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Real name: Jacq Status: Member Member Since: 29/02/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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Dean takes ill after the boys last job in Stratton, Nebraska. Ruby arrives and Sam finds that she has a way for him to save his brother but can Sam do to Dean what she is telling him he must and will Dean forgive him if he does? Spoilers: Set between Family Remains and CAIADB (Mentions where they are headed in CAIADB) Disclaimer: I wish it but they aren't. Mr Kripe lets me play too though. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 23997 [Report This] Published: 31/03/09 Updated: 12/10/09
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 Date: 04/09/09 Title: Chapter 10: Something Evil Ooh I liked, that evil bitch is messing with them again...so more gore next chapter? lol Jacq Author's Response: Hi Jacq Yeah Ruby is not all she seems in this one, following the flow of S4 a bit here. More gore for the next chapter....might be...then again. Wait and see! *smiles* Thanks, Mary x
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Date: 13/10/09 Title: Chapter 11: Disturbing Behaviour and Images Hey Mary, great chapter, at last they have discovered that Ruby is involved. looking forward to the next, don't worry about the delay, Jacq x Author's Response: Hey Jacq Thanks. Yep, Ruby's been rumbled! I hate leaving stories hanging, I will update this asap. Mary xx Summary:
Missing scene from 4x18 on Sam's powers Dean's POV!
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 162 [Report This] Published: 06/04/09 Updated: 06/04/09
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Date: 05/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: 1. No Good Deed Now I have seen the epi that this refers too I do not need to be wary of a spoiler! Yes I agree, it could be back to the S2 thing where John told Dean he may need to kill Sam if he went Darkside...poor Dean, he has enough to deal with I understand what you wanted to say...this works Jacq Summary:
A drabble challenge entry written for the Huntergirls Hilton meeting in April '09. The challenge words were Shrapnel and Hilt. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 102 [Report This] Published: 11/04/09 Updated: 12/04/09
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Date: 13/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Trust Wow, I felt the pain, mm, I just want to hug them both, this is a winner too...Jacq x Hiya Jacq, Thanks for the review hunnny, It was a good day out and drabbling took just about the right length of time. The boys could always use a hug, you have Sammy and I'll sort Dean...lol! Summary:
A drabble challenge entry for the Huntergirls London Hilton meeting in April 09. Kripke owns and I adore. Possible spoilers for season 4. Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 102 [Report This] Published: 11/04/09 Updated: 11/04/09
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Date: 12/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, that was really intense, a whole story in a few words, glad I got to read it again...the day went so fast I needed to recap...Jacq xx Hey Jacq Thanks hunny, we had a nice day didn't we? Looking forward to seeing you in July. bev xx Summary:
 Hours after the fire, with a severely traumatized four-year old and a helpless infant to suddenly take care of on his own, John struggles to make sense of what happened, and doesn't know how he can possibly carry on without Mary. Reflective story dealing with the aftermath of the fire and John and Dean's grief. Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5420 [Report This] Published: 21/04/09 Updated: 21/04/09
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Date: 22/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, I felt the intensity of the grief you put into words, and everything else that made John become what he did, a joining of two worlds, the one before the fire and the one after. And a childs pain, pain that Dean will build his own walls around. Very very nicely done Jacq Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I'm so flattered and so happy with everything you said. John is such a fascinating character to explore, especially considering how much he changed after the fire. I'm glad this story worked in that aspect - and with Dean too. Thank you. Summary: Expanded again to 5x10. MAJOR SPOILERS!
