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Healing by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary: Deancentric.  Set after In My Time of Dying.
Categories: Romance, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Coming War
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 23900
[Report This] Published: 18/03/07 Updated: 22/03/07


Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/04/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

whaoh!!!

brilliant!amazing!well written.......

i m jumping right now at your other stories!!

thank you!



Author's Response: I'm just over the top thrilled that you enjoyed this story.  Honestly, it was the first thing I'd ever written and I was so happy to see people are still reading.  HOpe you enjoyed whatever else you read and welcome to the site :) - Kel

 
Summary: There is a new player in town, a bounty hunter named Brie. She's dangerous, smart, and she knows what she's doing. But there is something off about her. Who is she? What is she hiding? And most important, can the boys trust her?
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 87427
[Report This] Published: 19/04/07 Updated: 13/04/09


Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

!!!!!!!!!

i laughed, got scared and cried an awful lot of tears..............

give me more please!!

awesome job, terrific character that will stay alive in my memory for long!

thanx for the ride!



Author's Response: Thanks so much Jool! I'm glad you love the character, i love her too. I hope you continue to read about her. She has so many more secrets to unveil and the results will throw everything into choas.

 
Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/02/09 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

still want more.....

it s like a slow burn getting back to the story and then being forced out of it!!

i m quite speechless for now the only words i find are "i beg you to hurry and give us some more!!!!!!!"

 
The Chosen by kwater Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary: The war is quickly approaching and Sam, Dean and Catherine begin preparing for the final battle - This is the third part of the Coming War Series
Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Coming War
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 24697
[Report This] Published: 04/06/07 Updated: 03/07/07


Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/05/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

pffff!

well i expected some tears and aches but not like that, hard to see Cat go....they were such a great couple with Dean.

i loved the way you introduced her death, almost didn t see it coming!great work!thank you!



Author's Response: Cat was and is a favorite of mine, but I just couldn't see this ending any other way.  So glad you enjoyed and I appreciate you taking the time to review...THANKS!!!

 
Summary:

Sam has disappeared without a trace leaving Dean to fear the worst. Meanwhile, an old friend seeks out Dean for protection. This story follows Dean during the week of Sam's disappearance (sorry I'm bad at summaries)

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Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Blood Ties
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 24084
[Report This] Published: 05/05/08 Updated: 24/06/08


Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

that's great!!

very intriguing and i like the relationship between these two!!

cant wait for the next chapter.....please hurry!



Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it! I'm glad you like Dean/Lexi I wasn't sure how people were going to react to their relationship. No worries I'm working on chapter four as we speak.

 
Summary: Continuation of On the Road with the Winchesters: Season 2 :D with my OC Andrea Core
Categories: Romance, General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Completed: Yes Word count: 473511
[Report This] Published: 28/06/08 Updated: 06/06/09


Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 10/07/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Bloodlust Part 2

i really liked it!!

keep writing i can t wait to read the rest of it!

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

  

*spoilers*  Picking up where season three left off...Dean and Sam are on the road to the end.  Or is it the beginning?  Armageddon is upon us.  Are you ready for the coming of the night?


Categories: General, Romance, AU, Action, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 48094
[Report This] Published: 20/07/08 Updated: 27/08/08


Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 26/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - White Light

love the storytelling...

this is sooo new!

Dean is right, seeing him half naked won't hurt anything at all...perhaps our poor little hearts....



Author's Response:

Dean:  Get the paddles!

Sam:  Your ego, seriously, needs to take a hike.

Dean:  And you need to lay off the mood killing trip.  *groans*

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.  I hope you check back for updates.  Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Tune Up

it s getting better and better....

Eve is really intriguing and i d love to see more of her.

keep up the good work and thank you!

don t worry Dean YOU ARE the sexiest man alive...don t need TV Guide to tell you that



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you think its getting better and better.  Hopefully I keep your interest piqued.  As for Eve...I promise you'll be seeing more of her.  Thanks for your very kind words!

Dean:  Damn right I'm the sexiest man alive.  Ha!  Told you, Sam.

Sam:  Way to boost his ego.  I hope you got room at your house for it because its getting to big for the SOUNDSTAGE we're on!

Dean:  Jeeze...could you be a little bit more bitter, Sammy?  Just remember:  2nd place is just as good.

Sam:  I hate you.

 
Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/08/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Balance

i m still curious about the enigma Eve seems to be..

 i really liked the way the Eve-dean relationship started subtle and new

can t wait to see the notorious Anna and have my own opinion about her...but do we know for sure that Eve is on the "good guys team"??

still i m really looking forward the next episode of this exiting story!

sending my love to Sam and Dean by the way..and i m starting to think about my favorite Dean moment!



Author's Response:

Can I just say that it is so cool that you think Eve is an enigma?  I love it.  I'm really glad that the Eve-Dean relationship is subtle.  I didn't want it to start off overbearing if it continues at all.  *wink*

Dean:  Come on, I finally get a girl and you're going to take that away from me?

