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Metamorphosis by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

"Everybody got into hunting somehow." Bobby Singer - Dream A Little Dream Of Me

Pilot episode tag - Dean deals with the aftermath of the fire

Metamorphosis

SN.tv 2009 Everyday Winchesters


Categories: General, Action, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 38346
[Report This] Published: 23/10/08 Updated: 28/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 30/11/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

  Great job--I loved the fight scene!!  Good job with the dialogue between the boys!!!Poor Sam! The bathroom scene at the end was heartbreaking. Always enjoy your stories!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Cheri. The whole story was building towards Sam's inevitable meltdown and his decision to go back to hunting - his metamorphosis from student to hunter. He had a long hard road to get there, but that's what grief is - a long hard road. Glad you loved the fight scene - and I do think that Sam would have pounded that jock to a bloody pulp if Dean hadn't stopped him. With his hand-to-hand training and all that anger, he was a bomb waiting to explode during that week. Thanks again - I'm so glad you enjoyed this....Jules

 
Summary: One-shot. My version of last couple of scenes from Monster Movie. Limp Sam.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: A Spoonful Of Limp
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2062
[Report This] Published: 23/10/08 Updated: 23/10/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 24/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

  Loved it--but I always love your stories! "I can see why Heaven chose you." was heartbreaking---sob sob! There was blood on the back of Sam's shirt, and no matter how hard Dean tried he couldn't tear his eyes from it---love that sentence!! Great job!!! 

 
Summary: One-shot. My version of last few scenes of Yellow Fever. Limp Sam.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: A Spoonful Of Limp
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2388
[Report This] Published: 28/10/08 Updated: 28/10/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 27/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

  Another good one!! that last sentence was heartbreaking; but probably true! Love that Bobby!!!

 
Pulling Heaven Down by Jay Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Their dad disappeared. Dean goes to get Sam from Stanford to help hunt for him and discovers their dad isn’t the only one missing. 



Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4729
[Report This] Published: 30/10/08 Updated: 08/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 08/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

  Wow! When I first started to read this I didn't think I was going to like it but I have definitely changed my mind---Keep it coming!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad that you like it. and I appreciate the comment :)

 
Summary:

After their Dad's death, the brothers investigate bizarre killings in the Minnesota woodlands. Bad weather, a sick Sam, and an unfocused Dean, make the hunt a struggle to survive. WINNER OF THE 2009 SNTV AWARDS- BEST MONSTER AND CREATURE

A Struggle to Survive"


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 18625
[Report This] Published: 30/10/08 Updated: 02/10/09


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love it---can't wait for more!!!

 
Summary: Short one-shot. My version of a couple of scenes from 'It's The Great Pumpkin, Sam Winchester.' Limp Sam.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: A Spoonful Of Limp
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1611
[Report This] Published: 02/11/08 Updated: 02/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 27/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

  I loved that scene with Sam having to use his powers to save himself, Dean and the town----the look on Dean and Sams face was heartbreaking---and it was exactly how I felt with the line--He was angry with both Heaven and Hell for putting them in this situation----great job!!!

 
Summary: With Dean's deal about to come due, The Brotherhood is dealt another vicious blow sending Mackland Ames on two journeys. One will take him to his past, to the door of one John Winchester. Both will lead him home.
Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7846
[Report This] Published: 05/11/08 Updated: 05/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 05/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 I've just started reading your stories---I love your writing---The Brotherhood Series is my favorite!!!!The dialogue in your stories is amazing----I can't get enough!! I will continue to watch for your stories---Keep up the great work!!!

 
Summary:

Sticks and stones may break my bones , but names - well, that's a whole other story...

Set some time late in Season 3

Sticks And Stones

SN.tv 2009 Best One Shots


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8092
[Report This] Published: 11/11/08 Updated: 11/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 11/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

   Great job---I always like your stories---you do a great job with the dialogue between the boys---and you always add a touch of humor which is nice---I really enjoyed it!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Cherie. This was a fun little piece to write, even though it did require a lot of scrolling back and forth to make sure I had the symmetry of the two hunts right. I'm chuffed that you enjoyed it so much. And I'll always try to break the angst with a little humour, just like Dean....Jules

 
Summary: Parting is all we know of Heaven, and all we need to know of Hell. -Emily Dickenson
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 34195
[Report This] Published: 12/11/08 Updated: 10/12/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 06/12/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

  AWESOME!!!!

 
Summary: Dean thinks things are falling back into place, realizing just how wrong he is one late night at a bar. Angsty!Brothers
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1368
[Report This] Published: 13/11/08 Updated: 13/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 15/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

 Great job---if living without his brother had been worse than death for him, wouldn't the same be true for Sam? He wouldn't wish that pain on anybody, and yet he'd handed it over to his little brother without a thought.----Loved that! The song idea was good---songs do that to me too!!---making you remember a good or bad time. 

 
Summary: One-shot. My version of a coupe of scenes from 'I Know What You Did Last Summer.' Limp Sam.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: A Spoonful Of Limp
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2828
[Report This] Published: 15/11/08 Updated: 15/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 15/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

  As always; great job!!

 
Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 27/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

   loved that scene at the motel and I liked how you added to it---great job with Sam and his thoughts---stitching his own arm made me cringe---well done!

 
Summary:

“Hey, Winchester, isn't that your brother?” one of the guys, Pete Something-or-other, asked as he watched Dean's relentless approach straight to them.

