Hi,

this is the first story from you I've read but certainly not the last! I really wanna thank you, I totally loved it. It's so well written, from the first sentence to the last it has everything an outstanding story would need: the thrill, the right pace, the credibility - and such great ideas. I really had to laugh about the exorcism using Bobbys abilities - and I nearly cried about your picture with the boys holding each other while the other brotherly pair behind them fighting a battle as old as mankind. The emotions, the thoughts, the acting of the persons, all so well balanced and true - you have a gift, and I look forward to enjoying more of it (sorry, I'm no native speaker so perhaps I didn't find the right words)

Hey, great: just found out that there's another chappy waiting for me since I downloaded the first 4. I can't even imagine how you manage to write such terrible awesome stories AND care for two children while working 60 hours a week, but I won't ask as long as you keep on going :-) And I'm 96% excited and 4% envious that you're able to juggle a full range of plot balls high in the sky with a world of untold secrets and unknown territories to explore. Like in the first part you are an artist with dialogues and emotions that find their way in souls, so full of life and pain and humour and wisdom. I'm always between laughing and suffering (well: a great way of suffering, give me more :-) Leading the characters we love over such dark roads without loosing them - great job! I hope some day I have the courage to try it myself ...

Wow!

If I'd be the nail biting type you would be guilty of my rather short fingers :-) First these initials in the tree - and Sam loosing it all at once. I loved that one! Loved it even more when it turned out that Dean did it ... Then the part with Bobby thinking about how different the boys deal with their issues and Sam always asking him all the big questions running through his mind - adds up perfectly to the way he grew in this kind-of-father-role. And I like the way you place Bobby and Kathleen as "counselors" to our boys, trying to push them into talking with each other. Kathleen and Dean down at the river - hilarious! This "mantra-"thing - I really had to laugh (it's a nice one you gave her, by the way). Not to speak of Dean shooting the poor fish :-) That's him! Not the kind of meditating guy. And the end of the chapter? Big time! Dean changing from one second to the other - as the situation itself ... leaving me gasping for air - and more addicted than ever.

:-) Thanks as always

Katja 

Ouch! That hurts! Another tap on the head - and Dean's gone again? And that after the brotherly talk they had the same morning? That's mean - and I like it. Question is: will Sam handle it different this time, after the confessions Dean made about the relationship with Lee and the imperative love he feels for his brother, even if he couldn't remember his true brother at that moment? That was a very intense dialogue, awesome. And is it coincidence that it reminds me strongly of the way we see the brothers act after Dean is back from hell and Sam is getting deeper and deeper in his demon troubles, until Dean hardly recognizes him anymore - and still he holds on to this love, not able to understand the way his brother treats him? Hey, that's why I'm addicted to your stories. And Kathleen is learning fast - suggesting Dean as the perfect bait. Woman's tough :-) Ok, let's see how Gabe and Sam are working together - it's gonna be thrilling. 

Katja 

Hey sunshine! Wow, you really know how to hunt your readers down :-) Can poor Dean stand anything more? Useless question, he just has to – good thing is: we’re with him. But one step after the other. First of all: „Forest grump“ – I loved this one. That’s the kind of game I do with my brother all the time. Dean and the Tampon-thing? Hilarious! And to keep the roller coaster going, his break down after colliding with Sam - heart wrenching. Although loved their shared memories of Bobby – so much life in these lines, I can even see the kids ... one hidden behind his beloved books, one finding the way back into trusting and loving someone. And then the vibe between Dean and Kathleen ... awkward, but so sweet, too (by the way: that was a piece of work, the love scene in the mine: so short, so intense, so real. And let’s be honest: she’s earned a bit of a reward :-) Now, I was blindfolded too about the comeback of evil Lee – hope they’re not running short of rock salt! And what a bitch it will be to find his remains and burn them. Ok, keep going – I’ll be waiting. Nearly as hungry as Bobby.

Katja