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Penname: Renate [Contact]
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Real name: Kristen Rowen-Pliske Status: Member Member Since: 25/03/08 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Renate Summary:
The brothers must solve a serious threat in the Vermont woods. A random GuiltyPleasure tale--not connected with What Goes Around etc.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 52612 [Report This] Published: 18/07/08 Updated: 19/08/08
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Date: 19/08/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Excellent! I always enjoy reading your stories, Marquessa. Summary:
Who would have thought a broken jaw could be the least of your problems...? FINAL CHAPTER POSTED! Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 16986 [Report This] Published: 18/07/08 Updated: 10/09/08
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Date: 22/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: TWO He'll be OK as long as he skips the pills when he takes the booze and, of course, doesn't operate any heavy machinery! Looking forward to the next addition! Author's Response: Hm... it'll have to be a few days before he's allowed to drive his baby again... Damn, that's even worse than taking away the beer :)
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Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: THREE Glad to help! I've tried the talking-without-moving-your-lips. It does sound weird. Think of episode of "Friends" with Chandler trapped in ATM vestibule with Jill Goodacre and how he tries to explain it to Monica who can't understand him, yet Joey gets it immediately. I'm enjoying this story very much! Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Actually it's more talking without moving your teeth... odd huh. But then I love tongue twisters:) Anybody know any English ones? All my favorites are in Icelandic...
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*spoilers* Picking up where season three left off...Dean and Sam are on the road to the end. Or is it the beginning? Armageddon is upon us. Are you ready for the coming of the night? Categories: General, Romance, AU, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 48094 [Report This] Published: 20/07/08 Updated: 27/08/08
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Date: 22/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Interesting set up! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I hopefully will continue to keep your interest piqued. Please continue to check back for updates. Dean: You know you want to... Summary:
There was only one thing that could break Dean's deal. And that was The Key...
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 17922 [Report This] Published: 30/07/08 Updated: 17/08/08
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Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Twin Jensens? Yummy! I thought so, LOL! Of course, for everyone else, there's twin Jareds... Glad you like! Summary:
 Powers!Dean, a smidgen of Demon!Sam. Angst. Comfort. Guilt. YED. Categories: Drabbles, AU, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 11804 [Report This] Published: 14/09/08 Updated: 03/11/08
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Date: 03/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Hush Little Baby, Don't Say a Word Cool! I like that Dean was part of Azazel's plan, too. He was never ordinary, was he? Summary: Incessantly ringing payphones can be painful in more ways than one. Dean gets a phone call with unexpected consequences. Rated T for Language.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 29750 [Report This] Published: 18/09/08 Updated: 11/10/08
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Date: 12/10/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Enjoyed this very much, especially the end scene! I can totally see Dean jumping and screaming with delight cuz he got to play with C4! Summary:
The brothers encounter an angry spirit in a 200 year old house in Nova Scotia. But this one is difficult to solve...who is really haunting the Rose Cottage?
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 49246 [Report This] Published: 04/10/08 Updated: 07/11/08
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Date: 07/11/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 I always enjoy your stories. Very well written, humorous, with plenty of action. I look forward to more! Author's Response: Thanks for saying so, Renate. There's perhaps one story more in this thread, if it ever fleshes out in my mind. --ml Summary:
Babies, werewolves, wrong ends of many sticks and plain ol' shootin' and cussin'. Same-old same-old then - if you're a Winchester. NO spoilers for episodes after 3.14 OR season four. I don't do spoilers. Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 27138 [Report This] Published: 05/10/08 Updated: 19/10/08
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Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Crack-fic definately! I found it funny-cuz I've been there, done that. And Dean's perfect for "it" because he's raised a kid already! So of course she likes him better! Ok, I definitely need to go and find out what 'crack-fic' means, LOL Thanks for your time reading and reviewing! I'll get to work on the next chapter right now... Summary:
Amy had seen her brother die and she knew who was to blame, The Winchester Boys. Now she sets out on a quest to get revenge for her lost brother. Awesome Banner by Rae!!!!! So cool!!!!  Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1862 [Report This] Published: 06/10/08 Updated: 11/10/08
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Date: 12/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Life Is But A Dream Interesting but I'm not sure the demon's POV is necessary. That is, we all know demons are tricksy liars. And, ouch, I think Amy's more screwed in the head than Dean! We're curious as to why you think the demon's POV is unnecessary, we could do with a little bit more information. Thanks for the honest review, we know our story isn't perfect and for once we get some constructive stuff that we can work on. Emma and Ashley Summary:
Having been handed the reins of the family business, the brothers track an angry spirit that's wandered very far from home... Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 8147 [Report This] Published: 15/10/08 Updated: 23/10/08
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Date: 21/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: THREE Nope. I'm good here! I like your appendices to explain some of your info.
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Date: 23/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: FOUR Enjoyed it! Summary:
At Sam's suggestion, the brothers set out to have a little fun for Halloween. But things go terribly wrong as they are wont to do in the lives of the poor Winchester boys. Rated T only for some swearing.
Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2935 [Report This] Published: 23/10/08 Updated: 23/10/08
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Date: 23/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Jumpin' Jack-o-Lanterns Only a Winchester could make pumpkin carving dangerous! lol Good job! Summary:
Just why does Dean hate Florida so much? Cocoa Beach, fuglies, allergies, and car accidents – Dean simply can’t catch a break. Pre-Season and early Season One. Rated T for Language. Disclaimer: I own nothing Supernatural. All characters belong to the CW and Kripke Scrap Metal and Entertainment Company. Banner by Thru Terry's Eyes! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 44054 [Report This] Published: 25/10/08 Updated: 24/12/08
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Date: 24/12/08 Title: Chapter 17: In Bed, Sam, A Hospital Bed Excellent job! Summary: The boys are on their way to a new hunt and Sam's having trouble with the maps. Good thing Dean is there to help a brother out.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 522 [Report This] Published: 25/10/08 Updated: 25/10/08
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Date: 26/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: when lights go out LOL! I love that movie! Author's Response: heeeheeeheee! Me too! ~A Summary:
Digging up graves is part of every hunter's life. Being buried in one - not so much. Especially since Dean doesn't fit the main prerequisite of burial - he isn't dead. At least not yet. But if Sam doesn't find him soon, that might change quickly. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 21610 [Report This] Published: 27/10/08 Updated: 20/11/08
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Date: 28/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Oh, crap! Hurry up, Sammy! Summary:
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 10623 [Report This] Published: 28/10/08 Updated: 06/11/08
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Date: 29/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Spelling goofs- but if you're just learning English, it's got lots of tangles! Are the parenthesis supposed to be Dean's thoughts or yours? Author's Response: i know my spellings off , and I'm sorry for that , but if you could read beyond them you will understand what i mean . Thanks for reacting and the parenthesis are the thoughts of Dean . Please keep reading and reacting. Lots of love from copycat 666 Summary:
For two weeks Sam hasn’t seen or heard from Dean and his search is getting nowhere. Now he’s filing a missing persons report in a small town with a cop who looks an awful lot like his big brother.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 22295 [Report This] Published: 29/10/08 Updated: 13/02/09
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Date: 13/02/09 Title: Chapter 10: Blood Red Sky Yes, yes. A stalker faerie. It is a good idea! Enjoyed the read!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked it! he he, I have this terrible image of a stalker faerie in my head and it just refuses to leave. It's getting quite bad actually, lol. Summary: Poem about Dean wandering in Lucifer’s Dream
Categories: One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadows of a Morning Star Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 68 [Report This] Published: 31/10/08 Updated: 31/10/08
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Date: 03/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What? Crazy? Why you'll fit right in here! Lol, so true ^_^ Thanks so much for reading!! Summary:
Sam needs some relaxation, and well-meaning Dean thinks he knows exactly what kind. A routine sourcing trip for Bobby is going to do more than bring vengeful demons back from their past. How far would you go for your brother? Or your sister? Set between episodes 3.15 and 3.16. NO SPOILERS for end season 3 and nothing at all to do with season 4. Categories: Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 39107 [Report This] Published: 16/11/08 Updated: 16/12/08
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Date: 23/11/08 Title: Chapter 3: THREE: Paradise City heh heh heh evil Sam strikes again! Summary:
Dean hated Poughkeepsie, but at least he wasn't starting high school there.
Categories: Romance, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: Transcendental Numbers Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 15015 [Report This] Published: 18/11/08 Updated: 18/11/08
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Date: 18/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: Base eight is just like base ten if you're missing two fingers Very good! Poor Sammy. I liked Math Girl. Thank you! I'm more than a little fond of Math Girl myself - she shows up in a couple of pre-series stories that I've written. And my apologies for not responding sooner. Life gets crazy when you get sick. ;) Summary:
The Impala gets five minutes to herself - or so she thinks. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1232 [Report This] Published: 19/11/08 Updated: 19/11/08
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Date: 25/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Parking Lot. Haven't read this before! It's like "Supernatural Carz"! Author's Response: Not sure what 'Carz' is - hope it's a TV show, LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Summary:
Pre 4x09. Wide eyes stare upwards, looking into almost identical green ones. He blinks, trying to focus on the face – needing to see it before he fades out. Contains a few SPOILERS for season 4. Second chapter added! Enjoy! Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3689 [Report This] Published: 19/11/08 Updated: 21/03/09
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Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Word vomit? Hardly. Like it very much! Summary:
After what seems like a chance encounter with a succubus in a college bar, Dean and Sam learn about the Circle of Enoch — and the Enochian Prophecy that the Circle has sworn to fulfill; a prophecy where Sam is "the Destroyer" and his Ascension is the precursor to Armageddon. There's no way in hell the Winchesters are going to let that happen. But how do you stop Armageddon with nothing but a book bag full of notes and a glowing sword? This is the first "main" story in the Strange Angels 'verse. The second is Beneath the Hollow. Banner made by Discordia_Intus Categories: General, Romance, AU, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Strange Angels Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 117716 [Report This] Published: 02/12/08 Updated: 14/12/08
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Date: 14/12/08 Title: Chapter 14: Carry That Weight Excellent job! Your writing is wonderful and the characters have such depth. I like the length, thank you very much. It made for a monster read! Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is the first story I've written for Supernatural and it turned out being a bit more ambitious than I originally intended. I'm thrilled that the length worked for you - I hadn't originally intended a novel-length trilogy but that looks like where it's headed. And thank you so much for the feedback on the characters. I was particularly worried about the OCs, both primary and secondary, and hope that they worked for you. I am particularly fond of Ellie, myself. ;-P And, last though not least, thank you for your kind comments! |
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