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Penname: Smudge93 [Contact]
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Real name: Mary Status: Member Member Since: 09/05/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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Set mid season 4. Mild spoilers, but nothing specific. In 1987, John has a bad case of zombies - perhaps his hardest yet. Meanwhile, in 2009, his boys discover that while some witches do no harm, objects in the rear view memory may appear hazier than they are. And they carry shovels. Rated T for language. Categories: General, Romance, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 61073 [Report This] Published: 09/08/09 Updated: 13/10/09
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 Date: 07/10/09 Title: Chapter 17: Angrier By A Head How did I miss 3 updates!! Never mind more to read at the one time! Loved Sam's little internal at the start. He likes Nara too? Interesting. Love that he's mad because he thinks she is just another piece of skirt to Dean! Like the tension and the undertone between the boys later in this chapter. Dean really has got it bad for her ain't he? Mary x
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Date: 07/10/09 Title: Chapter 18: Butting Heads Hi there OOh, the plot thickens! can't wait to see where this is going and have I told you that I love Nara? Yeah, well I'll tell you again....she's great. Can Dean take her with him when he goes? No...damn. Mary xx
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Date: 07/10/09 Title: Chapter 19: Hearts vs Heads (Home Game) Caught up! Boys! Always look in the journal first! *slaps their heads together* So it all links to the Perry family? And John thought he'd solved it but hadn't? Poor Sam, but I love the tension between Dean and Nara, it kinda sizzles from the page and protective Dean! Ow! He can be protective of me anytime but I can see why she would be annoyed with him! lol
Author's Response: Thanks for the insight - good to know what people like... Personally, I wouldn't mind Dean as my bodyguard at all, LOL. Thanks for the stars!
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Date: 12/10/09 Title: Chapter 20: How To Get A Head In Hunting Er-hmm, don't think I didn't see that little 'flat out' you sneaked in there. lol Can't wait to see where you are taking this.... Mary x
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Date: 12/10/09 Title: Chapter 21: Hubble Bubble, Toil And Shovel FAV Bits - “Wouldn’t say no,” Dean allowed, heading back toward the door, and by extension, her. “That’s your trouble,” Sam breathed to himself. “You want me to draw you a diagram?” Love them!! LMAO. I have this vision of all these little hands waving in the air and a nice little shout out to Lazarus Rising as well! Sad that the next one is the last but I want to know how it ends too! Mary x
Author's Response: Got to get a few ep links in there somehow, LOL. Thanks for reading - and the stars!! :)
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Date: 13/10/09 Title: Chapter 22: Hearts vs Heads (Away Game) Hey, That was freakin' awesome! Loved it all, and the ending was just perfect. Chief Frost was a great OC, she fitted in with the boys really well - and with one brother rather more than that! Cheers Mary x
Author's Response: Glad it panned out ok - didn't know how the conclusion would be received. Ta for the stars! Summary: Dean is eight, Sam half of that and John's not around. The man at the grocery store keeps an eye on thieves and learns a thing or two from the Winchesters. Outsider POV.
Categories: Wee!chester, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1446 [Report This] Published: 13/08/09 Updated: 13/08/09
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Date: 14/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hi there This was lovely, I really liked the way it read and the fact the Dean didn't want to steal but had to, so he left something in return....that was gorgeous! Shiny stars to you, Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! I didn't wanted to lable Dean as a straight out thief, so the whole concept of childish trades made much more sense to me. Glad you liked. Summary: Ungen School drabble, from the Stanford years.
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 107 [Report This] Published: 13/08/09 Updated: 13/08/09
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Date: 14/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Summer Break Hey Sue, I liked this, poor Dean. This really seems like the kind of thing that he might have done. Just needing to connect with his brother without distrupting his schooling. Sam planning ahead is very like Sam too. Cheers, Mary x Author's Response: Hi Mary, Thank you so much for reviewing and double thanks for the stars. Glad this sounded in character for both boys. Sue Summary:
Set before season 1. Dean heads to Bobby's place, in order to care for his Impala and himself.
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 9926 [Report This] Published: 19/08/09 Updated: 30/08/09
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Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 HI Oshadow Nice start, and a lovely description of who and what Bobby is. Looking forward to more. Mary x Author's Response: Mary X, Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment. I'm glad that you love how I've described Bobby. I should have another chapter up soon.
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue Sorry for not reviewing every chapter, I lost track of this, - forgot to favourite (slaps own hand). Really enjoyed this tale, liked the Impala's thoughts in the last chapter. Thanks, Mary x Author's Response: Mary, It's ok that you didn't review every chapter. I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment and rate my story. *bg* I'm glad that you enjoyed the story and liked how I added the Impala's POV. Thanks again for your feedback on my story. Summary: Missing scene from 'Sex and Violence'. Dean doesn't really try to fight the control of the siren... not like he would have fought it any other time before. Things have changed and the brothers are no longer the same people they were before.
