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Penname: JennyF [Contact]
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Real name: Jenny Status: Member Member Since: 28/04/08 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by JennyF Summary:
 Bobby doesn't know what to do, because one is gone and the other is broken. Tag to AHBL 1, Bobby's feelings...Categories: General, Missing Scenes, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 601 [Report This] Published: 03/05/08 Updated: 04/05/08
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was beautifully written, just the right length. Not really thought about Bobby's point of view before but I think you got it spot on. Summary:
Dean has a few issues after they killed the shifter and he got the girl at the Oktoberfest. Spoilers: 4.05 Monster Movie T as a bit suggestive, all meant in good fun though! Disclaimer: The Winchester boys aren't mine to keep, only to play with for a little while!! *grins* Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1455 [Report This] Published: 17/02/09 Updated: 17/02/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 18/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Lederhosen is just plain evil Thank goodness I wasn't the only one wondering about who got him changed. Made me smile as I was reading - family now think I'm potty :) Author's Response: Hi there Looks like there are a few of us wondering! Glad I could make you smile with my little piece of sillyness!. Cheers Mary x Summary: During Sammy's time at Stanford, Dean comes for a visit. Sam can forgive the lateness because he's missed his brother, but he's not ready for what Dean brought with him. Neither of the brothers is.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Never on the List Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 20766 [Report This] Published: 23/03/09 Updated: 06/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 29/04/09 Title: Chapter 6: Ketchup This story is so heartbreakingly sad. It's amazing. Summary: One shot. 25 year old Dean finds an old arcade game and thinks about the youth he lost.
Categories: One Shots, General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 805 [Report This] Published: 28/04/09 Updated: 28/04/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 28/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was really poignant. I didn't think it was going to be sad though but that last line - "Yeah, I used to love these old arcade games.", that got to me. He just sounds so lost and lonely.
Great story. Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! When I started writing it, I wasn't sure where I was going with it until about half way through... such is the way of a wandering mind. But thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it! Summary:
The forest was bombarded with a blinding light. When it faded, Dean stared down at the body before him. It was Sam, Dean knew, but only because Dean remembered what Sam had looked like at four years old. Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 29245 [Report This] Published: 11/05/09 Updated: 14/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 12/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is a story that's been done many times but you've got a great lead into it and I'm hooked. I'm intrigued to see how Dean gets him back (because, at the end of the day, he WILL get him back, right?). Great start :) Author's Response: When the Muse poked me and said 'psst, do a fic where Sam gets de-aged' I said 'are you nuts? Does the phrase -done to death- mean anything to you?' but I pretty much always lose arguments with my Muse.
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 OMG - I don't know who to feel more sorry for, Dean or Sam. Had to laugh at the image of Sam with a soapsud mohawk! Done that many a time with my own children LOL. I real am enjoying this story, I think you're doing a fantastic job with it:) Summary:
An evil spirit and a small town's indifference forces Dean to consider what's really important Set in Season 1, after the episode Shadows Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9786 [Report This] Published: 16/05/09 Updated: 16/05/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A thoroughly satisfying story. It had everything a girl could want - hurt Sam, big brother Dean, action, intrigue, the whole shebang. And now I'm going to have to go and read Zombie Joyrides! Author's Response: Thank you for that. I hope that you enjoyed Zombie Joyride - K Hanna Korossy is a truly great author. And I'm pleased that this little story had everything you could want - it was a fun challenge to write, actually. A bit scary, as I have only once before written "to order" as it were. Thanks again for your review. Jules Summary:
Set immediately after "Sex and Violence". The Winchester Brothers must try and deal with the fallout from their cruel words while under the Siren's influence. Despite Dean's words at the end, they're not okay. Not yet. Written for auction winner bhoney. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 10991 [Report This] Published: 03/06/09 Updated: 23/08/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 4: Harken Back to Simpler Times Just found this story and I love it. Dean's hurting so much and shutting down. I'm enjoying the way you've got into his head. JENNY Author's Response: Thank you! Summary:
