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Reviews by penmin Summary: Father's Day Drabble Challenge
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 16/06/09 Updated: 16/06/09
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  Date: 17/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Its nice to have a John point of view, he was always just trying to protect them both. Nice drabble. Jacq Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love the character of John Winchester and like him, I would do anything to protect my two daughters. Summary:
Father's day challenge :D
Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 16/06/09 Updated: 16/06/09
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Date: 17/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - I'll pretend To me this says that John may feel he has failed as a Father, that sometimes he feels worthless, he hasnt provided a stable home or a safe life, so why should he believe in Fathers Day, but he'd keep his happy face on and never let them see that... See - it got me thinking! Nice one Jacq xx Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the stars Jacq! *jumps up and down* You get it, this is exactly what I wanted readers to see and you saw it, that makes me very happy. I'm glad it got you thinking... Schelz xx Summary: When an unexpected guest arrives at the salvage yard, Bobby struggles with sending her away or allowing her to stay...
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Hunter's Best Friend Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2075 [Report This] Published: 16/06/09 Updated: 17/06/09
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Date: 17/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Furred Stranger Oh I love anything that includes a dog in the tail, err tale...lol especially a Border Collie, great characters those, and Bobby of course, like Bobby and a dog, and a little of Sam and Dean, just doing ordinary stuff, nice one Jacq Author's Response: Thanks, Jacq! I've been wanting to give Bobby another dog ever since Meg killed his Rottweiler. Glad you liked it! Thanks for the R&R. ^^ Summary:
Someone from Jimmi's past arrives at the salvage yard and tells Bobby that the collie is just as special as she appears! - Sequel to Furred Stranger Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Hunter's Best Friend Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 990 [Report This] Published: 16/06/09 Updated: 17/06/09
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Date: 01/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chosen Sorry I missed this, I love it, it just feels so comfortable and Bobby should have a dog, I like the way she is a'hunters' dog too, it will be interesting to see how this progresses Jacq Author's Response: Thanks, Jacq! I've been wanting to give poor Bobby another dog since Meg killed Rumsfeld, so I'm glad people like the idea! Jimmi's first hunt is underway, so, hopefully that will soon make an appearance. Thanks for reading and for the stars! ^^ Summary: Jimmi can't seem to find what she's searching for...
Categories: AU, General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: Hunter's Best Friend Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 346 [Report This] Published: 16/06/09 Updated: 17/06/09
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Date: 01/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found Very nice, just right for a collie! And so collie like lol Jacq Author's Response: Thank you! Love collies - especially border collies. Factoring that in with the fact that border collies are considered the smartest breed of dog, I knew that was what Jimmi had to be. ^^ Summary: He was the Evil to Overshadow All Evils - had to be.
Categories: Humor, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Hunter's Best Friend Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 191 [Report This] Published: 16/06/09 Updated: 17/06/09
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Date: 01/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Distrust Those darned Vets are soooo evil! LOL. Nice one. Jacq Author's Response: Dentists, too. ^^ Thanks. Summary: Bobby and the boys watch as Jimmi faces off against her arch nemesis.
Categories: Humor, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Hunter's Best Friend Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 155 [Report This] Published: 16/06/09 Updated: 17/06/09
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Date: 01/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Nuisance ha ha ha ha ha, I think I want to adopt Jimmi! Jacq Author's Response: Hehe! ^^ She comes complete with squirrely arch nemesis - only for a limited time. Thanks for the R&R! Summary:
It's a crackling crackophony of crackalicious cracksmanship. And it's waiting to be cracked open by you! Game Achievements Winchester Style! Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 488 [Report This] Published: 17/06/09 Updated: 17/06/09
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Date: 18/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Roadkill OMG that was fantastically, horribly gory, and I loved it , though it made me cringe, that thud when you run something over is horrible, got a baby rabbit once!!! The Impala got her roadkill...good one Jacq Author's Response: Ha so glad you liked it, and I will admit I hate that thump sound too, I hate anything bad that happens to animals it makes me angry and sad. But I did feel it was necessary to employ the cringe-factor of the car-thump for the full effect of when Baby trampled over the nasty beasty. Thanks for the review and the stars I appreciate it! ^^ Summary:
Father's Day Drabble Challenge. Dean and John's relationship grew in very different soil, but pride is pride!! Categories: General, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 18/06/09 Updated: 18/06/09
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Date: 18/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Quite an intense drabble, good first one, and your personal bit? I had a little tear in my eye! Sweet... Jacq Author's Response: ;-) Thanks Jacq, I find it hard to stay away from the intense (managed it once!!!;-> ) guess that means I need to take things less seriously??? (Angst Junkie!! LOL!) *Blush* My A/N? Yeah, my Dad will probably never see that, though my brothers and Mum may - it needed saying.... or rather (as I am a CHIKEN- writing!!!) Cheers for the review , the stars and your time!! Abi. Summary:
Not everything was destroyed in the fire. Written for the Father’s Day drabble challenge.
Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 95 [Report This] Published: 18/06/09 Updated: 18/06/09
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Date: 18/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Saving grace Yes, Dean would stop John from falling apart, supporting his father and watching out for Sammy as always, nice one Jacq Author's Response: Hey there, Jacq! Thanks for the great review and rating you left for my drabble, I really appreciate it! I do think Dean played a really important role in keeping their family together, keeping John together, and looking out for Sammy, after the fire. I've written a couple of fics that deal with that. I'm so glad you liked this one. I liked the point you raised in your drabble, too, about Dean being more of a dad to Sam than John was. I actually wrote a whole story based on that idea called "Parenting Your Gifted Child." I've re-visited the idea a couple of times in fics. I really think it's true and I'm glad you had Sam realize it, too. Thanks again for the great review! Summary:
Father's Day Drabble Challenge 2009
Another perfect banner by dreamalittledreamofsam - thank you so much! Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 104 [Report This] Published: 19/06/09 Updated: 19/06/09
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Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reflections Good to have Bobby recognised, as he is a father figure to them both...nice drabble Jacq Author's Response: Thanks, Jacq! Bobby holds a special place in their hearts I think. Most especially for Dean. Take care, B.J. Summary:
Father's Day Drabble Challenge entry. The memories may fade, but they never truly go away. Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 98 [Report This] Published: 19/06/09 Updated: 19/06/09
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Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Winchester Rarity Sam just wants to see the smile back in Dean's eyes. Nice drabble Jacq Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Summary: Father's Day drabble for the challenge. Rated K+ for one word.
Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 117 [Report This] Published: 19/06/09 Updated: 19/06/09
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Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Nowhere Man Wow strong emotions there, But Dean will never be that obsessive, I hope! Good drabble Jacq Author's Response: We know he won't, but whether he knows that is a matter for debate, LOL. Ta for the stars! Summary:
Father's Day Drabble Challenge Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 112 [Report This] Published: 19/06/09 Updated: 20/06/09
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Date: 20/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Family don't end with blood Wow, powerful emotion, I do like the inclusion of Bobby, just as much a Father figure as John ever was, loved it. Jacq Author's Response: Thanks! This was inspired by having watched Lazarus Rising again. And of course Bobby's line from NRFTW. :) Summary:
It's been six days since Dean went missing and two hours since Sam found him, huddled in a damp corner, shaking in fear. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 29044 [Report This] Published: 28/06/09 Updated: 23/09/09
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Date: 02/10/09 Title: Chapter 9: Day Eight Review for 1-9 I've been reading the whole thing in one go, but have found I need to go home from work now...(It was a quiet day!). So have only got half way, cannot leave with out saying how much I am enjoying the story, but I am glad I have got to the 'Dean has been rescued' chapters, cause I do not know if I could bear the anxiety otherwise...lol I shall catch up with the rest soon... Rats nibbling his ankles!!!! errgh, I hate rats! lol Jacq
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Date: 20/10/09 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue It has taken quite a while to read the rest of the chapters, you know with life the universe and everything getting in the way. But I am glad I have finally had the chance to finish it, it kept me as gripped as before, and Dean's and Sam's recovery has been so intense, its been a great read. Jacq x Author's Response: Hey Jacq. Thanks for the reviews and I know exactly what you mean about life etc. I've got a long list of fics I've been meaning to read and just not had the time for yet. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this story. It's my masterpiece to date and everytime someone tells me they've enjoyed it I glow a little inside. So thank you :) Summary: Dean's dark and depressing thoughts, the ones he doesn't share with anyone but his mirror. Set back in season 1. Episode 'Skin'.
