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Real name: diana Status: Member Member Since: 29/07/08 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by fitz Summary: Expanded again to 5x10. MAJOR SPOILERS!
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3942 [Report This] Published: 26/04/09 Updated: 18/02/10
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Date: 19/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Please keep going. You're dead on with Bobby's POV and his take on what's happening to the boys is so relevant. It adds another dimension to our understanding of the boys experieces. I'd be keen to read a Bobby POV tag to the end of My Bloody Valentine. Cheers Summary:
Underneath the desert, something's stirring. An ancient monster, demi-gods and spirit dancers and more twists than you can shake a rock-salt-loaded-sawn-off at: Can our intrepid heroes figure out who's on their side and who's sneakier than a used-car salesman? Or is this the end of the line for the Winchesters...
Round Robin story, dedicated with HUGEST thanks on Thanksgiving to the folks that make this site so awesome. Whump, angst and guns galore! Categories: Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 53485 [Report This] Published: 26/11/09 Updated: 20/01/10
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Date: 26/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Up Snake Creek, by calUK Love it. What a brilliant idea getting all of you together to write as a team. Looking forward to the next chapter. Cheers Glad you liked it! Cal Summary:
 Castiel writes a letter to Santa
Thanks to Chasidern for the lovely banner! Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 309 [Report This] Published: 08/12/09 Updated: 09/12/09
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Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I loved that Castiel considered himself to be stationed at Bobby's place. Very military-speak, like his former garrison. Cool. And so Castiel-logical, that is if Santa really knows all the things the kids think he does then he should know God's location! Your letter rocked - it made me smile. Cheers I'm glad I could make you smile! Cas has loosened up quite a bit but I still thought if he wrote a letter to Santa he'd be all business. :) Thanks for the review! Summary:
"Back in 1835, when Haley's comet was overhead, the same night those men died at the Alamo, they say Samuel Colt made a gun. A special gun. He made it for a hunter - a man like us, only on horseback. The story goes, he made 13 bullets. This hunter used the gun a half dozen times before he disappeared, the gun along with him. They say.... They say this gun can kill anything." Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 16877 [Report This] Published: 19/12/09 Updated: 02/01/10
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Date: 02/01/10 Title: Chapter 3: One Hand On The Bottle, One Foot In The Grave You're a wonderfully evocative writer. I could smell, taste and wince at every moment as the story unfolded. As a resident lurker I seldom riase my head above the parpet to review but this story of yours was just too damn satisfying to pass up. Thanks for the experience. Cheers Summary: Matthew, Mark, Luke, John and… Dean?
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1401 [Report This] Published: 20/12/09 Updated: 20/12/09
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Date: 20/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Loved the tone, very Pythonesque, it suits Castiel's character perfectly. Is there any more? I'd be keen to read more of the same style on other episodes. Cheers Summary:
SPOILERS FOR SEASON 5 (now that was unexpected!). After the closing moments of season three, Dean finds his way back to his family. Or does he? Completely AU as of end of season three, as if seasons 4 and 5 never happened. Rated T for language and if we're really lucky, bloody fights!
Categories: AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 25660 [Report This] Published: 10/01/10 Updated: 31/01/10
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Date: 01/02/10 Title: Chapter 10: It's A Secret. I Could Tell You, But Then I'd Have To Kill You Terrific. This is one of my favourite stories of yours. And you're spot on with the ending. I'm a sucker for stories that make me smile and it just wouldn't have been right to leave Dean dead. You've made my day and Better Out Than In is a deserved addition to my favourites. Thanks for the pleasure you give. Cheers Summary: There won't be any trumpets blowing. No voices raised in victory. And definitely no happy endings.
