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It started with fire, as their perfect life ended in flames. Three POVs as the night Mary died is remembered. 2009 Fire Challenge story.
Thanks to the awesome ilaria for my very first story banner! Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1874 [Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 21/07/09
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 Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Fire "The scream from that night lasted the rest of my life." This line was really powerful to me, so heartbreaking and so true. "Whatever voice remained was reserved for tiny ears, whispering so low that no one beyond their tight embrace could hear." I loved this, the image of Dean only speaking for Sam. The whole story was really poetic and lyrical, and also so poignant, heartbreaking and bittersweet. Great job on this! Very well written. Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely review. I love imagining little Dean caring for baby Sammy. Dean lost everything and Dad was distant and different, and for a four-year-old, I just see him holding on so tight to Sammy, comforting him and in his own way getting comfort back from the warmth of his little brother, from the certainty that he still had him. Take care, B.J. Summary:
 Maybe Sam was right, he'd watched one too many Romero films.Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 102 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 LOL I love fics where the boys go up against zombies. Great summary, and nice use of the challenge words. You worked them all together really well. Thanks so much for your kind words. Ewwwe!! Zombies freak me out. I loved this challenge. Crystal Summary:
Countdown Drabble Challenge. One of the brothers reflects on his destiny.Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, sad. Nice use of the challenge words. My first thought was that it was Dean thinking, but I guess it could be Sam, too. Who'd you have in mind? This was a really fun challenge to do. Thanks for letting me know about it! Author's Response: You're welcome. Thank you for reading this one. I did a lighter one too titled Consolation. They were fun to write.
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Two figures hunting some fright, in the cemetery's moonless night. Countdown Drabble Challenge Categories: General, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 184 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 25/08/09
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Date: 05/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Essential Parts Wow, you managed to fit in a ton of titles and still keep it having the rhythm of the poem. Nice work. Summary:
An unsatisfactory conclusion to a hunt leaves Dean restless and Sam needing answers. Here's my effort for the UnGen pre season five drabble challenge. By my word count it's 100 on the nose Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: More Than a Feeling Nice, you managed to work a ton of stuff in there, and it all flowed together really nicely. Sounds like an interesting hunt, wish you'd made this longer so we could hear about it, LOL. Great job working in Jared's movie title, too. Yeah, this challenge is really addictive, LOL. Summary:
Settle down, and get the blankets all tucked in right, and let me finish the book we've been reading. You want to find out what happens to the Winchesters, don't you? Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 105 [Report This] Published: 25/08/09 Updated: 25/08/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What a clever idea, to use an outsider POV as if it's someone reading one of Chuck's books. Nicely done. Good use of the words, too. I especially loved the first line. And personally, I REALLY hope Kripke ends the series just like you've done here. This was such a fun challenge to do, good work! Author's Response: Thank you! I really love using an outsider's point of view- all of my stories have used it. I know it's not the most popular for people to read, but I find that I like sneaking up on the boys and seeing them from a different angle. THIS was fun because I was working on storytelling stuff, so I had "Once upon a time" and "Happily Ever After" on the brain. It was fun trying to capture the language of a folk tale or fairy tale and work it in. Thanks again for your review! Summary:
Another entry for the countdown challenge. I'm hooked... Dean's stuck in the woods, but he isn't as alone as he thinks he is... Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 97 [Report This] Published: 26/08/09 Updated: 26/08/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Really interesting use of the words. Poor Dean. I was hoping that Sam hallucination would give way to the real Sam coming to find him. Yeah, this is a totally addictive challenge. I'm exerting extreme willpower to work on other projects instead of just doing more of these. We'll see if that lasts, LOL. Summary:
This is for the Season 5 UnGen challenge.Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 26/08/09 Updated: 27/08/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Aww, so sad. Poor Sammy. Great use of the challenge words, though. They fit together very nicely. This was a fun challenge to do, and you did a great job with it! Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words. I am glad that you liked it. Summary:
Ungen Countdown Drabble Challenge set mid-fourth season, generic fourth season spoilers.Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 27/08/09 Updated: 27/08/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oooh, very nice use of the words, I had to go back through to pick up on some of them. Very smooth. You even used one more than you had to, nice! Loved the name of the mystery spot. LOL Author's Response: Hi Beth, Thanks (way late) for reveiwing, I thought I was caught up, and then discovered that I'm not. I needed to come up with another name for the mystery spot, something specific enough to leave no doubt what kind of business it was...and this is what I came up with. Glad it worked for you. Sue Summary:
As Dean struggles to fulfill his destiny, his guardian angel, Cas, offers a prayer. I hope this is the last one in the Summer Countdown Episode Title Challenge. Tree...it is addictive, just like Sammy's demon blood.
Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: Every Word Has Meaning Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 103 [Report This] Published: 29/08/09 Updated: 29/08/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dean's Destiny Holy cow, you fit a LOT of titles in there! That's really impressive. Nice job. Summary:
Entry for the countdown challenge. Sam questions Dean's choice of TV watching.
