hoping you read once your head feels better... GS
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Date: 04/04/07 Title: Chapter 8: The Journey's The Thing AWWWW that was so cute!!!! Why Brenna and Dean couldn´t be together???? they are so alike!!! good for daddy winchester to show up to put thinhgs clear with that old guy!!! I still hate him but.....arggg 3 days!!only 3 days for healing?? and he send them directly to the shadows epi!! i have to tell you taht you have the habit to amke daddy shows when the boys are out the sight and well. Ok so ..i´m sad ...i just finished this fic....so sad...i need a new one....oh gosh i need the world to stop spinning around jaja....let me know what´s the following fic sweety! see ya at the next fic hunni
Author's Response: You're not allowed to read another fic until you've healed, lady. Good Lord. But I do appreciate you telling me how much you enjoyed this story. And as for Brenna and Dean, when you're feeling better, you could check out "Within My Hands" and then "Into the Fire". ITF is set in Season 2, though, so just a spoiler warning there... I may one day write a story that connects John to the boys in more than flashbacks or having him show up after they've left or when they don't know he's there -- but I didn't feel like that was what he'd do, really, in Season 1 (with the exception of my favorite episode: Shadows). Just my take, though. Thank you again for taking time from your days to read this and to send me reviews. It means the world to me. GS Summary:
The New Orlean's job comes back to haunt Dean as he and Sam return to stop a series of murders, and end up discovering an evil they may not be able to defeat...with Dean's life in the balance. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 59227 [Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 04/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hi sweety!!! My doc doesn´t allow me to play with the computer any more because it make me worst. so i´m sooooooooooo mad!!!!!(insert a really angry smiley here). Maybe tonight i will be able to go home but...i can´t read from the computer for a day or two so...i gonna do it anyway jaja see ya then! Author's Response: Okay -- I hope you don't read this for several days! Rest well, heal, and take care of yourself and your noggin! This story and many others will be here when you return, and I will look forward to seeing what you think when you are actually able to read without pain. :) GS
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Date: 09/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Excellent start sweety!!! I love this since the very first word!!! I already hate Cale and Riggs! And i´m already insanelly wanting to keep reading!!! Amazing!!! see ya at the next chapter ( maybe it gonna take me a while to read the next one because i don´t have any more print paper)
Author's Response: Hey! So glad you are enjoying this one. I hope it holds your attention -- this was a fun one to write. I look forward to seeing what you think of the rest. GS
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Date: 18/04/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Finally sweety!!!! I was getting mad without your fics!!! I´m sorry i couldn´t review before but with my little wall/head problem and then i had another round of my depresion circle and my 2 different carrers....i was so busy, stressed and blue that it wasn´t right to review your fic. I absolutlly love this chapter. All the Dark vader jokes and DREAM ON is my favourite song!!!!!! Ok Cale sucks, riggs can jump from a cliff and i would cheer him....Josh...i love him , just another great character hun. This story is full of action and all the interaction between the boy that i totally love. You are one of the best brotherhood writer i have ever read!!!!! ok bed time...see ya when i have time (sorry again)
Author's Response: No need to apologize! I enjoy feedback whenever it comes. I just appreciate you taking time to read my story and let me know what you think. I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. It was a fun one to write -- even though the boys go through a bit of hell. :) Or, maybe because they do... GS
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Date: 19/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Great chapter as usual! love it all the way...i´m enjoying this trip so far. I won´t admit,never,ever that a single tear was rolling my face while reading this sad, sad, sad chapter...but it could be that is almost 3 am..... see ya in the new chapter!!1 Author's Response: I won't say that I'm pleased that my story moved you to tears since you're not admiting to them... ;) Thanks for continuing to review! I so enjoy seeing what you think. And I'm glad you're still enjoying it. GS
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Date: 20/04/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Review time!!!! I love this chapter, when everything was over and i realized it was only chapter 4 i said..ummmm what´s wrong? and Voila!!! a new withc in Dean´s head!! and...brenna!!! fantastic!!!! run to make a very strong coffee to be able to keep reading Author's Response: Mmmmmm coffee. Yeah, there are two baddies in this one. :) Heh. Couldn't make it easy on them, now could I? And having Brenna return seemed like the best way to help Sam help Dean help himself... if that makes sense. Hope you enjoy the rest!! GS