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 317 [Report This] Published: 29/06/09 Updated: 29/06/09
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Date: 16/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: A freak Sometimes stories can slip by unnoticed, even good ones like this, you have given a good description of Dean in those moments and the possibilities of what he may have felt. I like him trying to see the differances. Jacq Summary:
She doesn't complain when the going gets tough, doesn't falter, knows in her heart that the path laid out before her is better than sitting in some old fart's garage being wiped with a baby diaper. Would rather taste the blood and guts and flies in her grill then the stagnant dust and cobwebs of being caged. She's a free spirit, she's the Impala. I don't own anything, well actually I do own a '67 Chevy Impala but this is the Winchester Impala's POV not my Impala's POV. Don't worry, take deep calming breaths. Calm the whirlwinds of your mind. Categories: Drabbles, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 222 [Report This] Published: 02/07/09 Updated: 03/07/09
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Date: 07/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Resurrection Man Just saw these, the Impala is alive after all! And I too feel empty with out John - sometimes. Nice ones Jacq x Author's Response: Jacq! I'm so glad you found these and were kind enough to drop by and leave a review! ^^ And stars to boot. It's humbling to have so many awesome authors take note of my work. It's one of the best feelings ever. I love John and am still upset sometimes that he's gone, but at least he taught his boys well. Thanks again! Summary:
A look at the important lessons life has taught the Winchester brothers. Lesson 2: Some wounds only a brother can heal. When Dean gets hurt in a fight, it’s up to Sammy to make him better. wee!Chester Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Life's Lessons Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 104 [Report This] Published: 04/07/09 Updated: 04/07/09
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Date: 07/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Mother's Day, 1986 That is so sweet, really nice Jacq Summary: Missing scene from the end of All Hell Break's Loose part one - spoilers for that episode
Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 693 [Report This] Published: 09/07/09 Updated: 09/07/09
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Date: 10/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I always felt that that episode was the most emotional one, it simply broke my heart, and then I didnt know if he was alive or dead, and you have filled in a gap as well as if it had actually been included. Brought back a few feelings. Very good and so sad. Jacq Summary: While trying to save his brother from an intense fever, Sam considers all possibilities.
Categories: AU, General, Humor, Misc, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1705 [Report This] Published: 11/07/09 Updated: 11/07/09
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Date: 12/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Extreme Measures Nice one, and Dean all wet, taking a deep breath here lol Think I'll need to cool down now! Jacq Author's Response: *takes a breath with you* It's definately a hot image, right? *sigh* Glad you liked! Thanks :) Tara x0x Summary:
Sam's 15 and sick of being called Sammy, sick of being told what to do and sick of being punished for not wanting the life forced on him. After disobeying again and being punished again, Sam defies John's final word and instead rushes into the woods only to find trouble.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Bruised. Not Broken Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 13536 [Report This] Published: 13/07/09 Updated: 17/09/09
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Date: 13/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Breathe me Gee Schelz, talk about getting me all het up, I think I'll be holding my breath until Sam breaths! lol And you have Camyll again, thats great. You have got the tension and now have us hooked to know how they all got there in the first place...i'll be looking out for the next part, *hugs* Jacq xxx Author's Response: Jacq you're too kind, I'm glad this has got you holding your breath and I'm over the moon that you're glad Camyll is in it. Now you're hooked I definitely can't fall on my face now can I? LOL I hope I don't disappoint :) Thanks for the stars hun, much appreciated. <3
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Date: 15/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Defiance I love that Sam and Dean made eye contact and Sam backed down, anyone would melt looking into Deans eyes...ahhh And now Sam has stomped off into a hole lot of trouble, foolish child! I am loving this... Jacq xx Author's Response: yay! Hey Jacq, glad you're still with me and loving this story so far. I'm glad you liked that little moment between the boys. Hahaha yes, Sam has got himself in a hole lot of trouble, but try to understand the boy's need for independance and freedom. *wink* Thanks for reviewing <333
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Date: 19/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Consequence Now two of them in trouble, down a hole, and a wet one too, oh dear, this does not look too good...but the cliffie is...next chapter soon, oh good Jacq xx Author's Response: *shakes head* So much trouble, and it is not looking good at all ;) I'm glad you've come back for more and liked the cliffie. Yup another chapter soon, I've written it and now I'm just reading it and re reading it. Thanks for the stars hun. <3
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Date: 22/07/09 Title: Chapter 4: Anger Ohh youv'e got me all het up again with this one. Dean's heart hammering in his chest at having to call John...John just bottling his anger until all are found...and I reckon Dean will be the one to get the flak...oooh mm Oyako-donburi? sounds err tasty...lol Jacq xx Author's Response: Hey, Jacq! Hehe I'm glad this chapter worked for you, I'd be a little more than hesitant if I had to call John and tell him his youngest was missing. LOL! I think there will be a lot of blame being thrown around, and Dean will probably get most of it, poor thing. Oyako-donburi is a japanese dish, just thought I'd throw it in there :P |
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