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Penname: moni9576 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: 27/08/08
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Summary:

  

*SPOILERS*  It's time for the journey down life's highway to continue.  For Dean and Sam this is just the beginning.  This is the rebirth of the Winchester Family.  This is time for retribution and for the war to finally end.  Continuation of The Black Parade:  the fourth season continues.  *banner by me*


Categories: Scripts, Romance, AU, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1596
[Report This] Published: 16/07/08 Updated: 17/07/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Teaser

Wow, what a cliffhanger!!!

 
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Date: 14/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Act One

Can`t wait for the next chapter!!!!

 
Vegitarians? by The Lizer Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: this is an attempt to do a crossover of the twilight series and supernatural.  it takrs place in the beginning of eclipse and after "no Exit" in season 2.  pls comment, its my first story, and id like to know if its any good.
Categories: Crossovers, Romance Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 829
[Report This] Published: 28/07/08 Updated: 30/07/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Just a crazy out-of-control Gang... Or not

Ok, I`m a little confused about who Joe is and what you wrote about John, it doesn`t really sound like him.  But other than that the story is turning out really interesting and I can`t wait for the next chapter.

 
Summary:

Sarah is a normal twenty six year old Doctor who has everything she ever wanted, her dream job and a loving boyfriend. But she has a stalker which changes her life dramatically. She goes through a series of events with her closest friends which will change all their lives which will make them think can things get any worse?

 

Contains Character deaths

disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters mentioned.


Categories: Crossovers Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 4646
[Report This] Published: 09/08/08 Updated: 20/11/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good cliffhanger!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you here is a lot more chapters so hopefully you will enjoy it i got good reviews for the stroy at erheadquarters so hopefully ill get the same one. lol

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This story is starting to get real interesting.  Cannot wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thank you!!! hope you wnjoy the story

 
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Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Who is Carter?  Is he from ER?  I love this story so far!

Author's Response: Yes he is and thank you

 
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Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

On the last review I forgot to write that I just loved that you x-over with Bones.  What was it that Sarah was going to help Dean with?

Author's Response: yes it was and thank you

 
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Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

How did he find her?  Didn´t Dean beat him up or anything to discourage him from looking for Sarah?

Anyway, cannot wait for an update!!!



Author's Response:

He has ways and he dosn't listen to Dean.

 
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Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG, what happened?  I can´t believe Becci and Shane got killed! Are those people working for Tom?

Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

I know lol and you'll have to wait and see

 
Summary:

 

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Weston Smith didn't realize he was a Winchester until his uncle came looking for him. Now him and Sam have to learn to hunt together despite their emotional baggage before things get out of hand in the supernatural world.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 21289
[Report This] Published: 30/08/08 Updated: 29/10/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I didn`t think this chapter was long. But you did left it with a cliffhanger.

Please don`t let us wait too long for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Really, you didn't think it was too long? That's good. x3

I'll try to keep the wait at a minimum. Thanks for reviewing, Monica!

- Sharp

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Dean is injured on a hunt, and what seems minor suddenly spirals into a life-threatening illness. Sam has an answer, but the solution could cost both their lives. Not Death fic.

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Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 8153
[Report This] Published: 06/09/08 Updated: 07/09/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

How does Sam know he is going to die? Is that in another story that you wrote? 

I just loved your story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Actually it is in an upcoming story. I hope to get to very soon!

Hugs, Muffy

 
Summary:

At no point in time did Rochelle ever remember falling for the jackass who tackled her to the ground, called her a bitch, and told her she looked fat in her pants. But stranger things have happened, like the fact like she seems unable to die.


Categories: Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2816
[Report This] Published: 25/09/08 Updated: 25/09/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed
Date: 15/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Tea Party for Two

Good beginning, I want to know what is going to happen next.

 
Summary: One-shot. Just like every warrior, Dean has a story. Character Sketch. First person POV. Reflective PWP. 
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Moments
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1809
[Report This] Published: 07/10/08 Updated: 07/10/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Story Of A Warrior

That was really good!!!  I would never have thought that that was what Dean would be thinking when he`s alone. It was awesome!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. ;). Yeah...every time I watch him on screen I'm thinking up new one-shots for him. lol. Trying to figure out what goes on in that mind of his. ;).

Thank you, again! :D. Awesome!! :).

 
Summary:

What would you take from someone that you had a grudge against?

How would you cope in a world of absolute isolation? With only your thoughts for company?

