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Penname: Primrose [Contact]
Real name: Julie Barnson
Status: Member
Member Since: 14/05/08
Website: www.talesbyjulie.com
Beta-reader: Yes

I am a Professional Storyteller.  I tell stories for schools, libraries, festivals, and other events around Utah.  My specialty is ghost stories, because I absolutely LOVE to get the shivers, and make other people shiver in return. No wonder I'm a big Supernatural Fan!

When I'm not telling stories, I am a very busy mother of two. 

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It Only Hurts by RoweenaC Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

******SPOILERS***** Season 4 setting, so pretty much anything up to 4.09.

Dean remembers a lot from his time "down under". More than he would ever want anyone - especially Sam - to know.

angsty!Dean

Thanks to Bev (birdie) and Cal (calUK) for a quick beta!

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Usual disclaimer, I own nothing 'cept my own ideas... Damn, I wish I were Kripke or the CW or WB.... or just on set, next to the boys...


Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Glimpses
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 937
[Report This] Published: 17/11/08 Updated: 17/11/08


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: It Only Hurts

I'm not going to lie, this was hard to read.  I'd like to think that Dean didn't go that far down the road.  HOWEVER, I think you got it right- that is EXACTLY how someone human can become a demon.  And it IS what Dean would have done eventually, if he didn't go there before being rescued from hell.  Sniff. 



Author's Response:

Hey Julie.

So, returning the favour are we? Well, I loved to hear your thoughts about this one. We should hope that Dean got out before he had been forced to do this. I guess we'll know Thursday (Friday for me).

t was hard to read AND hard to write for me. Costed a lot of strength and a full package of tissues.

So, have you thought about telling me another of your stories?

Cheers, Ilka

 
Summary:

Dean hated Poughkeepsie, but at least he wasn't starting high school there.

The Square Root of Pi


Categories: Romance, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Transcendental Numbers
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 15015
[Report This] Published: 18/11/08 Updated: 18/11/08


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 18/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: And that's a magic number

Awww!  That was sweet!  And sad!  And I liked it very much!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!  My apologies for not responding sooner - I was down for the count due to be sick and then the holidays...

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

Set immediately after the conversation with YED in “In My Time of Dying,” John's thoughts, a brief study of his motivation, and a glimpse of his time in Season 2.

 Death!fic, YED


Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3643
[Report This] Published: 23/11/08 Updated: 24/11/08


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 24/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, good one!  Definitely a hellish punishment for poor John. 

Author's Response: Thanks! I hate to torment him, but John just lends himself to suffering so well.

 
By Gaslight by elanurel Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 By Gaslight

Deane and Samuel Winchester return to Westshire, their family's baronial province, upon receiving a mysterious letter regarding the werewolf terrorizing the countryside. They discover that the dangers to their old home are far greater than it would appear, and receive assistance from two wholly unexpected sources.


Categories: General, Romance, AU, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
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Series: Supernatural by Gaslight
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 59084
[Report This] Published: 02/12/08 Updated: 07/12/08


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 10/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Wherein Brave Heroes go Hunting, and a Good Friend is Lost

Thank you for the heads up that you're working on this one too.  I'll get caught up on this now, so I'll be ready for both.  I LOVE THE ERA!!!!  I just had a Victorian/Goth/Steampunk Halloween party that was a ton of fun, so I'm glad to be reading this now.  The language made me smile and had me thinking of the Georgette Heyer books.  

It may take me longer to get caught up on this one- busy times.  I'll let you know what I think! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

By Gaslight is my other fandom labor of love.  Though I think my Victorian Studies professor would be most put out as to how I am actually putting all those classes into practice. ;)

 

 
Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 11/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: In Which the Investigation Begins, and the Past Returns to Haunt Them

This is so much fun.  The "Engine of Love's Assault" made me laugh out loud.  Vertiline is a fabulous character, I can't wait for her to tell Penelope off for Mrs. Jennings, who is awful.  How interesting that she's attracted to Sam.  Dean might not get all the action? 

Author's Response:

I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it!  Vertiline was one of those characters most people took some time to like, and I always adored her from the beginning.  (Not that I don't adore Penelope, either... ;-P)

To answer your question would give away a good portion of the story. ;)

 

 
Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 15/11/09 Title: Chapter 5: During Which a Wager is Accepted, and the Creation of an Impressive Machine is Discussed

I like how Penelope's scientists mind immediately started asking questions and coming up with theories about the death of Jessica and Mary Winchester. 

