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Penname: Coldfire [Contact]
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I'm a long time fantasy fanatic and have been a fan of Supernatural since the first episode I ever saw, Everybody Loves a Clown.

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Reviews by Coldfire
 
Summary: When Sammy decides to make Stanford college his next move, Dean fought it, in his own way, longer and harder than his father. But he is about to learn that, in some wars, surrender is the only honorable way out. Besides, who else would Dean Winchester fall on his own sword for?
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 21646
[Report This] Published: 11/12/07 Updated: 05/03/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 05/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Re-enlistment.

Great story! I love the part where Dean and Dean Evans have their little talk. This is a great story, and you hit the beats just right.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the great review. I always find it helpful when someone tells me what they enjoyed. The character of the Dean was a favorite of mine - a lot of fun to write. Glad you enjoyed this, thanks for taking the time to review.

Abi.



Author's Response:

Call me (VERY) slow, but I just realised something, this is your first review?!!!! Oh wow! All reviews are thrilling, but to know that my story may have been one of the first you read and reviewed on this site, that is kind of special for me. So thanks again for taking the time to read and review .

Abi. 

 
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Good job! Can't wait for more : )

 
Summary:

Banner by Rae666

Sam and Dean pull into a small town to hunt something that kills a dozen people every year. Tragedy strikes the brothers when Sam is targeted as a victim. With Sam's life in the balance, Dean races to unwrap the secret before Sam is lost forever.

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Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 33756
[Report This] Published: 30/12/07 Updated: 02/03/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 17/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Farewell, My King

Great job! You did an amazing job with this story, and all of the parts pertaining to or describing the ritual really feel like they are taking place in an ancient, more magical time period. So much so that I was startled when Sam woke up and started driving the Impala through the ordinary world!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this story--I know it was a little unusual as fanfic goes, but I am so happy with the way it turned out. I have to admit it, I love this one! Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

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What is a father supposed to do when he hears whispers that his fifteen-year-old son is tainted by the very thing that killed the love of his life? John Winchester uncovers the terrifying truth about his youngest son's cruel destiny and will stop at nothing to protect him from the truth. 


Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: The Dark Horse Series
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 35473
[Report This] Published: 25/01/08 Updated: 07/07/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Sword of Damocles

John and Ben hunting together? Dude, that sounds explosive! Can't wait : )

Author's Response: John and Ben together in any sort of context is just a bad idea. Put them hunting together? Oh, yeah, it will be explosive. I'm glad you're enjoying.

 
Choices by lostatc Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary:

This story takes place immediately after my story "To The Rescue" and incorporates "Sword and Shield." Dean and Sam discover why Mary apologized to Sam during the Episode "Home."

Katric, my Beta!  You are the best and when everyone notices the definite improvement to my writing, it's all due to you.

Banner by bulletbabe - more thanks than I can express!

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Categories: AU Characters: None
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Series: Ben Braeden Winchester
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 107827
[Report This] Published: 30/01/08 Updated: 24/03/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Poor Ben. I wonder what he chose. Great Chapter!

Author's Response:

No ideas?  Hmm, guess you'll have to wait to find out.

Thank you so much!

 
Summary:

Older and younger brothers are the same the world over, corporeal or ethereal.

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Come and peak into the private postbag of the aged and wise Bellepheron, and his hip baby brother Tuffy as he adventures 'Uptop' on his gap year from Hell!


Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 18711
[Report This] Published: 01/03/08 Updated: 04/04/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Tofu and Turning to the Pink side

I love it! You guys are ingenious. Thanks for the laugh.

Author's Response:

Ingenious, Wow! I'm flattered, thank you so much!  bev xx

What a great compliment and I'm pleased we made you laugh! X Louy

 
Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Watercolours and Wasabi

You guys are brilliant! I love all the little references you snuck in there, particularly Head Pie Maker Nellie Lovett.


Author's Response:

Hey Hunny!  "Get me some pie!" Haha  Bev x

Yeah, wonder if Dean would like 'those' pies...lol X Louy

 
Summary: Oneshot. A Supernatural/Cal & Niko Leandros crossover story. The Leandros Brothers come to the aid of the Winchesters when they come under attack by a new kind of monster.

Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2377
[Report This] Published: 03/03/08 Updated: 03/03/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Those boys and their chili cheese dogs. Nik and Sam really have their hands full! It's cool to read a cross over involving my two favorite sets of supernatural fighting brothers!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Coldfire.  I really appreciate the review for this one.  I knew it wasn't going to be the biggest hit around but just couldn't help but write it.  I enjoy the Leandros brothers nearly as much as I do the Winchesters.

 
Damned by staffy08 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

After John leaves teenage Sam and Dean in a motel to go on a hunt by himself, the brothers get into a spot of trouble….


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 9565
[Report This] Published: 04/03/08 Updated: 11/01/09


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 19/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hilarious! You did a great job with Sam's POV, you should write it more. : )

Author's Response:

I think I may have to go back to Dean's POV for the next chapter but who knows maybe after that I'll try doing Sammy again. :)

Thanks for taking the time to review.

 
Summary: Baby Sam says his first words and they cause pain in John
Categories: Drabbles, Missing Scenes, Misc, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Boys will be boys
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 127
[Report This] Published: 23/03/08 Updated: 23/03/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Let Sam Speak

So cute. I love little Sam! Good job : )

 
Broken Ending by Rae666 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Poem about Dean's fate at the end of the finale so beware of spoilers.


Categories: One Shots, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 99
[Report This] Published: 17/05/08 Updated: 17/05/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 24/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Hell

Awesome, gruesome detail. You've really done that scene justice with the vividness of your poem.

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! :) I'm glad you thought so.

 
After Midnight by Smudge93 Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Another tag to No Rest For The Wicked. The first hour after midnight. Just thought that with Dean gonewhat would be the first thing that Sam would do and this is what has come to mind.

 

Mr Kripe I mildly hate you for letting my boy go to Hell, even for a little while.

 

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Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 556
[Report This] Published: 23/05/08 Updated: 23/05/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 23/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: After Midnight

Great job! I like Sam's reaction, it feels real.

 
Summary:

How I picture Sam's thoughts at the end of NRFTW.  Obvious spoilers for the season 3 finale.

 

This entire piece of whatever it is was totally inspired by Vanessa.  I've never written a poem in my entire life, except for those god awful ones you have to try and make sound tolerable just to pass fifth grade english class but the first verse of this has been rolling around in my head since the show aired and she sent me something that prompted me to make an effort at finishing it.  God Bless you Vanessa...you are truly an inspiration! 


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 272
[Report This] Published: 01/06/08 Updated: 01/06/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome poem! I like Sam's determination at the end, it makes me feel better. : )

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!  We can only hope that Sam finds a way because I'd really hate to have to watch Dean crawl out of hell all by himself.  I have a feeling he's going to need all the help he can get!

 
Summary: Sam saved Dean from Hell but not from dying. But is Dean really gone?
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2077
[Report This] Published: 08/09/08 Updated: 08/09/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 09/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Give us more!


Author's Response: Alright!  :) Thanks for the feedback.

 
Full House by Rae666 Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Supernatural poetry… Memories of Hell, possible spoilers so beware.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 281
[Report This] Published: 24/09/08 Updated: 24/09/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 01/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled

I love the way this poem flows, it definitely has rhythm.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! ^_^

 
Summary:

Dean finds out something about Sam.  This one shot takes place in Season 4.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 729
[Report This] Published: 24/09/08 Updated: 24/09/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 27/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good!

 
Fire And Ice by Yzba Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: I don’t think I knew my brother, not before he died and went to Hell for me.  Dean’s in Hell, and Sam finally learns who his brother really was.  
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 3506
[Report This] Published: 25/09/08 Updated: 02/12/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 04/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: Miles To Go

Awesome story. I like your verson of Dean and his geniusness. It feels true when you look at the character.

