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In Transit by devonshire Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 160]
Summary:

The boys are in for more than they bargained for when the hunt for a spirit brings them face to face with the elusive FTRA, and something else they weren't expecting. 

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 33093
[Report This] Published: 03/06/07 Updated: 05/11/07


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 17/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I so wanted to be a freight-hopper when I was a kid! And my country doesn't even have trains :)

I loved “We can sing hobo songs.”- made me laugh :)

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 18/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

“Oh man, if you tell me this is all about a girl, I’m gonna smack you.”- That made me laugh out loud :)

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 18/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I really enjoyed this story. It was well written and I LOVED the setting. The image of the hunter caught in a trap so much like a devil's trap was very appropriate, somehow :)

 
A Bad Omen by ThePasserby Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

This is a collection of one-shots about the many times bad things happen because of good food. Dean believes that whenever he craves mexican cuisine, it's a bad omen.

And he's right.


Categories: General, One Shots, Humor, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6177
[Report This] Published: 02/07/07 Updated: 03/07/08


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Blame The Burrito

Completed? Aw, but they just keep getting funnier.... :)

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

For once, Dean's not downplaying an injury and it is hardly more than a scratch. But, it results in dire consequences . . . for both Winchesters.

This is my KazCon Auction story written for Tammy who was kind enough to bid on me.  I hope this meets her expectations.

Reviews are always welcome and much appreciated!


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 18418
[Report This] Published: 03/09/07 Updated: 18/11/07


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 03/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Avin Calling

Arg! Scary! Some kind of woodoo, maybe? Very cool :)

cheers yt 



Author's Response: Thank you, youthere, for taking the time to read and leave a review.  It's very much appreciated and I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the story.

 
Summary:

Thank you to whoever nominated, you made my day! 

 http://sensue.net/snfa/voting/index.php

Dean watches the storm, Sam watches Dean.

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Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2023
[Report This] Published: 10/02/08 Updated: 10/02/08


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 22/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes

"...the moon hangs heavy and pregnant, bleeding silver light into the purples and blues, fighting for attention in a bruised sky."

"By morning the storm is exhausted and the sky is left the colour of ripe peaches."

These two small descriptions framed the story so nicely (besides being awesome in themselves, LOVED the colors they made me see) and underlined the repetition of  "smiling gently at the naivety of the sentiment…but there’s something about that earnest look and the tone of his brother’s voice…something that makes him believe it. "

I really liked the idea of Dean's last year being one long drawn out "Last moment" 

Huh, guess I better go read "Fall of...", so I know what on earth was going on... :)

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 22/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes

oops... I meant Shadow... :) Just kinda assumed this had to do with that one... Am I mistaken?

 
No Vacancy by StrigoiVii Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 208]
Summary:

It was just another crappy motel in another crappy little town, right? Wrong.

Thank you Vanessa for the beautiful banner, god he is a sexy beast, isn't he?

No Vacancy


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 49189
[Report This] Published: 04/03/08 Updated: 03/03/09


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

... hm yeah, the baby's so a part of this somehow... looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Now what makes you say that?  I'm happy to hear you're looking forward to the next and I gotta say that if it wasn't for your Author's Response to that review I left, I probably wouldn't have even finished this today.  Thanks so much!

 
Summary: Drabbles; happy ones, sad ones, daft ones and downright scary ones. All those little things that just wont quit...
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 2693
[Report This] Published: 06/03/08 Updated: 03/02/10


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 04/03/09 Title: Chapter 14: The Greatest Hits of Mllet Rock

Damn, that was right on! I love the first two lines- made me see the ipala from the outside, shaking a buzzing, almost comically. The the last line goes and breaks my heart....


Author's Response:

Glad you found some funny i it - felt pretty bleak when I wrote it, but I always like it when there's something nicer there, before I go and twist the knife...

Ta!

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 26/04/09 Title: Chapter 16: Hole In The World

I like that it's open. It doesn't really matter what it is he needs saving from, it's the "always" that counts. This is lovely, short sweet and just enough :)

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 05/05/09 Title: Chapter 17: One Step

Oh.... just...ow! Damn.

Author's Response:

hmm. was a bit like that. blame Ilka. she conspired with the bunnies.

Ta!

 
Summary:

Banner by Jessica Rae
banner by the incredible JessicaRae

Sequel to "The Wake-Up Call." Sam and Dean travel to Palo Alto to investigate recent deaths of college students after receiving a call from Rebecca Warren. Meanwhile, as Dean recovers from his injuries, his new and bizarre visions of Jessica continue to haunt him and Sam.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 42074
[Report This] Published: 20/03/08 Updated: 27/03/13


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 29/10/08 Title: What Comes After

I was very sorry to hear about your husband's accident. I'm glad he's getting better and send you both my best wishes.

