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Penname: Smudge93 [Contact]
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Real name: Mary Status: Member Member Since: 09/05/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by Smudge93 Summary:
Dean just wanted Sam to unwind. A night out ends in a disaster of a decidedly non-supernatural nature. A Teenchesters short story. Rated for strong language and gritty issues. Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 12075 [Report This] Published: 18/06/08 Updated: 23/06/08
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  Date: 19/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: As long as I'm around, nothing bad is gonna happen to you. God girl what are you trying to do to me! Seriously, I love evil cliffies!! Can I feel the wrath of Dean waiting in the wings?? More....soon please! Author's Response: Oooh I do love angry Dean too. He's such fun to write. Thanks! Liz x
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Our dark spots are pretty dark You're right, Dean doesn't disappoint and neither does this story. Really liked this one, thanks for letting us share. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you. Very glad you enjoyed it. Liz x Summary:
Set after BUABS. Steve Wandell's friends want revenge. And they won't stop until Sam Winchester is dead.
Thanks to Bulletbabe for the amazing banner. Louy, you are the best! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 12161 [Report This] Published: 18/06/08 Updated: 09/12/08
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Date: 19/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Guilt Hi Nice start, poor Sammy, it's not looking good! I think your story and mine maybe have similar veins running through them (not to give too much away) so it will be interesting to watch how they both develop! It's looking good so far though! Mary x
Author's Response: Well, you know what they say, Great minds think alike! I had no idea that you were writing something like this. I can't wait to read yours! ~Kayla
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Date: 26/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken A little bit of torture is always good for the soul, well the writer's one anyhow. I really like how this story is shaping BUABS is a favourite of mine and they always did just leave the Wandel story hanging out there. I love that you brought Gordon in, he's such a delightful character, I'm glad he's not mad at me! Enjoying this, looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you for dropping me a line. I am glad that you liked that I brought Gordon back. I wasn't sure if that would be a good move or not. Anyway, thanks again! ~Kayla Summary:
Tension mounts between the brothers - is it just Dean's deal or is something more sinister at work...
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 54038 [Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08
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Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 You can go off some people you know!! lol. I'll wait happily to Friday if the next chappie is as good as this one! That cliffie makes Mr Kripke's look positively tame! Is it not Friday yet???? Mary xx Author's Response: Thanks for that Mary - LOL. Hope you like the next one too. And no, it's not Friday - it's actually Monday, but I'm feeling generous...Jules
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Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Ok that was just down right evil!! lol. First you update early and confuse the heck out of me(not hard to do!) and then you leave us with the cliffie of all cliffies!!! aaargh! Glad I only have to wait to Friday. See you then. Mary x Author's Response: Well, yes - I have to admit, that was one of my better ones - well, the last two cliffies actually. Thanks for reading Mary - hope you like the epilogue. Promise not to be too confusing in the future - LOL....Jules
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Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue Well I was waiting here as promised. This was a fantastic story, I really enjoyed it. Best line was Sam being Dean's 2nd best girl! That cracked me up!! Enjoyed this lots. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you, Mary. Hope I didn't keep you waiting for too long. Ahh, glad I could crack you up. We all need a good laugh some days (some days more than others...). And I do like to lighten the mood after all that angst. Thanks so much for reading....Jules Summary:
Banner by the ever-amazing Rae666
While investigating a rash of mysterious deaths, Dean finds a new distraction. As they look into the case, Dean’s distraction might prove fatal. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 18744 [Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08
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Date: 26/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 This story just gets better and better. Strange but wonderful too! Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work! Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! I admit it's a little strange, but the mind of Muffy is a little odd most of the time LOL More soon, hugs, Muffy
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Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 In a word - wonderful - I lloved this story it had a wee bit of everything in it. Just Great. Get well soon and feel free to think up another weird and wonderous story soon! Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had so much fun with this one! It was just a blast to write! The mind of Muffy is a little weird isn't it? I have a new one in mind, coming soon--haunted bookstores, scary creatures and all the good stuff Hugs, Muffy Summary: BrotherhoodAU. Worried about Dean in the wake of yet another painful rejection, Caleb tries his best to show his friend that not everyone leaves.
Categories: General, One Shots, AU, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9064 [Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 27/06/08
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Date: 28/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Just Another Nail Great story, thanks for sharing Author's Response: No problem! Thanks for reading and reviewing and Im really glad you liked it :) Tara x0x Summary:
Banner by the awesome Chasidern
Bobby calls Sam and Dean for help hunting a demon that demands human life. When Dean becomes a victim, Sam struggles to save his injured brother before Dean is lost forever. Hurt!Dean. Dark fic. Not death fic Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 53807 [Report This] Published: 03/07/08 Updated: 08/01/09
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Date: 12/09/08 Title: Chapter 7: O Let Me Dying Live, Till Death Doth Come Muffy, Wow and I think wow again! Very intense. Almost reading Mitch's demise through my hands. Poor Randy, dying and thinking his brother was gone too. Only losing Sam would make Dean try to give up the good fight. Loved that Dean recognised the Impala and Harry and that sam has brought him home. The masks make these 'people' very scary. Looking forward to the next update. Cheers Mary xx Author's Response: Thank you so much, Mary! I'll be honest and say the next chapter is, at least for me, a little worse. But I promise something good at the end! Promise! More today! Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 29/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: My Joy is Dead, and Cannot Be Reviv'd Ok so you know where Dean is but when Bobby finds the car you are still hoping that he'll find him. Now that's good writing. The emotions are all over the place with this one, but that's a good thing. This is an amazing story. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so sorry my reply took so long. I've been on limited computer time again. We'll be finding out more of what's happened in the upcoming chapters. Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 17/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: I Die Through Madness This is a gorgeous story, ok so it's dark but it is beautifully written and you know that if anyone can reach Dean it will be Sam. I like that they picked Dean because he was a fighter 'cos that works both ways, he'll fight back against them eventually I feel, I hope. Yet another great story Muffy. Thanks. Mary x Author's Response: Oh dear! I feel awful that this somehow slipped by me without a response *hang head* Thank you so much! I know this one is dark and believe my I'm still nervous as I post every chapter. It is also,in some ways, intensely personal. The did pick Dean because he's a fighter--and I think that might be their downfall eventually. Hugs (and sorry!) Muffy
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Date: 28/08/08 Title: Chapter 6: Long Overwhelmed Be, And Swallow'd Up Your spoiling me, updates to two of my favourite stories in the one night. Thank you so much. x Take care, Mary x Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, Mary! I'll try and spoil you again soon! Well, the next update on this one is a few days off, but I promise it will be soon! Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Foe of Mankind, Why Murd'rest Thou My Love? What an intense chapter! This story is wonderful. Little rollercoaster of emotions there and then Dean is back at the end. Yeah! Little bit of evil in the cliffhanger though! How can it get worse for poor Dean?? Can't wait for more! Mary xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think this story is creaping onto my list of favorites of the ones I've written. The emotions are killing me, but I am so (yeah this is a little sillly) proud as I finish each chapter! Dean is back, and it will get worse. Dean's survived and the thing will come for him with a vengeance now! More very soon! Hugs, Muffy Summary: Wee!Chester! Dean tries to teach Sam how to skip stones. One shot.