Sam's Adam's apple bobbed nervously and that was answer enough.

Teen!chester.


Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1151
[Report This] Published: 15/11/08 Updated: 16/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 16/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Smoke 'Em If Ya Got 'Em!

  if I ever catch you with one in your hand again you'll be praying for a wendigo to come find you. Understand?----Great!!! I really liked this--good job!

Author's Response:

LOL Oh Dean!  So colorful with the threats.  But so effective, too! :D

Thanks for the awesome review! :D

-M

 
Saved by sUnKiSsT Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Pre 4x09. Wide eyes stare upwards, looking into almost identical green ones. He blinks, trying to focus on the face – needing to see it before he fades out.

Contains a few SPOILERS for season 4.

 Second chapter added! Enjoy!  


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3689
[Report This] Published: 19/11/08 Updated: 21/03/09


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

  This was awesome--I loved it---it had me tearing up with sadness than with happiness---loved it from beginning to end--great great job!!!

Author's Response: Awww thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :D

 
Summary:

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This is because my mind just cant be still until January 15th... It screamed for some sort of resolution to the last scene in Heaven and Hell... and I caved...


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2651
[Report This] Published: 26/11/08 Updated: 26/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 30/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: ... the dying flame...

  I'm glad you feel better---good job!

 
Go to Sleep, Sam by Lia76 Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Even though the trickster has returned Dean, Sam is still headed for rock bottom, knowing he's no closer to saving his brother from the deal that will come due in a few months and take Dean away forever. Will a conversation with Dean help or finally send him over the edge? Follows the events of Season Three's Mystery Spot.
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3862
[Report This] Published: 30/11/08 Updated: 30/11/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 30/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

   I liked this---loved the lines---Better? I gave up on better weeks ago. I'm only shooting for numb---good job!

 
Summary: Sometimes the hardest part about death is that time marches on as if nothing has changed and expects those left behind to carry on as well.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 24377
[Report This] Published: 17/12/08 Updated: 19/12/08


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

  Another awesome job!!loved it! You do a great job of putting the stories together! Thanks for another great year!!

 
Summary:

Dean's past comes back to haunt him...and Sam may pay the ultimate price.

Dean was twenty-two years old when he met the girl of his dreams, or so he thought.

Set preseason, and current season.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 27756
[Report This] Published: 11/01/09 Updated: 24/04/10


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 09/02/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

    Love it!!!!Bobby getting called in; great!!!Dean hurting and Sam hurt and alone---keep it coming!!

 
Summary: While still dealing with the aftermath of the wishing well, Sam and Dean are taken by a group of hunters who will stop at nothing to find out the truth about Sam's abilities and how Dean managed to come back from the dead.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 62074
[Report This] Published: 13/01/09 Updated: 29/01/09


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 24/01/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Riptide

  I'm really enjoying this story!! Great job! So many secrets---but you can't blame them when they are only trying to protect each other from more hurt. You do a fantastic job with the dialogue between the boys!!! Castiel showing up was a surprise---hope it's a good one!!!Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response: It's surprising how much these guys manage to keep from each other despite being so close...I thought I'd throw a little more in the pot.  :)

 
Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 31/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Bitter Fires

  Great story!!!Loved it!

 
Summary:

Worry looks around, Sorrow looks back, and Faith looks up.

Dean is back from the flaming gates of hell, and struggles to cope with his memories. Sam is distraught - he should have been able to save his brother from a fate much worse than death. A misguided hunt, an injured brother - and they may just find their way back to each other.

Worry Sorrow and Faith"


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6274
[Report This] Published: 15/01/09 Updated: 22/01/09


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 16/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

  Great start---Dean closing himself off; Sam not knowing what to do---neither really has their minds on the hunt---and now because of it Sam is hurt? Love it!!!

 
Summary: Tag ons for Season Four Episodes. Each chapter is a complete story because there is always more that should have been said. 
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 37675
[Report This] Published: 21/01/09 Updated: 29/05/09


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 15/02/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

  Love The Brotherhood! The dialogue between the boys is amazing!!!Love the job you do adding to the episodes---putting Mac and Esme at the end was nice--great job!!!

 
Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 29/08/09 Title: Chapter 11: Light and Shadow

  Great job!!--I loved them all!

 
Rewound by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary:

Rewound

Best Sam Ungen 2009

"You, my brother, are a figment of my imagination..."

A hunt for a poltergeist leaves Sam doubting his brother's very existence

Set in Season 4, after the episode Heaven And Hell, and contains spoilers up to and including that episode


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 32715
[Report This] Published: 23/01/09 Updated: 20/02/09


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 09/02/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

   Great job---Love it!!!Poor Sam so confused and when Dean wakes up---OMG---Love Bobby being part of this. Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for that, Cherie. I love Bobby - I'd love to see much more of him in the show, actually. He's been such a great surrogate dad for the boys.

And yes, when Dean wakes up, he's going to have an even bigger headache than the one from his concussion - LOL!

Jules

 
Iron Will by Ridley James Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary: Pre-Series. Dean and Sam are mistakenly sent on a hunt by their father only to find out too late that evil isn't reserved for the supernatural.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 24151
[Report This] Published: 08/03/09 Updated: 19/04/09


Reviewer: cheri Signed
Date: 05/04/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

  Wow! Great job---keep it coming!