This whole story makes me smile- you've made the Victorian theme work so well!  I'm almost all caught up, and my mind is buzzing with possibilities of where this story could end up! 



Author's Response:

Penelope is nothing if not a scientist. ;)

And I'm thrilled the story makes you smile.  It has been part of my happy place when it comes to writing, and we're getting into the meat of the case file, now...

 
Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 17/11/09 Title: Chapter 6: Wherein the Signs of a Conspiracy are Observed and a Grave Wound is Examined

Oh yes, I was SO glad to see Sam hit Francis.  It was VERY satisfying.  I'm sorry you've been feeling poorly, but I'm all caught up now, and am looking forward to more.  Feel better soon!

Author's Response:

I am so late in responding but I know you know why, so... ;)

Chapter Six is where the story really starts to diverge from my original outline.  Sam and Francis were supposed to have a formal duel, which was going to bring up subsequent angst on Vertiline's part not to mention yet another fight between Deane and Penelope...  But I really wanted to get on with the case file.

And it was pretty satisfying to have Sam punch Templeton.  Short and sweet.

 
Summary:

Strange Angels

After what seems like a chance encounter with a succubus in a college bar, Dean and Sam learn about the Circle of Enoch — and the Enochian Prophecy that the Circle has sworn to fulfill; a prophecy where Sam is "the Destroyer" and his Ascension is the precursor to Armageddon. There's no way in hell the Winchesters are going to let that happen. But how do you stop Armageddon with nothing but a book bag full of notes and a glowing sword?

This is the first "main" story in the Strange Angels 'verse.  The second is Beneath the Hollow.

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Categories: General, Romance, AU, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Strange Angels
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 117716
[Report This] Published: 02/12/08 Updated: 14/12/08


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 20/12/09 Title: Chapter 4: Burning Inside

Of COURSE I have to review the story!   It's interesting, and pretty cool!  I thought that her correcting the boys' latin was hilarious.  I love the Circle of Enoch- VERY creepy.  My grandparents were in Eastern Star, and my Dad was a Mason- I've attended some of the little ceremonies and couldn't help thinking of them as you were describing their activities.  

Author's Response:

I figured if anyone could make fun of the Latin, it would be Charlotte.  And I'm glad it's interesting; I worked hard on the research and on making the Circle of Enoch suitably evil...

Though now I am re-reading it myself and have found numerous and embaressing typos.  This is also the first SPN fanfic I had ever written, so I'm always tempted to go back and rewrite it but...it certainly shows my progression as a writer getting back into the swing of things. ;)

 
Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 21/12/09 Title: Chapter 5: Some Kind of Monster

You've got some really great mythology going here!  Geeking out.....

Author's Response:

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I worked really hard on the mythology.  I have two folders worth of notes, and outlines for the main storyline that goes even deeper into the mythology.

And typos.  The story has a lot of typos.  I think I need to make sure I upload the "master" chapters from my LJ community...

 
Summary:

Your Sorrow for Another Coin

Winchesters always needed protecting, from themselves as much as anything else – so maybe it was no surprise that Mama added all that thyme and basil and oregano into spaghetti sauce every time a Winchester crossed their doorstep.


Categories: General, One Shots, Romance, Wee!chester, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 40335
[Report This] Published: 04/12/08 Updated: 09/11/09


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 09/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: This bloodshot blue midnight

FABULOUS first chapter!  I enjoy the  outsider POV, and this is just beautiful. 

Author's Response: *is blushing*  I write a lot of outsider POV and I always worry about original characters regardless of whether or not it's a "romance" per se.  So I am thrilled that you're enjoying it.

 
Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 10/11/09 Title: Chapter 5: Barely enough time to sing

You have GOT to finish this story!  It is absolutely beautiful.  Your narrative is lovely, and your characters are amazing.  I love Jane with her quiet wisdom, and Alice who wants things so badly.  This one's going to stick with me.

Author's Response:

*is blushing*

My goal is to finish the story within the next couple of months.  I want to work on it and another story, alternating chapters until both are done.  Though writing this and By Gaslight at the same time should definitely be interesting... ;)

And thank you again for the feedback about the characters.  Alice is one of my favorite characters to write (for all that her internal voice drives me buggy) and I love Jane as well; I'm happy that her wisdom is coming through.