Dean's about to find out. Can Sam find a way to bring his brother back?

No spoilers, not set in any season in particular, although after season 1. Completely AU.

Supernatural is the property of the CW and Mr Kripke, what I do to the boys thought is all my own wicked imagination.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 58874
[Report This] Published: 08/10/08 Updated: 09/12/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/10/08 Title: Chapter 5: Dots And Dashes

I wonder if the girl that tortured Dean was Angela`s sister?  I`m so glad that Dean can communicate now. 

I love this story, it is very original!!!  Keep it up!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi there

Sorry can't tell you!! I needed a way for Dean to 'talk' for a chapter coming up...Morse code was the first thing that sprung to mind.

Thanks I'm glad you like this.

Cheers mary x

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/10/08 Title: Chapter 6: Screw Up

I just loved the scene where Bobby is just holding Dean in his arms and the tears are just being let out. That was beautiful.  Loved it!!!!

Author's Response:

HI there

I loved that too. Thanks for the really nice reviews

Mary xx

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/10/08 Title: Chapter 8: Friends, Family, Finds and Feelings

Did he piss off a witch? Because you mentioned a hex.

Now I think the woman who tortured Dean is Angela, the girl he couldn`t save.  If not, I cannot wait till the next chapter!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks for the review, glad that you're still enjoying it.

A witch?? I did mention a hex but then she didn't use a hex bag??

You think that its Angela? Mmmm??

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/08 Title: Chapter 11: Forgive Me

That was evil of you, leaving us with a ciiffhanger like that!   Older woman, huh?  Maybe Angela`s mother? I mean she did hate Dean for what happened to her daughter.

Anyway cannot wait till you update.



Author's Response:

Hi

Sorry, eleven chappies without a real cliffie was driving me crazy! But now that I've got one in I feel better. Angela's mum? looks that way doesn't it?? And she does hate Dean??

Update is on,

Thanks for the review, Mary x

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/11/08 Title: Chapter 14: From The Bottom The Only Way Is Up

Mary, please end his suffering soon.  I love how the story is going and I hope that those bitches get whats coming to them!!!

Author's Response:

Hi there

I will very soon, and then I'll fix him properly...I think!

The lovely ladies in this are gonna find that it doesn't really do to pick on a Winchester.

Thanks for the review, Mary x

 

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/11/08 Title: Chapter 19: Discovered In A Graveyard

Dean was stupid not to have told Sam.  At least then he would have known and got to meet her. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Hi there

It does seem stupid but he does have a good reason that even Sam won't be able to huff at.

Thanks, Mary x

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 20: Dark Day

You know, I didn´t wirte that I was glad that Dean is able to see, hear and talk but he is still suffering. I feel sorry for all the Winchesters. Update soon!

Author's Response: Hi there

I'm glad Dean is back too, easier to write when he can talk!

Thanks for the review, Mary xx

 
JoyRide by ladyinwhite Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

JoyRide Join Sam, Dean, Ruby and Chloe as they are on the scariest ride of their life. Dean pisses off the wrong Truck Driver with one of his pranks and the Truck Driver turns out to be a killer that Dean and Sam knows. Chloe gets kidnapped and the guys must save her. Dean gets tortured. Can the guys save Chloe, and get themselves out of this huge mess?

Banner is done by xlozx


Categories: General, One Shots, Crossovers, Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: JoyRide The Series: Sam, Chloe, Dean, Ruby, And Lois.
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 5532
[Report This] Published: 09/10/08 Updated: 19/12/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: It was no Accident, who done it?!

This story is getting really good.  Keep the chapters coming!!

 
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Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Not a funny Joke at all

Please get your next chapter up because I cannot wait for what is to come up next. 

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chloe is missing

How far was the phone from the crash?  Are they going to borrow another car to use or are they going to wait for the Impala to be restored?  Please update soon!!!!

 
Summary: this is something that was kinda floating in my head so it may suck royally
Categories: One Shots, General, Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 79
[Report This] Published: 15/10/08 Updated: 16/10/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: My Big Brother

It`s a cute poem.  Keep writing, this is really good.

 
Stranded by Bugsbunny2 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A possessed ferry-boat captain leaves a boat full of people on a deserted island.

And they aren't alone....

(I really am crap at summaries)


Categories: Romance, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 4742
[Report This] Published: 16/10/08 Updated: 15/01/09


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Are You Serious?!

This story sounds like it is going to be funny.  I loved it so far!