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Real name: Eleanor O'Neill Status: Member Member Since: 13/06/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by winchester chick 666 Summary:
Dean Winchester at fifteen. Dean's emotions were raging out of control: guilt, panic, shame, sheer terror. How could he tell Dad how badly he had screwed up? How he had been weak and let what he wanted dictate his actions? A soldier follows orders!Inspired by the "Look" in Scarecrow and the emotional phone call in Home.
2006 Supernatural.tv Award (3-way tie) - Orders Categories: Romance, Wee!chester, Action Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: The Winchester Teen Chronicles Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 12655 [Report This] Published: 31/01/07 Updated: 07/02/07
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Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Soccer AWWW. Dean - shy. Shy - Dean. Somehow my brain just ain't processing this info. Still, nice perspective on the broters'n childhood. I can just imagine Dean hustling college grads while Sam's off getting straight A's. Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reviewing on an older story, most don't. Hmm, I had to think about that one, been soooo long since I wrote this. Yeah, I can see Dean shy, especially with girls his own age, not much in common, y'know. I think he seems much more at ease with older women. Even Dean W. was a teenager once. Take care, B.J.
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Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Dean Makes a Date I want6 to know when Sam actually got taller than his 'big' brother!!! Sam without Dean on All Hallow's Eve. This can not be good. Author's Response: Hate to admit it, but do I mention the height thing in here? If so I might contradict myself. I'd imagine by the time Sam was 16 he was probably the same height as Dean, then by 17-18 he passed him. A late teen growth spurt, after all Dean ain't short either. Gosh, how could you tell Sam would get into a spot of trouble on Halloween? It definitely ain't good. Thanks again for reading and reviewing. Later, B.J.
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Diner DON'T INVITE THEM IN!!! Three creepy dudes who know the name Winchester just ain't a good sign. Hurry up Dean! Please! Yeah, just like civies to let the baddies in, huh? Dean is coming. Thanks for reading and reviewing, B.J.
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Meltdown JOHN IS EVIL!!! Sammy's missing, Dean's going nuts and what does he do? Hits the only person who's always stood by him. The perfect son. p.s. I hate vamps. Author's Response: John is upset and not handling it very well, but yeah, John messed up, bad. This was the first chapter I ever wrote. Then I had to figure out how to get Dean to this point. Dean is the perfect son tho, but I guess this helps explain why he always had to follow Dad's orders from then on. Poor kid! Take care, B.J.
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Plan Just had a thought. Dean and Sam thought vamps were a myth up until DMB in series 1. And John thought they were extinct till then too. Hmmmm Author's Response: Yeah, one episode and my story was shot to hell!!! LOL I hope you can still enjoy it as an AU. Later, B.J.
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Trap Crossbows don't kill vamps! Neither do stakes now I come to think of it. No, they don't in Kripke's universe, but this was written before DMB and I was operating under the falsehood of Whedon's Buffy universe. I sure wish Kripke would give me the playbook so I'd never make mistakes like that again. Later, B.J.
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Rescue AWSOME!!! John has redeemed himself. Author's Response: Good! 'Cause I honestly like John. He had a tough time of it and has some parenting issues, but the man does love his sons. I love how the Winchesters always come thru in the end and save each other. Take care, B.J.
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Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Injury Erm... probably a stupid question but - what's CPS? Not stupid at all. CPS is Child Protective Services here where I live. It's the state agency that would come and take the kids away if it was deemed their family or wherever they were placed was not a safe environment. Later, B.J.
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Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Confessions & Recovery Stop blaming Kripke for everything! lol!!! Can't wait to read the rest of the series and I hope you keep writing cos I'm definetly adding you as one of my fave authors!!! LOL He has a strong back, he can handle a little blame! He certainly has to deal with worse from some of the fans. I just don't know why he doesn't return my phone calls and keep me informed on all the inside scoop. Thanks for reading. Hopefully my stories only improve from this one. Take care, B.J. Summary:
Dean at 16. Dean was alone. A black hole of loneliness beckoned him. An abyss so deep and dark that he could see no light, no hope. His deepest, darkest fear had been realized. The emptiness encompassed him until a lone voice called out... Sequel to Orders, although it is not necessary to have read that story first. Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: Dean W., John W., Pastor Jim, Sam W. Challenges: Series: The Winchester Teen Chronicles Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 26320 [Report This] Published: 08/02/07 Updated: 25/02/07
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Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Ghostbusters Who ya gonna call? Ain't if fun to reference the classics? Later, B.J.
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Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Basketball Awww!!! Poor Dean. And I feel even more sory for Stacy. 'Specially after the vamp thing. Why does everyone in Dean's gym class sound like a junkie? Author's Response: LOL Stacy and Dean make a good pair. Hmmm, sorry, don't really remember the kids in Dean's gym class. I'm supposed to be updating this story, I guess I better get on that! Take care, B.J.
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Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Fight Nice Leathal Weapon reference Murtagh. I think those nightmares would be a pyscaitrist's field day - poor Dean!!! I can see John and Dean's point but still - go Sammy!!! Author's Response: Yeah, I love my film references and Lethal Weapon would have to be a fav of Deans. The nightmares are bad and are only gonna get worse. Sam always did see things differently than John and Dean... at least in the beginning. Thanks again, B.J.
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Maneuvers You were right. They got worse. I only saw NRFTW last week and I've been unbelievably depressed since then. This did not help. Author's Response: Yeah, I think NRFTW did us all in. Just remember in my stories they always come out intact at the end. Later, B.J.
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Nightmares They're getting worse.
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Despair NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Control LET DEAN GO YOU EVIL, TWISTED WHATEVER YOU ARE!!!!!!!!!!!! Whoa. Sorry, lost it a little there. Just shows how good your writing is, huh? Author's Response: Thank you... I don't mean to hurt Dean, really. It is the evil you-know-what.
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Protection Oohhh. Now Dean mad. I take it you're referring to the amulet that Dean still wears? If so, I also take it that you wrote this before AVSC. Author's Response: Yes, I did, back when we were all theorizing about where the amulet came from. I swear I lost the memo Kripke sent me... he did send it, right?
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Scabs Typical. Dean's the one whose mind is invaded by a dreamwalker and he still is more worried about Sammy. Author's Response: That is our Dean, isn't it? Sammy always comes first. Later, B.J.
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Secrets Oh no. It gonna go after Sammy. Ain't it?
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Fear Close shave. I can start breathing agian now. Author's Response: It ain't over yet.
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Pastor Jim Dean getting kinda touchy.
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Phone Call Oh you evil!!! I have atheory but I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out if I'm right. ;) Author's Response: Hmmm, wonder what it is? We'll just have to see.
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Agony Thank you. I have now been reduced to a quivering wreck. What happened to Sammy? Author's Response: I'm sorry... but it is evil's doing... I think Sammy's okay, at least he will be.
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