Penname: Xela007 [Contact][Report This]
Real name: Alex
Member Since: 24/03/08
Reviews by Xela007
Winchesters always needed protecting, from themselves as much as anything else – so maybe it was no surprise that Mama added all that thyme and basil and oregano into spaghetti sauce every time a Winchester crossed their doorstep.
Categories: General, One Shots, Romance, Wee!chester, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 40335
[Report This] Published: 04/12/08 Updated: 09/11/09
Reviewer: Xela007 Signed
Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 5: Barely enough time to sing
I love this story and I really, really hope you choose to continue it. I'm pretty picky when it comes to OCs (it doesn't matter if it's a romance, or just friendly, vindictive, or otherwise) but Alice and her mother fit into this world wonderfully and I find myself becoming as attached to them as I am the Winchesters.
Your use of the language is also so charming. The descriptions are both real and whimsical and create a really pleasurable read. I'm honestly shocked this has so few reviews (and hoping that maybe I can talk you into working on this again ^_^)
Thank you so much! I am definitely continuing it - I'm already halfway through the next chapter. Unfortunately, I've been fighting a couple of serious health issues which have detracted from my desire to write...but I will persevere. ;)
Thank you so much for your feedback on Alice and Jane. This story was something of an answer to the witches portrayed in Malleus Maleficarum and I struggled to make them fit into canon as well as making them well-rounded people. I always worry about my OCs, so I appreciate it when people like them them. Probably more than I should in this case, as I am attached very attached to the idea of Jane and Alice and what they mean to me as a model of "female strength" within a canon that doesn't focus on it. Sorry, I tend to ramble...
And I have worked hard on the narrative style. It's actually quite different than what I've used in other stories - it's more like writing poetry than prose, and it sadly writes more slowly than I would like it to, even on my best days. ;-P
As for reviews? I'm happy to get them. Doesn't matter how many I get, really.
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