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3942 [Report This] Published: 26/04/09 Updated: 18/02/10
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Date: 02/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey Cal, amazing one shot, so how long have you been channelling Bobby? Jacq Author's Response: My inner Bobby wanted to come out and play. Ta hun! Summary:
He swears to a God he's not sure he believes in that someone is going to pay for this. Nobody does this to his boy and gets away with it. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1241 [Report This] Published: 27/04/09 Updated: 27/04/09
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Date: 29/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The action takes place in a short space of time which is great as it makes it fast moving, no messing about, yes it would be good to know why he was there but sometimes the mystery can be intriguing, I have always liked John stories, nice one...Jacq ps. RoweenaC (Ilka) emailed I should check this story out, it was well worth it. Author's Response: Thanks Jacq. John had to get in and out quick and I'm glad I managed to get that over. Summary:
"Why did it have to be indestructible demons?" Dean was about to learn even more about his family as he and Sam return an old favor. Spoilers up to 4.04. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 2388 [Report This] Published: 29/04/09 Updated: 30/09/10
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 Date: 30/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 0.5 Oh boy, thats gory, descriptive, and intriguing all at once, so what next I am eager to follow where this leads...and my own muse is now in hiding...lol Jacq
Author's Response: LOL thank you Jacq, and don't worry! I promise your muse is not in any danger! ;P <3 Jenn
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Date: 03/05/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Hey there great second chapter, quite intense and very in character with good interaction...looking forward to the next part Jacq Author's Response: Thank you Jacq, I'm glad you like the interaction. Hopefully it won't take too long for the next chapter. <3 Jenn Summary:
After Dean tells Castiel he is sick of fighting the Angels war for them he gives Dean a normal life and puts him under a radar so demons and hell cannot find him but will Dean be able to stay away? Will he feel guilty for leaving Sam and Ruby to fight the war alone or will he be happy with the guardian that God assigns to keep him safe
Categories: General, Romance, AU, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 7515 [Report This] Published: 02/05/09 Updated: 08/11/09
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Date: 01/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: God's Will And A War Leader Your ideas for this are good, And you do seem to have Dean right, I like the inclusion of David, Jacq
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Date: 03/07/09 Title: Chapter 4: What you call an ass kicking Thank you for the mention, glad I could help, It will be interesting to see where you take the characters... I like the autocratic David...I can just imagine him and Dean together lol Jacq x Author's Response: yeah i don't know what is going to happen myself yet but i know Anna, Dean, Dave and Castiel are important
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Date: 06/07/09 Title: Chapter 5: beer and swords At last more than just the Demon killing knife, and I reckon Dean and David will get on just fine... The story is developing...Jacq
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Date: 08/07/09 Title: Chapter 6: Meeting with a demon The story is beginning to be quite interesting, I like the David and Lilith interaction. And the way David can heal those he rids of their Demon posessors, thats good. Jacq
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Date: 14/07/09 Title: Chapter 7: Something worth fighting for It will be interesting to see more of David/Lilith and its good to see Bobby as well as the Boys. Good chapter. Jacq
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Date: 30/07/09 Title: Chapter 8: Spoiling for a fight a Good fight scene Jacq Author's Response: thanks it was quite a difficult one to write but it worked
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Date: 30/07/09 Title: Chapter 9: Past Doubts Godd chapter, nice details. Jacq Author's Response: thanks again
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Date: 30/08/09 Title: Chapter 10: Angel of death Good chapter, good to see more between David & Lilith. Jacq
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Date: 23/09/09 Title: Chapter 11: Your a seal Slaughtered Angels...oh no! getting a bit dire now, and the danger is hotting up. Jacq
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Date: 28/09/09 Title: Chapter 12: phone Its quite novel this story and really interesting the way you are taking it. Jacq
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Date: 09/11/09 Title: Chapter 13: talking and planning Lilith arriving will not please Dean at all...
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Date: 09/11/09 Title: Chapter 14: Once Its moving along nicely, Dean must really hate it that Lilith is there, good thing Anna is there too... Summary:
Sam and Dean are called to help the son of a hunter after his parents were attaked and killed by a demon. (Set during Season two, after 'Hunted'.) PLEASE READ AND REVIEW! Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Demon Bounty Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 9360 [Report This] Published: 03/05/09 Updated: 04/02/10
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Date: 21/10/09 Title: Chapter 2: Prologue Yes as far as the content goes, it was pretty good, very gory and a great ending on this chapter...but the layout in one block makes it very very hard to read. If you look at other stories posted here you will see that they are broken up with gaps between paragraphs. It just helps for the eyes not to be overwhelmed. Yes it was interesting and exciting...I will read on though, I do suggest you go back and edit the layout. If you need help doing it let me know. Jacq Summary:
Missy Bender was three things. She was obsessive. She was insane. And she was in love – with a tall, beautiful stranger who looked real purty when he was hurting. But unfortunately for Dean Winchester, one thing she wasn’t was still locked in the closet… Banner by Gypsywoman1 Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 80863 [Report This] Published: 04/05/09 Updated: 15/06/09
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Date: 04/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: And They Call it Puppy Love I guess I am way behind with my reading, thought I'd catch up a bit...soo, WOW...no need to say can't wait for the next chapter cause its just one click of the next button, so here we go onto the next...great start. The Benders were scary! Jacq Author's Response: Thanks muchly! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it and that you let me know! Definitely makes the hard work worthwhile when people take the time to review... Summary: Oneshot. A little fluff. Sam is sick, miserable, and just a tad cranky. A little Limp!Sam birthday treat for a friend. Hope everyone enjoys.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1168 [Report This] Published: 09/05/09 Updated: 09/05/09
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Date: 10/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh dear man flu! Poor Sam, but I don't think I'd want to hug him this time ...lol This was fun, think I want some icecream now...mm Jacq
Author's Response: Yeah, hugging Sam might be a tad dangerous at the moment. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I'm glad you liked it. |
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