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Penname: Smudge93 [Contact]
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Real name: Mary Status: Member Member Since: 09/05/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by Smudge93 Summary:
People don't change over night. But some days seem to last a lifetime. And they change you, deep inside, beyond your ability to control it. Sam has been changed in a way Dean wouldn't understand. Tag to Mystery Spot.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2894 [Report This] Published: 26/05/08 Updated: 26/05/08
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Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was beautifully written, and makes a wonderful end scene to Mystery Spot. "This was a close to saying I love you as Dean Winchester would ever come" is a great line because it's soooo true. Look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It was my first shot at a Supernatural fic, so I'm glad you all think it wasn't too out of character. I'm still trying to find my legs writing Sam and Dean, but more is to come. Thanks so much. Summary: One shot for "College Days" challenge at sn.tv. The night Sam leaves for college... the night Dean has to say goodbye..
Categories: Misc, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1279 [Report This] Published: 30/05/08 Updated: 30/05/08
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  Date: 30/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye I really enjoyed this. Really nicely written and you've got the characters of the three Winchesters down to a T. I love that Dean will do anything for his little brother, anything to make him happy, even let him go.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it, I love playing with the Winchesters! Summary:
Set at the end of Simon Says, Dean and Sam en route to Harvelles’ Roadhouse, in answer to Ellens’ phone call summons, hole up in a quiet backwater motel, hoping for an uneventful day to catch up on their sleep and laundry.
Some days however, it's not just the Supernatural that's out to get you! Hurt/angsty Dean, Protective Sam Spoilers throughout Season one and up to and including Simon Says A huge Thank You to Bulletbabe for the real pretty banner. My undying gratitude goes out to Bulletbabe and Birdie, for the never-ending support, advice and encouragement on this, my first ever attempt at fanfic and for the wonderful beta job. I'd a never done it without ya!! Disclaimer: It all belongs to Kripke, I've just had some fun playing with his toys. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 17968 [Report This] Published: 30/05/08 Updated: 10/06/08
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Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 For a first attempt this is stunning, in fact for any attempt it would be stunning. So nice to read a story where Dean is still in peril but its not the usual supernatural beings that are hurting him. Very original. Really looking forward to reading more from you. Mary x
Author's Response: Hi Mary, Thanks for reading I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Poor Dean, it does seem that everything is out to get him! Thanks again for the review. x Jane x Summary: Tag for No Rest For the Wicked, spoilers through No Rest For the Wicked.
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1169 [Report This] Published: 03/06/08 Updated: 03/06/08
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Date: 04/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Back at the House I loved that this was Bobby's POV and the way you wrote it. Congrats on a great story. Mary x Author's Response: Hi Mary, Thanks for your comments. Bobby was clearly missing from the aired final scene, even the TVGuide blogger pointed that out, so a scene from his POV makes sense. He couldn't rea lly add anything to the aired scene, and they wanted to keep the focus on the confrontation between Lilith and the boys, but I certainly expected him to make an appearance afterwards, so this missing scene was born. Sue
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A kind of love story.... Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 223 [Report This] Published: 08/06/08 Updated: 09/06/08
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Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting in Stillness Dean knows no love like that for the Mettalicar! Very good, I like it! Author's Response: Thanks! Summary: Before their world crashed down around them, Mary Winchester always wanted a daughter. When Dean wakes up as the wrong sex, Sam is having the time of his life mocking his big ‘sister’ and the Winchesters have to take a pit stop to figure things out. NO WINCEST! I don’t do that.
Categories: Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 17731 [Report This] Published: 11/06/08 Updated: 13/08/08
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Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Dreams and Sour Awakenings Oh God, My face hurts from laughing. Poor Dean! Even worse poor Sammy with his brother now a hormonal woman! Q? Are you gonna leave Dean as a woman for more than a month and welcome him to our world, 'cos that would be funny!! Mr Kripke may have the copyright to Supernatural, but girl, you so own it! Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D Your questions made me laugh so hard... and now that you mention it I haven't decided whether I really am that cruel or not yet... he he! Seriously, your review really made me smile so thank you absolute loads!
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Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Whatsername It's so wrong! Ok so I can just about picture Dean as a hot girl, that's fine - but I can't, however, get Jensen's voice out my head as I read the words and it is so messing with my head. lol. It's ages since I've read something that makes me laugh like this does. This story's great, thanks for sharing. Author's Response: It is so unbelievably hard... picturing Dean as a girl and yeah, I'm the same, I just keep hearing his voice! lol Thank you so much! ^^ Glad you like it.
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Date: 28/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Fighting a war against the mirror I loved the "As soon as we're not in public I'm going to kill you...painfully" line - so Dean! Also the delicate features/angry scowl one made me smile. The pictures you put in my head with this story!! If he was real poor Dean would have a bigger complex than he already has after the things we do to him on this site! My husband read the thong bit and his comment was - maybe that's what they're making Dean do in hell, wear that! Anyway I'm rambling, thanks for the update, keep typing girl. Author's Response: Thank you so much fo reading :D So glad you're enjoying. He really would have a huge complex wouldn't he, bless him... the poor poor thing, but we all love torturing him so much, in so many ways. And the thong comment... oh God, I so wouldn't put it past them! :P Thanks again!