The first time that Dean was hurt on a hunt seen through his brother's eyes. Spoilers: Nope Disclaimer: As always - they belong to the CW and Mr Kirpke, I only borrow and then return. Categories: General, One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 848 [Report This] Published: 05/06/09 Updated: 05/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 05/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: The First Time That I Saw Him Fall That was a really atmospheric piece of writing. I could so easily put myself in Sam's place and feel his distress and bewilderment that this could have happened to his brother. Just two little nitpicks (and they really are little). I found the italics a bit distracting and about a third of the way through you changed tenses. But, as I said, really minor points that I wasn't even sure whether to mention. I loved this story. Author's Response: HI there Thank you, I am glad that you felt the way he did, that was what I was aiming for...to draw you in. I don't mind you pointing out things that are constructive at all, that's the point of reviews after all, to give me feedback on what you liked and what you felt should/could be changed or improved. The italics are a personal thing, I preferred reading it that way but I appreciate your comment and I will take it on board in the future. I didn't notice that I had changed tense when writing, so thank you. I will review the story again and see which part I am going to change. I really just appreciate that you took the time to stop and let me know your thoughts, never worry about letting me know what you think, I love feedback, it means the story got to you enough to want to review it. Mary xx Summary:
Since their dad died, Father's Day is always a difficult time for Sam. (Drabble for Father's Day challenge.) Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 98 [Report This] Published: 06/06/09 Updated: 06/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Father's Day, Dad Thank you for everything. Thank you for Dean. Me? Speechless. (in a good way) Summary:
It’s the little moments that leave great impressions on you. It’s the little things that are branded into your mind; those little moments that remain years after the people are dead and gone. A fleeting memory will pound into you with all the force of a tsunami and leave you breathless for years after. They can snap you in two just as real as any demon or werewolf. Haitian saying: Grand bénedíctión = Great blessing Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Winchester Bloodline Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1191 [Report This] Published: 08/06/09 Updated: 08/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 08/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 D'you know, this really isn't my type of story but somehow you just got to me with this one. I really wanted Dean to open up to Sam and I was inexplicably disappointed that it ended where it did. Still, sign of a great story - leave 'em wanting more :) Author's Response: Thank you so much. I feel I owe you this next one because of the great review. I actually felt a bit inspired to continue on in this line of AU's from writing this one. I mean, alternate reality- or future!fics have no limits! I'm gonna have to think about this... Thanks for the awesome review!!! :D Summary: Sam makes a Father’s day card for John at school.
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 97 [Report This] Published: 12/06/09 Updated: 12/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 You realise you've just killed me! It's moments like this I want to shoot John for his thoughtlessness. I've now got a picture of little Sammy's face falling. Thank goodness he's got Dean! Author's Response: I wasn't trying to kill anyone. lol. and yea John was a real a** sometimes, but like you said, thank God for Dean. At least he can make Sammy smile. Thanks for reading!! Summary: Sam has doubts about going to Stamford, its hard saying goodbye to his Dad's...
Drabble for the Fathers Day challenge. Set Pre Season 1.
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 13/06/09 Updated: 13/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 It's heartbreaking that all Sam really wanted was a little acknowledgement of John's love. Because I just know he did love both his boys in his own way. Yes true, many thanks for the review Jacq Summary: Sam and Dean and a bit of trouble on a hunt. Brotherly schmoop, really. Written for the E/O Drabble challenge over at fanfic.net.
Categories: Humor, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 90 [Report This] Published: 15/06/09 Updated: 15/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 15/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Haha - I love that Sam is so accepting of Dean's explanation at the end. Summary:
Father's day challenge. John comes home. Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 15/06/09 Updated: 15/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Love how you managed to convey the power of children's innocence even in the Winchester world. Summary: Father's Day Drabble- John gets a Father's Day phone call.
Categories: General, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 104 [Report This] Published: 15/06/09 Updated: 15/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Proud Father It's somehow comforting that John didn't answer Adam's calls either but still so sad that he never told Dean and Sam about him. Good angle on the drabble, I hadn't even considered Adam's point of view. Author's Response: I love John, but he is definitely a flawed hero. It's what makes him so interesting. Thank you for your review! Summary: Father's Day Drabble - It's June 2007. Ten months after his father sold his soul for him. Dean calls John and leaves a message.
Categories: General, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 15/06/09 Updated: 15/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I just found this so very touching and heartbreaking. I need to go and hug my Dad now. Hi there Thank you, I wish I still could still hear/hug mine sometimes too but that is life. Cheers Mary x Summary: Father's Day Drabble Challenge story. Sam's on the hunt for just the right father's Day card.
