I think these are great.  I can't really tell that English is your second language.  I don't think that  I could sum up each episode in four lines, but you did a great job.

I really did enjoy this story. How the people visited him in hell.  How it took him a long time to make it back, and that he is still working on it.  I think you've done a great job with the Dean personality.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I always feel a connection to Dean and his issues and my greatest hope is that I realistically portray him.

And I loved bringing back characters from his past to visit him in Hell.  I thought it was really cool when the show did that too in AYTGIMDW.

It is a long road out of Hell, but Dean will make it, no doubts there.  Later, B.J.

I really like this story, for a lot of reasons.  I think you have Dean down perfectly, some of the stuff you have him saying makes me laugh out loud. Especially all of the stuff when he is thinking or talking to himself. I also like that you show Sam kind of treating his brother like crap while he was at Stanford and kind of after. I think that is probably accurate with the characters.  And Dean's line that it never ceases to amaze him how stupid he became the minute Sam started Stanford.  And of course John caring and also being a son of a ....  I like your stories. Full of humor and angst.

I really liked this story.  It made me cry.  Especially the weechester stuff, when Dean thought Sam had been turned and was in the hospital.  I'm looking forward to you finishing the sequel.

Author's Response: Thanks! This was a bit of a rollarcoaster to write, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. The sequel is finished and being beta'd, so hopefully there wont be any major delays in posting and I hope you like 'Darkness' as much as this one!

I really liked this Christmas story and the rhymes.  I liked how you characterize the boys and am glad John had written some of the poem, too.  Will be looking forward to How the Wendigo stole Christmas.

I don't think I've read this take before on Dean thinking he almost became a demon.  It is subtle.  Very good.

Author's Response: Thank you. It was a thought I had scuttering around my head and so I decided to write it down. I'm pleased you liked it.

This was really good.  Most people overdo the explanations of what Sam and Dean are feeling, like beating us over the head with it, but you don't in this and it all comes across beautifully.

just wanted to say that this was really good.

I really liked the Legacy series and wouldn't mind seeing more of it.  You are one of my favorite authors and I reread your stories often.  But I still say my favorites are Weechester stories.  But I like the whole Brotherhood stuff you created, and don't mind seeing it in the Weechester stories either.  I'd like more of caring John from about everyone, but you at least show that sometimes.  He was a hardass after all.  But I do think he really cared for his boys.  Thanks for the stories.

oh my god, the "Dude, just throw her out if she won't shut up..."  I was laughing my butt off.  Great story.  I'll review at the end...

Author's Response: Thanks muchly... tho must confess it was totally a last-minute save because I figured out it was anatomically impossible for her to swing up using just a foot of rope... ;-)

I read the Brotherhood stories, and I think you did this justice.  I really like to hear the stories of when they were all young.  And these stories of how it all started are great.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I also like reading how Dean, Sam and Caleb became so close and this tiny story was completely unexpected when it started shouting to be written.  I'm glad you think I kept it consistent with the AU and that I did Ridley's creation 'justice.'  Feedback like that makes my day.

Thanks for reading!

Eleri

I really liked this.  It seems well thought out and researched.  I like that the "FBI" would consider him highly intelligent analytically and practically, and that his charisma gives his victims Stockholm Syndrome.  I thought everyone says Dean is the dumb one?  Didn't Hendrikson say that he was, "dangerous, smart and expertly trained"? I'm looking forward to your next story.

Author's Response:

All the demons say that Dean's the dumb one ;o)

And yes, Henricksen did have that twisted idea that Dean was like Hannibal... and Hannibal was a genious, so I'm guessing that idea came from some research done within the Bureau, hence this.

Thank you!

This was very good and made me cry. I think you have done a good job capturing Dean and something he may actually do.

Author's Response:

Hey

Sorry I made you cry. *hands hankie*

Thank you, I think push the right buttons and Dean could easily do this, yeah, he will not let them have his brother, I just don't see him letting that happen.

Mary xx