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Real name: Mary Status: Member Member Since: 09/05/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by Smudge93 Summary: hell's playground became a haunting ground as a young man searched for his lost brother.
 Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 6092 [Report This] Published: 08/07/09 Updated: 04/10/09
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 Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Lucas verse 4 Hey Like the part with the stepping through the gate. And the seperate rooms were a great idea, how would you like to spend your eternity.... OOH...Dean's a devil's pet, Sam' is almost there. Still enjoying this. Love the whole tone to your writing it has a nice pace to it...feels like I'm walking along with Sam. Mary x Mary x
Author's Response: that's what i wanted it to turn out so i'm smiling my teeth of now.
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Lucas... verse5 He's found him but he can't reach him, the prize in the glass cage. And Lucifer is on he's way...can't help feeling that he is coming for our boy! Like the exchange with Sam and Lucas in this as well, Sam wanting to help Dean and not being able to and Lucas' - I'm just a guide. Mary x Author's Response: the idea behind lucas will take a weird twist , i hope you will stay in the front row for that one....winks. Thanks again hun....like you reviewd every chappy.....like....omg
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Lucas...verse 6 I really liked this chapter, Lucy collecting his plaything and then Dean's little butterfly, sitting safe with his soul in the corner while Dean himself is tortured. Will the devil find the butterfly or will Sam find a way to save his brother? I want to know! Sorry if I don't get to review every chapter but I will read and review as I can. This is an usual but really interesting story, glad I found it. Mary x Author's Response: The honner is all mine. I work hard on these things and i wanted this one to be a bit different to...i hope you keep liking it. big hugs and kisses copycat666
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Date: 28/09/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Lucas...verse 7 Oooh loved this one. Hope sometimes is all we have and poor Dean has to let his go. Interested to see where this is going! Mary x Summary:
They all saw the flames. They all stood around while the firemen did their work. They all wished there was something that they could do. Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1822 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hi there I loved this, it was unusual and funny (I have a neighbour just like Helen Weeks!) and heartwarming too. People always come through in times of adversity for their neighbours and their friend and you showed that beautifully here. I loved the last one, Mary taking her son for granted (hope you know what I mean by that) and Lisa longing to be able to be in that postion. And she need to do something, anything to show that she cared was so sweet and so sad too. Very nice and good with this one, :) Mary xx Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you've let me be silly with those reviews. I probably won't be "nice and good" with all your stories, but it has been fun! Bernie and Helen were loosely based on my grandparents- he was always fiddling with his hearing aid, and she was always shrieking at him about something. I am so glad that you liked the story. Thank you for reviewing! Summary:
Entry for the Fire Challenge 2009. And then the world stops.
Thanks again for all the kind words about my artworks. I really, really appreciate them! I am proud to be a part of this great community! And thanks, Tree, for offering us such a great challenge! *smishes ya* I am such a crappy friend. I forgot the most important bit here. Cal, please accept my eternal thanks. I could have never done any of these things without your constant support. You challenge me to give my best, you help me up when I stumble. Thanks for that. I am so glad to have met you. You are a true friend and an awesome beta! Miss ya! This one is for you Cal-Kiddo! Can't wait to give you an overdue hug. You deserve it and will have to endure it! No matter what. Hey, I don't do chick-flick either, so what?! Categories: General, UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 852 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: She This was great, loved the format and loved this part - He looks up at her, his lips slightly parted ready to smile. Love and warmth float up but never reach her. His presence a reminder of a future lost by her past. Innocence brightens his face, filling her heart with longing. Soo sad, Mary xx
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: He Wow, poor John! This was great, chilling with loads of emotion in it. Loved it, Mary x
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: It a ghastly barbecue - that made me shiver! This was great! Mary xx Summary:
Ungen summer fire challenge entry Memories of fire will remain scorched in three specific minds for all their lives even if they start to fade over time... Season 4 spoilers Categories: UnGen Challenges, General, Missing Scenes, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 2200 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Spider Loved it. This line was so sad, the spider and the man joined in grief. - My home, my life, my love… all gone. Too quick. Too soon. I couldn’t even do anything to stop it. And now my only hope for revenge against whatever had caused it is the man who’s shoulder I currently sit on, his arms wrapped tight around the mini ones that the woman with no fear had given him. Great and unusual POV! Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much!! So glad you liked it 'cause it really was so much fun to write :D I can be a bit of an oddball at times so I'm really glad people have taken to my randomness and the spider's POV, hehe.