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Date: 10/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: When you're looking like that Loving this Rae Sam's a good name for a dog don't you think?? Loved the 'bitch slap' line.lol Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! So glad that you are, it's so much fun to write, different from the usual stuff. Oh yeah! Sam's a great name for dog :D
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Date: 25/07/08 Title: Chapter 8: Just acting like we're animals... Awesome Rae. Really enjoying this story. Liked the funny bits, love the creepy edge that's there now Can't wait for the next update. Mary x Author's Response: Thanks! Yep, it's turned a little creepy now but I'm hoping to still keep the funny :D
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Date: 31/07/08 Title: Chapter 9: Goddess on my knees Ace as always, can't wait to see who's screaming, the Kishi or the actual girl, guy...Nadean! This story is fantastic. Update soon please! Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much, plan to get writing again on this pretty quickly, one of the few stories that seems to come semi-easy at the moment. Thanks again.
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Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 10: Not like the other girls Still loving this, don't really want it to end but really want my boy back!! Poor Dean even as a woman his luck is lousy. You are gonna turn him back...aren't you?? Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D I know what you mean, gotta have him back as a guy... right? Maybe... mwuahahaha!
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Date: 17/08/08 Title: Chapter 12: It's a brand new day Loved this Rae, really good mix of hysterically funny, creepy and brotherly banter. Soooo glad that Dean is Dean again though! Keep up the good work. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! Was so much fun to write so I'l really glad you enjoyed it! ^_^ Couldn't leave Dean a girl, he he... not forever anyway. I got it pointed out to me as well that the last chapter was the only time in the story that he was a guy, he he... :D Thanks again! Summary: Why does Dean hide his intelligence
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 37829 [Report This] Published: 11/06/08 Updated: 03/02/09
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Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Only one thing wrong with this story, the updates can't come fast enough!! lol Great story, loving it! Mary x Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll do my best to update as soon as possible.
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Date: 24/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 This is a great story, I was almost in tears when they were taking Sam off Dean in the court. I love the name Nickerson - all I could think of was 'Nick your sons' Sad but that is the way my mind works. Anyway, fab, can't wait to read more. Mary x Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad your enjoying the story. Summary:
A what if what if there had been more Winchester children would anything be different I will not show all episodes and it might not feature either winchester brother in the chapter and they are not in the same order  Categories: Romance, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Winchester chronicles Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 19989 [Report This] Published: 13/06/08 Updated: 09/10/08
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Date: 16/07/08 Title: Chapter 11: Faith Hi folks A review as promised. I like how you've put your own characters through the episodes. Keep going, I'm interested to see what you do with this. I'll keep a look out for your updates. Mary x Summary:
I wrote this story under the penname Guiltypleasure--so that it would be separate from the thread that starts with What Goes Around, Comes Around. --This story takes place somewhere after the St. Louis incident--the brothers have been running from the law for some time. Dean is stalked and caught by a woman with a grudge, but her need for revenge is a tool that a demon finds useful. Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 32202 [Report This] Published: 14/06/08 Updated: 16/07/08
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 First a sorry, I read you first two chapters but didn't get time to review them at the time. I like this story, it's different and I like the way it snakes along, its path changing slightly as it goes on. I also like the female characters, even the nutty police woman because they feel real. Looking for to your next update! Mary x Summary:
Set after Season Three and they (wishful thinking) bring Dean back (because they better) Dean hasn't been sleeping well since he returned from hell. He has nightmares and pretty much avoids sleep at all cost. Sam get's on his case and...then something happens to the Impala that they never thought would ever happen--ever. Categories: General, AU, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 20824 [Report This] Published: 16/06/08 Updated: 20/08/08
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Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Apologies! What a totally weird, totally strange but totally wonderful story. Very original, looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Sweet, thanks for the review!
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: So right it's Wrong Love this, keep writing. Bobby laughing, are you sure he can?? he he Author's Response: lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: So right it's Wrong Sorry little p.s. I love your banner!!
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Date: 26/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Waking up is Hard to Do. This story is very strange and this is the thing that I really like about it. It's like nothing I've read before, and I mean that in a good way. I love the Impala and I really kinda like Cherry too. She's sweet. Keep writing please! Mary x
Author's Response: Not to Sam, but you know. to everyone else! Thanks for the review!
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Date: 16/07/08 Title: Chapter 13: The Plan HI Sorry for not reviewing for a while but I was desperately fighting with my own story, and it was winning. Finally got time to read something else and started here. Still enjoying this story lots, I really love Cherry, looking forward to what you do with this. Keep up the good work, Mary x Author's Response: No problem, I understand the need to write. I'm glad...it's winning? if that's a good thing? but yea i'm glad you chose to read my story! i'm happy you like it! Thanks for you're awesome review! You rock!
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Date: 31/07/08 Title: Chapter 19: Dreamless This is a great story and I hope that the plot bunny bites you soon and lets you take it on! Mary x Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I hope so as well...sigh. I hope it doesn't hurt though..that would kind of suck...anyways, thanks for the review, like always...YOU ROCK!
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Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 20: Please Only 42%, are you sure??? Thanks for updating, keep up the good work. Hope you feel better soon! Some wee stars to brighten your day. Mary x Summary:
Dean just wanted Sam to unwind. A night out ends in a disaster of a decidedly non-supernatural nature. A Teenchesters short story. Rated for strong language and gritty issues. Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 12075 [Report This] Published: 18/06/08 Updated: 23/06/08
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Date: 18/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Demons I get but people are crazy. Nice start, interested to see where its gonna go. I love the 'widdle Sammy' line, made me lol. I could hear and see Dean as I read it. Need more please..... Author's Response: Thanks. I'm a real Sam girl but Dean is a pleasure to write. Liz x |
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