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Penname: Smudge93 [Contact]
Real name: Mary
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Member Since: 09/05/08
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Well I was born in the same year as the star of the show, that's the Impala of course, but classic isn't a word I'd use to describe me. I've a small son and now work part-time so that has finally given me the time to try my hand at story telling, and this wonderful website has giving me the opportunity to share. I live in Scotland, in a little village on the outskirts of Glasgow, one of the main towns. I love my country, my home and my Supernatural although not necessarily in that order.

 Since starting to write these stories I've realised that the hardest part is that you don't have actors with the abitlities of Jensen and Jared to help convey the emotion that you want to put across. What Jensen can do with just a look or a change of expression can take forever to put down on the page and you still can't do it as well as he can. Oh well at least I can have fun trying!

 

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Summary: Entry for the 2009 Christmas challenge. Sam writes a letter to Santa...
Categories: UnGen Challenges, General, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 553
[Report This] Published: 05/12/09 Updated: 05/12/09


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great, really liked what you did here.

God poor Sam, there has to be an up side for him soon!

Mary xx



Author's Response:

Thanks, Mary!

You know, you would hope there would be an upside for him soon! The boy has been through enough as it is and no one seems to let him forget about it...*sighs*

I'm glad you liked it!

Steph

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryPart of the 'Letters to Santa' Challenge.  
Categories: General, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 263
[Report This] Published: 07/12/09 Updated: 07/12/09


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice one! I loved this.

I know another Mary that wouldn't kick young John Winchester outta bed. :) *hides comment from hubby*

Thanks for this, made me smile! Mary xx

 



Author's Response:

I'm not a Mary but I still wouldn't kick young (or older) John out of bed LOL!

Jx

 
Summary: WATCH OUT SANTA!  Sammy's really, really worried this year...

Sammy's only wittle and his spellinks not that good!

Letter to Santa - Christmas challenge - no spoilers

Ammended 10/12/09  Was giving Santa a mince pie but in the US I guess he'd prefer cookies with his milk!


Categories: Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 302
[Report This] Published: 09/12/09 Updated: 09/12/09


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Jacq

I absloutely love this, is so little boy with the spelling and the worry that his big bro' would shot Santa first and ask questions later!

Brought a BIG smile to my face, so thank you, have a good one, Mary xx



Author's Response:

Hey Mary

I just know one of them would think if Santa was a good guy or not! And Sammy was just trying to save him, glad it made you smile, just what I wanted to do.

Merry Christmas & thank you for the review and the baubles, love those gold baubles.

Jacq xx

 
Ouch, Santa! by birdie Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: UnGen Christmas Challenge letter to Santa. Dean's in the dark composing his wish list...
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 592
[Report This] Published: 10/12/09 Updated: 10/12/09


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice one Bev! Loved the ending and the practical list of things which funnily enough were all for Sammy. (and the Impala) 

Poor Dean, afraid and alone in the dark before his brother's voice rescues him.

And as for transformers....toys of Satan! Three hours trying to transform them into something that vaguely looks like a car! Wish I'd had a girl!

Happy Xmas Mary x

 



Author's Response:

Hey Mary.

Haha...Transformers messing with ya head huh?

Have a great Christmas.

bev xx

 
A letter to Santa by Star Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Sam tries to give Dean a final Christmas and ends up writing a letter to Santa.

Written for Ungen Challenge A letter to Santa. As usual  I am late. Lol!

Minor Spoilers for 'A Very Supernatural Christmas'


Categories: Missing Scenes, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 658
[Report This] Published: 11/12/09 Updated: 11/12/09


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Christmas

Beautiful little missing scene and for some reason it makes me feel very Christmassy. (and that is my fav Xmas song)

Nice one! Mary xx



Author's Response: It's my favorite too! it always makes me feel at home and full of Christmas cheer even when i'm away from my family (Like i am now). I'm ecstatic that you liked it!

 
Summary:

Talking trees banner

Wonderful banner by the wonderful Chasidern

When things go wrong on a simple hunt, Sam must deal with a wounded and feverish Dean. A story told in nine drabbles


Categories: General, Drabbles, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 798
[Report This] Published: 16/12/09 Updated: 29/12/09


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed
Date: 17/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Things Gone Wrong

Hey Muffy

Interesting title and interesting start! Mary xx



Author's Response:

Thank you so much hon! I hope it live up to the title!

hugs

 
Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/12/09 Title: Chapter 2: They're Laughing

I feel Dean's pain, confused and loving it!

And Sam the tree? Well he is tall enough.

