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Penname: thirdwatchfanatic [Contact]
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Real name: maddie o Status: Member Member Since: 16/03/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 18/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What happens after, "Now, see what you made me do," etc........... This is the last paragraph of chapter one. The rest is missing. Summary:
 It was just a little scar on Dean's shoulder. But it was about to turn Sam's whole world upside down.Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 15565 [Report This] Published: 16/07/07 Updated: 02/08/07
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Empath Great job! Well thought out! It's always nice to read these things when the author has a good grasp on the show. A couple minor vocab errors but all in all, wonderful work!!!! Summary:
Dean ponders his fate as his last year winds down to just days. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4399 [Report This] Published: 23/11/07 Updated: 30/03/08
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Date: 26/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Dean's Choice Great writing! Chapter kept my interest. Hi, Thank you for the review, especially since this is an older story, so you had to backtrack to find it! This has been rendered an AU by the third season finale, but I'm glad it hooked you in anyway. Sue Summary: As the year his big brother was given to live in exchange for his life comes to an end, Sam is blind-sided with an unexpected conclusion. Takes place following events of Season Three. Character death.
Categories: One Shots, General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1110 [Report This] Published: 15/03/08 Updated: 15/03/08
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Date: 16/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: By His Rules Although it was very sad you did a great job. Keep it up. I'd love to read more of your stories. Summary:
SN.tv Creature Challenge entry Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6123 [Report This] Published: 03/04/08 Updated: 03/04/08
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Date: 05/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Read about half your fics and this one is my favorite so far. Regarding your stories: your writing and thought process is very good, however, a little too much hurt/injured/agonized Sam for me. I like to see him in hunter mode, full of virgor and stamia more often and not sickly, etc. I also have to get use to seeing kerb (curb) and recognise (recognize). Keep up the good work! Author's Response: I spell the Aussie way, and I make no apologies for that. Those who know me are used to that little idiosyncracy. Thank you for your review. Summary:
Written for the "Get Well, Angela" challenge. Sam holes up at Bobby's after Dean's deal. Tag for No Rest for the Wicked.Categories: UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1764 [Report This] Published: 12/07/08 Updated: 12/07/08
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Date: 24/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very well written! Summary:
Sam gets an unexpected visit from Dean while he is still at Stanford.Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3119 [Report This] Published: 11/09/08 Updated: 11/09/08
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Date: 17/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sam's POV Excellent story. You are a very gifted writer. Summary:
A person needs to hit rock bottom before they can begin to climbup . The exact depth is ultimately up to them. Warning, a bit of a darker fic but definitely not a death fic. Rated for a wee bit of language. Spoilers for S4, at least up to IKWYDLS. Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2034 [Report This] Published: 27/12/08 Updated: 28/12/08
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Date: 29/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great job! Summary:
It took only a moment for Dean to disappear and be swept away by the fury of the avalanche. Now with time running out, Sam turns to the help of strangers to find him before it's too late.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 25580 [Report This] Published: 04/01/09 Updated: 28/03/09
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Date: 24/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This story started off pretty good but you lost me. Couldn't get past the 'amputation'. I guess the 'general' label fits, but I'm still waiting for the 'action'. I don't care for AU fics, only the ones that are TRUE to the show. Kudos to people who live with handicaps and excel in everyday life, but a hunter's life? Don't see it. What happens when Dean encounters a 10' high chainlink fence on a prosthetic leg, for one? Of course, the point of this site is to showcase creative writing, which you seem to have done. Quite a few readers do like your work but in the future, please label your story correctly so fans of such know to stop and read, or skip over. Happy writing! Summary: ""Oh God Sam… I can’t… I don’t wanna do this.” He moaned, eyes falling to the object that glinted in Sam’s hand." - Not what you think. Humour fic/NOT a death fic.
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1171 [Report This] Published: 05/01/09 Updated: 05/01/09
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Date: 06/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled Loved it! You're right, cough medicine is evil! Even cherry! Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Yep, the stuff is just...well, evil. ^_^ Damn yeah, no matter how much they try to disguise the taste, it's still bad. Summary: While still dealing with the aftermath of the wishing well, Sam and Dean are taken by a group of hunters who will stop at nothing to find out the truth about Sam's abilities and how Dean managed to come back from the dead.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 62074 [Report This] Published: 13/01/09 Updated: 29/01/09
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Date: 03/02/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Torn Asunder Great writing! One of the best I've read. It's nice to read these when grammar, vocabulary, and spelling are considered. Your thought process and detail are an additional plus! Hope you're working on another! Summary:
A Perfect Hunter... The Perfect Prey.. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 58913 [Report This] Published: 20/03/09 Updated: 07/01/10
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Date: 19/04/09 Title: Chapter 3: And the Road I Walk is Paved With Sorrow... Great job! You have a way with words and that alone holds my interest. Can't wait for more.