Categories: One Shots, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 193 [Report This] Published: 02/03/10 Updated: 02/03/10
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Date: 03/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Acceptance Yes. Bleak but beautifully expressed. It rings true and makes the heart feel heavy with the inevitability. However, as much as I believe the Winchesters are doomed to lose this battle, it is Supernatural after all, and perhaps they can still win the war. As you suggested we yearn for that glimmer of hope even in midst despair. Cheers. Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I believe they can win the war because they're just that stubborn. Lol. To do it though will take something extraordinary. I'm very much looking forward to seeing it unfold. Summary:
Dean thought it sounded like a simple enough hunt. But when was anything simple when your surname was Winchester? A simple salt and burn near the small town of Gerty, Oklahoma turns to disaster for the Winchester Brothers. Spoilers for season 5: Set immediately after 5.6 I believe The Children Are Our Future. Categories: Action, Misc Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58728 [Report This] Published: 14/03/10 Updated: 08/04/12
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Date: 15/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Simple Salt and Burn I got a little confused between your Sam and Dean POVs in this chapter but I love your stories. Cliffhangers, damn, they're hard on the patience. I need the next chapter. Please. cheers. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I didn't mean to confuse you with the POV's, I thought it clear who was who, but then I wrote it so that's easy for me to say!! Anyhoo chapter 2 not far away. Summary:
Dean is arrested in Boston, Massachusetts. There's only one lawyer capable of getting him off - and you know who that is. But does Dean want to be acquitted? No spoilers for season five.
Categories: Crossovers, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 11358 [Report This] Published: 21/03/10 Updated: 31/03/10
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Date: 21/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: One What a delicious crossover. Only Alan Shore would relish the case of defending a charmingly lethal demon killer, and still believe he could win it. You've nailed Alan brilliantly. His self-satisfied delivery of clearly enunciated words, using ten where one would have done. Just perfect. I think this is going to be one of my favourites. cheers. Summary:
Pre-series. Sam’s gone to Stanford and Dean is trying to cope. Rated T for bad language. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3525 [Report This] Published: 26/04/10 Updated: 26/04/10
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Date: 28/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue I read this and couldn't avoid that lump in the throat. Saved it to favourites then coudn't get it out of mind, so read it again and again. You nailed Dean. He really has been badly damaged by the undeserved losses in his life. The fact that he continues to function as well as he does is testament to his remarkable spirit. Thank you for your story. Awesome stuff. Summary: Coda to 'Swan Song. Lisa's POV since the day she first met Dean up to all the events that unfolded after that.
Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2244 [Report This] Published: 15/05/10 Updated: 15/05/10
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Date: 15/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yes. Well done. Dean deserves so much more than life has ever granted him. Lisa's hug was so heartfelt. Your story's not perfect... but it's close, and it's in my favourites to read again. Thank you. Summary: Just a little scene from the life of teenage Sam & Dean. It's not easy to be a Winchester.
Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1236 [Report This] Published: 23/05/10 Updated: 23/05/10
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Date: 24/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: This town A good first shot. Well done. I think you nailed Dean and John and, whilst I hate to think of Sam as so petulent and self-centered, I suppose he's no differnt than any other 14 year old who has lost the concept of gratitude. I'd like to read more stories by you. Thank you. Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I'm glad you liked it. However I can't promise to publish anything else soon - me and my muse are having serious issues again. Summary: With the end of days looming, the oldest secret of ancient times is about to resurface. A call for help from Castiel lures the Winchesters and Bobby to Egypt, where a new facet of Lucifer's plan stirs. Hindered by their unorthodox traveling arrangements, Dean will struggle against a new definition of himself and the one thing that has become the Winchesters greatest fear: old prophesies.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 104693 [Report This] Published: 18/07/10 Updated: 18/07/10
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Date: 20/07/10 Title: Chapter 21: Story notes and translations I enjoyed this story. I've never been to Egypt but your descriptions gave me feel for the place, a world as foreign as it is ancient. Making Dean experience it blind was a stroke of genius, as was having him wield Michael's sword. I've always felt a little robbed that Dean never got to face off against Lucifer in cannon, so your conclusion was heartily satisfying. Thank you for your tremendous effort. Cheers. Cool! That was exactly the idea, to take whoever read the story on a trip to Egypt :) I've very glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing! Summary: It had taken him longest to perfect the smile. Oneshot. Spoilers for 6.1.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 275 [Report This] Published: 27/09/10 Updated: 27/09/10