Categories: Wee!chester, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1249 [Report This] Published: 03/07/08 Updated: 03/07/08
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Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled Rae you should have put this in for Angela's challenge because it's just beautiful. Nice for the Winchester boys to get a gentle moment now and again. Loved it. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you :D I hadn't even thought about the challenge, he he. Do wish her well though, bless her. Thanks again! Summary: "We're stronger as a family"...right? Written for the Get Well, Angela Challenge. Tag to Shadow (S1)
Categories: Missing Scenes, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1797 [Report This] Published: 07/07/08 Updated: 07/07/08
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Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Loved this story, lots of well written emotion in it. Dean just breaks your heart doesn't he? He never feels as if anything that he does is right, and he always tries to do what's best for his family, despite what it costs him. Loved the way you put the thoughts through the quotes from the episode. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing. Mary x
Author's Response: Thanks, Mary! Glad you liked it! Love the stars! ~A
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Date: 09/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hi Re my review, there should have been 5 stars!(I'm frightened to try again!) I did the same to poor Vanessa! Sorry. I'm an idiot!! Mary x Author's Response: hehe! No worries, Mary. Stars are pretty no matter how many there are. It's nice to know that the story rated a 5! You rock! ~A Summary:
Written for Angela's "Get Well" Challenge. Two weary, muck-encrusted hunters named Winchester stop for hot showers and a night of rest. Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2476 [Report This] Published: 08/07/08 Updated: 08/07/08
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Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sleep TIght, Sleep Tight, Don't Let the Bedbugs Bite I'm I allowed to use sweet to describe the Winchesters in this?? I like this lots and I'm sure Angela will appreciate the double shower scene. Well Done! Mary x Author's Response: Awww, only 2 1/2 stars? Are you sure you liked it? :-) Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a review.
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Date: 09/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sleep TIght, Sleep Tight, Don't Let the Bedbugs Bite HI Vanessa Sorry this is def. a 5 star production I have no idea what I did that only left 2.5!! It's a great story. Mary x Author's Response: Was just teasing you a bit, Mary. :-) Summary: Between the demon leaving and the paramedics arriving, Sam passes out and it's only then that Dean briefly regains consciousness. Set during In My Time of Dying.
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 714 [Report This] Published: 14/07/08 Updated: 14/07/08
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Date: 14/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh wow, if this can second what on earth came first? This is beautiful, I really like how if makes me feel reading it, almost as if I was sitting there watching the sunrise too. I like that Dean isn't phased by the thought of his death, just that of his family. Thanks for posting. Mary x
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Summary:
Dean and Sam learn to reconnect as they face off against a most cunning adversary. - Set early in season one.
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 27443 [Report This] Published: 15/07/08 Updated: 17/09/08
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Well 20/10 just for the title! Just makes you want to read it. Sam and Dean decked by a gnome! lol. Little dude is so going down. As always you've got the boys to a tee, especially Dean. I loved giggling 101. Think I took that! Great start, looking forward to reading more and I'm sure Angela will enjoy! Mary x Author's Response: Thanks Mary, glad you enjoyed and I hope Angela likes it....I went a bit outside the confines of the challenge but I'm hoping no one minds...lol. ;) Kel
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Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I have this vision of Dean sitting in the Impala discussing life and cheeseburgers with 'Edgar'. At least he wouldn't have answered back like Sam!! lol.Seriously funny. Confession time - I have done the roaming gnome around Scotland with a gnome we 'kidnapped' from my friend's garden, unfortunately he was run over by the car on the way home!! Great story! Mary x Author's Response: HA!!!! So if I need any roaming gnome hints you're the one to hit huh....tooo funny. So glad you enjoyed and thanks for the stars - Kel ;)
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Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Hi, still loving this, it a great read. Can't wait for the next update. Mary x Author's Response: Thanks, Smudge, glad you're diggin it...I'll update soon. - Kel
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Date: 03/09/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Hi Kel Sorry for not reviewing for a while I was trying to finish off one or two other things. Still loving this, love Dean and the gnome in this chapter, poor little guy in a bag. lol. You are crazy you know, but we like you. Take care , mary x Author's Response: LOL, well thanks Mary glad to know you've enjoyed. As for crazy, well maybe just a smidge. Thanks for the R&R - Kel ;)
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