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Real name: ivonne74 Status: Member Member Since: 13/06/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by sam Summary:
Take one peeved off gypsy, one arrogant big brother and one chance remark, mix them together and what have you got? Well, if your name's Sam Winchester, you've got a whole pile of trouble. Sam becomes big brother to his big brother as he desperately tries to break a gypsy curse before he's driven completely insane. Be careful what you wish for... Categories: Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 15086 [Report This] Published: 01/02/07 Updated: 02/02/07
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 Date: 24/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 It is still a mistery as to how this has happened unless that girl DEAN has been hounding as a dog did something. LOL - I have you suspicious of poor Alex, do I? Well, you might be surprised.... Jules
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Date: 24/05/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 This is like a koddak moment and that is simply a chick-flick moment. Thank you for that. Hope you're still enjoying little Dean in big Dean's body. Jules
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Date: 24/05/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 This is trully affecting not only the subjecrt at hand, but my self. I do think that nurse has something to do with the situation. Author's Response: Nope, sorry - the poor nurse is only guilty of one thing - having the hots for Sammy. Can't blame her, really..... Jules
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Date: 24/05/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I do like the sweet sense of DEAN not being an airhead, but a cute and adoable spider dork when he is hurt. I do like the concept of how mixing law to an old woman, and the effect that the energy of true blood family is important. Author's Response: Thank you. He really is an adorable little boy, isn't he? Jules
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 WOW, to note that a sibliing could go that far. Especially some one whom would never state a planed attack. Yes, Sam was pretty scary, wasn't he? But after all, the gypsy had cast a spell on his brother. Jules
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I do enjoy the royal treatrment of you as the producer to this beautiful litterature to put Deans manuvers to establish great contact with a girl to Sam. Dean would be very proud of himself as well as his brother for the great team work. What a BITCH Alex is a very huge differance from all the girls that both of them had to fight with if they where evil. Author's Response: Ah, yes, Dean in his four-year-old innocence giving Alex just what she dreams of - contact with the delightful Sam. And yes, she is a nice contrast to the usual horrible entities they have to face. It's nice to have someone on their side once in a while. Jules
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 "Dude, you'd better have a freakin' good explanation for this." This statement would simply be Dean's but the way he has been acting. Now, I'mm comfused. Author's Response: Well, imagine the adult Dean's shock at waking up like that - lol. Especially since he can't remember being a four-year-old. Thanks for reading. Jules
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 See, it is true that even a simple manly brother like SAM can aslo handel a creap. Oh, yes, Sam can certainly handle a creep like that. He makes a good big brother, doesn't he? Jules
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 These are some of the images that you had to have a smile. They were fun to imagine, weren't they? Especially the one in McDonalds, with Dean's face covered in tomato sauce. Jules
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue What ever . . . the point is that I could meraqusly I can imagen thos pictures now that is cute. Thank you for that. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Jules Summary:
Sam plays a deadly game of cat and mouse with a hunter who is determined to succeed where Gordon Walker failed - to kill Sam. With Dean held hostage, who can Sam trust as he desperately tries to stay one step ahead of the hunters and rescue his brother.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 14612 [Report This] Published: 04/02/07 Updated: 11/02/07
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Date: 20/09/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue Very well produced. You may soon be a cultus writre. thank you for a beautiful and chick flick hearted moment. Thanks. It is something to cherish. RATING:) PRICELESS 400 ++++ i still hate those guys of character to hurt poor SAMMY.