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Date: 29/09/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bravo. Watching the exceptionally restrained Sam in 6.01 being so undemonstrative reminded me of how Castiel first treated Dean, like he was some sort of curiosity. And so I wondered if Sam was sprung from the cage, then where's Michael? What if....You nailed my paranoia with eloquence. Nicely done. cheers. Author's Response: Glad it worked for you! I'd love this to be what happens on the show, but I can't see them going this way somehow. I don't think a lot of fans would like the idea of Sam not really being Sam for any part of the season! Summary:
Cicero has been quiet and safely boring since the Winchesters got rid of the Changelings, but now, something ancient and evil is stirring, and Dean's new apple pie life is about to be disturbed.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 4209 [Report This] Published: 19/10/10 Updated: 25/10/10
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Date: 21/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is a great start. Your expression of just how damaged Dean still feels is powerful. I especially appreciated your thought that Castiel could mend Dean's broken body but even an angel couldn't repair a tortured soul. Nicely done. I'm pleased, too, you have Dean running in his boots. Being ex-military myself we had to run in our combat boots. It's hard but one's feet adapt eventually. It rings with authenticity. You've got me hooked and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. cheers. Summary:
A series of 100 ficlets, one for almost all the episodes aired, from season 1 to 6. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 20085 [Report This] Published: 23/10/10 Updated: 23/10/10
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Date: 25/10/10 Title: Chapter 6: Season 6 I've so enjoyed these. Each short segment brought back a flurry of shared memories. I am especially impressed with your Dark Side of the Moon thought. I've always considered that Dean knew about Sam going to College and keeping it a secret from John, and I've imagined a multitude of reasons why. But your explanation I did not anticipate. It's both succinct and spot on. Thank you for this. cheers. Author's Response: You know, I had read a bunch of awesome stories about the events of that particular night, but when I sat down to think about it, the explanation became very simple and clear. I'm very glad you liked it! Summary: Immediately after 6.09, Sam faces it all and decides it is time to finally talk to his brother. A sliver of hope for Thanksgiving. Happy Thanksgiving all
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1122 [Report This] Published: 23/11/10 Updated: 23/11/10
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Date: 24/11/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Intriguing concept. Almost Machiavellian in its simplicity and certainly a move I could imagine Lucifer trying to pull off. I like it immensely, and particularly appreciate that you ensured Dean got it right away and immediately stood in support of switching to Plan B. No theatrics just unconditional support. Nicely done. Thank you. Summary: Kidnapped by hunters who want to know if certain rumors are true, Sam finds himself confronted with the fear of using his powers against his own brother. – SET IN SEASON 4
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10828 [Report This] Published: 10/01/11 Updated: 10/01/11
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Date: 10/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Cornered Great story. You had me hooked from the start. And don't worry about the language thing, if you keep writing stories as good as this no-one will notice. Keep it up, I'd love to read more. Cheers. Oh, wow! That's one of the best compliments I ever got, thank you! I'm going to post a few more stories later on, so I'd love to see you again! Take care, Summary: Not exactly a coda to 'Frontierland', though spoilers abound; not exactly a story about souls, though they play a very important part. This is a story about friends, brothers and duty. Warnings for language.
Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3841 [Report This] Published: 26/04/11 Updated: 26/04/11
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Date: 27/04/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Phew! My heart's still pounding. The ultimate betrayal of trust - so keenly, brutally expressed - it made me feel almost nauseous. Please, you cannot leave it there. Author's Response: Ah... not sure nauseous is the reaction I was going for *g* Sorry, but this is a one-shot deal *pats back* Thank you for reading! Summary:
6.21 Let It Bleed tag - I promised myself this wouldn’t happen, that Ben wouldn’t have the life I had, and yet, it spun out of control so fast. Before I knew it…
Banner by the amazing highvoltagerock! Thanks Dream! Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 467 [Report This] Published: 02/08/11 Updated: 02/08/11
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Date: 03/08/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 You nailed it. I remember thinking when I watched the episode that Dean was wrong to have their memories erased. Despite the distress his friendship had brought to their door they wouldn't have ever wished to have never known him. But this story is so right. From Dean's perspective, as heart breaking as it was, he had no other choice. Thank you for your insight. Added to my favourites. Fitz Author's Response: Thanks! And that is what's so sad and wrong, Dean thinks this is best and yet how can he believe they are better to have never known him? Lisa said it was the best year of her life. Yes, trouble came, misunderstandings and danger...but I wanted them to work it out, find a way, throw away the rule book and make it work. Maybe someday...when all the evil is vanquished and fate gives Dean a second chance. Where there's life there's hope. Take care, B.J. Summary:
Mid-season 4, after Sex and Violence. The boys are hunting when they probably shouldn’t be...too soon after the siren’s spell to be working together comfortably.