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: John Hanky! I need a hanky! Damn woman that one got to me especially the end and little Dean -Tiny arms wrapped around John and tiny fingers stroked his arm and it was all John could do to hold himself together. - you and me both John. Awesome! Mary xx Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I had to throw little Dean in there at the end too after remembering how John said Dean used to comfort him when he got back from a hunt once. Poor Johnny. Thanks again Mary!!
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Lucifer Yes, I really do love fire. Yes, and I really do love this piece. Is wow enough? Think it is and I'll leave it at that. Mary xx Author's Response: ^_^ Thank you soo much! Means a lot that you liked it!! Summary:
It started with fire... UnGen summer challenge. Spoilers for seasons 1-4. Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 411 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: (not) Kate Milligan This is really usual, I just loved it to bits. This line is great - She leans in again. “Ironic,” she says. “How you wanted to be normal so bad, but you were the reason it never happened.” Cheers Mary xx Summary:
Ungen Fire Challenge story, three points of view about that pivotal night in the Winchester family history. Huge thanks to Chasidern for the amazing banner, I've been sitting on it for weeks, anxiously waiting for the signal to post!
Categories: General, UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3265 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Ring of Fire Hi Sue Loved it, especially the feelings at the end of each piece, John's in particular for missing seeing Mary at the house with the boys and then Dean's....what can I say, heartbreaking. Mary xx Author's Response: Hi Mary, Thank you so much for the great review. I was going for something emo without being too girly, glad I succeeded. Sue Summary:
My entry for the UnGen Summer Fire Challenge. Mary's view... Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1396 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was beautiful, liked it a lot. Mary xx Summary: Dean loses the toss, jumps into the hole, takes off his shirt...
Drabble word: Sweat...as in perspire to be polite. Enjoy... Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 24/07/09 Updated: 24/07/09
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Date: 24/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Mmm....Mmm.....Mmm. 'Nuf said! :) Mary x Author's Response: Hey Mary I Know...say nothing, just gaze in awe...lol Thank you for the review and 5 stars Jacq x Summary:
Continuation of my Andy Core stories. Follows the season 1 and 2 stories [On the Road with the Winchesters, On this Road Forevermore] Categories: General, Romance, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 64292 [Report This] Published: 31/07/09 Updated: 06/02/11
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Date: 24/03/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Kids are Alright Part 3 Been lurking on this one but just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying what you are doing here, this is a whole lot of work and your OC really just fits right in there as if she had always been with them. Great read, so thanks, Mary x Summary: Advice a big brother can give before his little brother's first date. Written for the School drabble challenge.