Well, shit. (that so can't be good for Dean)

More please, Oliver I mean Mary xx



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much! Sam the tree, isn't that the truth? I still remember Gabe's impression of Jared in LA--as a tree LOL

 hugs

 
Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/12/09 Title: Chapter 4: Sounds Like Sam

Long legs, bird nest hair, yeah I can see how Dean would get confused! lol

Mary xx

 
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Date: 20/12/09 Title: Chapter 3: What's for Dinner?

Oh no coyote, no Dean drumsticks for you tonight.

Talking trees! Love it.

Mary xx

 
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Date: 24/12/09 Title: Chapter 5: Growling Unicorns

Unicorns? Yup Dean's got a fever! lol Mary x

 
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Date: 24/12/09 Title: Chapter 6: That bad?

Loved it, nice little exchange. Mary xx

 
Summary: The brothers,  separated for the holidays,  experience christmas in different ways.  As always...Dean-centric.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45842
[Report This] Published: 23/12/09 Updated: 21/03/10


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Mal

I got a smile on my face that could've melted all the snow when I saw this early Xmas present from you! *claps hands*

Nice start, I love Dean struggling with Sam's 'other' life, 'cos poor Dean never got one.

Liked this line - for success, wealth, and for greatness - 'cos Dean is too, just in a different way, a hero for the people.

Going to get a little tipsy, wrap the last of the presents and then sleep and dream that Santa brings me what I want for Xmas. (and that my husband doesn't mind too much!! Guess what I want eh?)

Best of wishes for Xmas and the New Year. May it be safe, happy and all you hoped. Mary xx



Author's Response:

Aw!!  Thanks Mary!  I'll do my best to keep it moving.  Merry Christmas!--ml

 

 
Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooops I forgot the shiny stars!! Mary xx

 
Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/03/10 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Hey

Favorited this and then saved to read all in the one go, and so glad I did. I always love your stories but there is something about this one that really reached in there and broke my heart, for both boys. What they want and what they are missing. All that, while still managing to give me the warm fuzzies as the Andersons rallied to give Dean a Christmas to remember.

I love that the brother's most important thing is still each other even though they are miles apart, Sam worrying and Dean trying not to make him worry. (and as usual going about it the wrong way!)

Don't think that there was a single bit in this that I didn't like, much more than 5 star!

So thanks for the read, Mary xx



Author's Response: Holy moly,  thanks!  As I've written before,  this turned out way longer than I'd envisioned,  it was supposed to be a three day post.  (famous last words)  Thanks for your patience,  and words...mal

 
Summary:

ER trivia by chasidern

Wonderful banner by the amazing Chasidern

A hurt Sam and a bit of pain medicine can lead to an odd conversation.


Categories: Drabbles, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 83
[Report This] Published: 29/12/09 Updated: 29/12/09


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!

So Sam to know all that random stuff and to be able to pull it all out despite being hurt.

So Dean to twist it - hot of nurses! What a boy!

I really needed a pick of ups tonight and this did the trick! :) Mary xx



Author's Response:

Oh, I am so glad you like it!

Hug

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryWritten for a Christmas fic exchange. Dean kills a witch, but there are complications afterwards. Rated T for swearing and content.
Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2274
[Report This] Published: 30/12/09 Updated: 30/12/09


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Stripped Bare

Hey Sue

Wonderful story to end the year on! Thanks for that and I agree with Tree - this should so be an episode!

Have a good new year, Mary xx



Author's Response:

Hi Mary,

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and the stars! Hope you have a happy and story-filled New Year, too.

Sue

 
In Good Company by PADavis Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Dean’s in the woods, again. Nothing good ever comes out of camping, no matter what Sam says.   Season 1 Dean Whump for the H/C Dogme Challenge.  Rated T for language.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4917
[Report This] Published: 06/01/10 Updated: 06/01/10


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Phoebe

Aah, the good old days of S1. I loved this little look at the brothers. Lots of bits that were just them, too many to quote without repeating your story to you but all the little things that make them our boys...the bug, the squelchy in the shoe, Dean hurt and Sam healing him...I could go on forever.

Loved the last few lines and Dean's plea, in particular...if only Sam had in S4.

Nice, gentle story. Thanks for the read, Mary xx

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Mary! I'm so glad you liked it.  I hope you'll try Land of Enchantment too.  I've been a bit busy!  LOL

Phoebe

 
Summary:

Sam has learned from long experience to never try to talk to Dean in the mornings.  It only makes Dean frustrated and grouchy when conversation happens around him, and he can’t hear it. 

 

Special thanks to calUK for the beta work, and the banner.  She's definitely helped me wrap my brain about how I needed to approach this and made it much better!  

 

No talking before Breakfast


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 6291
[Report This] Published: 08/02/10 Updated: 23/08/10


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: 1984

Hey Julie

Don't know how I missed this but I did!

Love the start, poor Dean and John! I love the man but he really does need a slap sometimes. Good thing the teacher is persistant.