*Sam just laughs*

Dean:  Sam, you're just evil, you know that.

Sam:  I might have to be to get some action of my own.

*Sam and Dean both look at one another*

I'm glad that you are liking this story.  I'm hoping that you continue to let me know what you think.  Thank you for your review.  Plus, Sam and Dean send their love your way.  Keep thinking of your favorite moment...I, for one, can't wait to hear what Dean's are.

*Dean laughs evilly*

 
Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 - Something Unexpected

thank you for using my view of Eve "She likes to remain an enigma" that was a very pleasant surprise when i read it!!

i really like where the story is going, but where is Sam? seeing him as a shapeshifter reminds us of the great times when he was evil (sorry Sam but you were mighty sexy is Born under a bad sigh..)!!

i m diving into the next chapter hoping that i dont drown...anyway one of you Winchesters will jump to save me, wont you?????Sam?Dean??



Author's Response:

That comment hit me so much that it just flowed when I wrote the chapter.  Thank you for letting me use it!  Eve is truly an enigma and what's coming up for her will be a ton of fun to write.  As for Sam...

*Sam waves*

He's still here.

Dean:  Much to my displeasure.

Sam:  Displeasure?  Is that even a word?

Dean:  You're the one who plays Scrabble all the time.

Sam:  Well while I go look up that word in the dictionary, why don't you go save Jool from drowning.

Dean *grins*:  With pleasure...

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter.  Thanks so much for the review.

 
Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/08/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Change in the Tide

the end was as good as expected...breath-taking, tense and subtle making us want MORE!!

the introduction of Adam was pure genius and the love story between Eve and Dean was really bound to happen and feel totally natural (or supernatural?!!!!)

now i m totally hooked up to your writing and let me congratulate you for your titles...i really love the title of the sequel!

Dean, thanx for saving me from drowning...i ll have to think about a way to pay you back........."grins"



Author's Response:

Dean:  It's true what they say:  when the bed is a rockin' don't come a knockin'.

Sam:  That's usually a sign of an exorcism.

Dean:  That's also a sign of something else, Sammy.  Apparently something you know nothing about.

Sam *grumbling*:  Shut-up, Dean.

I'm glad that you like my titles.  I try to pick ones that best suit what's coming.  The sequel will definitely be a lot darker than this one.  As for Dean...

Dean:  It is always to save the damsel in distress.  Even Sammy...

Sam:  DEAN!

I'm glad that you enjoyed the chapter and the ending.  Thanks for reviewing!

 
Summary:

Dean and Sam are racing against time to save a young girl. What is she trying to hide and why is she fighting them tooth and nail every step of the way?  Is she even worth the effort?


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 29901
[Report This] Published: 30/07/08 Updated: 18/08/08


Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

that s great, very vivid and fast paced...

can t wait for the next chapters!!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for your comments Jool! I'm really pleased that you're enjoying this.  Next chapter has much more action and is nearly ready.  I'll post tomorrow.

 
Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/08/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

the story is changing and you did it at the right time as the hatred between Dean and Emma was starting to be too tense.

I really like the way you're giving clues on Emma's past, it s very intriguing and it makes us hooked up to the next chapters.

congrats and i hope to hear more from you soon!!



Author's Response: Thanks Jool!I wanted to explore an angry Dean, but when even I started to dislike both Dean and Emma, I thought it was time for a truce!

Lots more info on Emma’s past coming up.   I’m struggling with this next chapter and reviews like yours just make me try harder.  I’ll do my best to update tomorrow.

 

 
Summary:

*spoilers*  Continuing where Supernatural: the End left off...Dean is on the hunt for something he doesn't want to hunt.  The end is near.  This is the beginning of the end.  Will Dean complete his destiny or succumb to the one thing everyone fears - the darkness within?


Categories: General, Romance, AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 32238
[Report This] Published: 29/08/08 Updated: 08/10/08


Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

once again a great chapter... you were right to make it a new story, the vibe is different in this one.

it s great to have our Evil Sam again and the story will be very moving and surprising as both brothers are fighting on different sides.

i m hanging in there with you with pleasure and congratulations for your banners they are always well chosen!



Author's Response:

Dean:  It's a whole different ballgame.

Sam:  What do you know about ballgames?

Dean:  And what do you know about being evil?!

*Sam smirks*

Dean:  I am going to beat you senseless.

Sam:  You can try, big brother.

Dean:  Oh!  Don't you dare pull that 'big brother' crap.  I'm taking you down!

*Sam just smiles*

Thank you for your review!  I'm glad that you are enjoying the story so far.  And thank you for your nice comments about my banners.  I really do appreciate it.

 
Summary:

Almnegra is a demon.  But when she comes across Sam and learns of his brother in Hell, we discover she’s not exactly as she seems.