 

 

 
Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 10/11/09 Title: Chapter 6: Against the chill that finds the bone

*sigh*  I'm all caught up now, and I'm still impressed.  As far as adult content goes, well, it says M for mature for a reason, that's for sure.  I appreciate that you are toning it down, as I tend to avoid graphic sex scenes. 

I'm sorry to hear that you haven't been well.  I'm glad you're feeling better, and I hope things are going alright.  Now I'm off to read everything else you've written....



Author's Response:

Thank you again for your kind words. ;)

And I hope the adult content didn't put you off - I'm serious when I say that I'd like to know if something offends someone so I can change it.  There are stories that I've written which I won't post here because, well, they are PWPs...  I don't feel those are appropriate. 

I felt that this particular scene was necessary to the plot, in that it was a response to all of the violence that occurred.  So I hope that it did work well within that context. ;)

Thank you also for your kind words about my health.  I've learned a lot about myself and about the kindness of people as a result.

 
State of Grace by calUK Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

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When Dean disappears, Sam is plunged into a desperate race to find his brother before he pays the price in a deathly game with a long forgotten past.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: House of Cards
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 21460
[Report This] Published: 06/12/08 Updated: 08/01/09


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 09/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: I Tell To You My Story

AHHH!!!! NO!  Don't leave it like THAT!!!!  When are you posting the sequel?????  Tonight's good.  Really. 

Author's Response:

hehe - not tonight, sorry, but soon! *rubs hands together with glee*

Thanks hun - and when are YOU posting?!

 
Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 28/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Among the Dead

I'm finally getting caught up on my reading after having lots of family over.  This is fabulous.  I am now very on edge worrying about what's going to happen.  I LOVE it that it's revenants.  Nasty things, revenants. 

Author's Response: smelly, messy things - dropping bits of themselves all over the place... great fun to write though! glad you're enjoying it!

 
Summary:

 

The Winchester brothers drive through the Adirondacks en route to a meeting with Bobby. Ahead of schedule, they stop in a tiny Pennsylvania mountain crossroads, lured by the intrigue of a hunt. Better they should have kept driving.....

Set just post Dean's Deal. No spoilers for Season 4.


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 54192
[Report This] Published: 12/12/08 Updated: 18/02/09


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story has been absolutely amazing.  I had a suspicion about Dean's plans for Nate, and it just shows how big Dean's heart is that he's willing to do it. 



Author's Response: Thanks for saying so!--ml

 
Little Victories by Jenn Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Superheroes are the most amazing people in the world.

UnGen 12/25/08 challenge.

Spoilers for all seasons.


Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1430
[Report This] Published: 17/12/08 Updated: 18/12/08


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 18/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved it!  Hooray for Superheroes!

Author's Response:

Superheroes rock!! I'm so glad you loved it!

<3 Jenn 

 
Summary:

Dean silently wished he could feel so blissed out, that he could forget his time in Hell and actually enjoy Christmas with Sammy.  He wanted to bury his thoughts and take a real break, suddenly wanting to make this holiday special for his brother just like Sam had done for him last year.  Each it seems hadn’t felt like celebrating at the time, but for their brother they were willing to bury their own hurts and make it happen.   

He could do this… for Sammy. 

Minor S4 spoilers. 

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2008 Christmas Challenge Winner


Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6711
[Report This] Published: 21/12/08 Updated: 21/12/08


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 24/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hooray!  It was wonderful.  Congratulations!

Author's Response:

Thanks and Merry Christmas! 

Take care, B.J.

 
Summary:

Take one overbooked hotel, one very frustrated ghost, and a series of incredibly unfortunate events; set it amidst the seasonal splendour of Bethlehem, Pennsylvania and throw in two exceedingly unlucky Winchester boys.  The result = The 12 Saves of Christmas.

 

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Thank you to Cal for the purdy banner.

 

Join us for a chapter a day over the 12 days of Christmas as we follow our favourite boys as they survive another typical Winchester Christmas.

 

Thank you Mr Kripke for the best present ever, Sam and Dean Winchester! And to our own Christmas Elf, Kirsty for the superb beta.

For the wonderful friends we have made through UnGen. You know who you are. 

Wishing you all a very Happy Christmas.

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Thank you to all who nominated and voted for us in the awards. It made our day!

