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Penname: moni9576 [Contact]
Real name: Monica
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Member Since: 27/08/08
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Phoenix by sojourner84 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

The fire took his life, but gave him purpose. It devoured his childhood, but allowed him to shield the innocence of another. It brought back his brother to him, but not without scars.



Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 999
[Report This] Published: 02/08/07 Updated: 02/08/07


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Phoenix

Wow!!! That really touched me. You captured Dean perfectly.  Why not write one about Sam?

 
Summary:

Letters from a brother to a brother

DemonDean

The picture really has nothing to do with the story, I just love the way it looks! 

 


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2177
[Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 08/10/07


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: 365 Peanut M&Ms

This story just made me cry when i read the letter Dean gave to Sam. It was just  beautiful.

 
Summary:

He looked at the passenger seat, and for a moment he didn’t understand why it was empty. Then his gaze found the huge hole in the windshield, explaining the shattered glass everywhere. He saw the ridiculously large log that his precious Impala’s front was crunched up against, crumpled and broken. He saw the empty highway the stretched for miles ahead of them.

And he saw the still form of Sam’s unmoving body lying facedown twenty feet away in an obvious puddle of blood on the paved road.


Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 12225
[Report This] Published: 15/10/07 Updated: 04/08/10


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

That was really sad.  So what happens now?  Are you going to start the next chapter years later and he meets someone (female) that reminds him of Sam? 

Author's Response:

NO!!!!!!

Don't worry, I will be updating this as soon as I get the last chappy of SEEMINGLY IMPOSSIBLE up, and another QUAKE. I will certainly not do a time jump, and I will not be introducing and OFC's. Ergh.

However, be prepared for a little bit of some intense Sammy in the next chapter.....That's right! You read it! Sam in the next chapter!!!!! -_^

OoOoOoOoOo!!!!

 Thanks for reviewing. Hope to see your comments again soon! 

 
Summary:

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Shortly after “Faith” a hunt goes wrong, leaving Sam dying and Dean alone trying to find a way to save his brother. While Sam's life hangs in the balance, Dean fights to get back the one thing that keeps him going.

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Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6734
[Report This] Published: 18/02/08 Updated: 18/02/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Typical Dean, never showing his emotions.  I just loved that he would sacrifice everthing for someone he cares about. This was a beautiful story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Sorry my reply has taken so long! Yes, Dean never really shows his emotions, but I htink in many ways he's more emotional than Sam. The fact that he would sacrifice everythign for someone he loves is his best point!

Thank you again, Hugs, Muffy

 
Summary:

It was as if that other life had never exsisted; Dean had woken up in the morning to find himself in a room he didn't recognize, and the sounds of children's footsteps in the hallway. Bewildered, Dean had gotten up and opened the door to see two little girls running from two boys.

"Daddy!" one cried, the smaller of the girls.


Categories: General, One Shots, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1138
[Report This] Published: 19/03/08 Updated: 19/03/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Silent Lucidity

I loved it!!!  It was kind of sad when Dean had to wake up to find that nothing had changed. It kind of reminded me of ´What a Wonderful Life`, you know, how his life would have been if certain events had been done differently.

 
Summary:

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Story Number Two in the 'Xander Winchester Verse'

Now that the big secret is out, how will the brothers handle it?


Categories: Crossovers, AU Characters: None
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Series: Alexander Winchester Verse
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 27848
[Report This] Published: 01/05/08 Updated: 18/11/09


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/10/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Two Four Six Eight..Who Do We Incenerate!?!

I`m glad that Xander was not killed.  This story is really getting interesting.  I want to know if Xander will go back to Sunnydale or will he stay with his brothers?



Author's Response:

I couldn't KEEP Xander dead!!!!!!

I only intended to wound him at first, but soo many people at 'Twisting The Hellmouth' (which is the other site I have my series in as well as my fanart for the series) wanted me to hurt him so Protective Dean could kick ass. Since everyone expected and WANTED me to hurt him, I figured I'd do one better and do something a little mean and UNEXPECTED by temperarily killing the Xan-man.

You won't find out if Xander goes back to Sunnydale until the fourth story 'Dead Man's Blood'....the one where Xander FINALLY meets his real father!!!

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/10/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Fire Crackles,Fire Crackles..Burn, Burn, Burn!

Ooooh, I just loved it!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!!

I'm working on Part 2 (with the second spirit) , so it's not over yet!!!! :)

 
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Date: 30/11/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 Guy Talk

Are they going to Sunnydale soon? I cannot wait until Dean and Sam meet Buffy and Willow.  Please update soon!


Author's Response:

It'll be awhile before anyone goes to Sunnydale. Wiether Xander goes with his brothers, or by himself, I'm not completly sure.

Though since Dean hasn't beaten Tony up, I know the other brothers have to show up eventually! :)

 
Summary: This is my own little mix on Supernatural and Charmed and anyother TV show i chose to put in this story.
Categories: Crossovers, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4179
[Report This] Published: 07/05/08 Updated: 18/04/09


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What kind of powers does Melinda have that is the same as her brothers? I think it`s cool that Piper and Leo`s kids are grown up.  But who is Bianca? and Are the other Charmed children in the story?

Author's Response:

Melinda has the same kind of powers as her mother and aunts. yea i love the show charmed and i just change the timeline a little, Bianca (from Chris-cross) is Melinda's friend and Chris's true love but she in love with Sam so kind of a love tirangle thing going on i'm trying to post soon, now that i know soneone is reading

so thanks

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/04/09 Title: The Changeover

I´m glad you started writing this story again.  I want to read more about Dean and Melinda and how their relationship progress. Are the Halliwell brother´s going to be part of the story? Please keep writing, I want to read more!!!!!