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Date: 29/07/09 Title: Chapter 5: Fighting For My Pride... As always, a wonderful chapter. You put my feeble attempts at writing to shame! I am so hooked - can't wait for more! Glad you like it- but dont sell yourself short... thats the beauty of writing fanfic... the real enjoyment and pleasure should be for you - dont compare yourself to others.. Thanks again... and Ihope you continue to enjoy.
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Date: 14/07/10 Title: Chapter 8: Broken By My Ghosts Poor Dean is still shivering - violently! Save him Tree! Summary:
***Accidental Spoilers for some concepts in Season 5**** Sequel to Links, follows canon mostly up to 4.21 Dean and Sam have to take on Lucifer, separated and hurt both in their own ways..."So, you really think you could do it? Kill me? Kill Sammy?”
Thanks for voting! Means a lot guys! Cal's banner is in the story notes. Thanks hun, I still love it!
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Amulet Series Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 59915 [Report This] Published: 16/04/09 Updated: 07/03/10
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Date: 19/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Morning Star Well written, however, I was hoping this was a dream sequence but it turned out to be an AU story. I prefer fics that remain true to the show. Regardless - happy writting!!! Hey! Thanks for reviewing. It's hard to say which way the show goes at the moment. I could see 2 possible endings for this season. One is the one you just read (only I think Bobby would die) and the other would be Lucifer rising in Bobby. SO, in my opinion, I am not that far off canon. And there's always a risk of being completely AU if you write about the current season. Even tags and dream sequences may turn out to be off the arch in retrospective. The show just offers too many ways of interpretation to be 100% sure about anything, but that again means there is enough room for us to develop mini-arches or small AU which will in the find their way back to canon. Cheers, RC
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Date: 06/05/09 Title: Chapter 4: Lower Power AU or not, I just couldn't stay away! Your story is exceptional and I can't wait to read more! Congrats to you and your wonderful beta! Well hey! Thanks I am blushing here! Exceptional, WOW. And I am not one for AU myself but this is actually pretty close to what could come up in this show, isn't it? Just one possibility... You'll have to wait until Sunday/Monday for the next update! And I can't wait to hear what you think about that chappie... I will forward your congrats to calUK and thanks again! Cheers, RC Summary:
Missy Bender was three things. She was obsessive. She was insane. And she was in love – with a tall, beautiful stranger who looked real purty when he was hurting. But unfortunately for Dean Winchester, one thing she wasn’t was still locked in the closet… Banner by Gypsywoman1 Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 80863 [Report This] Published: 04/05/09 Updated: 15/06/09
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Date: 08/06/09 Title: Chapter 8: The Nature of the Beast I don't understand Sam making a phone call to Stanford!?!?!?! (Unless the Dean's a hunter and knows the area.) This has been going on for a week? Dean would have died from infection and organ failure by now - no pills can remedy something so severe - and then there's the blood loss! Dean needs a hospital - yesterday! No matter what, Sam would never stop searching for Dean, not ever!!! It would never even cross his mind! Anyway, I'm kinda hooked. Don’t panic, dude, all is not lost re Sammy or Dean’s injuries… I know what I’m doing! ;-) And I guess if you’re hooked I’m doing it right! Summary:
He awoke, injured and with no memory of who he was or how he’d gotten there. All he had to go on were nightmares of a hunter he’d been trying desperately to save. But were they nightmares…or were they memories? And who was the hunter in his dreams?
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 4587 [Report This] Published: 28/05/09 Updated: 03/09/09
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Date: 14/06/09 Title: Chapter 4: a voice in the dark Pretty good, but I'd love to read more of The Soul Collector. Hey there! Thanks for coming over to check out my new story, I really appreciate it! Yeah, I'm way overdue on posting the next chapter of The Soul Collector. I'm really sorry about that, I got a bit overextended on the writing front, and real life's been hectic lately. I'm nearly done with the next chapter of it though, and will try to get it up as soon as possible. I plan to get another chapter of this one up this week, if all goes well. Hope to see you back here then! :) Summary:
Set immediately after "Sex and Violence". The Winchester Brothers must try and deal with the fallout from their cruel words while under the Siren's influence. Despite Dean's words at the end, they're not okay. Not yet. Written for auction winner bhoney. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 10991 [Report This] Published: 03/06/09 Updated: 23/08/09
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Date: 18/06/09 Title: Chapter 4: Harken Back to Simpler Times Great story! Excellent thought process and writing - truly one of the best I've read. Hope to see more soon!