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 113 [Report This] Published: 15/06/09 Updated: 15/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: It's the Thought That Counts Oh, I just loved that! I can picture them now in a shop trying to choose a card - Sam wanting it to be perfect and Dean just wanting to get on with it. Lovely, lovely drabble. Author's Response: Thank you, Dotty. You caught the exact image that I was trying to portray. Sue Summary:
Sam has something he'd like to say to John. ... or maybe not.
Categories: UnGen Challenges, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 102 [Report This] Published: 15/06/09 Updated: 16/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 16/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dilemma Gosh - that's sad. I wonder how many times John had his phone in his hand and didn't get any further. I imagine it might have been more than a couple times. The things pride will do to a person - and the Winchesters have bushels of it!! Thanks for the R&R. ^^ Summary:
Dean has been having some pretty weird dreams lately - he seems to be playing the murderer in a sick game that is life and death. So now he and Sam have to figure things out before things take a turn for the worse for Dean.  Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 27605 [Report This] Published: 17/06/09 Updated: 08/09/10
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 21/06/09 Title: Chapter 2: To dream a dreamer's dream This is an awesome story, Rae. You've got me hook, line and sinker. I'm waiting in anticipation for your next installment. JENNY Author's Response: Thank you so much! Really hope you enjoy reading! :D Summary:
Not everything was destroyed in the fire. Written for the Father’s Day drabble challenge.
Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 95 [Report This] Published: 18/06/09 Updated: 18/06/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 18/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Saving grace I love the transformation of coal into diamond, fantastic imagery. Very poignant. Lovely drabble. JENNY Author's Response: Hey there, woodburner! It's cool to see you over here! :) Thanks for the wonderful review you left for my drabble, I really appreciate it. I'm so glad you liked the imagery. I spent a lot of time on that. I don't know if you're still interested, but I got some new chapters up of "Always With You," and hopefully some of your questions will be answered in them. Hope to see you over there! Thanks again! :) Summary: Drabble dare. Word: Naked
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 102 [Report This] Published: 19/07/09 Updated: 19/07/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 19/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Naked Okay, I admit it. My mind was going in totally the wrong direction (ie. downhill lol). I should have known it wasn't that but with those boys, can you blame a girl for having those thoughts? Jenny. Author's Response: Lol, I knew where it was headed and my mind still headed in the wrong direction. Thanks so much for reading :D Defo can't blame a girl for thoughts like that with boys like them around. Summary:
Ungen summer fire challenge entry Memories of fire will remain scorched in three specific minds for all their lives even if they start to fade over time... Season 4 spoilers Categories: UnGen Challenges, General, Missing Scenes, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 2200 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Lucifer Wow. I can see why you won. I loved the spider's POV and would never in million years have come up with something so original myself. It made me smile and it made me sad at the same time. And I have a soft spot for John so you got me right there with that one too. Congratulations. Author's Response: Congrats again Jenny! ^_^ Can't wait to get around to reading yours. And thank you so much for reading mine and for the awesome review. Yeah, I really do have to thank Gen for sparking that random idea in my head, it was so much fun to write. ^_^ Me too, major soft spot for John. *hugs him* Thanks again!!! Summary:
A promise to a friend takes Dean Winchester back to the woods of Hibbing to confront his worst nightmare... Banner by GypsyWoman1 Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 124192 [Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 14/12/09
Reviewer: JennyF Signed
Date: 19/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Mr Brightside I've held off reading this one till I'd read the previous story but I tonight I couldn't wait that long and I'm so glad I didn't leave it any longer. This story is full of greatness and tomorrow I am going to read it in full, properly and leave you a proper review. Summary:
Dean Winchester's whole life had been shaped by fire. Written for the Fire Challenge.
Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1640 [Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 21/07/09
Reviewer: Dottyoz Signed
Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Touched by Fire That was a really interesting take. When I first skimmed it (because I was in a rush) I thought you'd only posted the first bit but when I read it properly I realised it's three different POVs from the same person. I would never have thought of that but it's true that people's opinions change over time and through circumstance. And I loved 4 year old Dean's way of thinking, especially this line: "Sometimes, Dean had let Mommy hold his hand during that part. Just so she wouldn’t be afraid." Great story. |
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