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Penname: Smudge93 [Contact]
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Real name: Mary Status: Member Member Since: 09/05/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by Smudge93 Summary:
Dean's ability to continue hunting becomes questionable, after a hunt. Will Dean's limited capability cost Sam his life? (Takes place during season 2.)
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 47088 [Report This] Published: 04/08/08 Updated: 25/09/08
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 Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Ok, that's better, Dean's back in control. Why do I get the horrid feeling that you're gonna change that?? Mary xx Author's Response: Who me?! What makes you think that I would change who's in control? *eg* *rubs hands fiendishly together* Thanks for the stars! *bg*
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Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Never mind flipping Nerisa boys...what about Dean!! Nice I like that the concern is all about her at the moment, so know that'll change when the spell wears off...it does wear off right?? Mary x Author's Response: Thanks for the stars. *bg* Would you hate me, if the spell didn't wear off? ;)
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Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Poor Bobby, major guilt trip there! And what the heck is behind Dean?? Do I even want to know?? Yes!! Onto the next chapter....... (only time I like playing catch up!!) Author's Response: Dean and Sam aren't the only ones who know about guilt trips. :) Yes, what is behind Dean, any ideas? Thanks for leaving a comment and stars *bg*
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Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 I like it Dean always finds a way to blame himself doesn't he?? And what the heck is that with the cliffhanger??? Onwards....... Mary xx Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. :) Dean does seem to frequently go on guilt trips, doesn't he? Did you like the cliffhanger? Sorry about that. I just couldn't help myself. I felt like I needed to leave Dean in the water, with that thing that's been bumping into him, a little while longer. *eg* Thank you for leaving stars and a comment. *bg*
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Date: 25/09/08 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Glad it was a dead Nerisa in the water and not a shark! All we need now is for Dean to get better! Mary xx Author's Response: You want Dean to get better as well? Wasn't it enough that I didn't have a shark on his tail? ;) LOL. Guess you'll have to wait and see if whether or not Dean really does get better. Thanks for the comment and the stars. *bg*
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Date: 25/09/08 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Poor Dean still thinking he was in the water! Glad he's safe with Sam and Bobby again. Mary x Author's Response: Since he was unconscious when Sam pulled him out of the water, I figured it wouldn't make sense for Dean to immediately know that he was in Bobby's house and was safe. Plus, it added a little more angst to the story. ;) Thanks you for the stars and your remark. *bg*
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Date: 25/09/08 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Nice to have someone other than Dean guilt tripping! Poor Bobby thought, I feel sorry for him. I like how Bobby always feels the need to look out for Dean, he needs it sometimes! Still really enjoying this story. MAry xx Author's Response: Thank you for your comment and the stars. *bg* I figured the Winchesters can't be the only ones who know about guilt trips. ;) Plus, since the show has portrayed Bobby as being a bit of a father-figure to the boys, I thought that it would be appropriate for him to feel bad for what took place. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story. :)
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Date: 25/09/08 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Yeah Dean's fixed, I know you wouldn't leave him deaf! Like me your evil streak only extends so far..lol! Sorry all these reviews are at once but RL and work has seriously limited my reading time. Cheers Mary xx Author's Response: Me... have an evil streak? Never! *shakes head* I blame everything on my muse. LOL. Plus, if or when I write another story, Ill need Dean to be 100%. Don't worry about a thing. *hug* I know all about how RL likes to makes things more difficult, at times. I do appreciate you finding the time, to read my story and to leave feedback and stars. *bg*
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Date: 25/09/08 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Thanks for this, I really enjoyed this story, unusual villian, which makes a nice change. I like your writing style, its different and utterly enjoyable. Thank you for the mention, I love reading other people's stuff as much as I like writing my own. Hope to see more from you soon, take care. Mary xx Author's Response: Thank you for your kind comment and the stars. *bg* In regards to the villian, I needed something that Dean could fight, despite his deafness. Plus, I liked the fact that I really didn't need to give the villian a name, since all I had to do was spell what she was backwards. You deserve the mention. As you said earlier, RL can really keep a person busy. So, I greatly appreciated the fact that you routinely gave me feedback on the chapters I posted. The feedback did encourage me to keep writing and to regularly update the story. So again, thanks for taking the time to leave stars and reviews. Summary:
Dean + bathtub = bliss. Dean's a shower man and doesn't "do" baths. Unless he's forced to. Categories: Humor, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2095 [Report This] Published: 07/08/08 Updated: 07/08/08
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Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Would You Like Some Mr. Bubble? This brought a smile to my face, a big smile! Loved this, thanks for sharing. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you, Mary. I'm thrilled that I could bring a big smile to your face. Summary:
The hunters become the hunted when someone from Dean's past resurfaces with the desire to kill. With Dean vanishing, Sam races to save his brother before he is lost forever.
