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Real name: Jacq Status: Member Member Since: 29/02/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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Sam's 15 and sick of being called Sammy, sick of being told what to do and sick of being punished for not wanting the life forced on him. After disobeying again and being punished again, Sam defies John's final word and instead rushes into the woods only to find trouble.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Bruised. Not Broken Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 13536 [Report This] Published: 13/07/09 Updated: 17/09/09
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 Date: 31/07/09 Title: Chapter 5: Guilt Its good to see into more of Camyll's persona, and the dark and wet place they are trapped in just makes me shiver...ugh. But poor Sam, he has really dropped himself (and Camyll) in it this time...oh boy...teenagers huh! lol Still loving this story and you are sooo good at the conversation thing. Jacq xx Author's Response: So many stars Jacq, thank you so much, I really appreciate it and I'm just over the moon that you're still reading. I'm glad you liked the tiny hole I poked in Camyll's facade to reveal another side to her. :D Hehe makes my day to know this chapter made you shiver because of where they are, Sam has literally dropped them in but I just feel so bad for him. *pets him* Teenagers indeed, but considering the fact that he's being forced to hunt, gives just cause for him to rebel. :P I'm glad you like my dialogue!!! Your review is much appreciated <3
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Date: 14/08/09 Title: Chapter 6: Fear I love Bobby because he has always been the one constant thing through the series so far, I love that Bobby would have no problem with taking care of Camyll. He is such a great father figure and I love the way you portrayed that. And at the end I was really quite scared, with John finally catching up with Dean. Oh boy! I liked this chapter very much it kept me gripped until the last words...nice one Jacq xx Author's Response: *Beaming* Thanks a lot Jacq, I'm chuffed you liked the way I wrote Bobby, I love him and I love that you loved him taking Camyll in. It's a good feeling to know that you were gripped until the end of the chapter, I know it's not going to be pretty between John and Dean. Thanks for sticking with the story, the stars are a real boost. <3
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Date: 18/08/09 Title: Chapter 7: Confessions Camyll is having a tough time trying to keep Sam awake, and her saying she didnt like Dean is a lie, Sam will not be happy as we know what is going to come of their freindship, so Camyll having a premonition? Mmm interesting lol Good chapter, I just want to give poor Sam a hug to keep him warm. Jacq xx Author's Response: Hey, hon. Camyll was definitely having a tough time keeping Sam awake but I think she got his attention this time. ROFL Cam doesn't actually know she's lying at his point, her main focus has always been her friendship with Sam, but as you said and you're right, Sam won't be happy. Hmm, I don't know happened to Camyll there, guess we should find out soon, eh? lol thanks for reading and leaving stars, I'm glad you're still enjoying it! <3
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Date: 02/09/09 Title: Chapter 8: Resentment Oooh Dean stood up to his Dad! And John listened for once. Its a difficult way John is taking, and I reckon he tries so hard but just cannot always follow the life that would be best for the boys and a life he would like to live. Camyll is good, the sneaker thing is good, I'll remember that if I ever get stuck down a hole...lol Good chapter, Jacq xx Author's Response: You're so right Jacq, he does try hard for the boys but it's way too difficult to give them two lives, the normal one and the life of hunting! Eventually he would have to choose their safety even though he wishes they could have normal. *glee* I'm glad you're still liking Camyll, lol, she's quite good at improv. Thanks for sticking with me :D <3
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Date: 19/09/09 Title: Chapter 9: Sacrifice Great chapter and they were so close to rescue, but Sam would never leave her to be swept away alone... looking forward to the next chapter Jacq Author's Response: :D I'm glad you like you this chapter hon, sorry for its late arrival :S - they were soo close lol, but you're right, Sam would never let Camyll go alone. :D I hope you like the chapter to come as it's the chapter that will tie with the very first chapter. <3 Summary:
Written in response to the drabble challenge issued at the July 4th Hilton Paddington get together. Prompt was independence / Independence Day. Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 97 [Report This] Published: 13/07/09 Updated: 13/07/09
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Date: 14/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Independence Just as much a winner as everyone elses. Very good. And a un-clothed Dean...! Lol So glad you posted it ,you have portrayed a story in few words. Jacq Author's Response: Thank you so much for the encouragement and your kind words. I don't know what more to say. Summary:
4th July Hilton Drabble Challenge. Check out the other entries! (And nag them if they haven't posted yet!) Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 95 [Report This] Published: 13/07/09 Updated: 13/07/09
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 Date: 13/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Really good one, definately a winner, and yes I know we all won but I reckon you could have won, won lol Jacq Summary: A post hunt drive helps Sam to make up his mind about Stanford.... Pre serise
