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Real name: Jacq Status: Member Member Since: 29/02/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by penmin Summary: Another of my Ben Braeden Winchester stories. The Winchesters are in the wilds trying to figure out what it is they are hunting.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Ben Braeden Winchester Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 54291 [Report This] Published: 24/04/08 Updated: 13/06/08
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Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 A good end to a great story Summary: Fluff. The Impala has a stowaway
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1605 [Report This] Published: 27/04/08 Updated: 27/04/08
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Date: 28/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Really sweet and sensitive, I would like to think of them as animal lovers if they had a chance Summary:
...and the effect spreads outwards, like ripples on a pond when a stone is dropped... Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 44177 [Report This] Published: 02/05/08 Updated: 13/06/08
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Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow what a cliffhanger! ...look forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 30/05/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 You dont always need a cliffie for a good story Really good chapter. Summary:
“It’s okay, Dean,” John reassured his oldest son. “Sammy will be fine. We’ll figure it out. Why don’t you go back to bed?” Dean shook his head yes, but remained planted where he stood next to John’s bed, holding his little brother’s limp hand in his... (A wee!chester story) Categories: General, Wee!chester, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 17616 [Report This] Published: 04/05/08 Updated: 06/07/09
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 Date: 20/05/09 Title: Chapter 5: Reinforcements Just read the whole thing up to this one, sorry I missed it until now...very, very gripping, dark and scary...good one, looking forward now to the next chapter Jacq Summary:
 Another tag to No Rest For The Wicked. The first hour after midnight. Just thought that with Dean gonewhat would be the first thing that Sam would do and this is what has come to mind.
Mr Kripe I mildly hate you for letting my boy go to Hell, even for a little while.
I own nothing Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 556 [Report This] Published: 23/05/08 Updated: 23/05/08
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Date: 15/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: After Midnight This was so intense, so sad and so real... It brought tears to my eyes. Jacq Author's Response: Thank you Jacq I was kinda feeling like that when I wrote it, NRFTW just kinda ended with Dean in hell and even though I'm a Dean girl I really had wanted to see Sam's reaction to it. They didn't really show it so I wrote this. Thanks for the review, cheers Mary x
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My thoughts about the last scene.... I know it has been done a lot lately. Just have to get it out. Clogging up my brain... Haunting me. And thanks for the inspiration to birdie (Salvation rocks) and Vanessa (In his eyes, brilliant). Lou, you have been a great help on this and Kirsty, thank you for the punctuation-magic.
AWESOME banner (yay, could slip the word in!!!) bulletbabe... Lou, you definitely are one of the most creative people I have ever met... Usual disclaimer. Kripke and CW/WB own it all, just building on their terrific stuff. No money is made out of it... Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1002 [Report This] Published: 05/06/08 Updated: 06/06/08
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Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fantastic, I feel his torment, so decriptive, The pain.... Oh Boy... Jacq Author's Response: Hello Jacq. Well thx for leaving those kind words. Pain. Oh I love me a painfully tortured Dean. And I will nervously anticipate how Kripke and the other writers show us bits and pieces about Dean's torment in Hell next season. As for descriptive I wasn't sure at all. I sort of chose the worst and most painful torment and described it in different ways. Guess it worked for you, didn't? I am glad it did. Cheers, Ilka Summary:
It seems that lately, wherever Sam goes… Dean knows where he is… Crack!Fic (My attempt at humour). Set in Season 3 Categories: Humor, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 817 [Report This] Published: 06/06/08 Updated: 06/06/08
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Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled This was a good one, with a lot fitted into few words. Well done Thank you! Glad you liked it. I am a woman of few words... unless I end up babbling. :D Summary: A simple hunt gives the boys more than they anticipated and they discover that the perfect pet can come from very unusual sources.
Categories: One Shots, Crossovers Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4314 [Report This] Published: 10/06/08 Updated: 11/06/08
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Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I just want to take them home and give them a hug. Ah well... Summary:
Concussion can be fun....
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4755 [Report This] Published: 20/06/08 Updated: 20/06/08
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Date: 26/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Good one again. Loved it. Author's Response: Thank you for that. I felt I just needed a laugh between the angsty stories - and of course, the season finale....Jules Summary: In 1949, A neurologist was awarded the Nobel Prize for a procedure that still remains a controversy. The Lobotomy. Some swear the operation has healed loved ones, made them "normal" and the others, well…they aren’t speaking. At least, not out loud.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1038 [Report This] Published: 21/06/08 Updated: 21/06/08
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Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice start, will watch to see how it progresses. Summary: Takes place some time before season 3's finale. Just a short story that came to me, while I was on a long car trip.
