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Penname: gapdragon [Contact]
Real name: su
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Member Since: 20/03/08
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Summary:

banner created by Kira Reed

When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711
[Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

brilliant - really enjoyed that - thanks

su



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading! I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Somehow your review posted twice, so I thank you double! :)

Best,

Gaelic

 
Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

brilliant - really enjoyed that - thanks

su

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

After a hunt goes terribly wrong Sam seeks the services of a necromancer.  And finds out more about his brother than he ever knew before.  This is her story...


Categories: AU, General, Romance Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 17211
[Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 22/02/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Carry on My Wayward Son

cool

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Summary:

Dean agrees to look into a hunt he doesn't believe in to appease a sick Sam.  Set in second season, between Playthings and Nightshifter


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 47323
[Report This] Published: 09/01/08 Updated: 03/06/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed
Date: 21/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

really enjoying this story and new to the site so having to remember my manners and not keep demanding more more. I love the sisters - think when this is over they should open a 'roadhouse'.

Thanks for the stories (just starting the sara series) My family also conspire to drag me away from the computer.

Thanks again

su

Liverpool  UK

 



Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying, yeah family's just don't get it huh...lol.  Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying, it's always fun to find out people really are reading...lol  Enjoy the site there are a ton of really great authors - Kel

 
Summary: All The Fun Of The Fair 

An afternoon off brings its own challenges...

Set some time during Season 2


Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6191
[Report This] Published: 01/02/08 Updated: 01/02/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A little gem - Can't stop smiling - nice one



Author's Response: Thank you. It was just a bit of fun for one of the girls over on sn.tv. I love doing the humour aspect of the stories - we all need a laugh every now and then. Glad it brought a smile to your face.

 
Summary:

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Amazing Banner by the amazing Rae666 

Sam and Dean agree to help an old friend of their father's stop whatever is killing and mutilating hikers in a Northwest Wilderness Area. As evil makes itself known, the brothers go from hunters to prey. Lots of hurt and all the good stuff.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 49239
[Report This] Published: 03/03/08 Updated: 20/06/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/06/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

brilliant - really enjoyed it and the LOTR references were fun. look forward to the next one

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm so glad the LOTRs refs worked. Once I had the idea of the forest demons, I knoew there would be a few, and Dean was so cooperative!! I'll have something new very soon! Thank you again

 
The L Word by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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Some things are just too hard to say...

Awards 2008 Best Short Story


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 11613
[Report This] Published: 18/04/08 Updated: 25/04/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed
Date: 21/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

brilliant - your attention to detail is fantastic - can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you for that. I hope you enjoy the second part.

 
Ripple Effect by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

  

 Ripple Effect

...and the effect spreads outwards, like ripples on a pond when a stone is dropped...


Categories: General, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 44177
[Report This] Published: 02/05/08 Updated: 13/06/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed
Date: 08/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

brilliant - as always . Sorry to hear about your Grandfather - Your stories have given me a place of my own to escape to when I desperately needed it and I just wanted to say I'm sending you hugs from Liverpool . Take care

Author's Response: Thank you for that. Your words have truly touched me. I'm glad that I can provide that escape for you, and I hope I never let you down with my storytelling. Oh, by the way, all hugs graciously received - and sending one back from Brisbane, Australia.

 
Happy Birthday by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

Tension mounts between the brothers - is it just Dean's deal or is something more sinister at work...

Happy Birthday

SN.tv 2009 Best Ghost


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 54038
[Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed
Date: 06/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Cool - unexpected treat on a Sunday - definitely a good idea. Thank you ! Loved the image of Dean catching Sam out  pretending he'd fell over. Off to read 'A Comforting Sense of Home'  when I should be ironing x

Author's Response: LOL, it was a pretty boring Sunday, and I was too brain-dead to work on another story, so an update was the next best thing. Oh, and I'd read fiction over ironing any day, but that's me - I hate ironing. Right up there with cleaning out the fish tank or the cat litter tray.....Jules

 
Reviewer: gapdragon Signed
Date: 28/07/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great story - sorry bout your friends father - was starting to worry when you hadn't posted which sounds a bit dramatic but it wasn't like you. take it easy - save that strength for typing  Su

Author's Response: Thanks for that Su - my friend is back in Brisbane now. She's doing okay, considering - has her mushy bits, but that's understandable. LOL - I will take it easy for the weekend, I promise. As for typing - hope you enjoy the next serving...Jules

 
Reviewer: gapdragon Signed
Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Way cool - excellent fight scene and nobody does dialogue as well as you - love these mid week treats even if it is another cliffe

cheers

su



Author's Response: Aww, thanks, Su - you're making me blush. Glad you liked the mid-week treat - my beta is sending me to classes to learn how not to respond to bribes for early updates - LOL. Something tells me I'm going to come out at the bottom of the class....Jules

 
Summary: The relentless hunt keeps Dean going, but wears Sam down.  Too many unspoken words and one Winchester falls over the edge.   