 
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 84921
[Report This] Published: 23/12/08 Updated: 12/01/09


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 07/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Rudolph the Red Nosed Reindeer

I am so grateful that you saved the Impala!  My Dad hit a deer when I was a girl, and totalled the car.  I was frightened for the poor Impala!  This story has been great fun to read!  Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Hey Julie

Thank you for your kind words, And yeah we'd never dare total Dean's baby!

So professional storyteller? We noted that on your biog...wow very ccol!

Jane and Bev xx

 
Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 12/01/09 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Epilogue Part Two

Hooray!  GREAT story!  It was a very satisfying read, and I look forward to the sequel!

Author's Response:

Hey Primrose.

Well we will be real pleased to see you for the sequel, chapter one is in the bag!

Thanks for your reviews, we love reviews.

Bev and Jane xx

 
Summary:

 While Shepherds Watch

Shepherds come in all shapes and sizes...

Contains some spoilers for Season 4


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9800
[Report This] Published: 26/12/08 Updated: 26/12/08


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 26/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, that was exactly what I needed to read today.  GOOD Christmas story!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was curious to see how the boys would spend this Christmas, since they both thought last year was to be their final one. Glad you loved it so much....Jules

 
OBX by PADavis Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

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Dean and Sam find something unexpected in coastal North Carolina. Barbeque, thunderstorms, and disabilities. Set Season 3. Hurt!Dean. Rated T for salty language.

 


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 38438
[Report This] Published: 30/12/08 Updated: 08/05/10


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 11/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: You've Eaten One Whole Pig By Now

Okay, I read this over on ffnet, and was too chicken to review.  This is inexcusable because I have loved this story so much that I've gone back and read it 3 or 4 more times since then.  It is so well written, and it makes me very happy.   It's one of my favorites.  

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the plunge (LOL) and reviewing the fic.  I'm delighted this is one of your favs!  Thanks so much for tracking it down, and rereading.

Phoebe

 
Avalanche by Coldfury Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 150]
Summary:

It took only a moment for Dean to disappear and be swept away by the fury of the avalanche. Now with time running out, Sam turns to the help of strangers to find him before it's too late.

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 25580
[Report This] Published: 04/01/09 Updated: 28/03/09


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 08/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome aboard!  I'm enjoying your story very much.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome, people here are very friendly! Glad you're enjoying! Stay tuned, more to come! Seth

 
Summary:

WARNING *****Death-fic!!!!!!!!!*****

Set post-series...

Oh, don't you make it my dyin', dyin', dyin'...cough...

 

Part two of the oneshot trilogy Harmony! 

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Thank you Cal! Did an awesome beta here....


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Glimpses
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2279
[Report This] Published: 06/01/09 Updated: 06/01/09


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 06/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Take My Body Home

I just came home from a sad movie where I cried my eyes out, and read this.  Maybe I should have gone for the humor fics because now I've had an overload of SAD!  This was very well written, great job!  Now I need a nap, and some more tissues. 

Author's Response:

Geez, dear. Sorry. But I put a warning out! And frankly, I am surprised at how many of you guys read death fic! I sure ain't - only read one... and it tore my bleeding heart out of my chest and pressed it tight until it was a mangled mass.... get my jist?

Go have a nap and maybe read something fluffy and cheerful!

Thanks for stopping by and letting me know about your emotions, Ilka

 
Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 01/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Take My Body Home

Second Review!  After our chat, I DID come back to re-read this, and yes, I do like your vision of the ending- although it's TOO SAD!!!!  I'm sticking with my cliche'd western idea.  It doesn't make me cry at the end. 

The story is still wonderful and painful.  It's not often that I cry at stories, and now I've had two in one day.  This is a bad record.



Author's Response:

Aw Julie... You shouldn't have! But a review is always a nice thing to find coming home after work...

I'm sorry it made you cry again. I think any ending would make me cry. Simply because it means there won't be new episodes anymore. 

Whatever they cook up in their weird minds in the end will be fine with me I reckon. 

Hugs ya... Ilka

 
Gifts by MuffyMorrigan Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 146]
Summary:

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Dean discovers sometimes the greatest sacrifices aren’t that big after all, and the smallest gifts can make all the difference. Hurt!Sick Sam


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 83306
[Report This] Published: 10/01/09 Updated: 18/07/12


Reviewer: Primrose Signed
Date: 17/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Impala

I have been loving this story so much.  I love Dean's determination and patience.