I'm really enjoying your story so far and I'll be glad to see an update whenever you are able to get back to it :)

Take care of yourself.

Eva

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Eva. Thank you so much, both for the good wishes and the comments on the story. Helps lift my spirits!

*hugs*

 
Summary:

Sometimes, a little brother just knows best...

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Categories: Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4385
[Report This] Published: 17/04/08 Updated: 17/04/08


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 02/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 'Beelzebug' and the Bible

Ahaha! I was just browsing and came across this. Wish I could come up with a funny wordgame to say I liked it, but I guess I'll have to settle for just saying it cheered me up no end :) Lovely!

cheers yt



Author's Response:

Well that's only fair as your story was a hoot...loved that stone and it's stories...lol

Thanks for the great review youthere, glad it cheered you as much as your story cheered me. XX Louy

 
Summary:

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Just three days before the deal is due, and Sam is slowly falling apart, while at the same time trying to keep secret the ceremony he and Bobby carried out to save his brother from hell. Dean is finding it harder and harder to cope, and Bobby is doing his level best to hold both boys together and do what needs to be done to complete the ritual.

So a standard Winchester weekend then!

Sequel to 'The Fall of the House of Dream.'


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 34728
[Report This] Published: 12/05/08 Updated: 29/06/08


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 22/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Long as it takes

Loved the Bobby approach to phsycology. Kinda unexpected, but so absolutely in character. And I felt covered in sweat and mud reading the descriptions... nice :)

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 22/12/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Losing my mind

I liked the understated creepiness of the demon Sam. And I don't know why, but the fact that he was barefoot made him extra unsettling to me. Some kind of uncanny effect. Odd, huh?

"Well actually, his great big, freaking gloomy, stormy, black shadow..."- oh lovely dark humor :)

 
The Line by Ridley James Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Some lines are never meant to be crossed, but each time they are the edges become blurred making any subsequent trips easier and decievingly less wrong.
Categories: Action, General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 36088
[Report This] Published: 31/05/08 Updated: 23/06/08


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 03/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OOhh, I'm really looking forwards to see where this goes. Dura's a really interesting bad guy... :)

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

ohh, didn't see that one coming.Very cool!

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I loved this chapter, can't wait for the next :)

 
Summary:

Dean's been to Hell and back, now it's time to get Sam back too...


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: A War with No Front
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3113
[Report This] Published: 01/06/08 Updated: 01/06/08


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 02/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would really like to see this continued, even though oneshots with open endings are my favorite kind.... :) It seems like it would make a very interesting story Cheers yt


Author's Response:

It'll be continued, stay tuned...lol

The others are more likely to be chapter fics.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura

 
Road to Nowhere by kwater Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 112]
Summary:

Research leads the Winchesters to a deserted highway where people have been dissapearing.  Along the way they find themselves trapped and in danger with little choice but to wait out the night.

 This story is set in the first season, after Faith. Also, just a note this story is NOT a romance, just a bit of fluff. ;) Kel

 


Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 43063
[Report This] Published: 11/06/08 Updated: 20/07/08


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 12/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooh! this is promising! Looking forward to sunday :)


Author's Response: Glad it caught your eye, you.  Hope you enjoy the rest - Kel

 
Summary: Sam has something that Lilith wants after all and Dean is brought back to life in exchange. Can he save Sam before the darkness takes ahold of his little brother permanently? Dean's POV. Follows events of season three finale.
Categories: General, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 19847
[Report This] Published: 13/06/08 Updated: 09/12/09


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start! I'm looking forwards to more :)

 
Happy Birthday by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

Tension mounts between the brothers - is it just Dean's deal or is something more sinister at work...

Happy Birthday

SN.tv 2009 Best Ghost


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 54038
[Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking forwards to seeing where this goes...  :)



Author's Response: Thanks for that - and welcome. Hope you enjoy the ride...Jules

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 14/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Haha, barfighting Sam is an experience. Very cool :)

Author's Response: Thanks for that - glad you liked that little bout of fisticuffs. Even though it's only worried Dean more - lol....Jules

 
Summary:

What with years spent apart, a missing father and a dead girlfriend the brothers are struggling to connect.  Set Season One, after Wendigo. 


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 5363
[Report This] Published: 02/07/08 Updated: 03/07/08


Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like the style of this and I think you're capturing the characters really well. Looking forwad to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks!  The next chapter will be up very soon.  Liz x

 
Reviewer: youthere Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really liked how this was written, every other sentence kinda made me chuckle but it still felt like a serious story. Loved all the details. Good on ya :)

Author's Response: : ) Yay!  Glad you liked the humour interlaced with a bit of angst.  Liz x