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Penname: palemoon [Contact]
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Summary: Sam survives a car accident but is haunted by the other driver who did not. Set early S2. General S2 spoilers.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 29586
[Report This] Published: 17/07/07 Updated: 06/09/07


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I read your story awhile ago but I had not reviewed it because I was not a member yet. I remember reading your story because I thought it was excellent with the right amount of angst! well done.

 
The Game by bayre Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 444]
Summary:

The meek shall inherit nothing....

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52023
[Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 27/04/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

 Wow, This story had me hooked from the begining. I liked the way each character dealt with the situation ie, vaunrable  yet strong. It would be grate to see Carter in future stories. Well Done!

Author's Response: Thank you.  Carter is in my current WIP Fire and Blood.

 
Summary:

Amazing Banner by Rae666

When a hunt goes terribly wrong, Dean is forced to face a promise made to Sam, a promise he never thought he'd have to keep. Not death fic Winner SNFA Round 11 Best Story and Oprah's Book Club

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Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6320
[Report This] Published: 19/11/07 Updated: 19/11/07


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You are a very talented writer! I loved this story. It was an excellent read. It was good to see that it was not a werewolf in the end! Lucky Sam!(lol) I also started reading your novel. It sounds fantastic! I hope it gets published!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Both for your kind words on this one and The Legacy. Funny you should mention publication.. After long talks with my adivors, we've decided... Well to make a long story short, it should be available on Amazon at the end of October!

Hugs, Muffy

 
One Last Memory by calUK Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

My entry for the SN.tv creature challenge.

Sam remembers happier times after a hunt for a vampire goes badly wrong.

Warning: Death fic!


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2793
[Report This] Published: 13/03/08 Updated: 13/03/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so sad! I cried!!!!!!!!!!! You have away with words. It was excellent. It would have been a wonderfull story had you extended it. However I know that sometimes it is easier said than done. But you would have done a fantastic job. Well done keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

aw, i always feel so mean when i'm glad someone tells me they cried at that one... i did too, so never mind! i did think about extending it, maybe as a tag, but it worked better as a short one-shot - the point of the story wasn't really what had happened with the vamps, or even reallythat he died, it was all about that last memory they share, something 'nice' to take with him.

thanks for reviewing - glad you liked it! 

 
Summary: Famine, Flood, Disease, War.  In a world on the brink a small community rallies around their 'touched' children.  But is the Rapture at hand, or is there something more sinister at work?

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: Shadow Stalker
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 44210
[Report This] Published: 10/04/08 Updated: 09/12/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic! I have been reading this series for a while. I didn't realise you had a last installment. I really like the way you show the readers how the characters are feeling. I love a bit of angst (lol). Well done!

 
Storm Surge by bayre Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Following the trail south, Dean and Sam discover the demon they're tracking wants them as much as they want it.  Other hunters might want the brothers even more.....

 

banner by Neolani618

 

This continues where Gale Warnings left off.

Possible spoilers for Seasons 1 & 2, after WIAWSB it's AU


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: The Elements
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 46334
[Report This] Published: 20/04/08 Updated: 06/01/09


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well done! Your series has to be one of my favourites! I love the way you included the other set of siblings. I hope you include them in your future stories! Fantastic!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Dante and Concha will be in this story also.

 

 
Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1

I love it! You have a way with words that I can clearly picture the story.  Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

 
Last Thoughts by 0shadow Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

When one brother gets stuck in a casket, will the other brother find him in time?  Not a Deathfic.

 

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Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4564
[Report This] Published: 04/05/08 Updated: 04/05/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent writing the chapter really flowed. Fantastic!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review and the stars. :)  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks again for leaving a comment.

 
Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I never would have guessed! It was an excellent read! I really enjoyed it! Keep up the fantastic work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments!  I'm glad you really liked the story.  I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.

 
IN HIS EYES by Vanessa Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

A poem.  The final scenes of the season finale continue to haunt me.  This is a poem expressing what I see when I look at the final shots of Dean in Hell.

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This incredibly awesome banner is by bulletbabe (Louy) of course.  Two simple words "Thank You" are not nearly enough.  But they're meant from the bottom of my heart.


