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Penname: penmin [Contact]
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Real name: Jacq Status: Member Member Since: 29/02/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by penmin Summary:
Sam and Dean find themselves in small town America, drawn there by the apparent suicides of successful, happy, young men. But, of course, we know it's never that simple.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 27190 [Report This] Published: 13/05/09 Updated: 14/06/09
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 Date: 19/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey Jenny Thank you for the link to this story, its an entirely differant reading experience. I found that because I had to think in 2nd person that I took longer to read it so absorbed more details, The experiment is good, the story I like, Poor Dean, everyone seems to think they are such a couple lol I am now wanting to read the whole story, but must do the paid work thing so will check out Chapter 2 this evening. Jacq Author's Response: Hey Jacq, Because it's not a common POV it does take longer to get your head round it I think. People aren't used to seeing 2nd person and you're right - it does take a bit more effort to read (and write) it. It's easy to slip back into 3rd so checking and double checking is really important. Thanks for the review.
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Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Chapter 2 & 3: This story is drawing me in and I almost don't notice the 2nd person point of view now, yeah with Dean's last question, I wonder why, as well. Jacq
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Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Now Charlie has messed with Sam's head...not good Great chapter Jacq
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Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 That was so action packed, and there is another chapter to read....great Jacq
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Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 That was a realy good story, and challenging from the 2nd person perspective. I felt like I was looking out of Dean's eyes but watching him from the outside at the same time. Nice one. Jacq Author's Response: Ooh - thanks for all the reviews! I'm really glad you enjoyed it - and persevered with the 2nd POV. It was fun to write and one of my earliest stories. If I was to go back and rewrite I think I'd do some things differently, but not many :)
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 Riley Chapman's brush with the Supernatural world cost him his whole Family and left him in an Asylum. He owes his life to a hunter named Dean Winchester - this year, he's going to convince Dean to take his "gift" back!"
Categories: General, One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4464 [Report This] Published: 15/05/09 Updated: 15/05/09
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Date: 15/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I really like the way you have written this, from the view of the posessed and the aftermath, very intense, and Dean wants so much at this time to save everyone, it would really hurt him especially as it could also refer to Sam even now! Good one...Jacq Author's Response: Thank you for the generous review Jacq, Also you have completely got what I was attempting - which is pretty cool as I wasn't sure that it was translating too well on to the screen! We haven't reached what I think is going to be the bitter end of season four where I am, but I can see Sam being in real trouble (must be Tuesday?!!!LOL) and I just ran with that line of thinking. Glad you liked it. Abi. Summary:
 The boys are investigating mysterious disappearances in logging country. Is there something supernatural in the woods? Is that what’s taken Dean? Set sometime before Season 4. New chapters added by request.
Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 5804 [Report This] Published: 18/05/09 Updated: 19/07/12
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Date: 11/01/10 Title: Chapter 20: Lying in wait More of Sam's revenge please, he deserves a little more airing. Another great chapter, and I picked up on and loved the line 'after all they'd taken down Dean' good emphasis to show Sam's admiration of Dean as his awsome 'Big' brother! And it took 'all' of them to do it. Nice one Jacq x
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Date: 08/12/09 Title: Chapter 18: Putting the pieces together Well that explains a lot, those evil loggers leaving Dean in the clutches of the creature...I like when Sam's menacing in a protective way of course lol
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Date: 19/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Three sheets to the wind? Now you've left me wondering how he got like that...ooh err! Good one, a lot said in a few words Jacq Author's Response: Hey there, Jacq! Thanks so much for coming over to rate and review my first drabble, I really appreciate it! I'm so glad you liked it! I hadn't planned on doing more of this, but so many people have asked for it, I may just do a follow-up. If so, it'll go up next week. Hope to see you back here then! In the meantime, if you're looking for a longer "Dean is taken" fic, check out my new multi-chapter "The Soul Collector." Or, if you're looking for something to read over the hiatus that has brotherly moments and John being a loving dad, check out "Thanksgiving, Winchester Style or, The Importance of Pie." It's a series of one-shots I did, showing different Thanksgivings in the Winchester's lives, all around a common theme. Lots of family interaction and brotherly moments, showing their bond over the years. If you check it out, let me know what you think! Thanks again for reading and reviewing, it's greatly appreciated! :)
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Date: 29/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: "Steady, big brother. I gotcha." This is so Dean & Sam. Loved this follow on. Jacq Author's Response: Hey there, Jacq! Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of my drabble fic, I'm really glad you're still liking it. I plan to get another chapter up in a few days, probably on Monday. Hope to see you back here then! :) Thanks again for the great rating and review! It means a lot!
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Date: 05/06/09 Title: Chapter 3: Vigil You really are on a roll with this one, it just proves that a good story can be told well with few words. You have continued to get the feeling just right, and thats why we love them sooo much...lol Jacq Author's Response: Hey there! Thank you so much, for coming back to read and review another chapter of this story. I'm so happy you're still interested in it; your kind words really mean a lot. I'm glad you think I'm getting the feeling right in here. I don't know if you're still interested, but I've posted another couple chapters of "Always With You." If you check them out, I'd love to hear what you think. :) Another chapter of this will go up Monday. Hope to see you back here then!
