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Penname: Nervegirl88 [Contact]
Real name: Barbara
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Summary:

Could a Celtic love affair hundreds of years in the past be the key to saving Dean from Hell?  Asher is dying to find out!

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Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
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Series: Second Chance
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 76117
[Report This] Published: 28/04/08 Updated: 22/10/09


Reviewer: Nervegirl88 Signed
Date: 06/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: His Baby or His Baby?

Wow.  I feel so sorry for Dean and Asher.  The way you wrote Dean's character is very convincing.  If Dean had a girlfriend in the show, he would feel responsible if anything happened to her whether it was his fault or not.  So props for that.  Sam's character is just as convincing.  So good characterization.  Anyway, your writing style is good.  I like it.

Author's Response:

Wow!  Thanks Barbara for the best compliment I could get!  To hear you think I keep Sam and Dean true to the episodes is wonderful! 

Thanks for reading and for letting me know your thoughts!  I hope you continue to enjoy the story.