Banner by Rae. You're awesome Rachel! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 12677 [Report This] Published: 08/08/08 Updated: 18/09/08
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Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Distraction Ok You have my attention, big time. Evil Bobby, I like it. More please!! Mary x Author's Response: Thanks, Mary! I hope you like the next chapter!
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Date: 17/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Bird and the Worm Evil, evil cliffie but I'll forgive you because this story is great! Poor Dean the only person he trusts apart from Sam and you made him a baddie....I love it!! Can't wait for more. Mary xx Author's Response: Mary, I want to get you a pie ^_^ you were the first one who reviewed on this story! thanks a lot for the encouragement! *hugs*
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Date: 24/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Promises Thanks for the pie!! lol. Tastes as good as this story. Poor Sam, hope Ellen can help. Love how you show how well sam knows his brother in this and that he'd never leave him if he had the choice. Loved Sam noticing the lack of boot marks between stains. I could feel how he felt. Great work, looking forward to more. Mary x :) Author's Response: Yay, Mary! I'm so happy you liked the pie, lol Ah, that's good to know! I tried my best to depict his struggle but I was't really sure if it had worked. So that makes me really happy! Thanks for the feedback ;) hugs Masi X
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Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Master of Puppets Firstly, good luck with the college thing, I hope you get the result you want BUT you've got the professor's names right, so if they mess with you, you can let Sam & Dean kick their ass in another story! Glad you had a little delay 'cos it gave me a fine excuse to go back and reread the rest!! Yah! I have questions but I'm sure that you'll answer them soon. This was a great chapter, torture by silence, Dean's least favourite, he does hate the mind games. Can't wait to find out what happens next, cheers Mary x Author's Response: Oh, Mary. Did I mention how much I love you *hugs* Thanks for the awesome idea, I would love to let the boys kick their butts. They weren't really friendly, to be honest. But I guess, it had something to do with the fact that I don't have rich parents and that I'm not a snob. Your reviews lighten my day! Masi x
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Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Open Wounds Ah ha, so that's who Damien is, I knew you'd tell us! Liked the back story. Can't wait to find out what's gonna happen to poor Dean and what about Bobby. Sam where the heck are you boy?? Cheers Mary x Ah-hem! Some of us won't get to see the premiere. Why'd I have to be Scottish??!! I want to see it too! *pouts* Author's Response: Mary, you gotta be kidding me! You live in one of the most beautiful countries on the world! But it's a shame you didn't get to see the premiere in Scotland. Did you try youtube for instance? Mary, I have one more question: the profs, they let me fail the oral exam! I so wanna kick their asses! Fortunately I got a yes from a college in another city. But now I have to leave my family. because of them! And man I won't lie when I say hate them for that! So I want to kick their asses with the help of the Winchester brothers! How about we write this story together and post it on UnGen? I don't know when I will be able to start it with you because of moving away and with college starting and all. But I wanted to write a story with you and wanted to know if you are interested. It could also be another story, with a completely different plot and characters, not staring the two monsters that ruined my life. So what do you say? You in? Thanks for the wonderful review by the way! Hugs Masi x Summary:
Banner by the ever amazing Rae666
After Sam, then Dean, are injured on hunt, Sam goes missing. Taken by the object of their hunt. Dean realizes hunter has become hunted and it is all more sinister and far more personal than he could ever have dreamed. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 51905 [Report This] Published: 11/08/08 Updated: 01/09/08