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 103 [Report This] Published: 05/08/09 Updated: 05/08/09
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Date: 10/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Love Lessons Hi! I can so see this happening! lol Poor Sam aren't older siblings just put on this earth to embarrass the heck out of you? I know mine where! Loved it. Mary xx Author's Response: Thank you! I drive boys in the school carpool, and they are always pounding on each other, or teasing one another. I thought it would be fun to write about! Unfortunately, I come from three generations of just girls- my mother just had 1 sister, I have 1 sister, and I have two girls. I'm glad you could see it happening, because I made it up, and have NO IDEA what I'd do with boys. Summary:
The challenge word is School and this is a bit of uncomplicated objectification! 100 on the nose! Thanks Kripke for the loan of the material to work with! Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 06/08/09 Updated: 06/08/09
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Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bev, I love you. This gave me the biggest smile of my week. Wet Dean....oowww! Mary x Author's Response: Yeah Mary! Well then my work is done! I just fancied a bit of unadulterated adoration! He is sooooo easy on the eye! Many thanks for reviewing, loves me a review! bev xx Summary:
Sometimes its not the things that go bump in the night that are the scariest... Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 102 [Report This] Published: 06/08/09 Updated: 06/08/09
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Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 First day at a new school, I remember it well, and my teacher was a horror! Loved this, Mary x Author's Response: Oh Mary- been there , done that too...I was totally convinced that my 5th grade teacher ate children... Thanks for the review! Summary:
Set mid season 4. Mild spoilers, but nothing specific. In 1987, John has a bad case of zombies - perhaps his hardest yet. Meanwhile, in 2009, his boys discover that while some witches do no harm, objects in the rear view memory may appear hazier than they are. And they carry shovels. Rated T for language. Categories: General, Romance, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 61073 [Report This] Published: 09/08/09 Updated: 13/10/09
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Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 8: Wham, Bam, Thank You, Sam Hey TB Sorry I've been lurking on this one but I thought I'd raise my ugly head and let you know that I'm loving this. (I read it at work but we can't sign in and review.) So are they gonna bump uglies or what?? :) Mary x Author's Response: Thanks! I just love that phrase 'bump uglies', LOL. I'd like to say yay or nay, but you'll just have to wait and see, ROFL. Ta for reading and reviewing!
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Date: 06/09/09 Title: Chapter 9: Like A Hole In The Head O so I thought Nara was going to be Chief Frost and you pulled a fast one. Nice!! Nara seems to have changed just a little and did Jo and James do something naughty??? Looking forward to the next part and the formatting seems fine. Mary x Author's Response: Aaaahhh - you thought Nara was Frost? (I'm laughing on the inside right now, cos I know what comes next, ROFL!) Thanks for your time! And the stars - much appreciated. :)
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Date: 19/09/09 Title: Chapter 12: And Really Bad Heads... Playing catch up again! Sorry. Poor Dean, I remember very well the kind of hangover that our boy has, luckily now I have a child I no longer do that - hangovers and children DO NOT mixed well! I have a feeling that Nara Harrison and Dean's Nara ain't the same person and I know that you are going to tell me if I'm wrong! lol Look forward to more, Mary x Author's Response: I'm playing catch up with the reviews, don't feel bad for writing one at all! Hope it's still pushing the right buttons - I know I'm a few chapters ahead of you guys but if I hadn't paid for gel nails I'd be biting them right now. LOL Thanks for the continued support - and the stars!
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Date: 21/09/09 Title: Chapter 13: Coming To A Head Teehee! That was so naughty! First I thought that Chief Jo was Nara then you threw me a curve ball with Mrs Harrison, and then I realised that you'd thrown me a curve ball just before you revealed that you had! (Does that make sense? lol) Liked it. Roll on the next chapter! Mary xx
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Date: 27/09/09 Title: Chapter 15: Head Over Heels? Hi I LOVED clueless Sam! That was funny! Dean and Nara are fun together! Looking forward to the rest, Mary x Author's Response: Purr wee Sam, he does so often miss the fine print, eh? Don't worry, he'll get it. Eventually, LOL.
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Date: 01/10/09 Title: Chapter 16: Or Heels Over Heads? Hey Dean, the Impala's back seat and an OFC that I actually like! Thank you! But you are, like the man himself, a horrible tease TB. lol Like how Dean does his best work on his back, they never do show enough of that on the show do they? *smiles* Looking forward to the sh*t hitting the fan and Sam finding out his brother's idea of working flat out. Mary xx Author's Response: I am so relieved Frost is being well received - was worried she'd be booed LOL. And I love that phrase - 'working flat out'! Wish I'd used it! ROFL Ta for reading and reviewing, and stars are better than pie. :) |
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