 
Summary:

****SPOILERS****

Tag to "In the Beginning" Dean is on his way to Sam, deep in thought...     angsty!Dean, guess it's a sad, sad tag... (so I've been told by Janger, birdie and calUK.... thx for beta-ing! You guys rock!)

If you haven't seen the epi, I strongly advise you DON'T read this as it will be very much spoiling the whole episode...

 

 


Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Series: Glimpses
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2694
[Report This] Published: 14/10/08 Updated: 14/10/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 14/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I like they way you added (demonic) to everything that had to do with Sam, like Dean couldn't quite get himself to admit he was thinking it.

Author's Response:

Hi Coldfire, thanks for the review!

Yeah, I thought learning about Sam's demonic blood was a real low blow for Dean.

I really can't wait to see how that affects the brothers...

Cheers, Ilka

 
Summary:

Sam been injured on a hunt and Dean has to patch him up. The problem - just where his brother's injury is!!

 

SPOILERS - NONE COMPLETELY AU.

Don't own anything, Just wish I did.


Categories: One Shots, AU, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1072
[Report This] Published: 16/10/08 Updated: 16/10/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 16/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is the most funny thing I've read in a long, long time.  : )



Author's Response:

HI Coldfire

Glad it made you smile!

Thanks for the review, Mary x

 
Spirit Lights by Smudge93 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Dean shares a moment with his brother that comes back to comfort him after Dean's death.

Part wee!chester and part end s3/start s4.

Create your own banner at mybannermaker.com!

SPOILERS - only for what Sam does with Dean's body which is the place where Dean wakes up as he gets back from Hell; so first one/two minutes of 4.01 LR apart from that completely AU.

Everything Supernatural is the property of the CW and Mr Kripke except the story and the basis for it which belong to me!


Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1398
[Report This] Published: 28/10/08 Updated: 28/10/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 28/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Spirit Lights

This is really heartwarming. Thank you for sharing it.


Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks for the review, glad you like it.

Cheers Mary x

 
Summary:

Dean tries to make sense of things



Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1589
[Report This] Published: 30/10/08 Updated: 31/10/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 31/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the whole thing, but especially the last two sentences.



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it. The last two sentences sort of encapsulates Dean and Sam for me. It'll always be them against everything and everyone if that's how it needs to be.

 
Waiting Room by irismay42 Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Sam waits while Dean makes a decision.

Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2434
[Report This] Published: 01/12/08 Updated: 01/12/08


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting Room

Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot!  I'm glad you liked the story!

 
Summary:

A series of glimpses into Thanksgivings the Winchesters have experienced, pre-series through season 4. Each chapter is a one-shot for a different holiday. Will contain wee!chester, teen!chester, and current ages. Lots of brotherly moments.

Thanksgiving, Winchester Style banner

banner by the wonderful Vanessa


Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 41978
[Report This] Published: 19/01/09 Updated: 13/05/09


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 12/06/09 Title: Chapter 17: 2008: Singer Salvage

Great story! I love how you've managed to make each Thanksgiving unique while bringing back reoccurring themes.

Author's Response:

Hey there! Thanks so much for coming over to check out my story, I really appreciate the great review you left. This one was definitely a labor of love. I'm so thrilled you liked it so well.

I hope you will take a look at some of my other stories when you get a chance. I have some one-shots up, "Parenting Your Gifted Child" was recently nominated for an award, so you might like that one. I also have a few ongoing hurt/comfort action/adventure stories: "The Soul Collector" and "Always With You" are the ones I like best. And I have some wee!Chester stories up: "Just Like My Big Brother" and "Big Brother to the Rescue." I hope you'll take a look at some of them and let me know what you think! :)

Thanks again for taking the time to read and review, it really made my day!

 
Fall On Me by CatzEye Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Memories, when they rush in, can sometimes make you feel as if the sky is falling- 
Categories: General, Drabbles, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 200
[Report This] Published: 12/05/09 Updated: 12/05/09


Reviewer: Coldfire Signed
Date: 12/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Fall On Me

Wow. Very powerful

Author's Response: Wow! - Didn't know anyone was still reading this one -- Thank you very, very much!