Banner by Chasidern Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 20668 [Report This] Published: 27/08/11 Updated: 30/09/11
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Date: 29/08/11 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Really enjoying the first person narrative. It must be tough getting into Dean's screwed up noggin' but you seem to be pulling if off. Looking forward to seeing that fugly going down - especially through Dean's eyes. Thank you. I'm so glad you're enjoying this! I'm sorry to say that my own screwed up noggin is very similar to Dean's in many ways (not all, thankfully!) so it's not that much of a stretch to get inside it...good for writing SPN fanfic, not so good for real life! Nancy Summary:
There is a creature that feeds on the sorrows of man. How can the Winchesters and Bobby stop it? With a little help the local sherrif, a demon/angel hybrid (from Dogs of War, my first story), comes to the rescue. Please note this story contains ADULT CONTENT and as such is not suitable for children Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 46448 [Report This] Published: 27/08/11 Updated: 21/09/11
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Date: 05/09/11 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Enjoying the story immensely. Loved the beer opening synchronised move between Dean and Angie - could picture it going down and it had me laughing out loud. Looking forward to more. Cheers. Summary: Sam and Dean hunt a mythical creature that might be behind a series of disappearances. When the hunt goes wrong, things change forever. A very special, anniversary fic so a wondrous, most mimsiest collection of everything including hurt!Dean, hurt!Sam and maybe the end of the world.
Categories: General Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 8202 [Report This] Published: 17/09/11 Updated: 30/09/11
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Date: 17/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Okay. Heart in mouth, I had to re- read this twice. Imagination runnng wild at this stage not sure I should pause for breath or just leap boldly into the first chapter. Oh, what the heck. I never could stop at one piece of chocolate and this inspired story of yours is truly delicious. Wonderful stuff. Thank you for the pleasure. Oh thank you so much! I am so glad you took the leap with and dove into the story! I promise it will rumble a long and a mimsiest pace! Nothing will be outgrabe! Thank you so much for reading *hugs* Muffy Summary:
 Something evil has crawled from deep in the bowels of the Earth, an evil so terrible it has been banished for centuries. Now, Mother has decided her fearsome child may walk the surface again. Angst, pain and brother bonding.. Set just after S6 : 14Categories: General Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 23821 [Report This] Published: 21/09/11 Updated: 15/10/11
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Date: 29/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Am liking this a lot. Story's coming along nicely. Dean must already be feeling pretty much chewed up and spat out, so making him throw up on himself - that's pretty hard core. Pleased that Vadar's still in the story. Looking forward to the next installment. Cheers. Summary: Reality is but a mere point of view, fueled by the emotions it stirs. For Dean, reality is a life where he has lost everything: his brother, his friends, Lisa... his legs. The only thing Dean has left is Ben, a surrogate son that is about to be taken from his hands as well.
For Sam and Bobby, reality is a constant search for someone that they have lost and keeping each other hopeful that their quest will not be in vain. And for some, reality is all that stands between them and their dreams of becoming more than humans. This is a story about the same event, experienced from three different points of view. Trust no one; take nothing for a fact. Assume only that illusion and reality are twin sides of the same mirror. Categories: General Characters: Ben Braeden, Bobby Singer, Castiel, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 57693 [Report This] Published: 01/10/11 Updated: 01/10/11
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Date: 04/10/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Excellent opening chapter. Just enough parallels between the storylines to keep things really interesting. Love the suspense. Can't wait to discover how this all pans out so I'm just going to jump right into the next installment. Thank you for the pleasure. Cheers. |
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