Categories: Misc, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 31
[Report This] Published: 03/06/08 Updated: 03/06/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic! agan you have a way with words.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

 
Bad Choices by vonnie836 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary: After an argument with his father, Sam gets into trouble. Can Dean and John save him before it is to late? PreSeries

Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 24454
[Report This] Published: 14/06/08 Updated: 15/06/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed
Date: 21/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent first chapter! I can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you liked the rest of it. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

What can I write? Fantastic! I like the way you don't drag out the scene to much just the right amount! It makes the story interesting. Well-done!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you continue to like it. That makes my day. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/09/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Excellent story! I like the way it sounded real like it could happen to anybody who was in the wrong place at the wrong time. I also like the way it lead into the first season. Again I loved the way you did not drag the scenes out it keep me interested. I am looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Author's Response: Thanks again, it means a lot to me, that you are taking the time to review. You are right about the 'it could happen to anyone' thing. I feel, this is a real danger to young people. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Epilepsy by Rochelle Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The first time Sam had a seizure, he was 13.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 518
[Report This] Published: 03/07/08 Updated: 04/07/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic start! I can't wait to read more! You have me hooked!

 
Hope by penmin Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:  

Sam stood and watched the water in the raging river.  He could throw himself in, end it all now. Would he be with Dean then? Would the pain end? Then he heard a child's voice screaming.

 

Set very early season 4.  I don't read or do spoilers.


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 996
[Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 06/08/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You have written an excellent story about 'Hope'. I know you have written this story as a one shot, but I think this story would make a fantastic start to a chapter story.

Keep up the fantastic work!



Author's Response:

Wow - Thank you - I didnt think of it as a chapter story, not sure if I could do it.  but its worth some thought.

Jacq

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe Winchesters moved through many towns with such stealth no one one would remember them except for a passing thought of the physical beauty or grace of 'that stranger'. But the unsung heroes passed through many lives as well, leaving indelible marks, uneraseable memories and unspoken prayers of thanks. Was the news of their deaths in that helicopter explosion just another bit of sensational news?
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 15922
[Report This] Published: 11/08/08 Updated: 21/08/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 - Season 1

Well done! Your story was linked well! I really liked that. It was good to see Sam & Dean's past efforts were not forgotten! You did a fantastic job with this story keep up the fantastic work!

Author's Response: Wow..thank you so much for replying and for all the kinds words. I so happy that you are enjoying this so much, that's all I can hope for.

 
Summary:

Drabble. Sam has a quiet moment to reflect.

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Categories: Drabbles Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100
[Report This] Published: 12/09/08 Updated: 12/09/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It was short but I really liked it! I can see how you would be good at writting poetry! So you have written two books. Where can you buy them?

Author's Response:

I'm sooo sorry!  I didn't realize you had reviewed this little drabble.  Thank you!

Yep, two books.  They both can be found at amazon.com or barnesandnoble.com. 

 
Cliffhanger by Merisha Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 136]
Summary: When a hunt goes completely wrong, a distraught John has to come to the rescue of his boys.   
Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 36769
[Report This] Published: 19/09/08 Updated: 03/12/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/08/11 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Excellent story keept me on edge, loved it!

 
Summary: One-shot. Set just before the start of 'In The Beginning'. Limp Sam.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: A Spoonful Of Limp
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3411
[Report This] Published: 07/10/08 Updated: 07/10/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked your story. It was good to see how you linked your story to the show. Very clever!

 
THE NAKED TRUTH by Vanessa Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Sam has to tell his brother something that he's REALLY not going to want to hear. Uh oh.  Originally, a response to a drabble challenge.

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Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 96
[Report This] Published: 15/10/08 Updated: 15/10/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Tell Me You're Kidding

Hmmmm sounds naughty but interesting (lol).

Author's Response: Thank you.

 
Pulling Heaven Down by Jay Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Their dad disappeared. Dean goes to get Sam from Stanford to help hunt for him and discovers their dad isn’t the only one missing. 



Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4729
[Report This] Published: 30/10/08 Updated: 08/11/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic story! I can't wait to see what kind of man Sam has become and what has happend to daddy Winchester???? I like the way you wrote the story through Dean's eyes. I hope you do the same when it comes to Sam and John. I think including some angst and limp later in the story will make your story a sure hit. Well done!

 
Summary:  

The story of Sam's life, from the day he was born until Dean actually understood him, as told from his big brother's point of view.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1656
[Report This] Published: 27/11/08 Updated: 27/11/08


Reviewer: palemoon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Just My Hand Me Down

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the way it was written!!! I know it is a one shot but if you write more in this style I will be reading it. I don't know, I just might be nosey and I like to read other peoples diary's(lol) No really I loved it!!!!!!!!!!