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Date: 22/04/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 para-papa-ra-ra!!!!!!!! Brenna to the rescue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! At first i love the Couless but now i hate them!!! That Beth is as evil as the witch. And Papa Couless is cold as ice!...they suck!! Come one Dean you can win this!! Ok, ok i´m insane now...you turn me in a insane girl shouting at my screen and in a mad mood because of the Couless, i even told a friend about this jajaja she didn´t understand a single word of what i was talking about. *****in a very shy and faint voice, almost as a whisper, i posted my fic the worst hunt if you want to read it, it´s not as good as yours.....sorry******** Author's Response: The Coulees were an example of how the Winchesters really can't trust anyone. Even "old friends". People will surprise you: both in good ways (like Brenna just dropping everything and coming to help them) and bad ways (like Beth's desperate attempt to kill Dean). But they also allowed Sam to step up and protect his brother, and I so love Sam when he does that. I dig that you were shouting at your screen - it's the best compliment a writer could ask for: an emotional reaction. :) Thanks so much for your continued reviews and interest in my stories. I clap when I get another review in my inbox because I know you've gotten another chapter done. :) **goes to bookmark Maria's story to read when baby sleeps and work is done...**
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Date: 23/04/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lot of action, angst, a decapitation, Brenna kicking some Coulee butts.... But i´m afraid there are 2 more chapters....ummmm....maybe the first witch knowing what could happen cut Sams hand in order to make a incantation or something like that to free her sister????? I can trust that everything is over and great.... let´s see what happend in the next chapter Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed this chapter! The struggle with the nightmare witch was pivotal to Dean winning the internal battle going on with him. And in this story... I couldn't end it when the bad guys being defeated. There is a lot of fall-out from their struggle... Hope you like it!
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Date: 23/04/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 ................ummm..............awwwwww...... actually i have no words...speachless.....just crying. my heart cried with Dean´s i wanna go home.........and.....and...since then i can´t see the words because the tears................ Author's Response: :) I'm glad you liked this. I wanted it to be moving. Hope you like what's to come... GS
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Date: 23/04/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Amanda naughty girl!!!!! It´s me or this room is damn hot!! i need a cold shower!!!!! Writing a sex scene isn´t easy hun but yours was beautiful. I love this fic.....not to much brothership just the right amount, Sam being the action heroe this time was a great thing. And what i can say about my Dean......just stop hurting his head, shoulder and right side!!!!!!in each one of your fics you hurt Dean in his shoulder and right side!!jajajaja ( for me is ok as i love hurt!Dean but sweety you know Dean has 2 sides??jaja)
I gonna run to read the next and ***cry and sobb*** last one. Author's Response: Dean has two sides?! *shock* Just kidding. I know I tend to gravitate to the right... I just think that he's right handed, so that's the side usually doing all the work and would be the side most vulnerable and also the most difficult to "do without" so to speak... I am starting to even out the injuries, though. :) I'm glad you liked the scene with Dean and Brenna... I thought that after all Dean went through, he deserved a little TLC. So glad you liked this story -- can't wait to see what you think of the next one. It's only temporarily the last, though... Midst breaks in the VS, I'll be working on another one. Thanks again for taking time to let me know what you think. GS
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Date: 23/04/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Amanda naughty girl!!!!! It´s me or this room is damn hot!! i need a cold shower!!!!! Writing a sex scene isn´t easy hun but yours was beautiful. I love this fic.....not to much brothership just the right amount, Sam being the action heroe this time was a great thing. And what i can say about my Dean......just stop hurting his head, shoulder and right side!!!!!!in each one of your fics you hurt Dean in his shoulder and right side!!jajajaja ( for me is ok as i love hurt!Dean but sweety you know Dean has 2 sides??jaja)
I gonna run to read the next and ***cry and sobb*** last one. Summary:
banner created by Kira Reed When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711 [Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 18/03/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 i.....I........i can´t......... thats trully love!!!!! that was beautiful...100 % love and devotion. Author's Response: Aw, thanks. :) Guess that answers my "hope chapter 5 impacts you" query. These boys get to me. Crawl under my skin and just stay. Looking forward to more reviews from you. :) GS
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Date: 18/03/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I gonna tell you a secretbut keep it between you and me: i´m a bit bored by the hurt!Sam , hurt!Dean and angst!Sam , angst!Dean...but your fic blown my mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love when you write that small pieces of flashbacks!!! An i love that you don´t write a hurt!somebody only for the pleasure of one of them being ill and tortured you make almost a poem of every feeling, every word. I can´t stop reading and i´m already sad because i know i´m more and more close to the end. Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. I am humbled by your response to this story. I really appreciate you saying you see a purpose to the pain. For me, it's the only pain that really works. I hope you enjoy the story as it progresses. Looking forward to seeing what you think. GS |
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