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 646 [Report This] Published: 15/07/09 Updated: 15/07/09
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Date: 16/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is a very inciteful. Because Sam would have had such a hard time getting his escape set up you describe it very well. Nicely done. Jacq Summary: Just because something is practical, doesn't make it normal.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1814 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 20/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is just a breathe of fresh air, so nice to have an early set story, although Sam was still suffering after Jessica, the combination of Bar/laundromat, Dean heaven, with food and wi-fi, think I will join them, very cheering. Nice one. Jacq Summary:
Ungen summer fire challenge entry Memories of fire will remain scorched in three specific minds for all their lives even if they start to fade over time... Season 4 spoilers Categories: UnGen Challenges, General, Missing Scenes, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 2200 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Lucifer You made me laugh on chapter 1 and cry on chapter 2 and hate that damned Lucifer in chapter 3. No wonder you won this...fantastic story telling. Jacq x Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad the ficlet did its job so thank you :D Means a lot ^_^ Summary:
It started with fire... UnGen summer challenge. Spoilers for seasons 1-4. Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 411 [Report This] Published: 20/07/09 Updated: 20/07/09
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Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: (not) Kate Milligan Well this was a novel take on the challenge, i enjoyed it all. Nice one Jacq Author's Response: Thanks Jacq! Glad you enjoyed it :D Summary:
My entry for the Summer Challenge - It started with fire. Three different people had three different outlooks on the fire.Categories: General, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1990 [Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 21/07/09
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is wonderful. I love the YED, his character, the neighbour was so nice and ordinary, real, and Mary in Cold Oak. yes that works, she would be there with them. Well done. Jacq x Author's Response: Thank you Jacq. I tried to get three POVs that were as different as possible and this is what I came up with. Summary:
Submission for UnGen Summer Challenge: It all started with a fire. Spoilers through season 4 Categories: General, UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2097 [Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 21/07/09
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Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I really love these points of views, I could see it in an episode. Nice one. Jacq Author's Response: Thanks so much! Summary:
This is my entry for the Ungen Fire Challenge. It all takes place in the same time period, just with the different POV's. Hope you guys enjoy!!! Congrats to the winners!!!
Categories: One Shots, General, Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 893 [Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 21/07/09
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Feelings of Dread And forever after John would be the soldier, i like the way that you suggested that the war was still very recent for John, poor man... And Mary's regrets for trying to shut out what Azazels deal meant, & with her end word cut of... And Anna, rebellion starts here! And the Angels had been watching over them, but not in the way Mary had hoped! Nice one... Jacq x
Author's Response: Thanks Jacq! Yeah, I thought that John should still have the effects of war coursing in his veins still. Yeah :P I thought that her word being cut off would give people the full effect of what happened. Hehe the angels are never what we want them to be. Thanks again! Ashton Summary:
It started with fire, as their perfect life ended in flames. Three POVs as the night Mary died is remembered. 2009 Fire Challenge story.
Thanks to the awesome ilaria for my very first story banner! Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1874 [Report This] Published: 21/07/09 Updated: 21/07/09
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Fire Three very emotional points of view, one point in time that had such consequences...nice one Jacq x Author's Response: Thank you, Jacq! Yes, it is so tragic how one night changed so many lives. I always have a soft spot in my heart for little Dean, how loving his family was and how much he lost that night. They all lost so much, and yet the world gained from their sacrifice as they saved so many others who could then have the lives they never could. Thanks again, B.J. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love Poetry...and this was really good, you told the story, and it had the emotion...nice one Jacq Summary:
This cannot possibly be legal. Drabble! Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 108 [Report This] Published: 27/07/09 Updated: 28/07/09
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Date: 28/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice one, Poor Dean, tormented and itchy...Pink is good lol Jacq Author's Response: :D It's evol of me, but I do like torturing that poor boy. Thanks for the awesome review! :D M
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Sam becomes depressed, but is it because of a ghost or perhaps his connection to Ruby? Sam discovers his powers has lethal consequences. The people he uses them on tend to... die.
