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Penname: Smudge93 [Contact]
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Real name: Mary Status: Member Member Since: 09/05/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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After Sam, then Dean, are injured on hunt, Sam goes missing. Taken by the object of their hunt. Dean realizes hunter has become hunted and it is all more sinister and far more personal than he could ever have dreamed. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 51905 [Report This] Published: 11/08/08 Updated: 01/09/08
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 Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Amazing. I've loved every minute of this story, the monster is damned creepy, things you can't see always are more scary. My favourite kind. The connection between the boys in this is just wonderful, and I love the ending. And the thing isn't dead yet??? Absolutely brilliant. Roll on the next one! Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love things that you can't see. There is a fabulous short story called "something wicked" I think it's by Bradbury, but don't quote me on that! But you never see the thing and it's scary, scary, scary. I love the boys in this one. Sometimes they are just so easy to write and work with! This story was one that just flowed. I knew the thing wasn't dead, I knew it wouldn't, couldn't be killed easily. But I have a vague idea that might lead to a return to this storyline. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Hugs, Muffy! Summary: " remember hat dad taught ya...k?, remember what I taught you."
Categories: One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 44 [Report This] Published: 20/08/08 Updated: 20/08/08
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Date: 20/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Sweet, I like it! Mary x Author's Response: haha this poem just kinda came to me yeaterday when I was really bored!! glad ya like it though!!! thank you for taking the time to read and reveiw!!
Jessica! Summary:
Two brothers and their father become a case for Sam and Dean. But hunting these things and saving these people may bring more emotional baggage than even these two Unshed Man-Tear Wranglers can handle. Can Dean control his roving eye or button-fly? Can Sam stick to his Huff Quota? Can they remember what they came for and do their job? Categories: Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 32168 [Report This] Published: 24/08/08 Updated: 16/09/08
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Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Like this. It a cool, interesting little story. Can't wait to see what happens. Hey, Dean sees dead people! Great read, thanks for sharing. Mary xx Author's Response: Thanks for the stars!! Better than pie! Glad you're liking it...
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Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Holy cow, your cliffies are worse than mine, I was expecting Dean to be missing when Sam went into the room, not half way through. I love a great ghost story and this...this is a great ghost story. Looking forward to more! Mary x Author's Response: Thank you for the stars! Loving my stars, LOL Your review has made my day - no, 48 hours. Thanks so much - glad you're enjoying it!
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Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Tuesday, I can't wait till Tuesday!!!! It'll be me sending the engineer home in little bags I can tell you that!!! Either him or you!! LOL What has Sam done to his brother!! Sam in the graveyard - so funny. This story is ace! Happy flat moving and no unpacking just the pc ok!!! Take care Mary xx Author's Response: PC? PC! Pthththththttthhh! I shall be unpacking my 20 inch micro-thin yet unbelieveably clever piece of technological perfection hitherto known as my iMac, young lady, ROFL And you said "ace" - I'm so thrilled! I'm trying to bring this word back around where I teach the little'uns... It's an uphill struggle, I can tell you. Anyway, thanks very much for all the reviews, whatever order they came in - and the stars! Stars are better than pie! I shall endeavour to have the next chapter up before Tuesday is done. After all, I am about 11 hours in front of the time on this board... Thanks again!
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Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Sitting at work bored and this has out a smile on my face! Even better there are two chapters to enjoy! Thank you!!
Mary x
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Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Hi sorry I've reviewed these out of order! Read it all through and then went back and did the reviews. A love this story, Dean is so sweet in this, protecting the two boys, even if the idiot did waste their guardian in the first place! Pah! Mary x
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Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 HI, See you got your iMac and internet up and working then? Hope the move went smoothly adn you got in alright. I told you I'd be lurking here! This story is great, or should I say ace! Can't be much more left to go which is sad 'cos I've really enjoyed reading it, the boys are great in this, both sets! Mary xx
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Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Oh, that was sneaky, I review the last chappie and then realised that you'd sneaked the last on in while I wasn't looking!! I loved this story, really did. There is something about a really good ghost story that catches me and this one had all the elements - great bad ghost, loved the little boys and you got Sam and Dean spot on. Loved the little back story with the 8 ball. Awesome and Ace! Cheers til the next time. Mary xx
Author's Response: Aw, thank you kindly, :) I worry my S&D aren't always right, so to hear they're pretty good is really a relief! Thanks! And thanks for the stars - better than pie!