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 107 [Report This] Published: 29/08/09 Updated: 29/08/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Looney Tunes You're right, this was a ton of fun to do and really addictive. Thanks for urging me to do one. Nice job on this. Very smooth use of the titles, and you used one of the long ones, too. Nice bit of trivia on Taz. Love that Dean makes the distinction between the cartoon version of the Tasmanian Devil and the real one, I like that he knows there is a real one. Author's Response: Hi Beth, Glad you dropped by to read my second titles drabble, I couldn't resist the idea of using Bugs Bunny for Bugs, and this was the result! Thanks for the reveiw, and sorry for the untimely response. Sue Summary:
Another little drabble for the challenge. Categories: General, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 04/09/09 Updated: 04/09/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: For He Is My Brother WOW, this was absolutely beautiful. Fantastic job with interesting and unexpected use of the titles, and it read like poetry. I loved the message, too. I hope you post this over on ffnet so I can add it to my favorites. This was such a fun challenge to do, and you really nailed this one. Excellent work! Author's Response: HI bhoney Thank you. I tried to mess abou with the longer titles in this one and the little end parts of the lines were my inspiration, I loved the message as well. Will probably post them all as one over at FFnet soon. I loved this challenge, it really got you thinking didn't it? Thanks again, Mary x Summary:
John may be long gone from this world, but he is never very far away and he will always watch over his boys. Countdown Challenge drabble. Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 04/09/09 Updated: 04/09/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Awww, sweet. I love John and love the idea of him watching over them. Nice use of the words, too, you fit a lot of them in there. I especially liked your use of TKAA and IMTOD. Nice job! Thank you so much for the review. Yes I reckon John would still be around watching somewhere, still trusting Dean to do the right thing. Jacq Summary:
Tag to episode 5.6. Spoilers up til that episode. Sam finds out the hard way what Dean saw in 2014. Angsty!Sam, Protective!Dean Rated T for some language.
Thanks to Chasidern for the awesome banner! Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2587 [Report This] Published: 30/10/09 Updated: 30/10/09
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Date: 31/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey there! Welcome to the fray! LOL I have been fiercely avoiding S4 and 5 fic, but I thought I'd give this a look, since it's your first post here. "Sam nodded but he couldn’t get the image out of his mind. He had crushed his brother’s neck like he was a bug and as he watched, Lucifer was whispering in his ear: You will say yes." I actually think Sam finding out Lucifer had killed Dean while possessing him is a really good reason to tell Sam what happened in 2014. He'd never agree to house Lucifer if he knew it would result in his brother's death. I'm glad you let him find out here. "He was filthy with other people’s blood and no amount of scrubbing could ever remove the dark stain from his soul." Wow. Powerfully said. And such a sad image--Sam in the shower, sitting and crying. Heartbreaking. Loved that Sam overheard Dean's conversation with Cas and the boys talked. I'm glad Sam believed Dean, too. “He’s the freaking prince of lies!” Yes--I wish they'd point this out on the show! People keep taking what Lucifer says as truth. "“Hey Dean,” Sam’s voice was slightly slurred. “What do you think the road to redemption is paved with?” Dean smiled. “Lots of ass-kicking, I hope.” LOVED this ending. Great question, and perfect Winchester response. Good writing! And again--welcome! *hug* Author's Response: Thanks so much! And again, thanks for helping me out the other day. I'm just wondering why you've been avoiding S4 & 5 fics. I really feel honored that you read mine! Thanks for the heads up about the reviews. :) I get worried if I don't get reviews but it never stops me from writing! Summary: A chance meeting and a jacked hunt leaves one brother doubting and another with a choice to make
Set in Season 2, immediately after the episode What Is And What Should Never Be Happy Belated Birthday, BHoney!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 25095 [Report This] Published: 11/12/09 Updated: 01/01/10
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Date: 28/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great setup for the case. Love the introduction of Sam's Stanford buddies and Dean's vulnerability with them around. Also loved the silent communication when Dean checked on Sam from across the room. "You're not still pining for that blonde girl, are you? What was her name? You know, the one who died." Hard to believe there are actually people out there who are SO insensitive. I wanted to kill Felicia for the comment she made that hurt Dean, too. I'm glad we found out it wasn't true, I just wish Dean knew that, too. Lovely start! :) Author's Response: Thanks, Beth - I was so relieved that you liked it. It was a long time coming, but I got it in before the new year - thankfully - lol. And yes, there are actually people out there like Felicia - and worse..... As for Dean - well, he's got a long hard road to travel with this hunt - lots more angst before we're through. Jules
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Date: 28/12/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Okay, I know I've already raved to you via email about this story, but just wanted to say again how much I'm enjoying it. Loved Dean's near panic attack--I love stuff like that in a fic, when Sam has to calm him down--and how the djinn Sam's words keep haunting him. Great progress on the case, too, very interesting twist. And this made me laugh: "Jeez, do they teach that freakin' line to all the kids at Stanford, or just the stubborn-ass ones?" Author's Response: Yes, you did - I believe you even added an "Ack!" or two - or was that for the third chapter - LOL. Thank you for that. Yes, poor Dean just had the proverbial rug pulled right out from under him when his Sam said the exact same words the Djinn-Sam had spoken, without Sam even realising what he'd done. Everything is just serving to unbalance Dean more, from the reality shifts to his worry over Sam meeting up with his friends. And to make matters worse, the hunt is about to go south..... Jules