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Date: 16/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Ok perhaps I shouldn't have found this story and be reading it on my own at nightime...no sleep for me or Dean I think. I have only ever read one story that gave me the absolute creeps and it was 'Christine'. Congrats you've just made it two! Can't wait for more...I think! *shivers*. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm blushing. Being tossed in with a writer like that! Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 16/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Seriously creepy and now poor Sam's gone and Dean's been munched on!! *Mental note to self - only read updates in the daylight.* I have major goosebumps!! Great story Muffy! Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! I only WRITE this one in the daylight. I've scared myself silly with it. I love a good "you can't see the monster" monster story, Like the amazingly brilliant "Something Wicked" by I think it's Bradbury. Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 17/08/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 OMG! This story is seriously freaking me out but I love it! You are trying to scare the wits out of us with this. And it's working!! (Sorry couldn't resist!) Mary xx Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have to admit I freaked myself out a bit writing this one. I hear snuffles at night (ok, it's the cat) but it still freaks me! I'll have more up super soon! Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 18/08/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 So glad you told us it wasn't a death fic! Me thinks that the thing that goes sigh in the night is about to get a little butt kicking?? I hope. Still seriously creepy, even though I knew it was Sam it was dragging I was still holding my breath as it threw him. Great story, looking forward to the next bit. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! That thing in the night will get alittle butt kicking coming up. I think he might have met his match in our boys! Huge hug, Muffy
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Date: 20/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Aargh! Got to stop reading updates at 1 in the morning, really do! My heart almost stopped when it dragged Dean over the rock. I love Sam's thought about the crackle of the fire. lol Great story, no nails left but a great story! Mary xx Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I loved Sam's thoughts about the fire too, made me smile! *sends nightlight* I hope that helps, although we are coming up on when the creature starts getting a little closer, less play, more action! Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 22/08/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Ok, we know how Dean feels, your playing with us evil Muffy and we really want to know how the game ends......need you to put us out of our misery or we may have to come hunt you down. lol Seriously, seriously good. How does this thing know Dean so well and knows what he'll do?? Hell hath no fury like big bro 'Winchester in full protect Sammy mode. Can't wait for more!! Mary x Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm afraid I better brace myself for a hunt, then. There's a bit more before it all ends. We find out more about Dean and the creature in the next little bit. Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 23/08/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Yeah, Sam is on his feet again and Dean is pissed, I feel our little nightstalker may have bitten off more than it can chew?? Go give it as good as it gave boys. Wonderful. Mary x
Author's Response: Thank you so much Mary! Our nightstalker is playing with fire, isn't it? I'll post the final chapter very soon! Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 24/08/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Great update, just when I think you can't freak me out anymore than you already have you manage it. Dean's ankle sounds gross and you have described it so well I have it in my head in glowing technicolour. *shiver* More....Mary xx Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, Mary. I'm sorry about the little gross out! I guess sometimes, in order to get the pictures out of my head, I share them. That might not be completely fair to everyone here! Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 28/08/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Evil, Muffy, absolutely and utterly evil!! What an ending! Aaargh. Please update soon, although having said that I don't think this story is good for the old heart you know! So sorry to hear about Wolfman. As the owner of two insane moggies - Mitz and Jules I understand your loss. My last cat was 18 when it passed nearly 10 years ago and I still miss it, but my other two help. My thoughts are will you, Mary xx Author's Response: Oh thank you so much, Mary! Sorry about your heart *sends chocolate* Will that help a little? I've posted the next chapter, not that it helps all that much... Thank you so much for your kind words about Wolfman. I miss the old boy so much, and sadly he makes the fourth this year :( *hugs* to you, Mitz and Jules
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Date: 31/08/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Ok, what did Sam just do?? Love how Dean is just prepared to let go if it'll save his brother and how Sam isn't prepared to let that happen. Wonderful story, can't wait for the rest. Mary x Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love those boys. I love how they are willing to sacrifice themselves for the other. ALthough it makes me want to strangle them sometimes too! Hugs, Muffy |
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