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Date: 03/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is starting to get on the never of kicking some ass. Author's Response: Thank you for that. I hope that you enjoy the second chapter. Jules
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Date: 03/02/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Were you that disappointed in me that you . . . ? Not to ruine your story in which a like with so many sybolic meaning. This sentance is one that keeps haunting me. I do like the vivid images that has been portrayed to the brothers situation. Author's Response: Yes, I think that Sam really wasn't as sure of his father's love as Dean was - and my heart aches for him in that respect. Thanks for that. Jules
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Date: 03/02/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Interesting way of trap, but not yet a full "CHECKMATE" where is Bobby he should have called him.? Ahh, be patient - Bobby isn't far away. But there will be a few more surprises before then. Jules
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Date: 03/02/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 okay! it hurts though. Hold on - there's a light at the end of the tunnel... Jules
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Date: 03/02/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Thank you. I gradely greet you with your exprtion on the vivid and colorful imagery in my mind. You suck you made a true believer like me feel that my favorite character was DEAD! Oh, your good. Author's Response: Um....don't think I've ever been told I suck before.... Thank you for the pretty stars - hope that you liked it despite the scare I gave you. Jules
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This species of Gorden Walker as a hunter is bad scum bag news. To only up take his individual task and missing it. Author's Response: Thank you. I agree with you - I heartily dislike Gordon Walker and the way he single-mindedly came after Sam. Jules
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I knew and have always had a differance of McAllistar. Thank you for that. And thanks for reading this story again. Jules
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Why did sam not call upon Bobby but called ellen instead? Um - Sam didn't call Ellen. Who he called will be revealed in an upcoming chapter. Jules
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Date: 26/05/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Its as if you placed your mind into a suicidal being . . . that is an effect that is very extrodinary. Thank you. We've all probably been in very dark places at least once in our lives. I just tapped into mine. Jules
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Date: 26/05/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 This is a story that their should seriously be an on-coure of. I mind is twisting with so many thing that I would like to state, but it would be to long and you would get to tired of it . . . so thank you. Author's Response: Thank you - and thanks for your reviews the second time around, too. I'm glad it kept you intrigued this time, just as the first time you read it. Jules
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Date: 26/05/09 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue Again, I did. Thank you. And thank you once again. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Jules
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Date: 28/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 a very typical situation that the character of Gorden would send DIRECT ORDERS to a bunch of MORONS, to do a job. . . i do approve of the dynamics that there is in the ACTION of the Winchesters striving to stay alive together. . .it shows the najor card blade that was play and that was TRUST that they have. I love the beging cant wait for the conclusion. u are the best ROYALITY, thanks. Hullo, Bonbon, This is - I think your third time reading this? I'm so glad that you're enjoying it each time. This was one of my earlier works - I still had a lot to learn in those days. Ah, yes, morons. And I like to believe that not all the Winchesters' luck is bad. My soul craves happy endings after all. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing again. Jules
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Date: 01/03/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 i aoprove of the way you mix SAM'S and JOHN'S collusional thoughts collied with in each other. As well as, the reflection that he has to turn the cards around to find and rescue his brother. i do like the conflicts that is played in this chapter. thanks. I never could understand the TRUST that JOHN has on his BOYS, yet he has no FULL FAITH on SAM. What a SIN OF A FATHER, I can feel for the character of SAM. Author's Response: Thank you. I had a hard time with John and his relationship with his sons, especially Sam. I have a parent that I cannot relate to, so I've always had a great deal of sympathy for Sam and his issues with John. Unfortunately, they're so much alike, it was inevitable that they would keep butting heads. But I think that on some level, John possibly didn't quite understand his youngest son either. Jules
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Date: 01/03/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 you are a very demented PERFECTLY SKILLED WRITER and I APPLAUDE YOU. Thank you once again. I can actually feel the lossage pain of Dean lossing his brother in Defeat. In which his attitude turns for the middle side. . .a sense that he has chossen for one side ane that side is for himself. . .and ONLY HIMSELF. This so does rock, how you place yourself in the demented head of the character that has Dean and plays with false card at hand and has been able to satisfy one self. You are a very BAD . . . BAD writer and i love it. you made me feel like the character of Dean and Sam ETERNALY.
Author's Response: Oh, gosh, thank you. My head's a pretty freaky place at the best of times. When the muse is firing, I just let the scenes play out in my imagination, then write what I'm seeing. Hopefully it translates to the written word. Jules |
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