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 Date: 24/06/09 Title: Chapter 5: A Short Trip to Hell This story reads like a 'lost episode' - my favorite type of fanfic! Summary: Dad left on a hunt three weeks ago and hasn't returned. Now they're out of food and Dean doesn't know what to do. He tries to be the strong, responsible big brother and look after Sammy like he's supposed to, but the reality is Dean is just a scared ten year old boy who's being forced to grow up too soon.
Categories: General, Wee!chester, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 10906 [Report This] Published: 08/07/09 Updated: 09/09/10
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Date: 11/09/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow - this would have made a great weechester episode! Love it and hoping for more! Summary: “I gotcha, Bobby’s gotcha, we gotcha. I gotcha, ‘s okay.”…words like balsam dripping into Dean’s mind.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4089 [Report This] Published: 15/07/09 Updated: 15/07/09
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Date: 25/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Bullet And A Fire Dean, Sam and Bobby - who shot Dean? Can't help but wonder how he got a bullet wound when no one else armed is near. Good effort but a beta would have been a plus. hey!! :) I always say I don't like this story, but people seem to like it... actually I don't really like any of my stories...*sigh* umm to answer your question about who shot Dean... people often ask me to continue this story and like write about what happened before and what happens after this... but you know what?! I don't wanna.... because I want people to use their imagination and think about what the hell happened so that Dean got shot.... I mentioned that they were on a hunt for some thing and it took everything from them and shot Dean... so you can totally use your imagination and imagine what the hell happened to the boys that Dean got shot and the thing took everything from them. it had to have been one nasty SOB and in my head the thing shot Dean while it took his gun away from him.. in my head.. Dean took a shot but the thing is idk bulletproof and it easily overpowered Dean and took his gun and Sam and Bobby weren't there, becasue they split up before,and the thing took care of Sam and Bobby before it came for Dean or idk lured Dean somewhere else or somethnig... but that is just in my head... idk what your imagination will come up with!! you know!? I mean I could totally make another chapter of this, but it would completely ruin the story... and the story IS Dean being cauterized... that is the point of the story, anything more or less would just ruin everything for me... ummm beta... yeah I tried that but it didn't work out, because I have trouble explaining my ideas to others, as you can see from how I tried to explain the story to you! :) so yeah... a beta is not for me... and besides, sometimes a story is just a moment in time, just one moment of something bigger... you know!? and I love giving the readers that moment and for everything else.... they can use their imaginiation to fill up the empty spaces! phew... okay hows that for an explanation!? okay I need some sugar now... ahahhah :))) thank you so much for reading! and I really don't mind critique... I love it actually, becasue that gives me the chance to explain myself and why I did what I did with the story! hugs, S. Summary: Mysterious disappearances at a construction site just outside a small town in Arizona lead the boys to a dusty remote canyon, far from help, and within striking distance of something far more dangerous than anything they've come up against before. When one of the brothers falls victim, it will be up to the other to save him.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 21238 [Report This] Published: 17/08/09 Updated: 06/09/09
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Date: 02/09/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I know this review may seem strange but I just wanted to let you know that even though I haven't read your story yet, I am looking forward to doing so, however, I have decided to wait until you finish. Per the summary, it sounds like a good one! Happy writing! Summary:
Sam and Dean go to McMinnville Tennessee to stop a seal from being broken. In the course of the job, Dean confronts one of his torturers from hell, and Sam must juggle the hunt with Ruby's demands for more training. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 99246 [Report This] Published: 29/08/09 Updated: 17/03/10
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Date: 17/10/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Interesting story and well written. Can't wait to get to chapter nine. Just one itty bitty thing though - since Bobby and Boatright ate at the restaurant attached to the motel, it's kind of odd that Bobby wouldn't give Sam the bags of food before venturing on to Boatright's mansion. Cheeseburgers and clubs taste much better fresh than three hous later - and nuked bread...just gross! Trivial - I know - anyway, keep up the great work! Summary:
Something that came to me. Covers all seasons. Categories: General, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 115 [Report This] Published: 23/09/09 Updated: 23/09/09
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Date: 23/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wonderful!!! |
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