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He knew John would come for them one day, but sometimes heroes need help and sometimes hope needs action. Characters: Sam, Dean, John Categories: Wee!chester, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 4548 [Report This] Published: 01/09/08 Updated: 15/12/08
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Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: In This House Ok, I'm hooked, nicely written and interesting. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you Mary. Chapter 2 is coming soon, I'm so sorry it's taken so long! Summary:
An afternoon off, a bit of sun, a bit of laundry... Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1306 [Report This] Published: 02/09/08 Updated: 02/09/08
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Date: 02/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Absolutely wonderful! I loved this. Thanks for sharing, Mary x Author's Response: thanks for reviewing, glad you liked it cal Summary:
Set after Season 3...Sam has no idea what's going on. All of a sudden, he was with Dean, holding his lifeless body in his arms, and then next he was in another room being told his brother was alive. Which one is reality and which one is nothing but a lie? Categories: General, AU, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 14459 [Report This] Published: 07/09/08 Updated: 14/10/08
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Date: 11/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Tidbits of Information Hi This is good, I'm as confused as Sam but that's really the whole point isn't it? Feel what he feels? Can't wait for more, and no its not slow, its interesting,a nice paced gradual build up. Mary x Author's Response: Its good that you're confused. Trust me! I'm glad that you are liking the story and the pace. It means a lot to hear that. I hope you continue to check back for updates. Thanks so much for the review.
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Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 4: Superficial Wounds I love this. I have absolutely no idea what is going on but I love it. Poor Sam, mind games or fevered imagination??? Can't wait to find out more. Mary xx *sobs* enjoy the premiere, the UK has another four months to wait. Very very unfair!! Think I'll emigrate! Author's Response: I didn't know what was going on but now I do...so...that's definitely a good thing. But as for poor Sam...I think that might take awhile to figure out. I'm sorry you don't get to see the premiere though. *pouts* Thank you so much for your review. I hope you continue to check back for updates. Summary:
A simple ailment hides a bigger problem Set immediately after the Season 2 episode Everybody Loves A Clown Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 12098 [Report This] Published: 10/09/08 Updated: 13/09/08
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Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey Jules Good luck with the changing the modem, you may need it!! This is a great story so far, looking forward to the rest of it. Cheers Mary x Author's Response: Hi, Mary - and yes, we'll need the luck of the Irish I think. This wireless broadband stuff is complicated! That's why my auntie is doing it and not me! And as you can see, it's still not up and running - not yet. We can only call Monday to Friday during business hours to activate the SIM card for the wireless modem, so I'm still on the old ADSL for the weekend. Wish us luck on Monday. Thanks for the review - so glad that you're enjoying the little big of angst.......Jules
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Date: 14/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Well that was just great, loved every minute of it, absolutely wonderful to read. I loved both brothers in this but especially Sam, you got him spot on. Thanks for this one, look forward to your return in October. Mary x Author's Response: Thanks, Mary. And thank you for the feedback. When I first started writing SN fanfiction, I was a bit wary of writing Sam, as I couldn't quite get a read on him. Dean I could see straight through - and I just loved him more for it. But Sam - he was a bit of a mystery. It's good to know that I can get inside his head a bit more these days. And yes, I will definitely be back. Fredo would hunt me down and shoot my bum full of rock salt if I stay away too long. And she would stop sending me pretties like the ones I got via email this morning...*sigh*... Hunter starts in October - there, I've even given you a spoiler - aren't I good? LOL....*hugs*....Jules Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 17/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Heck yeah! Add as many as you like! I loved the Starsky and Hutch one but then I am a sucker for two guys and a cool car (have you noticed how Jensen and Paul MG walk alike?? Sorry ransom I know) Do I look like Huggy Bear - great line. Anyhow this was great, more!!!!! Cheers Mary xx Summary:
RUNNING ON EMPTY By supernaturaldh Summary: Now that Dean was back from the dead, no hunters would get his little brother. Of course, that was wishful thinking on his part. Set in Season 3. Hurt Sam, Big Brother Dean. Beta: Kokoda2007 - Please don't blame my awesome beta, all errors are my own. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 15024 [Report This] Published: 18/09/08 Updated: 09/10/08
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Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Oooh! Great start. Loved the first two chapters. Poor Sam! Can't wait to read more of this. Mary xx
Summary: When a hunt goes completely wrong, a distraught John has to come to the rescue of his boys.
Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 36769 [Report This] Published: 19/09/08 Updated: 03/12/08
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Date: 24/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - John's POV. This story is gorgeous. Beautifully written and utterly compelling. Can't wait to read the rest. Have loved all three chapters so far. Thanks for sharing. Mary xx
Author's Response: Oh thanks Mary ;) - Glad you're enjoying it, and thank you for the awesome review and comments! More soon ;) Mish :)
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Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Hi there ROFL :) - thanks Mary ... sorry about all the cliffies but glad you managed to get a review in LOL :) - thank you for the lovely comments and support ... Kleenex and I are like this *crosses fingers* LOL :) Hugs and luv Mish :) Summary:
With the memories of what happened merely two months ago still burning freshly in Dean’s mind, he’s trying his hardest to make sure his biggest secret remains just that, a secret - from the entire world. But when you’re the Devil himself… how long can you keep yourself and your brother safe from a demon with other plans in mind? Sequel to Lucifer.  Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadows of a Morning Star Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 37252 [Report This] Published: 26/09/08 Updated: 22/07/09
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Date: 26/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Garden of Eden Yah!! A sequel to Lucifer. *Claps hands in glee* nice start can't wait for the rest! Mary xx Author's Response: Lol, yeah, I finally decided to start posting this thing, I was gonna have more written but I couldn't wait to post so hope you enjoy the rest when it comes! ^_^ Thank you!!
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Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Burning Bridges and Burning Bushes Oh er missus! So the demons can see Dean's alter ego, interesting. And I know you REALLY meant to tell us who said 'Hello Dean' didn't you??? Bad Rae! Looking forward to the next update, RL is a pain sometimes ain't it? Cheers Mary x Author's Response: There's an explanation coming ^_^ Oh... you mean it didn't say? I guess the "And Dean turned around to face the easter bunny." was cut off... damn... :P But I'm working on an update, I swear. Thanks for reading!!!
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Date: 31/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: Even an end has a start Hi there How did you manage to sneak a chapter in there without me seeing?? Great story, really enjoying it. 'admiring without the intention of interacting' - yeah Rae, is there anybody on the planet that does that to Dean Winchester?? lol (except Sam and Bobby of course!!) Mary x Author's Response: Lol, thanks Mary! So glad you're enjoying reading! It's so much fun to write ^_^ He he, it really is hard to just admire Dean... it'd be even harder in such a close proximity... *drools slightly* And now my mind is back out the gutter - thanks again! :D
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Date: 22/01/09 Title: Chapter 6: And when it all goes to Hell... Hi there Just caught up with this and it's wonderful, loving it!! Nice cliffie....oh sh...indeed!! Hurry up with the next part!!!! (please?) Mary xx Author's Response: Thanks so much! So glad you like it. I keep meaning to hurry up and get the next part written - if it helps I know exactly what happens next. Though considering I'm not gonna spoil the surprise just yet, it probably doesn't help. lol. Thanks
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Date: 02/04/09 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes on Fire Hey Rae Thank you for the awesome update, this story is great. Loved Bobby in this. If I made a deal with God I'd be quite happy that the best he could come up with was Dean Winchester! Chin up honey, sounds like you have a lot of issues going on, don't let them get you down. If you ever need a little rant you know that you can always just hit contact and rant to me. I won't mind! I work in a call centre...I'm used to it!! Keep smiling, or we'll send the boys round! (Wait you might enjoy that TOO much!) Mary xx Author's Response: Heya Mary!! Thanks so much for reading! I'm so glad you like it. I just love Bobby, he's such an awesome character to play with. Oh yeah, I'd definitely be happy with Dean as a result of a deal. *looks up to the ceiling* Did you hear me up there? Hint hint and all that? Thanks, yeah, life is semi-stressful at the moment with uni work and I am so looking forward to the summer - even though it'll mean no new SPN episodes (oh the horror of it!). Oh God, bless ya - my Mam works in a call centre too and she tells me some of the things that people say to her so I feel for you there. He he, oh yeah, feel free to send the boys round :D They'll definitely put a grin on my face, lol. Thanks again!!
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Date: 06/05/09 Title: Chapter 9: Darker shade of sin Hi Rae Good luck with the exams, I hope they went well. *crosses fingers* I loved this, knew that Bobby had holy watered the beer, that was funny. Liked the description here - “I can see him. I can see the fire burning in his eyes and the waves of darkness spilling from his every pore. He’s not like us.” - does this mean Lucy isn't as far down as we think?? Can't wait til the next update - feels like S4 all over again - I want to find out what happens next but I'm kinda scared to go there as well! Cheers Mary xx Author's Response: Thank you! For reading and for the luck. I needed it, but the exam went surprisingly well... at least I'm saying that, just wait til I get the results and I'll be cursing the high heavens. Only two more of the damn things to do them I'm freeeee! Gotta love that holy water trick, it's only of my favourite things that's been shown on the show :D And thinking about my plans for he future chapters, lets just say there are definite cracks in the barrier currently locking up the devil... yep, the cracks are definitely showing. Thanks again! It means a lot!! :D |
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