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Date: 28/12/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 VERY suspenseful chapter--I loved the fact that you included a revenant, not enough fics about them. Matt was kinda a jerk in this. I was a little surprised Dean would have to explain about them being wanted by the FBI--I'd have thought Rebecca would've mentioned that Dean got blamed for the shapeshifter thing when she told Matt about it. Anyway, I wanted to deck Matt for mouthing off about Dean and making assumptions. Poor Dean! Love that he took off though, because I know that Sam will go after him and they'll finally talk. *rubs hands gleefully* Wonderful story, Jules! Author's Response: Thanks, Beth. I wanted something a little different to a normal vengeful spirit, but something that the boys could mistake for one in the early stages. I tried to be as inventive as I could with the deaths - lol - hope it worked. And the revenant just fitted nicely. Yes, Matt is being a moron. I think there is a little nasty surprise waiting for him in the final chapter. Re the FBI - Becca and Zach might have mentioned them being in trouble with the law, but the FBI trouble came about later, so they might not have known about the increased law problems. Ahh, you're waiting for that all-important chick-flick moment? Depends on whether Dean gets himself into a spot of trouble before Sam finds him........dun-dun-dunnnnnn..... Jules
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Date: 02/01/10 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue This was my absolute favorite chapter--it had the much-awaited talk, healing between the brothers, Sam determinedly hunting down Dean, Sam telling Matt off, reassuring Dean he's not going to just ditch and go back to school--what's not to love? *g* Really wonderful, I've read it several times now. :) This was an utterly perfect bit of dialogue, so adeptly showing the difference between the boys: ""Oh, no, you're not gonna ambush me with those puppy eyes." "Only you would call a simple conversation an ambush." "Yeah, well - only you would ambush people with a so-called simple conversation."" LOL Loved that Sam leaned into Dean's touch, and that it showed him that this really was HIS Sam, and that Sam got how much the djinn-Sam rejecting touch hurt his brother. Also love that Dean echoed Sam's words to Matt at the end. Lovely little touch to show how in sync the boys are and how well they know each other. I love, love, LOVE this story. *clutches it tightly to chest* THANK YOU for an amazing birthday present!! :)
Author's Response: Hey, Beth! LOL, there was a lot packed into this chapter, wasn't there? But all the threads had to be pulled together and neatly tied off, so it was all moving towards this point. I love showing not only the diversity of the brothers, but also the syncronicity of them as well. That wonderful scene in The Usual Suspects when the boys got hold of pen and paper and started working on the puzzle of the ghost's message, then both calling the poor solicitor Matlock - just shows how well their minds are aligned. Theyr'e different, but they sometimes think and work the same. And that's their strength. Yep, Dean really needed to see those differences between his Sam and the Djinn-Sam so he could finally break the hold those memories had on his mind. The bitch/jerk exchange and Sam willingly leaning into Dean's touch sealed it for him - he was home. This life was the reality. Hun, it was a pleasure and a privilege to write this for you. And thank you for being patient with me. You made a perfect choice on the timeline - it wouldn't have had quite the same angsty impact if we'd set it in S1. So, Happy Birthday - belated as it is. I'm so glad you loved the end result. Jules
Reviewer: bhoney Signed
Date: 02/01/10 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue Ooh, I forgot to say that I ADORED this part: "He recognised that hand; knew it like he knew his own - right down to the tiny white circular scar on the first joint of the index finger. He remembered holding a much smaller version of it when he was younger, feeling a warm glow in his heart as the short, pudgy fingers clung to his like a lifeline. In fact, he had gripped that hand, or its mate, tightly for most of their lives, through all kinds of situations from the first day at school to a hunt gone wrong or the aftermath of a nightmare." *sniffle* That right there would make a lovely fic all on its own--6 Times Dean Held Sam's Hand--I can see it now, it would be so sweet. *tear* You should write it. Stop bribing my muse! That's NOT fair - do you know how many WIP's are sitting gathering cyber-dust in my folder????? I don't need another idea!!!!! Having said that, my muse responded rather interestingly to your bribe, and hopefully there will be something in your in-box in the next few days........*smiles mysteriously*..... Jules Summary:
Written for a Christmas fic exchange. Dean kills a witch, but there are complications afterwards. Rated T for swearing and content.Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2274 [Report This] Published: 30/12/09 Updated: 30/12/09
Reviewer: bhoney Signed
Date: 31/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Stripped Bare Hey, Sue! Again--great job on this. I forgot to mention that I loved this line: ""Because you'll only get mad" – Sam took in Dean's glaring eyes – "-der."" *snicker* I'm so glad the fic exchange worked out so well and produced such great stories--and this one's even got a featured ribbon! Well deserved!! Funny and in-character. Author's Response: Hi Beth, Thanks for reviewing again;-) I really owe Ness a big thank you for the idea, too. Sue |
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