Author's Response: i will i wasn't sure if anyone liked it... i'll start it up again :) if you want more just ask.

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 19/04/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1.2

I cannot wait to to read the reactions on how Dean is going to react when he watches the girls fight off some demons!!  Please keep writing, this story is just starting to get really good.

Author's Response:

i'm now working with a beta, i'm going to change a little in the 1st three ch. so keep an eye out for that. and i'm working on the next ch. right now and having her look over it and then post it.  so maybe sometime this week it'll be post.

i'm happy to know you like my story.

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, love the changes, it made so much easier to understand the storyline.  Love it.  Keep it up.

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1.2

Death Eaters, that´s from the Harry Potter´s series, isn´t it?  Maybe not, because in the story they are demons. Please update soon because I want to read about what´s going to happen between the hunters and the demons.

 
White Room by bjxmas Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Summary:

Dean survived Hell and was on the road to recovery, but for every surge forward he’d fall back a step or two. His frustration at not being whole was growing. He wasn’t the man he used to be. Would he ever be that man again?

 

No Rest for the Wicked tag.

 

 


Categories: AU, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 68570
[Report This] Published: 15/05/08 Updated: 05/11/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/10/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - By the Grace of God, or Whatever

I could not stop reading once I started.  That is how good this story is.  It grabs your total concentration and you are oblivious to everything else until the very end.  Cannot wait till the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, what a truly lovely review and response to my story.  Thanks so much!  I hope the last chapter fulfills all your expectations.  Take care, B.J.

 
Summary: Primeval Demons Banner

 Banner made by the awesome Rae666! Thanks Rae, it's cool. 

 This is a crossover petween Primeval and Supernatural. It is set in series three of both shows.

WARNING: THIS STORY CONTAINS SPOILERS FOR    PRIMEVAL SERIES TWO!!


Categories: Crossovers Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 14834
[Report This] Published: 02/07/08 Updated: 22/10/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Forest Of The Damned

This story grabs your attention from the first sentence. 

What kind of creature is it? 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it! 

 

The creature is a mystery so far, and I can't really tell you with out giving away the story line!. Sorry. You'll have to read on I'm afraid

 

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/10/08 Title: Chapter 7: Where The Hell Is Dean?

I can`t believe that Dean did that!! What was he thinking?

Author's Response:

I will be posting the last few chapters soon, I have finnished writing it, but my Beta just needs to finish Beta-ing, and then it will be ready.

 

I'm so glad you like it, you're the only one who has reviewed this. Thanks for taking the time to review.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the stars by the way!!

 

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/10/08 Title: Chapter 10: Waterfall

Dean and Conner have the same attitudes, don`t they?  That is just funny! 

You know I have never seen Primeval and I watched it on BBC on demand, the show is really interesting and I got the whole anomoly that they were talking about in your story.  I love your story. Keep the chapters coming, please!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, it's really good to hear that someone loves the story.

I'm glad you like Primeval. Don't worry, I'll be posting more chapters soon!

 
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Date: 13/10/08 Title: Chapter 11: "Wait, you're Sam?"

Wait, wait, so when did they get jumped? Was it when Dean was helping Evelyn out of the cave? So, is the creature a man?  So many questions, you don`t really have to answer if you don`t want to.  Just curious.

Can`t wait till the next chapter, it is getting really good.



Author's Response:

They got jumped a little while after they climbed out of the cave.

As for your other question? The answer is in the next few chapters. I can't say becasue if anyone else reads the reviews for the story, it'll give it away. sorry.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/10/08 Title: Chapter 12: The Truth Is A Deal With Disaster

OMG!!! This is so far the best chapter that I have read, because THis brings both the anomlies from Primeval and the demons for Supernatural together in one story. My name is Monica.  I am so glad to have more chapters to read. Thank you!!!!!  

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/10/08 Title: Chapter 13: "I've Lost People...."

Thank you so much for answering my question!  Cannot wait to read the next chapter.

 
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Date: 17/10/08 Title: Chapter 14: Escape Had Better Work This Time...

Are there more than just 3 demons  in the other dimension? I wonder who is giving the orders? You do not have to answer the second question if you don`t have to.

Keep the chapters coming!!!!



Author's Response:

There are more than three, but to find out who is in charge, you'll have to read! :-D

I will be posting the last two chapters soon. All the questions will be answered then. Plus a few surprises!!



Author's Response:

I meant there aren't more than three. Sorry, there are just three.

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21/10/08 Title: Chapter 16: Devil's Trap

So resourceful, aren`t they?  Nice work.

Author's Response: Thanks, devils'traps do come in handy :)

 
Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/10/08 Title: Chapter 17: A Shout From In The Distance

What a way to die!!  I`m just glad that the good guys are still alive and kicking!

Author's Response: :D I'm happy you like it :D

 
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Date: 23/10/08 Title: Chapter 18: "Dragged back down to Hell....probably"

Good ending.  Cannot wait for the sequel! 

Author's Response: I hope to start reading it soon.

 
Summary:

*SPOILERS*  It's time for the journey down life's highway to continue.  For Dean and Sam this is just the beginning.  This is the rebirth of the Winchester Family.  This is time for retribution and for the war to finally end.  Continuation from The Black Parade:  the Rebirth (4.1) - the fourth season continues.  *banner by me*


Categories: Scripts, Romance, AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Black Parade
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 5404
[Report This] Published: 10/07/08 Updated: 14/07/08


Reviewer: moni9576 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: Finale

Wow, your story is captivating.  Keep it coming!!!