>>>>>!! SPOILERS FOR SEASON 4 !!<<<<<
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Crossed Paths Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 22687 [Report This] Published: 31/07/09 Updated: 20/06/10
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Date: 21/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Blue Rain I saw this posted ages ago and have only just had time to catch up on reading it...very intense, dark and I am interested to see where this goes. On to the next chapter this evening, hopefully...good one Jacq x Author's Response: Thanks for the praise :) It's been underway for a long time because of my trip. Aaaaand inpiration is a bit low these days, but I'm slowly working on it. Thank you so much for the review and the stars :D Seems both are a bit hard to come by these days. Summary: Laying in bed, in the middle of the night trying to ease your brother away from his nightmares... it's all in the job description of being a big brother.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 345 [Report This] Published: 03/08/09 Updated: 03/08/09
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Date: 20/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Wakefulness Yeah, that I relate to, the 'are you awake' from my sister once upon a time!! Good S1 moment, and I pity the alrm clock...lol Jacq
Author's Response: ahahahah.....awesome that you can relate!! and it was from your sister :) awesome! :) ahahaha yeah the alarm clock got hurt badly! *sigh* what can we do!? *shrugs* LOL thank you so much for reading! hugs, S. Summary: During the chaos of Lucifer walking the earth, Castiel searches out Dean.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 588 [Report This] Published: 03/08/09 Updated: 05/08/09
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Date: 05/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Whoa...so powerful, so scary and so...possible. Deans ultimate revenge, do nothing. Very chilling and sbsolutely brilliant. Jacq
Author's Response: So happy you thought it was powerful. Seriously, without Sam, this is how I think Dean would act. Summary:
First time i'm writing a drabble so cut me some slack. Don't really know anything about them but the 100 word limit. This is written in response to the Ungen challenge, keyword 'School'. Hope you enjoy! Categories: Drabbles, Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 04/08/09 Updated: 05/08/09
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Date: 05/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Poor Dean never a respite, very good drabble. Jacq Author's Response: I always thought I was a Winchester girl (didn't matter which one, just give me one!) but I think Dean is growing on me. His character has some emotional complexities that I like exploring. Not sure I'm a Dean-girl yet but he never seems to get the good life! Thanks for reviewing! Summary:
For the 'Back To School' Drabble Challenge, summer 2009: Sam. Dean. School. Simple. No spoilers for any season. Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 99 [Report This] Published: 04/08/09 Updated: 04/08/09
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Date: 04/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: School Started serious, 'Always on the outside, looking in', they sound a little lost. But then Funeee! You had me there, right up to nearly the end, fish tanks ha ha (sorry aquarium!) lol. Very good, cheered me up no end. Nice one. Jacq x
Author's Response: Well ta very much, LOL. Glad it 'worked'. Was worried people would go "WTF? That's not right!" And ta for the stars! Very much appreciated! Summary: Advice a big brother can give before his little brother's first date. Written for the School drabble challenge.
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 103 [Report This] Published: 05/08/09 Updated: 05/08/09
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Date: 06/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Love Lessons Oh i really like that moment, can really see it happening, good one. Jacq Author's Response: Thank you! I was trying to imagine teenage boys when I wrote it. I'm glad it worked. Summary:
It's Dean Winchester's final moment in school. For the drabble challenge using the word school.
Categories: UnGen Challenges, General, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 06/08/09 Updated: 06/08/09
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Date: 06/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Leaving Life Behind Me One step forward and everything normal gets left behind...nice one. Jacq Author's Response: HI Jacq Thanks. Yeah one small step and everything changes. Mary xx Summary:
The challenge word is School and this is a bit of uncomplicated objectification! 100 on the nose! Thanks Kripke for the loan of the material to work with! Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 06/08/09 Updated: 06/08/09
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Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bev, wet T-shirt in rain mmm Never had an AA man yet like that! *sighs* Nice one Jacq xx Author's Response: Hey Jacq. haha AA man...heehee! It'd be worth breaking down if I thought Dean'd come to service my engine! Bev xx |
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