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Date: 10/06/09 Title: Chapter 4: Goodwill worn away Ah ha!! "Loggers!" mm that brings up all sorts of pictures. Why I love this, apart from clever word use and good interaction is that I can read it inbetween calls at work...lol Will be watching out for more Jacq x
Author's Response: Hey there, Jacq! Thanks so much for coming back for another chapter of my story, and for taking the time to leave such a great review and rating. It really means a lot to me. I'm so happy you're still enjoying this story. Thanks for the kind things you said about it. If you're looking for other short fic you can read at work, I just recently did a triple drabble called "Big Brother to the Rescue." If you check it out, let me know what you think! :) Thanks again for all the encouragement! I plan to get another chapter of this up next Monday, if the challenge word cooperates. Hope to see you back here then!
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Date: 15/06/09 Title: Chapter 5: Logger Alert Those damned loggers, hurt our Dean...would you, lol 100 words as much as a long chapter, good one Jacq Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for the great rating and review you left on this chapter. I really appreciate hearing what you think. I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story, this chapter was a huge challenge to do within the word limit. I'm happy it worked for you! :) And never fear, those friggin' loggers will get what's coming to them. ;)
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Date: 23/06/09 Title: Chapter 6: Belly of the beast Here was me thinking it was just 'Loggers' and there you go adding blood and gore! Brilliant, and the lighter, 'Snick-snick' I can hear it. And a bone torch too... Gosh this is dire...lol. Jacq x Author's Response: Hey there, Jacq! Thanks for coming back to read another chapter and leave such a great review and rating. I really appreciate it! LOL, yeah, I'm happy to have been able to surprise you here. ;) I'm so glad you liked the lighter sound, it took me forever to get that. And THANK YOU for mentioning the bone torch. I was so excited about that detail (I know, I may be a little sick, LOL) because I thought it was uber-creepy. You're the only one who mentioned it; I'm thrilled to hear you liked it!! Another chapter of this should go up Monday, if all goes well. Hope to see you back here then! :)
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Date: 02/07/09 Title: Chapter 7: Out of time Very good, at last a glimpse of the creature, a really scary one, guessing maybe a skin walker or maybe wendigo?? but the glowing eyes...claws, oh dear not sure now...lol Loved it again look forward to the next chapter Jacq x Author's Response: Hey there, Jacq! Thanks for coming back to check out another chapter of this. I really appreciate the great rating and review you left. I always love to hear from you! I'm glad the creature's intrigued you. You'll see more of it in the next chapter, which will go up Monday. I posted another wee!Chester extended drabble that you might like. It's called "Life's Lessons: Evil Doesn't Stand a Chance." I'd love to hear what you think if you check it out! :) Thanks again! Have a good weekend!
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Date: 07/07/09 Title: Chapter 8: Glimmer of hope Another amazing double drabble chapter, the pain and damage the creature inflicts! So much out there to get Dean and the forest hampering his escape, and at the beginning a reminder with Sam's few words that this is a story being recounted...and Dean wants to tell it in full with-out interruption! But are the campers safety? Loved it...have a good vacation. Jacq x
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Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 9: Time spent waiting A good link, so John knew about this creature, if its in his journal, am intrigued now. The banner is good. Jacq
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Date: 10/08/09 Title: Chapter 10: Into the woods Nice continuation to Dean's escape. good one. Jacq
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Date: 17/08/09 Title: Chapter 11: Losing the light Of course Dean would know the girls names, lol Good progression, and a cliffie...oh no! Still liking this Jacq
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Date: 07/09/09 Title: Chapter 12: Out of the woods As much as I am glad Jack got decked, I am glad he didnt get eaten! Thank you Dean. Good action. Jacq
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Date: 15/09/09 Title: Chapter 13: "'Tis but a scratch!" A 'Brian' is a really useful thing to have when you're bleeding and your ribs are cracked. Now Dean, girly cars are very useful when needed lol Nice one Jacq
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Date: 05/10/09 Title: Chapter 14: Car rides and kid brothers Oh I really love this one (and all of them) but that everyone thinks Sam is a kid just makes me laugh, and I can just see Sam's face at the end! Funnee...glad they're finally getting out of trouble. Nice one. Jacq
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Date: 19/10/09 Title: Chapter 15: Coming home I really lived every step as he stumbled the two blocks to get to Sam, think I may have been holding my breath too...lol Again much said with few words, nice one. Jacq
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Date: 26/10/09 Title: Chapter 16: Parking lessons Really good to have a breather, Dean can be so picky!!! lol Nice one. Jacq
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Date: 09/11/09 Title: Chapter 17: Like prying hen's teeth Ah I see a bossy nurse Sam, good, Dean needs to stay in bed and rest, good update, I've just discoverd NaNoWriMo but am too late myself to participate - good luck with it, so 2000 words a day I think! That calls for RedBull or much coffee, and no distractions, so stop playing with the boys...lol Jacq x |
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