"S'il existe, cet Etre ..., qu'Il détourne la main criminelle avant que ne soit trop tard ; -- et si c'est sa volonté qu'une pauvre âme aveugle franchisse le passage, puisse-t-Il, du moins, accueillir avec amour ce monstre, sa créature. " François Mauriac, Thérèse Desqueyroux 

Takes place between seasons 3 and 4.  Features OC POV, Dean POV, and maybe some Sam POV.  Spoilers up to 4x10.

Translation of quote: "If he exists, this Being ..., if He turns the criminal hand before it's too late; -- and if it's his will that a poor blind soul cross the passage to death, couldn't He, at least, welcome with love this monster, His creature."


Categories: General, Action, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2019
[Report This] Published: 19/09/08 Updated: 25/10/08


Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 26/10/08 Title: Lost Souls

the beginning is great, the idea of a demon chick is very appealing, especially if she s not all evil....

the barriers between good and evil are more and more blurred and it will surely leads us to some surprises!!

keep up the good work!

 
Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 26/10/08 Title: Lost Souls

by the way your quote was very well chosen and it s stange but nice to read some french in here (that's my mother tongue!)

 
Summary:

*major Season 4 spoilers - set after ep. 4.03*  So this was it.  This was his destiny.  For Dean Winchester, he had always known he was going to be a hunter.  After the fire on November 2nd, 1983, he knew that his life had changed.  But now that he was back from the fiery depths of Hell, what was his so-called destiny?  His brother and a woman from his past bring his destiny to light.


Categories: General, Romance, AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Questions Answered
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 44288
[Report This] Published: 04/10/08 Updated: 23/11/08


Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Flesh from Bone

i liked the first version but this one seems very promising!!

it s always a pleasure to read your stories and i m looking forward to have some more!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for checking out the second version.  I'm glad that you're liking this one as well.  I hope that you continue to check back for updates.  Thanks so much for the review.

 
Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 24/10/08 Title: Chapter 6: Point Demon

this new version is fast paced and full of insights.

i like this new character very different from the other "Dean's girl" even if she s much more then that.

learning about Bobby's death was sad though but it s great to see more of him thanks to the flashbacks.

finally the idea of Lillith possessing Abby is pure candy to me...tricky but it s working!!!

looking forward to the rest (as for all your stories), i feel like you ve reached a new level in your writing 

 



Author's Response: Yay for liking the new version!  LOL!  Abby is definitely very different than in the original Condemned.  She's easier to write and I absolutely love delving into her backstory.  As for Bobby...so wasn't planned.  It killed me to well kill him off.  And Lilith and Abby...it'll get even trickier later on.  Thank you for saying I've reached a new level in writing.  That truly means a lot to me.  Thank you so much for your review.

 
Summary: Things aren't going well for hunter Zoë Sullivan. She's hunting what she thinks is a shapeshifter, but when the wind changes, she's suddenly the one who ends up shot. She has no explanation for the shifter to change that fast, until she runs into the brothers Winchester, who apparently, are on the same hunt...
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Supernatural
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 9550
[Report This] Published: 14/10/08 Updated: 17/10/08


Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 15/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that s great, as you said very detailed but fluent!

this character seems very promising and i m looking forward to read more of her

 
Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 15/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

more!more!

 

love it!

 
Summary:

Banner for the story: Whatever Lola Wants. Banner by: ANicerRuby.
Lola Costas get caught at a hospital by the hunting brothers, Dean and Sam Winchester, a popular name in her community of people. They go their separate ways, but Dean feels a nudge to find out about all of Lola's darkest secrets.


Categories: General, Romance, AU, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2794
[Report This] Published: 18/10/08 Updated: 18/10/08


Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 20/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: December 15, 1615

i love it!!!

 

i want more!



Author's Response: Thanks! It'll be out soon!

 
Reviewer: jool Signed
Date: 20/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: December 15, 1615

i love it!!!

 

i want more!

 
Summary:

*Major Season 4 Spoilers!*  Continuing from where 'Condemned' left off...  The world as we know it, is ending.  There is no hope left for anyone.  The Winchesters are no longer who we remember them to be.  With Angels and Demons at war, who is there left to save us all?  With the apocalypse upon us, it is only a matter of time before the trumpet sounds.  Will the boys find their way back to the light or will it be the End of us all?


Categories: General, Romance, AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7600
[Report This] Published: 28/11/08 Updated: 02/12/08


Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: Methods of Madness

speechless and wondering...that s how you left me!!

this story is heartbreaking and we definitely hope that Abby will have enough willpower and faith to make things right...

as far as we re concerned it s as good as eating a pie while driving the Impala!WE WANT MORE!

 
Summary:

Set in Season 4 goes AU through season 5.

Dean and Sam come across a woman who could be either a new friend or a powerful new enemy.

Much more...but if I tell you then there would be no fun in reading it and you should read, it's good (I'm not just saying that because I wrote it).

 


Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4411
[Report This] Published: 19/08/09 Updated: 19/08/09


Reviewer: jool Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting with Mystery

GREAT!!

can t wait to know more about her mission and all the details on nephilims (actually i have no idea who they are!!!))

a really promising start!