On to the next one, Mary xx



Author's Response: But you're here now!  I'm glad you found it!  I love John too, with all of his flaws.  It's so easy to miss seeing things that are right in front of you...

 
Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/03/10 Title: Chapter 2: 1994

Sam and John! Really guys you should know better, especially when Dean has already pointed out that he wasn't wired but then Dean you should have your hearing aid in!

I had a grandpa and he was a rascal for not using his and then moaning that he couldn't hear us!

Liking this, Mary xx



Author's Response: I did too!  He hated the hearing aids, but hated not hearing more.  

 
Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/03/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hey

I like the idea of just having the signs for the hunt, it would be something they could use even if Dean could hear, if they needed to be quiet, or there was noise to overcome.

Liked the swap of roles when Dean disability came into play and Dean not being happy about it! Nice little story as well with the ghosts and them reuniting them.

Looking forward to more, Mary xx



Author's Response: I've always thought that they would figure out a way to adapt to whatever was thrown at them.  I'm glad you liked it!

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryCoda to episode 5.14. Castiel follows Dean outside to tell him something he should've told a long time ago.

Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1459
[Report This] Published: 12/02/10 Updated: 12/02/10


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh this is just beautiful. I really liked the idea of Dean's soul still shining brightly after everything that he has been through.

Dean not dead inside, he is too much pain for that to be true.

Loved this. Mary xx



Author's Response:

Very, very true. The dead don't feel anything, good or bad.

Thank you!

 
Summary:

What if Dean was so weary, felt so empty and so alone he just has to walk away for a while?

Some thoughts following My Bloody Valentine, one shot tag for 5:14 so spoiler alert.

NB there is swearing - this is Dean, ladies.

Dean at Rest


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 979
[Report This] Published: 19/02/10 Updated: 19/02/10


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Dean at Rest

Amen to that last line - he loves his family.

This was great, really enjoyed reading it. Thanks. Mary xx



Author's Response: Thanks Mary - and cheers for the stars too!

 
Summary:

What if Dean hadn't come to Sam in season one, what if Sam had gone to Dean?

What if Sam had been able to Save Jess, but had to return to hunting to keep her safe?

Would Jess be able to adapt to the hunting life? Would she be able to accept Sam when she knows the truth?


Categories: Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 257
[Report This] Published: 19/02/10 Updated: 20/02/10


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Nice idea, Sam going to Dean to keep Jess safe. I will try to review asap but I am the world's worst so please bear with me.

There is a good sense of urgency about this which I really like. Short but snappy.

Few little errors here and there but hey, have you seen my stories? lol

Mary x

 
Summary:

"Sam, I'd do anything for you, even heal your brother but the fact is that I can't, not in this body.  This vessel is barely holding on as it is.  But with you as my vessel..."

How much is Sam willing to sacrifice to prove his loyalty to his brother?  How far is he willing to go to convince Lucifer once and for all that he'd never be his vessel?  But when Dean's life is on the line, would Sam even have the strength to say no?

When Dean is severely wounded after they follow a lead to Detroit, Sam is faced with an impossible decision where any choice he makes would be the wrong one.


Categories: General, One Shots, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7017
[Report This] Published: 02/03/10 Updated: 02/03/10


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Battle

But Sam knew that Dean would never give in to his own wishes for peace. Dean's selfless nature meant he wasn't going to surrender. Ever. Not with the weight of the world literally resting on his shoulders. Not with the world unknowingly counting on him to kick Lucifer's ass and save them from the Apocalypse. Dean once said that he believed the world would end bloody but he was going to go down swinging. And he had. He did. And he was willing to do it again if that was what it took, even after all he had been through. Sam knew it and it made him proud just as much as it broke his heart.

Loved this, so spot on and Sammy, it breaks my heart too.

What a great summary on this, I'd have read it even if I hadn't seen your name next to it and what a story!

I absolutely loved each and every moment of it and I thought that Sam was going to shoot himself but he shot Dean!! OMG. And then Castiel arriving and pulling Sam away! *fails fangirlish*

As for the ending, well what can I say but absolutely bloody brilliant. Loved this as a one shot but I'd equally love to see more. A++++

Mary xx

 
Summary:

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Banner by RoweenaC

After 5.14 Dean faces a secret he's been keeping. Sometimes being dead inside would be so much easier. Spoilers for 5.14


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2786
[Report This] Published: 21/03/10 Updated: 21/03/10


Reviewer: Smudge93 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! Loved it Muffy.

I like how you've taking one of the great wonders of the Winchester universe, where DID Dean's ring go?, and linked it with the horseman storyline! Genius my dear ab-so-bloody-lutely genuis! 

Did I say already that I loved this? I did, well I'll do it again. I loved this!

Mary xx