Timeline:  Set during Season 2

Tag: Just after- Everybody Loves a Clown 

 


Categories: General, One Shots, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4187
[Report This] Published: 01/07/08 Updated: 01/07/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed
Date: 05/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

sweet - enjoyed this

 
Summary:  

Some things can always be counted on

A Comforting Sense Of Home


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3332
[Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 06/07/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed
Date: 06/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Feel spoilt - very enjoyable - can just see Dean reaching out for the wheel !

Cheers 



Author's Response: Thanks for that - glad you liked it. And thanks for the review...Jules

 
Summary:

 Fractured Hearts and Fallen Heroes

A simple ailment hides a bigger problem

Set immediately after the Season 2 episode Everybody Loves A Clown


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 12098
[Report This] Published: 10/09/08 Updated: 13/09/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm a sucker for fragile Sam and I love how you never 'over do' it. I really enjoy all of your stories . It's brilliant if I see a story with your name next to it because I am  assured quality writing, a superb natural style,excellent attention to detail and a different plot each time from somebody who knows the characters inside out and loves them as I do. 

Take a well earned break but have pity and don't be away too long. Ps have just twigged rating button d'oh . - su 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Su. I'm really gratified to know that I don't overdo it with Sammy - it's easy to get him wrong. That tough hunter/heart on sleeve is a wicked combination, and a bit of a juggling act. Top marks to Jared for pulling it off time and time again.

Wow - thank you - seriously. I read this during a pretty tough time, and it practically brought tears to my eyes. It's lovely to know that all my hard work pays off, and the I can bring pleasure to people while staying true to the characters Kripke and Co have brought to life. And you're right - I do love the characters. I'd hate to get them wrong.

And I promise - only a little break. Just enough to replace the batteries in the muse and give her a tune-up......Jules

 
Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Cool - loved the ending. I have 2 brothers and a sister all well into our forties with our own children etc and we still play the 'I'm telling mum on you' card, so I loved Dean 'threatening ' to rat on Sam. 

Hope you manage to kick back and chill, you've had a rough year - have a gin and tonic for me  - su



Author's Response:

LOL - I'm in my forties, too, and every now and then I'll do the "I'm dobbing on you!" defence. Thanks for that. After all the angst, I had to have my happy ending. (keeping everything crossed that the wonderful Mr Kripke gives me that by the end of season 5...)

I have managed to kick back and relax a bit - cleaning the house today, actually - well, supposed to be cleaning the house.... Had some wine last night and slept like a log. Wireless internet's not happening - couldn't get a signal, even though there's an Optus tower about 500 metres west of the house. So looks like I won't be moving too far into the future just yet - lol. Thanks for reading!....Jules

 
Hunter by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

 Their first mistake was picking on a Winchester...it was also their last...

Hunter

Set in Season Three, between the episodes Bad Day At Black Rock and Fresh Blood


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 20194
[Report This] Published: 03/10/08 Updated: 17/10/08


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I WAS going to say it was good to have you back, but after a cliffe like that !! "Christo" - just checking. Re 'Running on Empty' (which I really like) I think your story has only superficial similarities. This Sam is not having to wait be rescued from revenge driven sadists. This Sam is wounded (yay) but not a victim and very much in character (go Sammy)  Hope you enjoyed your break, but not so much that you want another one just yet. Su x

Author's Response:

Oh, my goodness! Thanks, Su. Oh, and my eyes didn't turn black - is that a good thing? Thank you for that - I do worry - probably a bit too much, as my beta and banner-maker would both tell me.

And yes, I did enjoy my break - wrote all the way through it, actually. I just stopped posting for a few weeks, and finished my week in Stanford story that had ground to a screaming halt.....Jules

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

Here At The End Of All Things

Who will be left standing at the end of it all...

Set at the end of the final season and beyond - AU

Spoilers for Season 4 up to 4:14, and speculation for the finale.

UnGenAUaward

SN.tv 2009 Best Future Fic


Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 189848
[Report This] Published: 13/03/09 Updated: 29/08/09


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/08/09 Title: Chapter 19: Author's Notes

Wow - double wow. I've tried to review several times before but couldn't as anything I tried to say seemed woefully inadequate. Finally I'm having to settle for just saying thank you thank you thank you. Awesome x

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for that - it's Su, isn't it? Hope we've got that right. Thank you so much for letting us know what you thought. And for the pretty stars to add to Petra's collection. We know this has come from the heart, and we thank you sincerely for it. 

Jules & Petra

 
Bean Stalker by ophium Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 47]
Summary:

 

 

Chuck’s books mustered a good number of fans. One of them turned out to be the wrong kind of fan. When an obsessed woman finds out that Sam and Dean are real, the consequences for one of them are anything but nice. ‘Misery’ style.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 50822
[Report This] Published: 01/06/09 Updated: 05/08/09


Reviewer: gapdragon Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/06/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Brilliant.'Maybe Mary even used the same sftener' - priceless, Thank you


Author's Response: :D Thank you! I love the small details that readers notice. It really makes my day!