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1454 [Report This] Published: 23/06/08 Updated: 23/06/08
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Date: 24/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Its great for Dean that the simplest of pleasures comes at little cost, and washing the grime off draws a line after each hunt. Author's Response: Thank you for your comment. I think Dean knows how to appreciate the simpler things in life, such as a hot shower. Summary:
A short One-Shot from Dean's POV about how he really feels and why I think he made his deal. Better than the summary! Please Read and Review! NO WINCEST!!!! Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 424 [Report This] Published: 23/06/08 Updated: 24/06/08
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Date: 26/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: My Brother, My Soul You have got Dean just right, his thoughts, his feelings. A good one shot. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 26/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I just hope Dean stays put until Rowan gets back to him. Look forward to chapter 2
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Date: 12/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 I felt every whiplash, poor Rowan, but I guess his wicked sense of humour will keep him sane down there, we hope! I lost just one chapter once, I cried...I feel for you - good luck. Jacq Summary:
Wee!Chesters fic. One Shot. Dean wonders what it would be like to just be "Camping" Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 919 [Report This] Published: 26/06/08 Updated: 26/06/08
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Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Really liked this, A moment of something normal for Dean with John. Very sweet. Summary:
Tension mounts between the brothers - is it just Dean's deal or is something more sinister at work...
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 54038 [Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08
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Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue Your fantastic Friday thrills and spills makes time go faster...are there any days inbetween? Loved this one...Look forward to next weeks 'Fallout'
Jacq Author's Response: Thank you, Jacq. Lol - there days in between - that's when I write and tweak. And when my beta checks that I haven't doubled up words or forgotten them completely - lol. Thanks for reading - I'm chuffed that you enjoyed it so much....Jules Summary:
Banner by the awesome Chasidern
Bobby calls Sam and Dean for help hunting a demon that demands human life. When Dean becomes a victim, Sam struggles to save his injured brother before Dean is lost forever. Hurt!Dean. Dark fic. Not death fic Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 53807 [Report This] Published: 03/07/08 Updated: 08/01/09
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Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Pale Ghosts and Frightful Shades My God....Blood...Gore...Dean..... Fantastic chapter. look forward to the next. Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! There will be much more blood and gore before this one is over. And Dean, poor Dean... More soon! Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 13: Forebear, He Lives The most amazing heart racing, breath taking rollacoaster story, it made the time I was reading it stand still and it was as if I could feel the pit of darkness you led us through. I always try to learn from writers like yourself and hope to improve my own writing from what I read. Best wishes...Jacq Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! You are too kind! I'm glad you liked this story. And I hope you find more on this amazing site to read! Huge hug, Muffy Summary:
AU Sam and Dean face something they never faced before. Can Sam save his brother before its to late. John appears in later chapters. Disclosure: Don't own them RATTT Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 16017 [Report This] Published: 26/07/08 Updated: 13/08/08
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Date: 14/08/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Wow - Just read the whole thing 1 - 6. It kept me reading and the ending I really enjoyed the twist. Great story. Jacq Author's Response: I so glad you enjoyed the story from start to finish. I'm going to have to go back and do that. :) As to the twist, it can out that way. SHH I like that part too. thanks for reading and reviewing. D Summary:
Short poem from Sam's POV as he thinks about his brother. Another after end of season 3! As always CW and Kripke own the boy's souls! (And everything else.) Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 102 [Report This] Published: 31/07/08 Updated: 31/07/08
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Date: 31/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Beneath My Feet That was really spot on. I can feel his pain. Jacq Author's Response: Hi Jacq Thanks for the the review, glad you liked this. Mary x Summary:
Dean's ability to continue hunting becomes questionable, after a hunt. Will Dean's limited capability cost Sam his life? (Takes place during season 2.)
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 47088 [Report This] Published: 04/08/08 Updated: 25/09/08
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Date: 20/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Just read all the chapters at once. Its a good story. Developing well and you have got the deafness thing accurate. Dean would feel very vulnerable. Look forward to the next chapter Jacq Author's Response: Thank you. At first, I was just going to say that Dean was deaf; but then, I decided to delve more into how Dean views and feels about being deaf. I'm glad that you like the way the story is developing. I'll probably be adding another chapter on Thursday. Thanks again for leaving a comment. Summary:
Sam and Dean head to New Jersey to investigate a series of disappearances that have occurred lately. Thanks so much Lou for the awsome banner!!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 4008 [Report This] Published: 04/08/08 Updated: 13/02/10
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Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Creepy already, murder and mayhem, a good start. I shall watch out for the next chapter. Jacq Author's Response: Jacq, Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words! I'm working on the second chapter right now. Ashton/Pooka Bunny
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Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Reacquainted Bringing a past character in, thats good, this is starting off well, Like it. Jacq Author's Response: Jacq, Thanks so much. I wanted to put Sarah to give more light on what happened to her after the boys left. Glad you like it. Ashton/Pooka Bunny
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A simple night of training ends up being so much more, John makes a decision and Sam pays the price. Weechesters one-shot. Some limp/angst. Categories: Wee!chester, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4545 [Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 06/08/08
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Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot This was really good. Im with you on John Winchester, he tried so hard, probably too hard sometimes. Liked it. Jacq |
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