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1483 [Report This] Published: 20/08/09 Updated: 20/08/09
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Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Loved this. You can feel how unloved, useless and needy Dean feels in this....it bleeds from the screen. Dean only needs one person to be there for him, his brother, yet here is the siren offering up his whole family back to him on a plate. WHo wouldn't take that? And I love the last line. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you! I really felt that the siren's venom was only part of its power, that, somehow, what it offered its victims had also to have some importance. And yeah, nothing's more important to Dean than family. Summary:
 Maybe Sam was right, he'd watched one too many Romero films.Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 102 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Best one I've read, I love the description of the zombies and the title! Mary x Author's Response: Thanks Mary. I wanted to use metamorphosis and my twisted mind took care of the rest. Zombies, ewe, dead, flesh eating creatures. Make my skin crawl thinking about them. The title was courtesy of my daughter, huge Resident Evil fan. The stars are lovely! Crystal Summary:
Countdown Drabble Challenge. One of the brothers reflects on his destiny.Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yeah, like this, very nicely dark and delicious dark thoughts. Mary x Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and leaving a review. Summary:
Countdown Drabble Challenge. Okay, I couldn't help myself and had to do another. Sam's sick and Dean's being an awesome big brother.Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 97 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A cool little brother moment, loved the titles you used. Nice one! Mary x Author's Response: Thank you, Mary. I'm happy you liked it. Summary:
Its all in the bloodCategories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 99 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oooh, very dark and very, very good. Mary x Author's Response: Mary again my thanks. I love the way this dark little one turned out. You know our boys both blame themselves for the events of S4. Crystal Summary: Countdown Drabble Challenge
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 103 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey you used BM too! Yeah! This has a lovely melancholy feel to it, liked! Mary x Summary:
Poses the question... do vampires ever lose their teeth? Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 99 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OMG - this is great! Love the mystery spot on my neck! LMAO Adds a whole new meaning to necking! Mary x Summary:
Sometimes believing just isn't enough. Part of the Countdown Challenge. As an extra - I haven't italicised the episode titles, it's down to you to spot them. 100 words exactly - I'm going to help myself to a cookie now :)Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 105 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 HI Jenny This was great, liked the long distance call to heaven to save Sam. Mary x Author's Response: Thanks Mary. It just seemed to fit in so nicely with the little plot I had going here. Summary:
Drabble for the Countdown challenge...
Categories: General, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 110 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Loved this, it flows really well. Loved that song from the best trailer ever for Supernatural as well. Like you said, very haunting. Mary x Author's Response: Best trailer ever, damn right. Finally got my hands on the song, too! I was a little worried about the lack of descriptive elements in this one. Normally, I comeup with lots of them. But this just sounded like a dialogue like in a script from the get go. Ta for the review and the stars! Ilka Summary:
another one... this one's unbeta'ed. Please be gentle... Categories: General, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 115 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Clowns on Planes You know I wanted to do a plane one and I couldn't get it to go where I wanted it, might have another try 'cos this is great. Loved the 'Nemo' reference! MAry x Author's Response: Mary, thanks for the stars and the review! I needed a clown in the drabble and my mind came up with Nemo, the clownfish. Heh. Guess it's an occupational hazard, workin as an assistant teacher does things to ya. Bad, evil, twisted things... Hugs, Ilka Summary:
Drabble for the countdown challenge. Titles are in bold. Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 95 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Heaven and hell as one 'cos the angels are really coming across as the good guys yet! Liked this! Mary x Author's Response: Lol thanks! hehe I wanted it to seem like the angels were evil, mainly Zach because he is a dick with wings Jess Summary:
An unsatisfactory conclusion to a hunt leaves Dean restless and Sam needing answers. Here's my effort for the UnGen pre season five drabble challenge. By my word count it's 100 on the nose Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: More Than a Feeling This is great, loved the family, remains one! Mary x Author's Response: Hi Mary, Yeah, I just had to squeeze that one in...thank you so much for the review! Jane x Summary:
One brother speaks from the heart. Summer Countdown Episode Titles Drabble Challenge. Exactly 100 words! Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: Every Word Has Meaning Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 24/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Family This is lovely and do you know what, I know that it is Sam thinking of Dean but the immediate thought I had was Dean thinking of Bobby, it was the 'you gave me a home' part. Nice one BJ, Mary x Summary:
Settle down, and get the blankets all tucked in right, and let me finish the book we've been reading. You want to find out what happens to the Winchesters, don't you? Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 105 [Report This] Published: 25/08/09 Updated: 25/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey this is cute! I like it!! And that last part, I hear it every night as I put my boy to bed! Hope you feel better soon! Mary x Author's Response: I'll be joining you with the cough syrup in another day as my symptoms move down into my chest. Those summer colds are the WORST! I'm glad you liked my drabble- I knew as I was writing it that it was unusual, but sometimes that's just how things go! Summary:
Sam and Dean go to McMinnville Tennessee to stop a seal from being broken. In the course of the job, Dean confronts one of his torturers from hell, and Sam must juggle the hunt with Ruby's demands for more training. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 99246 [Report This] Published: 29/08/09 Updated: 17/03/10
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Date: 11/12/09 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Hey there Glad to see this back and with another great chapter, but that is an EVIL cliffie my dear! Loved Dean's potion balloons, so very him. Can't wait for the next one, Mary xx Author's Response: You guys don't have to worry about the cliffy. The next chapters already done and being beta'd, so it should be up very soon! Thanks for reading! I truly appreciate your patience and your comments. |
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